The Abrams Style Manual The French natural historian Georges Buffon (1707-1788) once said, “Le style est l’homme même” (“The style is the man himself”). How we dress, in other words, says a lot about who we are. Likewise, how we write says much about what we think: sloppy writing usually means sloppy thinking, whereas lucid writing typically means lucid thinking. For that reason, papers, for no matter which subject, must be graded for style as well as substance. This style manual is divided into four parts: Grammar; Words Often Confused; Spelling; and Correction Symbols and Abbreviations. Mistakes in papers will be underlined, with codes appearing in the margins corresponding to explanations in the grammar portion of the manual below. This manual should be used as preventive medicine, too. Read it here and there, on the subway or at home with a tall glass of milk and some oatmeal-raisin cookies, to improve your grammar, vocabulary, and spelling. Grammar What follows is a grammar survey. For more detail, students are advised to consult Warriner’s High School Handbook (1992) by John E. Warriner, MLA Handbook for Writers of Research Papers (1995) by Joseph Gibaldi, and The Elements of Style (1979) by William Strunk Jr. and E.B. White I Sentence Structure I.1 Modification: When one uses words or groups of words to modify other words or groups of words, one must be sure the modification is specifically applied. - I.1.1 Misplaced Modifying Word: Notice the difference between the following two sentences. The stockbroker almost lost a million dollars today. The stockbroker lost almost a million dollars today. If the writer means the first but wrote the second or vice versa, then the writer has committed an error in modification. - I.1.2 Misplaced Modifying Clause: Notice the awkwardness of the following sentence. There was a textbook on the desk that someone took. This is wrong, unless the writer means that someone took the desk, not the textbook. - I.1.3 Misplaced Modifying Phrase: Notice the difference between the following two sentences. The policeman chased the mugger with a whistle in his mouth. The policeman with a whistle in his mouth chased the mugger. Of course, the first could be correct, but it’s unlikely. - I.1.4 Dangling Participle: This common error occurs because one or more words have been left out of the paricipial phrase or because the wrong word was selected as subject of the independent clause. While reading, the telephone rang. (Telephones don’t read.) While I was reading, the telephone rang. (Correct.) Driving on the highway, a Taco Bell was spotted. (This could mean a Taco Bell was spotted driving on the highway.) Driving on the highway, I spotted a Taco Bell. (Correct.) I.2 Parallelism: Similar elements of a sentence should be expressed in a similar manner. Lack of parallel structure is a common mistake in writing. Leslie watered her plants and the flowers every day. (Wrong.) Leslie watered her plants and flowers every day. (Correct.) The referee was running and shouted the whole game. (Wrong.) The referee was running and shouting the whole game. (Correct.) Lisa threw like her sister Jane but ran the same way her sister Jamie did. (Awkward.) Lisa threw like her sister Jane but ran like her sister Jamie. (Correct.) I.3 Incorporation of Quoted Material: Be sure your incorporation of quoted material includes attribution and flows. “All animals are equal,” wrote George Orwell in his novel Animal Farm, “but some animals are more equal than others.” As George Orwell wrote in his novel Animal Farm, “All animals are equal, but some animals are more equal than others.” The speaker closed her remarks on totalitarianism by citing a famous line from George Orwell’s Animal Farm: “All animals are equal, but some animals are more equal than others.” 