1 MINI- RESOURCE UNIT Grade 4 Author Study: Mike Thaler The teacher from the black lagoon The music teacher from the black lagoon The resource unit will take place over 3 weeks. 2 weeks of teaching and 1 week of developing work for the final project. The first lesson is the first lesson of the unit and the second lesson is one of the last lessons. TABLE OF CONTENTS Introduction page 3 Initiating Activity page 4-5 Lesson One page 6-9 Activity Page: Puns from book page 10 Lesson Two page 11-14 Activity Page: Pun-ch of life page 15 Culminating Assessment page 16-17 Student Handout page 18 Rubric page 19 Self Assessment page 20 Peer Assessment page 21 Storyboard Activity Sheet page 22 Creature’s Features Activity Sheet page 23 Monster Mindmap page 24 2 Introduction: The following resource unit is an exploration of the author Mike Thaler and his series of “Black Lagoon” books. Each of the lessons explored in this mini- resource unit focuses on a different Mike Thaler book, including The teacher in the black lagoon and The music teacher in the black lagoon. Both books are about a boy who is starting school, and discovers that his new teacher (including his music teacher) is a real monster. I choose the aforementioned books because I remember learning them in school and finding them funny. Children enjoy books that are scary so to speak, and the Black Lagoon series uses monsters that breathe fire, eat children, to appeal to the sensibilities of children. Moreover, the books have a lot of word play, which creates much of the comedy within the text. As I read these books as a child, I felt as though much of the appeal that they had towards me, could be used towards grade 4 students in a full exploration. The literature in the resource unit will be presented as a shared reading activity. Shared reading is appropriate for this study, as the students will be able to follow along and see the double entendres within the text. Also, students will be able to explore the illustration and study the comedic element within the pictures. Moreover, as the students are older, they can practice their own reading skills as the teacher reads aloud. Throughout the study of the books written and illustrated by Mike Thaler, many themes will be explored. First, the resource unit will study Thaler’s use of play on words and puns, which will be studied in both texts. Next, the unit will study Thaler’s use of illustrations to enhance the comedic elements of the books. The unit will culminate with students create their own Black lagoon book, which studies the themes. 3 Initiating Activity: “Professional Monsters” Learning Outcome: Students will create their own monster that has a profession in relevant contexts. Materials Needed: Salt dough Paint Paint shirts Water Paint brushes Slides of monsters and list of professions Instruction: Time Frame- 30 minutes total (5 minutes instruction, 25 minutes creation) The teacher will show a series of images of different monsters in the media (including Disney representations, mummies, mad scientists, etc.) As the teacher goes through the images, they will discuss what makes each monster unique and what the different details in the image say about the monster. After viewing the images, the teacher will explain that they are going to make their own monster creations using salt dough, and paint. A slide with a list of different professions will be displayed on the board (such as doctor, dentist, mail carrier, cashier, bus driver, lifeguard). The teacher will explain that students must make their monster have a job and demonstrate the monsters job in their creation. An example of a monster creation will be shown (either from a previous year or the teacher’s own creation). Students will work at tables with a portion of salt dough with the freedom to form their own monster. As the students work, 4 they can discuss with one another their creation. While students are building their monsters, the teacher will walk around the classroom offering encouragement, and hints to enhance their creation. Scaffolding: While walking through observing the students at work, and their creations, the teacher might use the following questions to scaffold learning. What kind of tools would a person in that profession use? (tongue depressor, drill, mail bag, hard hat, hammer, needle, etc.) How could you add that tool to your creature to make it look even more monstrous? (I could add a mailbag full of worms, etc.) How could your monster look more gruesome and monstrous? What kinds of things could you add? How it relates to resource unit: The activity has a strong correlation with the resource unit. It sets students thinking about monsters, and helps work toward using illustrations to convey meaning. Moreover, students will be encouraged to make gross exaggerations in their monsters, which will tie into Thaler’s use of play on words and highly exaggerative language to create comedy. Students will use their monsters later in the resource study to help them write their own Black Lagoon book, using their monster as the basis for illustrations. 