Argumentative Writing: Rhetorics of Food ENC 3315 • Spring 2015 • Ms. Galbreath Tuesday & Thursday TBD 1:30-2:45pm Credit hours: 3 Prerequisite: ENC 1102 (passed with a “C” or better) Contact information: E-mail: through Webcourses or marcy.galbreath@ucf.edu Office: 304B Colbourn Hall Office Hours: M-W 12:00 - 1:30pm or by appointment Course Description Beyond the grocery store or restaurant, do you know where your food comes from, or where it has been? When you are persuaded by that fast food commercial on TV, what are you really buying? Or, have you been scared off fast food because of food safety issues? This course will examine arguments—the speech, texts, and images-surrounding food in the U.S., exploring the connections and contrasts among rhetorics of food in consumer culture, science, and public policy. Figure 1. Giuseppe Arcimboldo. Vertumnus. c. 1590. Oil on canvas. National Gallery. Washington, D.C. Critical reading and listening skills are essential tools in making us better informed citizens with more control over the policies and politics of food production and consumption in the U.S., and in developing a better understanding of how food shapes our personal and group identities. Argumentative writing skills can help us contest the marketing jargon and sometimes misleading language surrounding food issues, and empower us, as citizens and consumers, to effect change. Goals: To empower students with critical reading and writing skills To provide students with an understanding of and practice in rhetorical argumentation To enhance critical thinking skills through various writing experiences Course Outcomes Through successful completion of the activities and assignments in this course, you will be able to . . . 1. Recognize the argumentative nature of food communications, from science-based paradigms to corporate advertising and advocacy messaging 2. Describe and define the relationships between rhetoric, citizenship, and civic life in the context of food literacy 3. Demonstrate critical reading and writing strategies through written and oral assignments 4. Analyze writing as a situated, living discourse by critiquing various texts, videos, and websites from a rhetorical standpoint 5. Enter and extend the conversation by creating a written argument in response to a food issue 6. Persuasively advocate for the implementation of this response by identifying the most appropriate available choices of writing for a specific audience Required Text: Sharon Crowley and Debra Hawhee. Ancient Rhetorics for Contemporary Students, 5th ed. New York: Pearson, 2012. Print. • Additional reading and viewing assignments will be available on our class Webcourses site. Online material can be reached through myUCF/Webcourses@UCF. You will need your PID and password. Required Materials: For this class, you will need A computing device capable of creating typed documents & accessing the Internet A notebook, pens, and pencils for in-class writing Course Policies Attendance This course is challenging, and I expect you to attend class and participate in course activities such as topic discussion, group work, in-class writing, and peer review. Failure to attend class regularly is likely to result in your inability to complete writing assignments according to course and program standards. If for any reason you have a family emergency or any unforeseen happenings during this course, contact me immediately by email so we can make alternative arrangements. Avoid being late. It is disruptive and disrespectful to your fellow classmates. If this is a repeated habit, it may negatively affect your final grade, and at my discretion, count against engagement points. 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The time stamp on the email must show it was sent prior to the start of class for credit. I encourage laptops and tablets in class. While not required, these are useful for note-taking, research, and peer review. Please recognize that this privilege does not mean allowing device use to become a distraction. As mature and respectful adults, I expect you to refrain from social activities such as texting and social updates while class is in session. Academic Honesty The Department of Writing & Rhetoric has adopted the definition of plagiarism from the Council of Writing Program Administrators (WPA): “In an instructional setting, plagiarism occurs when a writer deliberately uses someone else’s language, ideas, or other original (not common-knowledge) material without acknowledging its source. This definition applies to texts published in print or on-line, to manuscripts, and to the work of other student writers.” Misuse of sources: The WPA (and the Department of Writing & Rhetoric) distinguish plagiarism from misuse of sources: “A student who attempts (even if clumsily) to identify and credit his or her source, but who misuses a specific citation format or incorrectly uses quotation marks or other forms of identifying material taken from other sources, has not plagiarized. Instead, such a student should be considered to have failed to cite and document sources appropriately.” Consequences of academic dishonesty: Writing & Rhetoric takes plagiarism and other forms of academic dishonesty seriously and responds in accordance with UCF policy. Plagiarizing or cheating—or assisting another student who plagiarizes or cheats—may result in a failing grade on Galbreath Syllabus 2 an assignment or for the entire course; a report to the Office of Student Conduct; and/or a “Z” grade, which denotes academic dishonesty on your transcript. Disability Statement UCF is committed to providing reasonable accommodations for all persons with disabilities. Students who need accommodations must be registered with Student Disability Services, Student Resource Center Room 132, phone (407) 823-2371, prior to requesting accommodations from the instructor. Students with disabilities who need accommodations in this course must contact the professor at the beginning of the semester to discuss needed accommodations. Further UCF policies can be seen at http://goldenrule.sdes.ucf.edu/ Grading & Assessment Here is the percentage breakdown of coursework for ENC 3372: Engagement: Includes preparation for and participation in class discussion and activities, and thoughtful participation in peer review. Engagement points for activities and workshops can ONLY be earned in class, so realize that absences may result in missed points. 10 Homework: Reading Responses consisting of 5 short (1-2 page) papers presenting a perspective on the assigned readings, and a Final Reflection on how your work meets the course outcomes. 10 Major Assignment 1 Rhetorics of Consumption: Analyzing food promotions Major Assignment 2 Rhetorics of Food Risk: Food risk writing analysis Major Assignment 3 Writing about Our Relationships with Food : Food Advocacy Proposal 15 15 15 Final Presentation: A conference-style presentation to your peers arguing for the implementation of your proposal. 10 Course Portfolio: A digital collection of your best revised writing and major projects 25 Total: 100% Grade Scale & Criteria: 95-100% A 90-94.x% A- 87-89.x% B+ 84-86.x% B 80-83.x% B- 77-79.x% C+ 74-76.x% C 70-73.x% C- 0-69.x% F No credit NC No incompletes will be given for this course UCF is on a plus/minus grading scale. A grade of C meets minimum expectations and satisfies course requirements. Grades above C+ are earned by turning in consistently exceptional work. Email & Webcourses Protocols: Important! Check your Webcourses email and announcements at least once a day. This is not a mixed-mode course, but we will be utilizing the Webcourses interface for out-of-class communication, announcements, and some homework submissions. I will usually post new information directly into Webcourses as an announcement, but from time to time may email you. I will be using the email in Webcourses—please set your notifications so that you can see when new emails or announcements appear. When sending an email to me, please include your course and last name in the subject line. I receive many emails, and do not want to miss yours because (without your name) it looks like spam. Viruses A virus can spell disaster. Your use of a reputable anti-virus program is strongly suggested for participation in this course (good ones include McAfee or Norton, and there are also free versions such as AVG). Galbreath Syllabus 3 Resources Technical Resources: For specific problems in any of the areas below, or for further information, go to the corresponding link for assistance. UCF Home Page will help find UCF resources - http://www.ucf.edu UCF Service Desk - http://servicedesk.ucf.edu/ - You can also call the UCF Service Desk at 407-8235117. Use these contacts if you have any problem with access to Webcourses. It is your responsibility to make sure you have access to the course. Webcourses guides are available at: http://guides.instructure.com/ Learning Online -- http://learn.ucf.edu This URL also includes access to information on study skills for distance learners, the library and the writing center. 