Sample Quotes and Commentary from The Scarlet Letter Interpretive Argument/Thematic Idea: Within a given topic, this is a specific, controversial/opinionated statement as to what is suggested or implied in the literature: it is an interpretation. Commentary: Analysis of a quotation that interprets the quotation specifically in the terms of a thematic idea or argument within a given topic. The “direction” of the commentary is determined by which topic the writer is pursuing and what argument he/she is making. Commentary is not summary: It does not simply recount the facts of a passage, but the writer extracts from the context an idea to be discussed on its own merits. Commentary connects specific elements of a quotation to a larger interpretation. It moves from the specific example to the general idea. The same quote can be used for different topics; it just depends on the approach the writer takes to the quote and what topic he/she is interested in. 1. Topic: Sin 2. Thematic Idea / Interpretive Argument Hawthorne suggests that sin, rather than damning a person or making them a lesser human being, actually raises the sinner’s consciousness and sensitivity. 3. Quote “Such helpfulness was found in her—so much power to do and power to sympathize—that many people refused to interpret the scarlet ‘A’ by its original signification. They said that it meant ‘Able’; so strong was Hester Prynne, with a woman’s strength” (156). 4. Commentary In this quotation, Hester’s “power to sympathize” stems from her status as a sinner. Hawthorne emphasizes this by having the people directly associate the scarlet letter, the symbol of her sin, with her newfound abilities. The quote suggests that while it is true that all people do wrong, by accepting one’s own shortcomings and failings, a connection is formed between oneself and humankind—a connection that fails to form in a state of denial or accusation. 1. Topic: Women 2. Thematic Idea / Interpretive Argument Hawthorne shows how in Puritan society a woman’s power and status, unlike a man’s, is a function only of her service to others, not her own strengths or abilities. 3. Quote “Such helpfulness was found in her—so much power to do and power to sympathize—that many people refused to interpret the scarlet ‘A’ by its original signification. They said that it meant ‘Able’; so strong was Hester Prynne, with a woman’s strength” (156). 4. Commentary In this quotation, Hester’s strength, which Hawthorne generalizes to “a woman’s strength” is drawn only from her capacity to help others. She is “able” because she serves. While a man can be seen as strong through the self-centered domination of others, whether physical or intellectual, it is a woman’s selflessness and ultimate submission to others that defines her strength, at least in a chauvinistic or paternalistic context. 1. Topic: Puritan Society vs. the individual 2. Interpretive Argument In Hawthorne’s portrayal of Puritan society, he lays bear the contradiction inherent in the rejection of individualism as sinful by showing that an individual can only achieve true power or renown in Puritan society by NOT conforming, by acting outside of the rigid social norms. 3. The Quote “Such helpfulness was found in her—so much power to do and power to sympathize—that many people refused to interpret the scarlet ‘A’ by its original signification. They said that it meant ‘Able’; so strong was Hester Prynne, with a woman’s strength” (156). 4. The Commentary In this quotation, Hester Prynne, representative of someone standing in opposition to the Puritan society, gains the admiration of the society purely through acts of individualism. A rebel who refuses to cooperate with the powers that be, while ostensibly a threat to the very structure of the society, actually strengthens it by becoming, in this case, a role model of kindness. In a society that condemns individuality, it is still the non-conforming individual that rises in power and acclaim.