5 Lesson Plan One: Use of Play on Words and Puns Lesson Goals: Students will identify puns and play on words in The Teacher from the Black Lagoon and The Music Teacher from the Black Lagoon Students will be able to explain what a pun is. Program of Studies Outcomes: 2.3 Understand Forms, Elements and Techniques- Experiment with Language recognize how words and word combinations, such as word play, repetition and rhyme, influence or convey meaning (Alberta Education, 2000, page 17) Materials: The Teacher from the Black Lagoon class copies The Music Teacher from the Black Lagoon class copies White board and white board markers Each student needs a pencil, pencil crayons Activity sheet: Puns in The Music Teacher from the Black Lagoon Each student needs a piece of white paper Lesson: ME: (5 Minutes) At the beginning of the lesson, the teacher gathers the students into the reading area and hands out a copy of The Teacher from the Black Lagoon to each student. Teacher says “How do each of you remember the first day of school? Did you have any fears?” (Allow time for students to discuss their fears, impressions- excited, scared of what the year would be like, the people I would meet, if I would have any friends, if the work would be hard). “Today we are 6 reading a book that has every student’s worst nightmare- your teacher being a real monster! Let’s read together.” The class starts reading The Teacher from the Black Lagoon. Reading stops at selected pages, as the teacher highlights the usage of word play and puns. “But Mrs. Green is supposed to be a real monster- what do you think Mike Thaler means when he says real monster. That Mrs. Green is literally a monster? Or that she is not very nice and does not treat others well?” (Allow time for class discussion- students may predict that Mrs. Green is actually a monster, or she is just a really mean teacher.) The class continues reading, until the teacher stops “Talk about bad breath, giggles Eric Porter- what do we normally use the phrase bad breath to describe?” (stinky breath, smelly, unpleasant) “It’s interesting that here the author uses the phrase to describe how Mrs. Green can breath fire.” Continue reading with the class. Stop reading and discuss “Mrs Green swallows her in one gulp! No chewing in class she smiles. Interesting! Notice how Thaler uses the word swallows and chewing to create humour.” WE: (5 Minutes) Class continues to read the story. The teacher reads until “Let’s call the roll, cackles Mrs. Green. Freddy Jones is absent. Derek Bloom is half here. Eric Porter is here and there. Doris Foodle is digesting. I want you all to think back to what happened to the characters here. What happened to Freddy Jones (He threw a spitball and Mrs. Green breathed fire at him and he was just a pile of ashes). What about Derek Bloom? (He said they never learned fractions so she ate half of him to teach fractions). What about Eric Porter? (He commented on her breath and she put his head on her globe stand). And Doris Foodle? (She cracked her gum and Mrs. Green swallowed her. So what do you notice about the words used to describe the students on the roll call? (Freddy Jones is absent because she incinerated him, Derek Bloom is half here because she ate half of him, Eric Porter is here and there because she separated his head from his body, Doris 7 Foodle is digesting because she has eaten her and is digesting her). So these words have double meanings. What are the two meanings with the words (Absent has only one meaning, not herethough we know he’s not here because he is just a pile of ashes, half here could mean not fully there mentally but really she means she’s eaten half of him, here and there describes how Eric’s head is there and body is here, but if you just read it without knowing the story you would think he is all over the place, digesting could mean thinking through and absorbing content, but she means she is literally and physically digesting her). “I want you guys to look for these double meanings and stick your thumb up if you see one in the book.” The teacher continues to read the text. Students should have thumbs up with “spelling can be fun… Abracadabra Kazam!”. The teacher asks the student with their thumb up “What is the double meaning?” (Spelling as in the subject and spelling as in magic). Continue reading the story. Student’s thumbs should go up when Penny Weber exclaims she has a huge headache and Mrs. Green zaps her head to the size of a pin. “What is the double meaning in this section?” (Penny says huge headache to describe how much pain she is in, but Mrs. Green takes it as her head size). The class should finish reading the book. YOU: (20 Minutes) “From The Teacher from the Black Lagoon we see the use of double meanings to create comedy. These double meanings are called puns or word play. There are many jokes that use puns such as why is 6 afraid of 7. Because 7 8 9. Do you know any puns?” (Allow time for students to share puns with the class). “We are now going to work in partners to find the use of puns in another book by Mike Thaler The Music Teacher from the Black Lagoon.” Give the students time to separate into pairs. Hand out copies of The Music Teacher from the Black Lagoon to the students. Each student should also receive a copy of the work sheet “Puns from 8 The Music Teacher from the Black Lagoon”. Students are given 10 minutes to read the book together and search for puns within the text. When students find a pun, they have the choice to either draw a representation of the pun or to write it down with the two different meanings the word holds. As the students work together, the teacher walks through and assists the students learning. After 10 minutes the class will make a collective list on the whiteboard of the puns within the text (which they will work together as a class for 5 minutes). Students will be asked to share their responses