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For more information or to make an appointment, visit the UWC website at: http://uwc.ucf.edu/ , stop by Colbourn Hall, or call (407) 823-2197. The Owl at Perdue: http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/561/03/ --Great resource for selfchecking your papers. Please also consider me a resource. I am available during office hours, by appointment, or by email, and will be glad to meet with you when you want to discuss your writing projects. Don’t be shy about asking questions—I am very interested in your ideas and your writing, and hope to make this course a useful experience for you. Important dates Drop/Swap Deadline on myUCF (ends at 11:59 p.m.): Thursday, January 15, 2015 Last Day for Full Refund: Thursday, January 15, 2015 Add Deadline on myUCF (ends at 11:59 p.m.): Friday, January 16, 2015 Payment Deadline: Friday, January 17, 2015 Withdrawal Deadline (ends at 11:59 p.m.): Tuesday, March 24, 2015 Final Exam: Final: Tues 5/5 Spring 2015 Holidays Martin Luther King Day Spring Break @ 1:00pm-3:50pm Monday, January 19, 2015 March 9-14, 2015 You are responsible for noting any changes announced in class or on Webcourses. Galbreath Syllabus 4 ENC 3315 CALENDAR Week 5 Week 4 Week 3 Week 2 Week 1 Each class period will begin with a “freewrite,” 5-minutes of writing in response to a prompt. These are not graded exercises, so don’t worry or focus on spelling, grammar, or punctuation—just put your thoughts on paper, and don’t stop writing until I call time. This is our brain gym, so consider it a warm-up exercise for the day’s activities. T Jan 13 Course Intro/Syllabus Explain course project Th Jan 15 Unit One: Rhetorics of Consumption Assign Major Assignment 1: Analyzing Food Promotion Discussion: Berry Read & be prepared to discuss: Wendell Berry’s “The Pleasures of Eating” (PDF on Webcourses) For Tuesday: Read & be prepared to discuss: Crowley & Hawhee Chp. 1 Ancient Rhetorics T Jan 20 Discussion: Rhetorical analysis & how we will be using it in this class Prompt: “Got Milk,” Eat Mor Chikin,” “Happy Cows” ads →In-class writing exercise For Thursday: Read & be prepared to discuss Michael Pollan, “The Feedlot” Th Jan 22 Video: Food, Inc. excerpt, fast food commercials → In-class writing exercise T Jan 27 Discussion: What commonplace assumptions surround food promotion in the U.S.? → In-class writing exercise Th Jan 29 Draft of M1 (hard copy in class) for peer review Post-peer review assessment: Revision plans For Thursday: Draft of M1 for peer review For Tuesday: Read & be prepared to discuss Crowley & Hawhee Chp. 2 Kairos T Feb 3 Discussion: When is the right time to make an argument? Th Feb 5 Unit 2: Rhetorics of Food Risk M1 due → Assign M2 Food Risk Writing Analysis For Thursday: M1 due Read and annotate Berry, “The Use of Energy” Discussion: How does Berry craft his argument? For Tuesday: Read and annotate Thomas A. Lyson, “Going Global” & Rachel Carson, “Elixirs of Death” T Feb 10 Field trip to Urban Sunshine Organic Nursery Th Feb 12 Discussion: What connections can be made between the readings (Berry, Lyson, Carson, & Murray and Maga) and current perceived food risks? How do these rhetors persuade? Week 6 For Thursday: Read & annotate James D. Murray and Elizabeth A. Maga, “Is there a Risk in Not Using GE Animals?” Prepare to discuss Berry, Lyson, Carson, and Murray & Maga. Feb 17 Discussion: How do food risk writers use logical proofs? For Thursday: Read & be prepared to discuss Robert Cox, “Risk Communication: Nonexpert Publics and Acceptable Risk”; Richard H. Adamson, “We have an Obesity Problem in This Country” Week 7 For Tuesday: Write a short analysis of the rhetorical situation of the video and commercials. Read & be prepared to discuss Crowley & Hawhee Chp. 4 Common Topics & Commonplaces For Tuesday: Read & be prepared to discuss Crowley & Hawhee Chp. 5 Logical Proofs Feb 19 Discussion: What is acceptable risk? For next week: No regular class meetings. Mandatory conference; bring draft of M2 Rhetorical Analysis & any questions you may have Readings: Crowley & Hawhee Chp. 6 Ethical Proof Feb 24, 26 No Classes: Mandatory conference; Bring draft of M2 For Tuesday, March 3: Draft M2 for peer review →Read Crowley & Hawhee Chp. 5 Logical Proofs & Chp. 6 Ethical Proofs →take quiz on Webcourses on Crowley & Hawhee material Galbreath Syllabus 5 Week 9 T March 10–Spring Break—no class Th March 12—Spring Break—no class Week 10 T March 17 Discussion: Is Permaculture the answer? What is the kairos of this situation? →Exercise: For Thursday: Read & be prepared to discuss: Kathleen Hart, “Seeds of Dispute”; review & analyze Seed Freedom website Th March 19 Discussion: What are GMOs? What is Hart’s argument? How does she persuade? →Exercises: For Tuesday: Read & be prepared to discuss Crowley & Hawhee Chp. 7 Pathetic Proof T March 24 Discussion: Emotional appeals in food discourse → Exercise Th March 26 Discussion: What are your appeals? → Exercise: Drafting M3 For Thursday: Read & be prepared to discuss: David Evans & Wokje Abrahamse, “Beyond Rhetoric” T March 31 Draft of M3 (hard copy in class) for peer review →post-peer review assessment & plans for revision For Thursday: M3 due; Read Marion Nestle’s May 22, 2103 blog on SNAP & Dan Glickman, “Beyond the Rhetoric: SNAP” For Tuesday: Draft of M3 for peer review; look at the USDA SNAP website T April 7 Discussion: How do you argue persuasively? Th April 9 Discussion: How can you get involved? For Thursday: Homework: In a short paper, Compare & contrast Food Not Bombs and Second Harvest Food Bank websites For Tuesday: Read & be prepared to discuss Crowley & Hawhee Chp. 9: Arrangement T April 14 Discussion: Civic action + rhetorical persuasion = speech and writing that make things happen Exercise: Drafting workshop Th April 16 Give presentation and portfolio guidelines Sign up for presentations Discussion: How can you use Delivery & Memory in your project? For Tuesday: bring most recent versions of major papers for revision workshop Week 12 For Thursday: Revise M2; Read & be prepared to discuss: Pollan, “The Market”; take an analytic look at Pollan’s website Discussion: What is Pollan’s standpoint? For Tuesday 3/11: Read & be prepared to discuss: Stephen Schneider, “Good, Clean, Fair”; analyze Slow Food USA website; Bill Mollison video on Permaculture, Part I, and Permaculture Design Principles website. Homework for March 11: Writing assignment: Analyze & compare article, video, and websites Week 11 Assign M3: Writing About Our Relationships with Food: Food Advocacy Proposal Week 13 Week 8 Th March 5 Unit 3: Rhetorics of Food Ethics M2 Food Risk Writing Analysis due Week 14 T March 3 Draft of M2 (hard copy in class) for peer review → Post-peer review assessment: Revision plans Week 15 For Thursday: Read & be prepared to discuss: Crowley & Hawhee Chp. 12: Delivery & Memory T April 21 Workshop: Outcomes review: How do you revise for Portfolio? →Exercise: Outcomes reflection Th April 2 Unit 4: Civic Action: Food Advocacy M3 due →Reflection exercise Assign final presentation: Food Advocacy Proposal Discussion: How do politics and rhetoric intersect in SNAP? For Tuesday: Read & be prepared to discuss: Crowley & Hawhee Chp. 8 Extrinsic Proofs Th April 23 Draft of Food Advocacy Proposal (outline) and revised major assignments →Workshop & Peer Review For Tuesday: Continue to revise for portfolio and prepare for your presentation. Galbreath Syllabus 6 Finals Week 16 T April 28 Th April 30 Final Research project due in portfolio (in Webcourses) Presentations Presentations T May 5 Final: 1:00pm-3:50pm Presentations This schedule is subject to change based on our needs. A backup copy of the syllabus and schedule is available in the course Webcourses website, and that is where updates will be posted if changes are made. Reading list: Adamson, Richard H. “We have an Obesity Problem in This Country.” Scientific American Guest Blog. 19 Dec. 2012. Blogs.scientificamerican.com. Web. 14 June 2013. Berry, Wendell. “The Pleasures of Eating.” What Are People For? San Francisco: North Point P, 1990. 145-152. Print. --. “The Use of Energy.” The Unsettling of America. San Francisco: Sierra Club, 1977. 81-96. Print. Carson, Rachel. “Elixirs of Death.” Silent Spring. Boston: Mariner, 1962. 15-38. Print. Cox, Robert. “Risk Communication: Nonexpert Publics and Acceptable Risk.” Environmental Communication and the Public Sphere. Thousand Oaks: Sage, 2006. 218-233. Print. Crowley, Sharon and Debra Hawhee. Ancient Rhetorics for Contemporary Students, 5th ed. New York: Pearson, 2012. Print. Evans, David and Wokje Abrahamse. “Beyond Rhetoric: The Possibilities of and for ‘Sustainable Lifestyles.” Environmental Politics 18.4 (2009): 486-502. Routledge. Web. 15 June. 2013. Glickman, Dan. “Beyond the Rhetoric: SNAP (Food Stamps) and America’s Poor.” Huff Post Politics. 3 Oct. 2012. Huffingtonpost.com. Web. 15 June 2013. Hart, Kathleen. “Seeds of Dispute.” Eating in the Dark. New York: Pantheon, 2002. 194-208. Print. Lyson, Thomas A. “Going Global.” Civic Agriculture: Reconnecting Farm, Food, and Community. Medford: Tufts U P, 2004. 30-47. Print. Murray, James D. and Elizabeth A. Maga. “Is there a Risk in Not Using GE Animals?” Transgenic Res 19 (2010): 357-361. Springer. Web. 5 March 2014. Pollan, Michael. “The Feedlot.” The Omnivores Dilemma: In Defense of Food. New York: Penguin, 2006. 65-84. Print. --. “The Market.” 239-261. Schneider, Stephen. “Good, Clean, Fair: The Rhetoric of the Slow Food Movement.” College English 70.4 (2008): 384-402. JSTOR. Web. 18 May 2012. Web Resources: Bill Mollison video on Permaculture, Part I Food Not Bombs Marion Nestle’s May 22, 2103 blog Permaculture Design Principles Second Harvest Food Bank Seed Freedom Slow Food USA Galbreath Syllabus 7