Senior Project - Research Paper Rubric “A” (90-100) EXEMPLARY Stands as a model for future papers on the topic. Papers receiving a 90 to 100 show clear and consistent mastery of content and organization, as well as reasonably consistent mastery in the categories of language use and mechanics/vocabulary. Papers receiving a 90-100 contain no critical errors and contain minimal (0-3) other grammar mistakes. Critical errors include fragments, run-ons, comma splices, subject-verb agreement errors, pronoun-antecedent agreement errors, and apostrophe errors. Papers must include the minimum number of required sources. Papers must meet the minimum length requirement of 5 full pages. Content Thesis presents well-phrased controlling idea/argument All argumentative statements are persuasively worded and logically support thesis with a related point Each body paragraph contains well-chosen documented material that effectively support the point All quotes are embedded in lead-in sentences Interpretations present insightful, well-developed analysis Essay effectively uses relevant research to develop points Essay maintains focus on controlling idea, all points are substantial and well-developed Essay demonstrates attention paid to the audience and the purpose Concluding paragraph draws conclusions that go beyond restating thesis Organization: Paragraphs logically sequenced Smooth transitions between and within paragraphs create coherence and unity Documented material arranged logically within paragraph to support topic sentences Fluent expression of ideas Focus maintained throughout essay Language Use/Vocabulary: Sentences varied in length and structure Diction appropriate for academic writing Unique, confident and engaging voice and style Word choices are engaging and fresh Proper syntax “B” (80-89) Works Cited (MLA) ___ sources (2 gov, edu, org) Parenthetical Citations (MLA) ____ sources (2 gov, edu, org) ( ) correct) ( ) incorrect ( ) yes ( ) no ( ) correct) ( ) incorrect ( ) yes ( ) no VERY GOOD – GOOD Papers receiving a grade of 85 to 89 show reasonably consistent mastery in the categories of content and organization, as well as adequate mastery in the categories of language use and mechanics/vocabulary. Papers earning this grade may contain one to two critical errors and 4-6 other grammar mistakes. Papers must include at least four sources. · Content: Thesis presents solid controlling ideas All topic sentences support thesis with a related point, though wording may be imprecise or the argument may be vague Each body paragraph contains adequate documented material that support the thesis, though some may not be as strong as others All quotes are embedded in lead-in sentences Commentary is generally insightful but could be developed further Generally maintains focus of controlling idea, though some points could further clarified or developed Essay generally demonstrates attention paid to audience and purposes Concluding paragraph generally effective, though it may restate thesis or points already made Organization: Paragraphs logically sequenced Transitions between and within paragraphs generally effective, though coherence can be strengthened Documented material arranged logically within paragraph to support topic sentences Focus generally maintained throughout essay, though some points may be tangential · Language Use/Vocabulary: Some sentence variety with effective but simple sentence constructions, some complex constructions Occasional errors in diction Generally effective syntax Word choices are adequate for the assignment, though not very engaging or fresh Works Cited (MLA) ___ sources (2 gov, edu, org) Parenthetical Citations (MLA) ____ sources (2 gov, edu, org) ( ) correct) ( ) incorrect ( ) yes ( ) no ( ) correct) ( ) incorrect ( ) yes ( ) no “C-D” (70-79) SATISFACTORY Papers receiving a grade of 75 to 79 show adequate mastery in the categories of content and organization, as well as developing mastery in the categories of language use and mechanics/vocabulary. Papers earning this grade may contain 3-5 critical errors, / 7-10 other grammar mistakes, or both. Papers must include at least three sources. · Content: Thesis present but vaguely or imprecisely stated Controlling idea apparent but needs clarification and development Topic sentences tend to state a fact about the text, or do not have a clear argumentative point, or are unrelated to thesis Documented material may not be well-chosen, or may be irrelevant, or do not effectively support topic sentences Documented material may not be properly embedded in lead-in sentences Commentary tends to restate the quote, or do not make developed or insightful points, or are rather simplistic, lacking insight (may retell the story) Little or no attention paid to audience or purpose Essay may not maintain focus of controlling idea, tends to wander or treat topic in a superficial manner · Organization: Paragraphs may not flow logically Weak transitions between and within paragraphs that prevent coherence Documented material may be disconnected, poorly arranged Essay may not be effectively unified, essay tends to lack coherence · Language Use/Vocabulary: Major problems with simple/complex constructions Sentences may tend to be choppy or syntax may be awkward Simple diction characterized by idiomatic usage No distinct voice or style expressed Major syntax problems Word choices are simplistic “F” (0-69) Works Cited (MLA) ___ sources (2 gov, edu, org) Parenthetical Citations (MLA) ____ sources (2 gov, edu, org) ( ) correct) ( ) incorrect ( ) yes ( ) no ( ) correct) ( ) incorrect ( ) yes ( ) no UNSATISFACTORY Papers earning this grade contain6 or more critical errors, more than 10 other grammar mistakes, or both. Papers may utilize too few sources. · Content: Thesis vague or not discernible, lacks argumentative focus Controlling idea is vague or over-generalized or not present Topic sentences do not relate to thesis or are not present Documented material poorly chosen or absent and/or not embedded in lead-in sentences Commentary restates documented material, interpretation is superficial and demonstrates no insightful analysis No attention paid to audience or purpose Essay does not show understanding of topic · Organization: No apparent organization to essay Points randomly made Essay lacks coherence and unity · Language Use/Vocabulary: Diction inappropriate for academic writing Many syntax problems Word choices are poor Number of Critical Errors __________ Works Cited (MLA) ( ) correct) ( ) incorrect Works Cited (MLA) ( )(correct) ___ sources (2 gov, edu, org) ) yes ( )(incorrect ) no 6 sources (2 gov, edu, org) Parenthetical Citations (MLA) ( () )yes correct)( )( no ) incorrect ____ sources (2 gov, edu, org) ( ) yes ( ) no Number of Other Errors__________