and why each phrase constitutes as a pun (see possible answers on exemplar). Scaffolding: Why is that word a pun? (It has two meanings) What are the meanings behind that word? If a student is struggling with finding puns. What about that word? What is one meaning for it? What is another meaning for it? Informal Assessment: The teacher will be able to understand student’s levels of understanding in a variety of ways. Firstly, as the teacher walks through they can observe students understanding in their discussions with one another, and may take anecdotal notes, noting any extensions or difficulties. The teacher may ask specific students to explain why the phrase is a pun. Next, the teacher may observe students understanding in the group discussion, as students present their ideas of puns, which they might also take anecdotal notes for. Finally, the class could hand in their activity sheets and the teacher can assess whether or not each partner group understood what a pun is and was able to put into words why it was a pun (through criterion based marking). 9 PUNS FROM THE MUSIC TEACHER FROM THE BLACK LAGOON PUN MEANINGS Example: #1: pitchfork as in what farmers use to transfer hay Pitchfork #2: pitch as in musical terms 10 Lesson Two: Thaler’s Use of Illustration to Bring Comedy Lesson Outcomes: Students will create an illustration to text that help conveys the text as well as the comedic elements within the text. Program of Studies: 2.3 Understand Forms, Elements and Techniques- Experiment with Language recognize how words and word combinations, such as word play, repetition and rhyme, influence or convey meaning (Alberta Education, 2000, page 17) 2.2 Respond to Texts- Appreciate the Artistry of Texts explain how language and visuals work together to communicate meaning and enhance effect (Alberta Education, 2000, page 14). Materials: The Teacher from the Black Lagoon class copies The Music Teacher from the Black Lagoon class copies Pencil crayons Legal sized poster board List of puns/comedic phrases Pencils Chart paper and markers 11 Lesson Plan: ME: (5 Minutes) Gather students and hand out copies of The Music Teacher from the Black Lagoon. “For the last couple of weeks we have been exploring Mike Thaler’s series of people from the Black Lagoon. We started off looking at Thaler’s use of word play to create comedy. We also explored the use of adjectives and verbal descriptors that Thaler used to enhance the story. Now we are going to look at the use of illustrations to embellish and enhance the text. To start off, let’s discuss what makes a good picture? (Give time for students to respond- lots of detail, bright colours, etc.) “Mike Thaler is known for his usage of illustrations to create comedy. Let’s explore the illustrations in The Music Teacher from the Black Lagoon and see what we can learn.” The teacher will start reading through the book. They will pause and start talking about the illustrations “Let’s stop and look at the illustrations on this page. It says all the kids who wear glasses have to hide them when she hits high C. I like how Thaler showed what happens to the glasses when the music teacher hits high C with the boy in the middle, with the cracked lenses. The illustration helps explain what happens a little more.” The class continues reading through the text. “Look at the illustration where it says I heard Miss LaNote uses her pitchfork to keep all the kids on the same key. Interesting how the illustration enhances the use of pun by having kids standing on a literal key. Let’s look at this page with the boy behind bars. It is another picture that illustrates the play on words. Thaler is strong at using illustrates to enhance the word play that he has used to increase the comedic elements of the story. So if I was going to illustrate this pun “There was once a cross eyed teacher who couldn’t control his pupils” in Thaler’s style, I would do something like this.” (Teacher draws on chart paper picture of a cross eyed teacher with pupils throwing airplanes around). “The word pupil has two meanings. The 12 pupil in the eye, which I showed with the cross- eyes and the pupil as in student in the classroom.” WE (5 minutes): “What about this pun? The magician got so mad that he pulled his hare out.” The teacher will then write the pun on the board. “How do you think we could illustrate this pun using Thaler’s style?” (Draw a magician, pulling his hair, rabbit hopping across the stage). Allow students the opportunity to come up and add to the drawing. “Great job with this illustration. Like Thaler the illustration adds comedic effect and emphasizes the wording of the pun. Let’s try another pun. Why is a fish easy to weigh? Because it comes with its own scales. What do you think we can draw to show this pun? (Give time for kids to answer- a fish with scales, on a weight scale). Allow time for the class to come together with a collective picture. YOU (20 minutes- 3 minutes of explanation, 17 minutes to work) “Now we are going to spend some time creating our own illustrations for puns. I have a list of puns and I would like you to illustrate your own poster that illustrates the pun. Make sure to write out what pun you have chosen at the bottom of the page. Each person needs to do a poster, but you may work together to discuss and create ideas that can illustrate your pun.” The teacher will then hand out the paper, with the list of puns, and will ensure that students understand the instruction. As students work on their own poster, the teacher will walk through and offer encouragement and hints to any students that need help getting started. SCAFFOLDING: As the students work on their pictures, the teacher will offer any hints and utilize questions to enhance student learning. Which pun have you chosen? 