2 II Verbs II.1 Verb Moods: There are three verb moods. - Indicative mood: used to state the factual. Everyone loves school. - Subjunctive mood: used to express a wish or a situation contrary to fact. Everyone should love school. If I were playing a sport, I would love school. If Patrick were in the orchestra, the cello section would be stronger. *All pronouns (I, you, he, she, we, you, they) take were if the mood is subjunctive. - Imperative mood: used to express an order. Love school, or else. Join the orchestra, Patrick. They need you. II.2 Verb Tenses: There are six verb tenses. - Present tense: to denote that which concerns present time. I call we call you call you call she calls they call (Present progressive: I am calling.) - Past tense: to denote that which concerns past time. I called we called you called you called he called they called (Past progressive: You were calling.) - Future tense: to denote that which concerns future time. I shall call we shall call you will call you will call she will call they will call (Future progressive: They will be calling.) *Shall and will. Strunk and White clearly distinguish these two (Elements of Style, p. 58): “In formal writing, the future tense requires shall for the first person, will for the second and third. The formula to express the speaker’s belief regarding his future action or state is I shall; I will expresses his determination or his consent. A swimmer in distress cries, ‘I shall drown; no one will save me!’ A suicide puts it the other way: ‘I will drown; no one shall save me!’” - Present perfect tense: to denote that which happened in the indefinite past or that which has happened in the past and applies to the present. 3 I have called we have called you have called you have called he has called they have called (Present perfect progressive: You have been calling.) I have called him often. She has practiced for an hour. - Past perfect tense: to denote past action completed prior to another past action or occurrence. I had called we had called .... (Past perfect progressive: you had been calling.) After we had finished our homework, we watched televsion - Future perfect tense: to denote future action that will be completed prior to another future action or occurrence. I shall have called .... (Future perfect progressive: they will have been calling.) By the time the boss gets in, we will have finished our project. I will lend you this magazine once I (will) have read it. You will be paid Friday for the work you (will) have done this week. II.3 Agreement: Correct agreement between subject and verb is tricky stuff. The following four rules and two lists should be of assistance. - When the subject and predicate nominative are different in number, the verb agrees with the subject. Rising prices are a danger sign in the economy. A danger sign in the economy is rising prices. - either ... or, neither ... nor: the verb agrees with the nearer subject. Neither they nor he is going to the party. Neither he nor they are going to the party. - The pronouns some, all, any, most, and none may be either singular or plural. Some of the dessert is still in the refrigerator. Some of the musicians are tuning their instruments. None (not one) of the tomatoes is ripe. None are so at peace as those who acknowledge their limitations. One of the players is sick today. - A singular subject takes a singular verb even if other nouns are connected to it by with, as well as, in addition to, except, together with, along with, or no less than. Her speed along with her toughness makes Nancy a force under the basket. 4 - Plural words that take singular verbs: acoustics* economics* measles physics* aeronautics* ethics* mumps politics* alms headquarters news whereabouts civics* mathematics* optics* *These words are thought of as singular when considered as topics of study. (Acousitics is Professor McIntyre’s area of expertise. The acoustics in 122 need improvement.) - Words that have no singular forms and take plural verbs: pants scissors tongs tweezers pliers shears trousers II.4 Irregular Verb Conjugations: The standard way to conjugate a verb in the past tense is to ad ed to its base (or infinitive) form. For example, call becomes called, dance becomes danced, etc. However, there are many verbs that don’t follow this rule. Below is a list of some of the most common exceptions. Make sure you know these exceptions. Base Form be begin bring choose cost draw drink feel fit forget freeze get lay (place) lead lie (recline) pay read ring rise shine (give light) shine (polish) sing swim wear Past was, were began brought chose cost drew drank felt fitted or fit forgot froze got laid led lay paid read rang rose shone shined sang swam wore Past Participle been begun brought chosen cost drawn drunk felt fitted or fit forgotten or forgot frozen got or gotten laid led lain paid read rung risen shone shined sung swum worn 5 III Punctuation and Usage III.1 The Apostrophe: used for three purposes. - III.1.1 Possession: the apostrophe precedes the s if the noun or pronoun is singular and follows the s if the noun or pronoun is