ENG 102 Definition Essay Rubric Textual Trait 20 points (Accomplished) 16 points (Proficient) 12 points (Competent) 8 points (Novice) 4 points (Confused) 0 points (Absent) Ideas are extremely simplistic, showing signs of confusion, misunderstanding of the prompt; thesis is essentially missing or not discernible. Lack of support for main points; frequent and illogical generalizations without support. Shows complete confusion about the topic or inability to grasp it; thus conspicuous absence of thesis and lack of purpose. Controlling Idea (Focus, Purpose or Thesis) Engaging and full development of a clear thesis as appropriate to assignment purpose. Competent and well-developed thesis; thesis represents sound and adequate understanding of the assigned topic. Mostly intelligible ideas; thesis is weak, unclear, too broad, or only indirectly supported. Mostly simplistic and unfocused ideas; little or no sense of purpose or control of thesis. Evidence (Ideas, Support or Development) Consistent evidence with originality and depth of ideas; ideas work together as a unified whole; main points are sufficiently supported (with evidence); support is valid and specific. Organization is sequential and appropriate to assignment; paragraphs are well developed and appropriately divided; ideas linked with smooth and effective transitions. Clear discernment of distinctive audience; tone and Ideas supported sufficiently; support is sound, valid and logical. Main points and ideas are only indirectly supported; support isn’t sufficient or specific, but is loosely relevant to main points. Insufficient, nonspecific and/or irrelevant support. Competent organization, without sophistication. Competent paragraph structure; lacking in effective transitions. Limited attempts to organize around a thesis; paragraphs are mostly standalones with weak or non-evident transitions. Organization, while attempted, was unsuccessful. Paragraphs were simple, disconnected and formulaic. No evident transitions or planned sequence. Organization, if evident at all, is confusing and disjointed; paragraph structure is weak; transitions are missing, inappropriate and/or illogical. Paragraph structure does not exist; or is a single rambling paragraph or series of isolated paragraphs. Effective and accurate awareness of general audience; Little or inconsistent sense of audience related to Shows almost no awareness of a particular audience; Lacks awareness of a particular appropriate Paragraph structure does not exist; or is a single rambling Organization (Structure, Sequence or Transition) Tone/Diction (Audience Awareness, Point- Clear absence of support for main points. of-view, Vocabulary or Word Usage) point-of-view appropriate to the assignment. Exceptional vocabulary range, accuracy, and correct and effective word choices tone and point-ofview satisfactory. Good vocabulary range and accuracy of usage. assignment purpose; tone and point-of-view not refined or consistent. Ordinary vocabulary range, mostly accurate; some vernacular terms used. reveals no grasp of appropriate tone and/or point-ofview for given assignment. Errors of diction and usage, while evident, do not interfere with readability. Grammar and Presentation (Sentence Structure, Fluency, Mechanics or Formatting) Each sentence structured effectively, powerfully; rich, well-chosen variety of sentence styles and length. Virtually free of punctuation, spelling, capitalization errors; appropriate format and presentation for assignment Effective and varied sentences; errors (if any) due to lack of careful proofreading; syntax errors (if any) reflects uses as colloquialisms. Contains only occasional punctuation, spelling and/or capitalization errors. Few formatting errors. Most errors likely careless. Formulaic or tedious sentence patterns; shows some errors in sentence construction; some non-standard syntax usage. Contains several (mostly common) punctuation, spelling, and/or capitalization errors. Several errors in formatting or formatting is inconsistent. Sentences show errors of structure; little or no variety; no grasp of sentence flow. Contains many errors of punctuation, spelling and/or capitalization. Errors interfere with meaning in places. Formatting incorrect in most places. audience for assignment; tone and point-of-view somewhat inappropriate or very inconsistent. Extremely limited vocabulary; choices lack grasp of diction; usage is inaccurate. Simple sentences used excessively, almost exclusively; frequent errors of sentence structure. Contains many and serious errors of punctuation, spelling, and/or capitalization; errors severely interfere with meaning. Formatting weak. paragraph or series of isolated paragraphs. Diction and syntax make communication meaningless or very confusing at best. Contains multiple and serious errors of sentence structure (i.e., fragments, run-ons). Unable to write simple sentences. Frequent errors in spelling and capitalization; intrusive and/or inaccurate punctuation, communication is hindered. No formatting as appropriate to assignment.