13 What words in the pun have more than one meaning? How do you think you may represent the multiple meanings in a picture? Is there anything else you might add to create comedy in the picture? What do you think makes a picture funny? What features/details make it funny? INFORMAL ASSESSEMENT: Throughout the process, the teacher may use many methods to help determine whether or not the students understand the content, and how well the content relates to the learning outcomes. First, the teacher can understand student comprehension through the discussion, and by talking anecdotal notes. Moreover, as the teacher walks through, and listens to discussions, as well as observes student progress on their artwork, the teacher may gain insight to where students understanding are. Also, the end product of a poster will assist the teacher in understanding what students gained from the lesson. The teacher may assess the product with descriptive feedback to let students know the strengths of their work and any suggestions, as well as through peer and self assessment sheets. The end task of the lesson is one that has students utilizing the medium of play on words, and has the students working on their own skills to use illustrations to enhance text. 14 THE PUN- CH OF LIFE List of Puns to Choose from and Illustrate (Choose One) Why did the little boy who was part of the wedding party roar as he walked down the isle? He was the ring bear. What do you call a train that sneezes? Achoo-choo train Why did the bee go to the doctor? Because he had hives Why did the pony go to the doctor? Because she was a little horse Why did the golfer bring two pairs of pants to the game? In case he got a hole in one Why was the horse so happy? Because he lived in a stable environment Why did the boy put a stamp on the snail he found at the beach? Because he heard his father preferred snail mail over email. What did the Cat say to the bird? Let's do lunch. What did the bird say back to the cat? Over my dead body. What do ducks do when they see kids coming off the school bus? They quack up at how funny the kids look. Did you hear about the little boy who couldn't sleep? His mother told him to count sheep, but he got all confused because he only had a cowculator 15 FINAL ASSESSMENT ASSIGNMENT DESCRIPTION: Students will culminate their knowledge about Mike Thaler and his writing/illustration style in the Black Lagoon series in a variety of ways. The final assignment gives the student the task to create their own Black Lagoon book. Students will be assigned to write the story, including utilizing puns and play on words to create comedy. Another component of the assignment is illustrating their story book. Students have the choice to create their story online using Story Jumper, create a typical book presentation, or creating their story book using powerpoint formats. There is also the opportunity for students to request to present their story in an alternative format (such as video, verbal presentation, etc.) All presentations must include 3 puns, be 15 pages in length with a sentence on each page. Every page needs to have an illustration, which enhances the writing on the page. Students are encouraged to refer back to their professional monsters to use as the character in their Black Lagoon story, but have the freedom to make another main character. PROCESS: Students will be given the assignment task sheet and a class discussion will be held as the teacher explains the end product and shows the exemplar. Students fill out plan sheets that highlight the beginning, middle and end of their story. Students then write out a characteristic chart of their monster. They are supposed to use wording that has strong adjectives. Students fill out a mind map of words that are associated with their main character. They will circle words that have two meanings and start to form the word play. Student will form sentences for their story. They will write them all out. 16 Students will rewrite sentences and start to add the illustrations for their stories. Students will colour and make final touches to story. SCAFFOLDING: As students progress in their projects, the teacher will use a variety of methods to ensure student understanding of the outcomes, such as: What does your character from the Black Lagoon look like? What do they do to earn a living? How do they move, talk, act? Do they have any super powers? How do others react to your Black Lagoon character? Do they laugh at them, are they scared at them? What kind of words would describe your character? What are some words that describe a monster? Why does your main character act the way they do? What motivates them? How can you use illustration to let the audience know something about your story? What can your pictures say that your words can’t say? What do you think about your product at this point? What do you think you could change to make it better? Do you think your character is believable to be a child’s imaginative creation? Why? FORMAL ASSESSMENT: The finished product will be assessed with an analytic rubric. Students will be given the rubric at the same time as receiving the assignment task. Another assessment will be taken as students complete peer/self assessment of the work prior to handing it in for the teacher. 