You are not telling a story. Each paragraph has to have knowledge and understanding ( KU) - this is the description and dates and figures. However to get a good grade you have to explain why you have included it. How did it cause.... the cold war ... America to restrict immigration. This is called argument. VIETNAM Protests about Vietnam war This is quite a nice site. The paragraphs in bigger font are good as they give reasons for opposition as well of details of opposition. You would want to mention these in your section on protests. Also at the end it has information about people that supported the war - it would be nice to have a little of this to show that protests alone were not the only reason. http://www.historylearningsite.co.uk/protests_vietnam_war.htm In this para it has a nice bit about protest having an effect on the govt - refer to the pause in operation rolling thunder. It also refers to the doves. http://library.thinkquest.org/27942/war.htm http://www.bbc.co.uk/schools/gcsebitesize/history/mwh/vietnam/usgetsoutrev3.shtml Ho Chi Minh Trail http://www.historylearningsite.co.uk/ho_chi_minh_trail.htm America shut door immigrants In your introduction you should show examiner that you know that america was shutting the door. e.g. what acts did she pass? remember that table you drew. http://www.educationscotland.gov.uk/Images/GuideUSA1918to1939_tcm4375483.doc - Opens a word document - go to page 12 this is good to page 20. A good idea to print - 2 pages per page then highlight. Racism You should show how the acts demonstrate racism to people from Japan or China or eastern europe. e.g. only 3% of those in 1910. Which favours western europe. http://www.shmoop.com/1920s/immigration.html ( this website has some nice numbers about where they came from - this is good to show that they are restricting it due to racissm - para 1 and 2 - then go down to the bit about slamming the door - it has some nice stuff - as figures help highlight how racist their laws were) Scared of communism Quite a nice website http://wiki.answers.com/Q/To_what_extent_was_increasing_hostility_towards_i mmigrants_in_the_1920s_due_to_political_fear Crime Economy Why was there a cold war? http://education.cambridge.org/media/386794/the%20cold%20war_sample.pdf ( textbook) http://www.educationscotland.gov.uk/Images/The%20Cold%20War%20(H)_tcm 4-504761.doc Stalin take over http://www.shmoop.com/causes-of-cold-war/josef-stalin.html :) :) http://www.nationalarchives.gov.uk/education/coldwar/G3/cs1/default.htm V Good on stalin :) and how his take over helped :) : ) <3 http://www.nationalarchives.gov.uk/education/coldwar/G3/default.htm - http://www.johndclare.net/Basics_ColdWar.htm - Good school aimed site Why did Scots leave Scotland ( Open a word doc and copy and paste info under headings e.g. Push / Pull Lack of jobs Job opportunities Transport Encouragement Housing conditions http://www.educationscotland.gov.uk/higherscottishhistory/migrationandempire/ migrationofscots/migrationofscots.asp Leaving highlands http://www.educationscotland.gov.uk/higherscottishhistory/migrationandempire/ migrationofscots/emigrationandsociety.asp Problems facing blacks http://www.educationscotland.gov.uk/Images/GuideUSA1918to1939_tcm4375483.doc This is good - page 21 onwards - suggest print 2 per page. page 21-27 ( if u do about being drawn to north you would add further pages) http://www.bbc.co.uk/bitesize/higher/history/usa/race/revision/2/ - This BBC site is good - it has info on KK and also information for a different paragraph about the role of the government in making life difficult for blacks. The previous page in it has info on jim crow. A good site. Supreme court - seperate but equal http://www.history.com/this-day-in-history/supreme-court-rules-in-iplessy-v-fergusoni Jim Crow