NARRATIVE STUDY THEMATIC STUDY YEAR 9 DAGS Summary Sixteen-year-old Gillian is a "dag", a nerd, a misfit, totally uncool, who sees herself as fat, ugly and a social cripple. Throughout this play … Gillian takes us on a funny, excruciating journey through the world of adolescent anguish and awkwardness. She finds it hard to cope with her bright gung-ho sister, who is not only totally together physically, but also has a bouncy, positive mental attitude. As well, she needs to deal with her gossipy girlfriends, her addiction to chocolate, and her desperate quest to be beautiful and popular. So when she develops a crush on the school heart-throb and finds herself on a blind date with a mega-dag, Gillian feels pushed to the edge. But in a surprise ending, Gillian triumphs with an exhilarating moment of self-awareness and confidence. The critic for the Sydney Morning Herald called this play "...a celebration of survival... a paean to self-reliance and self-respect. It is scalding about life's bullies and affectionate about its dags. It is a slice of life that cuts deep." http://www.dramaticpublishing.com/product_info.php?products_id=327 THEME The theme of a text is a subject that is explored through the text. There can be more than one theme in any given text. The reader or viewer of a text is challenged to think about their own feelings and opinions about a theme. A theme may be as simple as friendship and as complex as racism. Dags has many themes running through its narrative. Write down what you understand to be the meaning of the following themes: friendship _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ adolescence _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ acceptance _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ isolation _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ sibling rivalry _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ peer group pressure _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ SETTING The setting for a drama or a novel is the place and time of the action. In Dags the action takes place in current modern times. We are conscious of this because of the language used and the costumes. As well, the word “dag” means someone who is not regarded as cool or in with the “in” crowd”. The action constantly moves around different settings such as the family home, the school bus, the school, a dance and the movies. List three different settings in Dags: 1. _____________________________________________________________________________ 2.__________________________________________________________________________ 3._____________________________________________________________________________ Why do you think the composer (Debra Oswald) chose each of these settings? 1._____________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 2._____________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 3._____________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Draw a picture of one of the settings with Gillian and the other characters with her in the setting. FEATURES OF A DRAMA Conflict Without conflict there is no drama. In Dags there is a lot of conflict. Gillian has conflict with her sister because they are so different in their approach to life. List three other areas of conflict that appear in the novel, and what they are about. PEOPLE HAVING CONFLICT REASON FOR THE CONFLICT Actor’s movements Actor’s movements are the physical moves actors make during the playing of a scene. These movements are usually suggested by the script written in italics, occasionally dictated by practical considerations but are ultimately decided by the director. List three suggestions in the script for Gillian’s movement, and why you think they have been included. GILLIAN’S MOVEMENT REASON WHY IT HAS BEEN INCLUDED Facial expressions and physical gestures The face is the most expressive part of the body. The way an actor uses facial expression is an important ingredient of an actor’s performance. This is also the case with an actor’s physical behaviour. This includes the way an actor stands, moves and uses physical gestures and habits. List three suggestions in the script for Gillian’s facial expressions and three suggestions in the script for Gillian’s physical gestures, and why you think they have been included. GILLIAN’S FACIAL EXPRESSION REASON WHY IT HAS BEEN INCLUDED GILLIAN’S PHYSICAL GESTURE REASON WHY IT HAS BEEN INCLUDED Costume Costumes tell us a great deal about a character. Strong characters wear strong colours such as red. More conservative characters might wear blue or brown. A costume can reveal a character’s attitude to life in the choice and cut of the fabric. In historical drama, the style of a character’s costume reflects the period of the play as well as the social standing of the character. List three particular costumes of three different characters, and what they suggest about that particular character CHARACTER’S COSTUME REASON WHY IT HAS BEEN INCLUDED Props Props are objects that are used by actors on the stage. One of the props, the paper bag, becomes part of Gillian’s costume. List other three props and their importance in the play. PROP USED IMPORTANCE IN THE PLAY Lighting Stage lighting helps create the mood of the action on the stage. It does this by varying the intensity of the light, as well as by the use of coloured gels. Gels are filters that are placed in front of the globes. List three different types of lighting you might use in the play for three different scenes, and explain what type of mood you would be creating. LIGHTING USED AND SCENE WHAT MOOD IT IS CREATING FOR THE SCENE Sets Sets are the large screens, frames, furniture and furnishing that show where the action is located. Some dramas will have very elaborate sets, with building facades and cars and streets for an exterior location, while other dramas may use very minimal sets with blank walls for an interior location. The sets sometimes need to be removed when the action changes location. List three different types of sets you might use in the play for three different scenes, and explain why you would create them. SETS USED AND SCENE WHY THE SET WOULD BE CREATED Sound effects and music Sound effects are used in drama to help create a more realistic setting, or to create atmosphere and mood. For example, a doorbell sound creates a realistic reason for a character to answer the door. Music may be used in drama to emphasise the theme being explored. It is a way of supporting the text, and helps to carry across the message of that particular scene. The music may not have lyrics and it may be atmospheric and used to create a certain mood. On the other hand, the music may have lyrics and the narrative and theme of the song may match the theme. For example, the song Sk8r Boi (ie Skater Boy), may be used in a scene about a girl who thinks she’s too good for a particular boy who’s a bit rough. Activity In this unit, we are going to turn Dags into a musical. We are going to pretend that we are