plural. There is one exception: the apostrophe follows the s of ancient singular proper names. The school’s musical instruments are brand new. The Girls’ Club will hold a dance Friday night. The teachers’ meeting is in Ms. Lacey’s office. Some historians see Daniel Shays’s Rebellion in 1785-6 as a major turning point in American history. Charles’s mother is on the phone. Achilles’ bravery in Homer’s Iliad defines heroism. - III.1.2 Contraction of Noun or Pronoun with the Verb to be: this is why it and is become it’s, who and is become who’s. Who’s playing on whose team? *Many teachers consider the use of contractions unacceptably informal. - III.1.3 Nested Quotation Marks: note that the nested quotation mark falls inside an inapplicable question mark or exclamation mark. President Rodgers finished his commencement speech with a favorite line from the works of Plato. “When you’re in doubt,” Rodgers said, “certainly seek the counsel of others. But learn to turn inward. As Plato wrote, ‘What is good and what is not, need we ask anyone to know these things?’” Dimilsa asked the teacher, “For the test on the Constitution, do we need to know about the ‘elastic clause’?” III.2 The Comma: a comma should be used in a series as well as after a dependent clause and between two independent clauses joined by a conjunction. - III.2.1 The Serial Comma: to separate terms in a series; be sure to include a comma in a series of three terms or more between the penultimate term and the conjunction. Caesar came, he saw, and he conquered. Up, up, and away. Hook, line, and sinker. Blood, sweat, and tears. - III.2.2 The Dependent Clause Comma: to separate a dependent clause preceding an independent clause; note the difference in the second example. After eating dinner, Dave washed the dishes. Dave washed the dishes after eating dinner. 6 - III.2.3 The Independent Clause Comma: to separate two independent clauses joined by a conjunction; if the sentence is very short, the comma may be left out. Peter played the banjo in college, Paul played drums, and Mary sang. I like bagels and cream cheese for breakfast, but my husband likes pancakes and waffles. Chris plays center and Kwame plays sweeper. - III.2.4 The Vocative Comma: to follow an interjection or precede a person or group of persons addressed. Hey, could you please stop talking here. This is a library. We’ve got to talk, Nino, about whether we’re going to the play tonight. III.3 Hyphenation: Hyphens bind words that are split at the end of a line, compound terms, and some numbers. - III.3.1 Keeping Words Together: When hyphenating a word at the end of of a line, place the hyphen between syllables; check the dictionary when in doubt. The party was a great success, all agreed, even curmudgeonly George. (Wrong.) The party was a great success, all agreed, even curmudgeonly George. (Correct.) - III.3.2 Compound Nouns and Adjectives: Some compound nouns need hyphens: e.g., sister-in-law, go-between, high-mindedness. A compound adjective always needs a hyphen if it precedes the noun it’s modifying: e.g., an ill-informed reporter, a well-paid lawyer, eighteenth-century art. If the compound adjective follows the noun it’s modifying, no hyphen is used: e.g., a reporter who is ill informed; a lawyer who is well paid; art that is eighteenth century in style. (Do note the big difference, by the way, between an ill-informed reporter and an ill informed reporter.) There’s one more exception. If an adverb ending in ly precedes an adjective or participle before the modified term, do not hyphenate: e.g., highly favorable conditions, a poorly understood problem. - III.3.3 Hyphens with Prefixes: A hyphen should be used when adding such prefixes as self-, post-, ex-, anti-. Such self-analysis is typical of the post-game experience. - III.3.4 Hyphenated Numbers: A hyphen should be used with compound numbers from twenty-one to ninety-nine and with fractions (e.g., a three-fourths majority, two-thirds of the pie). This rule applies to compound numbers as nouns as well as adjectives. Some grammarians disagree, using hyphens only for compound numbers that are adjectives. 