FORM 4 & 5 (SPM) 1310208 FJS MARKING BAND FOR LANGUAGE IN DIRECTED WRITING Marks Category Remarks/Description allotted Excellent 19 - 20 No mistakes in grammar (including spelling and (A1 – A2) punctuation) Effective use of varied sentence structures Wide vocabulary, used expressively/precisely Good style/tone Coherence in paragraphing Good 17 - 18 Few mistakes in grammar – mistakes arise from more (B3 – B4) unusual/complex language use Some variety in sentence structures Some width in vocabulary – con convey shades of meaning Satisfactory style/tone Some coherence in paragraphing Points organized in paragraphs Satisfactory 15 - 16 Some mistakes in grammar but language use is mainly (C5 – C6) accurate. Mistakes arise from more complex language use Some variety in sentence structures – but mostly repetitive sentence types Mainly basic vocabulary – errors use of more ambitious vocabulary Fair style/tone Some coherence in paragraphing Passable 10-14 Many mistakes in grammar but the meaning is still (D7) clear. Patches of accurate language use occur Little variety of sentence structures Mainly basic vocabulary – errors in use of more ambitious vocabulary Barely adequate style/tone Little coherence in paragraphing Unsatisfactory 6-9 Many serious mistakes in grammar but the meaning is (E8) fairly clear. A few simple structures may be correct Little variety in sentence structures Only basic vocabulary – errors in use of more ambitious vocabulary Inadequate style/tone Disorganized points Poor 2-5 Frequent and serious mistakes in grammar vocabulary (F9) make the meaning barely comprehensible Only simple sentence structures Very basic vocabulary – many errors in use of even simple words 0-1 Almost unrecognizable as English Almost no sense can be made at all CONTINUOUS WRITING (50 MARKS) The free composition is basically assessed by “general impression”. However, the following levels can be noted: Marks Remarks/Description Category allotted Excellent 41 – 50 Hardly any mistakes in grammar (including spelling and punctuation) (A1 – A2) Good (B3 – B4) 31 - 40 Satisfactory (C5 – C6) 26 - 30 Passable (D7) Unsatisfactory (E8) Poor (F9) 21 - 25 16 - 20 11 - 15 6 - 10 0–5 Effective use of varied sentence structures Wide vocabulary, used expressively/precisely Good and relevant points Coherence in paragraphing Well-organized paragraphing Essay is very interesting and shows originality Few mistakes in grammar – mistakes arise from more unusual/complex language use Some variety in sentence structures Some width in vocabulary – con convey shades of meaning Relevant points Some coherence in paragraphing Points organized in paragraphs Essay is interesting Some mistakes in grammar but language use is mainly accurate. Mistakes arise from more complex language use Some variety in sentence structures. However, generally, repetitive sentence types are found Mainly basic vocabulary. Errors in use of more ambitious vocabulary Relevant points Some coherence in paragraphing Not very well-organized points Essay is slightly interesting Many mistakes in grammar but the meaning is still clear. Patches of accurate language use occur Little variety of sentence structures Only basic vocabulary. Errors in use of more ambitious vocabulary Points are mostly relevant; some illogical/irrelevant points Little coherence in paragraphing Not very well-organized points Essay is not interesting Many serious mistakes in grammar but the meaning is fairly clear. A few simple structures may be correct Little variety in sentence structures Only basic vocabulary. Errors in use of more ambitious vocabulary Topic is not well-treated Disorganized points Little coherence in paragraphing Essay is not interesting Many serious mistakes in grammar and the meaning is not very clear Only simple sentence structures Very basic vocabulary; many errors in use of words Poor treatment of topic due to poor linguistic ability Hardly any organization; probably no paragraphing Very frequent and serious mistakes in grammar vocabulary make the meaning barely comprehensible Almost unrecognizable as English Almost no sense can be made at all