the directors of the play and we are going to select appropriate music and lyrics to accompany each scene’s subject. Scene Number (page) 1 (p.1) Scene Location Gillian’s bedroom 2 Bedroom (pp.1-8) and kitchen 3 (pp.813) Schoolyard 4 (pp.1315) Rock gig 5 (pp.1523) Schoolyard 6 (pp.2324) School bus Theme Song Justification for using this song (connect the theme to the action in the play) Scene Number (page) 7 (pp.2430) Scene Location 8 (pp.3032) Schoolyard 9 (pp.3238) School bus then footpath 10 (pp.3841) Gillian’s bedroom 11 (pp.4145) Cinema 12 (pp.4551) Derek’s garage 13 (pp.5154) Schoolyard 14 (pp.5456) Cinema 15 (pp.5661) Gillian’s bedroom 16 (pp.6168) School hall party Gillian’s bedroom Theme Song Justification for using this song (connect the theme to the action in the play) FROM DRAMA TO NARRATIVE We are going to practise composing narratives, using the dialogue and descriptive language in Dags. We are going to take the directions of the play which are written in present tense, and rewrite them into past tense, as is used in most narratives. We are going to take the dialogue of the play which is written in a script format, and blend it into the descriptive narrative. THE ROCK GIG Gillian and Wendy went to a rock gig that Saturday night. The rock music started up and Wendy dragged a reluctant Gillian into a dim area with flashing dance floor lights. Gillian muttered to herself glumly, “I don’t even like rock gigs.” Wendy and Gillian picked up their drinks and perched themselves on the bar stools. Gillian felt awkward and tried to balance herself on the small dot of a seat. She sat slouched and grim-faced. Wendy, on the other hand, sat up very posed, conscious of how she looked, and scanned the room with a sharp eye. Wendy warned Gillian, “Don’t turn around fast or anything. But there are a couple of guys near the smoke machine staring at us.” She gestured towards them with her eyes only. She added, with excitement, “Oh, one of them’s alright looking.” Exasperated, she said to Gillian, “Oh God, Gillian – try and look a little bit awake.” Wendy continued to check out the talent, checking and adjusting her top. Gillian thought to herself, “Wendy is only using me as a stooge. She wants to drag a doggy-looking friend like me around so she’ll always be the spunky one. Guys check us out and draw straws to see who gets the spunk and who gets the dumpy ugly one.” They sat together, still looking around. Gillian was bored. “Can we go home, Wendy?” “We only just got here, Gillian!” Wendy hissed back. Gillian complained in a whiny voice, “It’s so loud. Last time my ears were ringing for two days. Maybe I should go home and you can…” “Don’t be crazy,” Wendy cut her off. “I can’t stay here on my own.” She scanned the room. “OH! There he is!” she swooned. “I know he doesn’t look much standing there, but when he gets up on that stage behind that guitar, he’s absolutely gorgeous.” Wendy bopped on her stool with enthusiasm. She fixed her eyes on the stage, and looked adoringly at her man. Gillian thought to herself, “Well, this is where it’s all going to go downhill. Wendy is going to go off with Gorgeous Tony – the bass player with the fourth-rate garage band that knows about five chords between them. The lead singer has acne, and he puts on a phoney Cockney accent to try and impress everyone. He was so pretentious. We’ve been seeing Tony’s crummy band for weeks, just so Wendy can bat her eyelids at him.” Wendy looked hopeful. “I’ve never actually seen him with anyone who looks like a girlfriend.” She grabbed Gillian’s arm and squealed, “He’s walking over this way!” She clutched her stomach and fanned her face, “Oh … I feel sick … shit. I won’t be able to speak.” Tony strolled over smugly, hair gelled back and walking like he only had half a brain working. He sidled up to Wendy and drawled, “Hi. I’ve seen you at a few other gigs.” Wendy could barely contain her excitement, but she managed to say, “Oh, I really like the music. The band’s great.” She smiled at him. “Oh – ta.” Wendy grinned shyly, and Tony grinned back at her. Gillian rolled her eyes and mock vomited behind their backs. Tony seemed concerned and asked, “What’s wrong with your friend?” Wendy giggled and replied, “Gillian?” Then she looked at Gillian and was horrified. “Gillian, what’s wrong with you?” and then more concerned, she cried, “Gilly!!!!” “I’ll just go to the loo. I don’t feel too well,” she lied. “You do that,” Tony said, pretending to be worried. Gillian walked away, and Wendy and Tony settled in to a very close conversation. Wendy squirmed about shyly, Tony strutted and posed cockily as they chatted each other up. Gillian stopped near the toilets and watched them from a distance from a distance. She thought to herself, “He is no intellectual giant. In fact, he’s solid concrete north of the necktie. But Wendy’s rapt in him, and she is my friend.” Gillian left the gig alone, and walked home in the lightly drizzling rain. ELEMENT OF THE DRAMA - PLOT ORIENTATION / INTRODUCTION COMPLICATION / PROBLEM / DILEMMA SEQUENCE OF EVENTS MEANING EXAMPLE FROM ‘DAGS’ The main characters are introduced to the audience. The setting is established. Who:___________________________________________ _______________________________________________ When: __________________________________________ Where:__________________________________ _______ A problem is identified to the audience. What has caused the problem for the main character? The audience becomes curious about how _______________________________________________ the problem will be resolved. _______________________________________________ _______________________________________________ The narrative or story progresses Event 1: through a number of events which lead _______________________________________________ towards the problem worsening because _______________________________________________ it is not resolved. Event 2: ________________________________________ The main characters are involved in some _______________________________________________ sort of conflict. Event 3: ________________________________________ _______________________________________________ Event 4: ________________________________________ _______________________________________________ Event 5: ________________________________________ _______________________________________________ CLIMAX This is the highest point in the drama. It is usually the most exciting event in the story, and what the action has been building up to. ________________________________________________ ________________________________________________ ________________________________________________ RESOLUTION This is where all the loose ends are tied together, and the problem is resolved or solved. It is made clear that all the main characters involved in the action have come to rest. ________________________________________________ ________________________________________________ ________________________________________________ ________________________________________________