7 IIII.4 Capitalization: - All proper nouns should be capitalized (e.g., Bronx Zoo, Shea Stadium, Joe Smith). - All titles preceding the proper nouns they modify should be capitalized. We met Mayor Bloomberg yesterday. We met the mayor of the city yesterday. - Capitalize days of the week and months of the year, but not seasons. - Capitalize language courses (e.g., English, French, Latin), as they’re proper nouns, but not other courses (e.g., biology, math, science), as they’re common nouns--unless these other courses go by a special name (e.g., College Algebra I, Biology of Marine Invertebrates). III.5 Numbers: Follow the rules below. - Numbers of one or two words should be spelled out while numbers of three or more words should be written in numeral form. However, if you’re including within one sentence numbers of both kinds, write them all in the same way. We ordered 70 hotdogs, 120 hamburgers, and 150 sodas. - Always write out numbers at the beginning of a sentence. One hundred twenty hamburgers were eaten by fifty students. - Always spell out ordinal numbers. The Yankees are now playing their thirtieth game of the season. - A hyphen should be used with compound numbers from twenty-one to ninety-nine and with fractions (e.g., a three-fourths majority, two-thirds of the pie). This rule applies to compound numbers as nouns as well as adjectives. Some grammarians disagree, using hyphens only for compound numbers that are adjectives. - Money and percentages should be written in numeral form. This is not true, however, for amounts of money greater than one million dollars. 2.1%, 74% $3.16, $453,366, $1.5 million, $17 billion III.6 Quotation Marks: - Quotation marks enclose material taken directly from somewhere else (i.e., something read or heard) as well as the titles of television shows, movies, and articles. The titles of books, plays, magazines, and newspapers should be either italicized or underlined. “All animals are equal,” wrote George Orwell in his novel Animal Farm, “but some animals are more equal than others.” In her editorial “No More Mr. Nice Guys” in The New York Times (6 July 1995), Maureen Dowd described the new faces of Republican presidential hopefuls Robert Dole and Phil Gramm. - Nota bene: While the British don’t place the closing quotation mark outside the period, Americans do. This results in an inconsistency, because Americans do not place the closing quotation mark outside the colon or semicolon. 8 Maureen Dowd wrote the following in her editorial “No More Mr. Nice Guys”: “The beauty of a cheerful politician, of course, is that personal charm can help mask harsh policies.” - As for the nested quotation mark, an apostrophe is used, as described in I.3.1. The nested quotation mark falls inside an inapplicable question mark or exclamation mark. President Rodgers finished his commencement speech with a favorite line from the works of Plato. “When you’re in doubt,” Rodgers said, “certainly seek the counsel of others. But learn to turn inward. As Plato wrote, ‘What is good and what is not, need we ask anyone to know these things?’” Lisa asked the teacher, “For the test on the Constitution, do we need to know about the ‘elastic clause’?” “For the test on the Constitution,” the teacher responded, “you are responsible for the ‘elastic clause.’” III.7 The Colon: Use the colon to introduce a list of details, an amplification, or a quotation. A skier needs three pieces of equipment: skis, boots, and poles. There was a sadness to the old man’s gait: he walked slowly, head down, shoulders dropped. Jim has a lot of homework tonight: he has to write a onepage essay on Book Six of The Iliad, do a long problem set for math, and finish a lab report for biology. The Joker’s shrewdness brought to mind a line from Euripides: “Cleverness is not wisdom.” III.8 The Semicolon: The semicolon also has three basic purposes. - The semicolon joins closely related independent clauses without use of a conjunction. Take into consideration a number of explanations; don’t go with just one. - The semicolon should be used between independent clauses linked by such terms as however, therefore, otherwise, nevertheless, for example, that is, accordingly, or hence. I liked the movie; however, the seats in the theater were really uncomfortable. Ryan’s behavior at the movie theater was egregious; for example, he didn’t stop making comments and he kept getting up to get more popcorn and soda. Nota bene: a comma must follow these linking terms that follow the semicolon. 9 - If items in a series contain commas, they should be separated by semicolons. The trip will take us to four New England cities: Hartford, Conn.; Holyoke, Mass.; Burlington, Vt.; and Portland, Me. III.9 The Dash: “A dash is a mark of separation stronger than a comma, less formal than a colon, and more relaxed than parentheses” (Strunk and White, Elements of Style). The journalist liked his coffee black--totally black, utterly without milk or sugar. The money in the athletic budget--if there’s any money left--will be used for new uniforms. III.10 The Ellipsis: To indicate the omission of words from quoted material, use three dots if you’re staying within the sentence you’re quoting and use four dots if you’re moving on to a new sentence so to include the period in the first sentence. If the ellipsis is at the end of a sentence, it also, of course, must include four dots. “When in the Course of human events,” opens the Declaration of Independence, “it becomes necessary for one people to dissolve the political bands ... and to assume among the powers of the earth, the separate and equal station to which the Laws of Nature and of Nature’s God entitle them, a decent respect to the opinions of mankind requires that that they should declare the causes which impel them to the separation. We hold these truths to be self-evident, that all men are created equal, that they are endowed by their Creator with certain unalienable Rights....” The quoted material ends with four dots because the second sentence has not been quoted fully. 10 Words Often Confused Below is a list of words often confused. It would be wise to go through this list on occasion to know the various distinctions. If you use the wrong word, “woc” will appear in the margin to point you to this list. affect (v.) to influence [inadequate sleep will ~ your performance in school]. effect (v.) to bring about, to produce [more sleep should ~ better performance in school]. effect (n.) result. allusion (n.) an indirect reference. illusion (n.) a false impression or idea. already (adv.) before, previously. all ready (adj.) totally ready. all together (adj.) assembled. altogether (adv.) completely [these instructions are not ~ clear]. among (prep.) connecting more than two persons or things [the booty was divided evenly ~ the ten pirates]. between (prep.) connecting two persons or things; may be used to connect more than two persons or things if each entity is considered separately [a treaty ~ six nations]. capital (n.) the city; money. capital (adj.) significant or major. capitol (n.) the building with the dome. choose (v., present tense) chose (v., past tense) cite (v.) to refer to as a source [in her sermon, the minister ~ed the Gospel of Luke]. site (n.) place. sight (n.) 1. the visual sense; 2. spectacle. complement (n.) that which completes [that tie is a good ~ to the suit]. complement (v.) to complete [that tie ~s the suit]. compliment (n. or v.) praise. consul (n.) diplomat. 11 council (n.) a group that advises [student ~]. councilor (n.) a member of such a group. counsel (n.) 1. advice; 2. attorney [a good ~ gives good ~]. counsel (v.) to advise. counselor (n.) summer job. continual (adj.) happening repeatedly. continuous (adj.) happening without interruption. desert (n.) 1. arid terrain; 2. due punishment or reward. desert (v.) to leave, to abandon. dessert (n.) that postprandial reason for living. farther (adv.) distance in the literal sense [Lisa can throw ~ than Monica]. further (adv.) distance in the figurative sense [Mr. Streep suggested the student discuss the matter ~ with her teacher]. fewer (adj.) for quantity that can be counted [there are ~ glasses in the cupboard than I remember]. less (adj. or adv.) for general quantity [with the new schedule, there’s ~ opportunity to hang out]. i.e. abbreviation in Latin (id est) meaning “that is”; used to elaborate [If you take six courses, you’ll have too much on on your plate; ~, you won’t have time to relax]. e.g. abbreviation in Latin (exempli gratia) meaning “for example”; used to illustrate [Mike likes winter sports: ~, skating, skiing, snowshoeing]. imply (v.) to suggest. infer (v.) to conclude. its (pron.) the possessive of it [the school will not change ~ policy]. it’s (pron. and v.) combination of it and is [~ the school policy]. lead (v.) present tense [you ~, we’ll follow]. led (v.) past tense [you ~, we unfortunately followed]. lead (n.) the metal [the atomic weight of ~ is 207.2]. lie (v.) present tense of the intransitive verb, meaning to recline (past tense: lay; past participle: lain]. lay (v.) present tense of the transitive verb, meaning to place (past tense: laid; past participle: laid]. like (prep.) similar to; to introduce a phrase [“float ~ a butterfly, sting ~ a bee”— Muhammad Ali]. as (conj.) such as; to introduce a clause [the practice went ~ the coach had planned]. 12 loose (adj.) apart, free. lose (v.) 1. suffer defeat; 2. misplace. passed (v.) past tense of the verb to pass. past (n., adj., or prep.) peace (n.) harmony. piece (n.) fragment. plain (n.) flat territory. plain (adj.) ordinary [the explanation is ~ and simple]. plane (n.) 1. short for airplane; 2. tool for smoothing wood. plane (adj.) flat. principal (n.) 1. the head of a school; 2. capital necessary for financing. principal (adj.) most significant. principle (n.) rule or idea. stationary (adj.) in a set position. stationery (n.) paper and envelopes for writing letters. that (relative pron.) the restrictive, or defining, relative pronoun [there must be a foreign language ~ interests him], [dogs ~ live in glass houses shouldn’t throw sticks]. which (relative pron.) the nonrestrictive, or nondefining, relative pronoun, always following a comma [he’s interested in German, ~ isn’t offered at the school], [dogs, ~ typically like fetching sticks, are a person’s best friend]. than (conj.) for comparison [Lisa throws farther ~ Monica]. then (adv.) at a particular point in time [they went to elementary school together but they didn’t know each other ~]. their (possessive pron.) third-person plural possessive [~ car is brand new]. there (adv.) place where [let’s not have the prom ~]. there (pron.) introductory function term [~ are many books to choose from at the book fair]. they’re (pron. and v.) combination of they and are [~ not home]. to (prep.) [we’re not going ~ the mall again]. too (adv.) also [Jimmy likes hamburgers and hotdogs, ~]. two (n.) the number [Jimmy ate ~ hamburgers and ~ hotdogs]. weather (n.) outdoor conditions. whether (conj.) concerning possibility [I don’t know ~ I can go out tonight]. who’s (interrogative pron. and v.) combination of who and is or of who and has [Do you 13 know ~ teaching Marine Invertebrates this year?] [Do you know ~ been using my computer?]. whose (possessive pron.) possessive form of who [Do you know ~ calculator that is?]. your (possessive pronoun) possessive form of you (Oh, it’s ~ calculator]. you’re (pron. and v.) combination of you and are [~ up next at the plate]. Spelling 14 This segment of the style manual comprises a list of spelling rules and a list of spelling demons. Spelling Rules Contrary to common belief, there actually are rules for spelling in the English language, though exceptions do, of course, exist, as will be noted. These rules come directly from John E. Warriner, Warriner’s High School Handbook (1992). Quotation marks enclose language taken straight from this book. 1. ie and ei: - Use ie when the sound is e, except after c. - Exceptions: either, seize, neither, weird, leisure. - Use ei when the sound is not e, particularly when the sound is a. - Exceptions: friend, mischief. 2. Adding Prefixes: - “When a prefix is added to a word, the spelling of the word itself remains the same.” Examples: il+legible, il+legitimate, un+necessary, dis+similar, mis+spell. 3. Adding Suffixes: - The following suffixes are simply added to the word: -ness, -ment, -ly. Examples: mean+ness, commit+ment, usual+ly. - Exceptions: for words ending in y, change the y to i before -ness and -ly: steady > steadiness, steadily; sloppy > sloppiness, sloppily. - “Drop the final e before a suffix beginning with a vowel.” Examples: dine+ing, sense+ible, use+able, move+able, practice+able. - Exceptions: “keep the final e before a suffix beginning with a or o to retain the soft sound or c or g preceding the e”: service+able, advantage+ ous, manage+able. - “Keep the final e before a suffix beginning with a consonant.” Examples: use+ful, advertise+ment. - Exceptions: true+ly, argue+ment. - “Double the final consonant before a suffix that begins with a vowel if both of the following conditions exist: (1) the word has only one syllable or is accented on its last syllable (2) the word ends in a single consonant preceded by a single vowel.” Examples: win+ing= winning, omit+ed=omitted, begin+er=beginner, prefer+ ed=preferred. 15 4. The Plural of Nouns: - “The plural of nouns ending in y preceded by a consonant is formed by changing the y to i and adding es.” Examples: city > cities, spy > spies, penny > pennies. - “The plural of nouns ending in y preceded by a vowel is formed by adding an s.” Examples: turkey > turkeys, attorney > attorneys. - “The plural of nouns ending in o preceded by a vowel is formed by adding s. The plural of most nouns ending in o preceded by a consonant is formed by adding es” (e.g., tomatoes, heroes), with the exception of words associated with music (e.g., altos, sopranos, pianos, solos). - “The plural of compound nouns consisting of a noun plus a modifier is formed by making the noun plural.” Examples: editors-in-chief, sons-in-law, lookers-on, passersby. - Exceptions: drive-ins, tie-ups. - “The plural of numbers, letters, signs, and words considered as words is formed by adding an apostrophe and s. Examples: “Don’t use so many and’s in your writing.” “There are three 7’s in my telephone number.” Spelling Demons 16 The following is a list of frequently misspelled words. It would be wise to review this list on occasion. Many of these words come from Teresa Ferster Glazier, Basic Writing Skills (1979). absence abundant accommodate across actually adolescent allege all right a lot amateur among analyze apostrophe appearance apparatus appreciate argument athlete athletics attendance awkward becoming beggar beginning belief believe benefit bookkeeper buried business calendar cellar certain committee complete conscientious consciousness criticism cruelty curriculum debacle decision definitely dependent development difference disastrous discipline discussed disease divide eighth eligible eliminate embarrass(ed) environment especially etc. exaggerate excellent exercise existence experience explanation extremely familiar fascism feasible February feminine finally fluorescent foreign gauge government grammar grateful guarantee guard guidance harassment height hereditary hindrance hoping humorous immediately incidentally independent intelligence interest interfere involved irrelevant irresistible knowledge laboratory leisure length library likely liquor lying marriage mathematics meant medicine miscellaneous misspell necessary neither ninety ninth nuclear 17 nuisance occasionally occurred occurrence opinion opportunity orchestra pageant paltry parliament parallel particular perceive permanent persuade physically planned playwright pleasant precede preferred prejudice privilege propaganda propagate prophesy psychology psychoanalysis pursue receipt receive recommend reference relieve religious reminiscent repetitive rhythm ridiculous sacrifice scene schedule secretary separate significant similar sincerely sophomore straight succeed success suggest supersede suppress surprise susceptible symmetry temperament thorough though tomorrow tragedy truly twelfth tyranny undoubtedly unnatural unnecessary villain vinegar Wednesday weird whisper whistle withhold yacht yield Correction Symbols and Abbreviations 18 The following are correction symbols and abbreviations as well as their meanings. The correction symbols listed below come from Warriner’s High School Handbook (1992). The correction abbreviations come from The MLA Handbook for Writers of Research Papers (1995). Correction Symbols The Beacon school Capitalize a lowercase letter. I like French and Math Lowercase a capital letter. letter the editor Insert a missing word, letter, punctuation mark. definate Change a letter. at campus Replace a word. in the the cafeteria Delete a word, letter, punctuation mark. tommorrow Delete and close up. drum beat Close up space. sieze Transpose letter order. The second chapter Begin a new paragraph. Stay out of my life Add a period. red, white and blue Add a comma. highschool Add a space. these ingredients Add a colon. Austin, Tex. Boston, Mass. Add a semicolon. well informed reporter Add a hyphen. Mr. DiLullos math class Add an apostrophe. best play of the game in the second half Transfer circled words (tr in the margin). 19 a case of very bad judgment Keep crossed-out material (stet in the margin). he liked cooking but not to wash dishes Lack of parallel structure. Correction Abbreviations ab adj adv agr amb awk cap d dgl frag lc num p ref rep r-o sp ss t tr vb wdy woc faulty abbreviation improper use of adjective improper use of adverb faulty agreement ambiguous expression or construction awkward expression or construction faulty capitalization faulty diction dangling construction fragment use lowercase error in use of numbers faulty punctuation unclear pronoun reference unnecessary repetition run-on sentence error in spelling faulty sentence structure wrong verb tense transpose terms wrong verb form wordy writing see Words Often Confused list 20 21