17 STUDENT HANDOUT ??? From the Black Lagoon We have spent the last month reading Mike Thaler’s books from the Black Lagoon series. Now it is your turn to make your own horror comedy book. The unit assignment is to create your own Black Lagoon story book. Using Thaler’s style with word play and vivid illustrations that give greater meaning to the text, you are going to make your own mysterious creature from the Black Lagoon. You may use the creature you created with clay prior to the unit to be the monster your characters encountered. Presentation styles may vary. You may draw your own illustrations and write your text by hand, create the story using Story Jumper, make a powerpoint, or choose your own method. Final products must conclude with: The usage of 3 puns in your story A 15 page story with a sentence and illustration on each page. An illustration that enhances your text A peer evaluation (form given in class) A self evaluation (form given in class) All rough work Your final product will be marked according to the attached rubric. 18 Category Puns 3 4 3 puns are used in the story and show some evidence of multiple meaning. Limited comedy by using puns. Little thought or Illustrations are effort put in good and illustrations. highlight some Illustrations do of the comedy not highlight within the story. story. Ideas and This story is a scenes seem to little hard to be randomly follow. The arranged. transitions are sometimes not clear. The final draft There are 4 has 5 or more spelling, usage spelling, usage and punctuation and/or errors in the punctuation final draft, some errors, even in in common common aspects. aspects. Puns are well done. Each pun is chosen to show multiple meanings of the word but some confusion. Some comedy within the story by using puns Illustrations are interesting and show a great deal of the comedy within the story. Puns are well thought out. Have a strong emphasis on the multiple meaning of the word. Used puns to create comedy within the story. The story is pretty well organized. One idea or scene may seem out of place. Clear transitions are used. There are 3 spelling, usage or punctuation errors in the final draft, in more complex aspects. Presentation of Final Product The final draft is not neat or attractive. The final draft of the story is readable and some of the pages are attractive. Requirements Many requirements were not met. Most (about 75%) of the written requirements met, but several were not. The final draft of the story is readable, neat, and attractive. It may have one or two erasures, but they are not distracting. Almost all (about 90%) of the written requirements were met. The story is very well organized. One idea or scene follows another in a logical sequence with clear , interesting transitions. There are only 1 or 2 spelling, usage or punctuation errors in the final draft,perhaps resulting from risktaking. Character and place names that the author invented are spelled consistently throughout. The final draft of the story is readable, clean, neat, and attractive. It is free of erasures and crossed-out words. Illustrations Story Conventions 1 2 All puns were confusing. Did not have 3 puns included. Illustrations are excellent and highlight all of the comedic aspects in the story. All of the written requirements were met. (peer self evaluation, story boarding, mind maps, etc.) 19 Peer Assessment: Please exchange forms with a partner in class. Use this opportunity to get and give creative input to your peers and enhance your own work. Each person needs to give comments on their peer assessment. Rate on a scale of 1-5 Criteria 1 is lowest 5 is highest 1 2 3 4 5 Puns were creative and added humour 1 2 3 4 5 Puns clearly had 2 meanings. 1 2 3 4 5 Illustrations enhanced writing. 1 2 3 4 5 Illustrations added humour to text. 1 2 3 4 5 Story had a clear beginning, middle, and end. 1 2 3 4 5 Story had few spelling/grammatical errors. 1 2 3 4 5 Story had all necessary elements (3 puns, 15 pages, illustrations) 1 2 3 4 5 Story used stylistic cues from Mike Thaler. Comments: 20 Self Assessment: Please evaluate your final product. At the bottom of the page, include comments that justify your ratings. Rate on a scale of 1-5 Criteria 1 is lowest 5 is highest 1 2 3 4 5 Puns were creative and added humour 1 2 3 4 5 Puns clearly had 2 meanings. 1 2 3 4 5 Illustrations enhanced writing. 1 2 3 4 5 Illustrations added humour to text. 1 2 3 4 5 Story had a clear beginning, middle, and end. 1 2 3 4 5 Story had few spelling/grammatical errors. 1 2 3 4 5 Story had all necessary elements (3 puns, 15 pages, illustrations) 1 2 3 4 5 Story used stylistic cues from Mike Thaler. Comments: 21 FORMS TO DEVELOP FINAL PRODUCT: SICKLY STORY BOARDS Introduction: Page Numbers: Middle: Page Numbers: End: Page Numbers: 22 MY CREATURE’S FEATURES My creature looks like…. My creature sounds like…. My creature likes to…. My creature works at… My creature does not like… My creature smells like… My creature’s favourite food is… Anything else about your creature… 23 MONSTER MIND MAP 24 REFERENCES Alberta Learning. (2000). Illustrative examples for English language arts: Kindergarten to Grade 9. Alberta: Curriculum Standards Branch, Alberta Learning. Thaler, M. (1989). The teacher from the black lagoon. New York: Scholastic, Inc. Thaler, M. (2000). The music teacher from the black lagoon. New York: Scholastic, Inc.