QUIZ 7 Name __________________________________________________ GRAMMAR REVIEW OF TOP ERROR TYPES Fused Sentence Errors: 1. People can’t really anticipate the extent to which they are going to change when they have a child it is a life-altering experience. Correction: Comma Splice Errors: 2. Sometimes after I study, I need to take a nap, I’ve heard that sleeping is beneficial when trying to retain a lot of new information. Correction: 3. My husband broke the side mirror with a kayak, he forgot to adjust it when he took the boat off the roof rack. Correction: Preposition Errors: 4. Even though he explained the concept of scholarly articles seven times, he could not get his point across. Correction: 5. It has taken me an hour to look up all the FAFSA codes for all the colleges my son applied to. Correction: Dangling modifier errors: 6. Terrified and swimming frantically, the shark began to attack. Correction: Misplaced modifier errors: 7. Shooting and twinkling, we love to watch the stars in the evening sky. Correction: Squinting modifier error: 8. The work he hoped would satisfy him completely frustrated him. Correction: GRAMMAR REVIEW OF PERSONAL PRONOUNS, ACTIVE VOICE, PARALLEL SENTENCES Personal Pronoun Errors and shifts: 9. Charles and her just don’t get along any more since they worked on that committee together. Correction: 10. Once you have completed the data sheet, you will be placed into tour groups, which will be led by either Dr. Faust or myself. Correction: 11. If a person works hard, you can gain satisfaction. Correction: 12. The only adults who will be allowed onto the field are Chad and I. Correction: 13. The Louisiana Black Bear is in danger of losing their habitat. Correction: 14. If a person texts during class, they will be asked to leave. Correction: Passive Voice errors: 15. The alliteration was put into the poem by the author so the feeling of pathos would be noticed by the reader. Correction: 16. The coin collection was given to him as a gift by his grandfather. Correction: 17. Liquor licenses are given to restaurant owners by the city. Correction: Parallel Constructions: 18. In English class, Tashonda learned to read essays critically and she researched and cites her sources. Correction: 19. He wanted three things out of a relationship: to spend time together, to feel loved, and having someone make him a sandwich. Correction: 20. We found the book poignant, informative, and we thought it was realistic. Correction: