1. 2. 3. 4. www.ebsi.co.kr Part 01 Type 1 Writing is a love-hate relationship. You start out hating everything you’re writing, and end up blinded by love for every word you’ve put on paper, or the other way around. So how can end up + ~ ing/ ~ed you analyze your own work without prejudice? There are certain things you can do to gain some perspective. In order to judge your own work objectively, you must get distance. Putting your work away for a while sometimes weeks or months can allow you to come back not so enamored by it. Falling in love with a new piece of material can also help. It gives you a chance to read it almost as if it’s someone else’s. This is the first, and perhaps most important step, because is the greatest enemy for evaluating your own writing. busyness ignorance indifference familiarity complexity Points to Master You start out hating everything [you’re writing], and end up blinded by love / for every word [you’ve put on paper], S V1 V2 or the other way around. start out end up everything every word 6 and that hating ~ which blinded ~ www.ebsi.co.kr Type 2 The inhabitants of the earth are divided not only by race, nation, religion or ideology, but also, in a sense, by . Examining the present populations of the = when we exam globe, we find a tiny group who still live, hunting and food-foraging, as men did millennia = lived ago. Others, the vast majority of mankind, depend not on bear-hunting or berry-picking, but on agriculture. They live, in many respects, as their ancestors did centuries ago. These two groups taken together compose perhaps 70 percent of all living human beings. They are the people of the past. By contrast, somewhat more than 25 percent of the earth’s population can be found in the industrialized societies. They lead modern lives. They are products of the first half of the twentieth century, molded by mechanization and mass education, brought up = and they are molded with lingering memories of their own country’s agricultural past. They are, in effect, the people of the present. their position in time differences in language the degree of education their political priorities the prospect of change Points to Master Examining the present populations of the globe, we find a tiny group [ who still live, hunting and food-foraging, S V O as men did millennia ago]. S’ V’ Examining When we examine hunting and food-foraging as food-foraging hunting and as They are products of the first half of the twentieth century, molded by mechanization and mass education, brought S V C up with lingering memories / of their own country’s agricultural past. molded brought products of ~ past lingering memories 7 Type 3 I had been accustomed to stage work, and I wanted to use a particular light effect, which I had used in the theater, for a film I was then shooting. In the scene in question, a spy came creeping through a curtain, and in order to make the effect more mysterious, I decided to light only half the spy’s face and to leave the rest in darkness. I looked at the result on the screen and found it extraordinarily effective. I was so pleased with this trick of lighting that I used it throughout the film; that is, I used spotlights from one side or the other a method which is now freely practiced. After I had sent the film to the distributor’s office I got a telegram from the manager that surprised me considerably. It ran: ‘Have you gone mad? Do you suppose we can sell a film for its full price if ?’ it isn’t up-to-date enough you only show half a man it doesn’t have special effects you insert any ideology into it it doesn’t fit to the predefined design Points to Master In the scene in question, a spy came creeping / through a curtain, and in order to make the effect more mysterious, S1 V1 I decided to light only half the spy’s face / and to leave the rest in darkness. S2 V2 O1 O2 to come -ing to light to leave to make more mysterious decided I was so pleased with this trick of lighting / that I used it throughout the film; that is, I used spotlights / from one S V side or the other pleased with ~ (dash) 8 S’ V’ O’ a method [which is now freely practiced]. so ~ that so pleased with ~ that it this trick of lighting www.ebsi.co.kr Type 4 A firm’s researchers have learned a great deal by watching many parents changing their babies. During one study, they realized that most moms and dads struggled to hold their babies still while reaching for the diaper, wipes, articles of clothing, and the like. The = they were reaching problem became particularly acute for parents who were “on the go,” changing their infants = intense at a location outside the home. , the firm redesigned its travel pack for baby (A) wipes. The new packaging enables parents to remove a wipe with only one hand, thus enabling the moms and dads to always keep their other hand on the child. , the (B) = it enables company’s researchers watched as parents had difficulty opening the baby wash bottle while bathing their children because they had only one hand free. Again, the firm redesigned the bottle so that a parent could open it and dispense the liquid with only one hand. (A) However However Therefore Therefore In other words (B) For instance Nonetheless Similarly For instance Similarly Points to Master During one study, they realized [that most moms and dads struggled / to hold their babies still / while reaching S V S’ V’ = while they were reaching for the diaper, wipes, articles of clothing, and the like]. realized (B) that that ~ like still while they be hold were hold , the company’s researchers watched [as parents had difficulty / opening the baby wash bottle / while S V S’1 V’1 O’1 = while they were bathing bathing their children / because they had only one hand free]. S’2 as because ~ free V’2 O’2 they be because were had while bathing their children free had 9 Type 5 In earlier times the term art was used to distinguish works of art from works of nature; that is, all humanly made things were works of art. This implies that artists were not previously differentiated from artisans, which was appropriate given that almost everyone worked by copying or borrowing and that individuality was not expected or highly valued. Artists were often directed in what to do and when to do it. J. S. Bach, for example, was a church composer who had to produce new music on a weekly basis. Between 1704 and 1744 he composed 300 church cantatas, only one of which was published in his lifetime. Domenico Scarlatti, a contemporary of Bach wrote more than 600 harpsichord sonatas for Maria Barbara, who became the queen of Spain. Only 30 were published during his lifetime. It means that artists could not by the mid-1700s. leave their home country establish their independence spend money on education hide their lack of knowledge be allowed to enter the court Points to Master This implies [that artists were not previously differentiated from artisans, which was appropriate / given that S V S’ V’ almost everyone worked by copying or borrowing / and that individuality was not expected or highly valued]. given which that 10 artists were not previously differentiated from artisans and given www.ebsi.co.kr Type 6 Children think of their potential future occupations in terms of what they will be = job (firefighters, teachers, doctors, behavioral economists, or what have you), not about the = the like amount of money they will earn. Among adult Americans, “What do you do?” has become as common a component of an introduction as the anachronistic “How do you do?” once was. This suggests that our jobs are an integral part of our , not merely a way to (A) (a common component) make money in order to keep a roof over our heads and food in our mouths. It seems that many people find pride and meaning in their jobs. In contrast, the basic economic model of labor generally treats working men and women as rats in a maze: work is assumed to be , and all the rat (person) wants to do is to get to the food with as little effort as (B) (that) possible and to rest on a full belly for the most time possible. anachronistic (A) identity identity strategy culture culture (B) annoying substantial annoying substantial constant Points to Master Among adult Americans, “ What do you do ?” / has become / as common a component of an introduction [ as S V C the anachronistic ”How do you do?” once was]. S’ as a an V’ as S V as as ~ all [the rat (person) wants to do] / is to get to the food / with as little effort as possible / and to rest on a full belly S V C1 C2 / for the most time possible . all -able -ible that to get ~ possible to rest ~ possible 11 Type 7 Older people are even more likely to react strongly against any further acceleration of = a lot, still, far, much change. There is a solid mathematical basis for the observation that age often correlates with conservatism: . When a fifty-year-old father tells his fifteen-year-old son that he will have to wait two years before he can have a car of his own, that interval of 730 days represents a mere 4 percent of the father’s lifetime to date. It represents over 13 percent of the boy’s lifetime. It is hardly strange that to the boy the delay seems three or four times longer than to the father. Similarly, two hours in the life of a fouryear-old may be the felt equivalent of twelve hours in the life of her twenty-four-year-old mother. Asking the child to wait two hours for a piece of candy may be the equivalent of asking the mother to wait twelve hours for a cup of coffee. the meaning of age varies across cultures time passes more swiftly for the old you can’t teach an old dog new tricks one is able to add formulas to knowledge we can’t reach old age by another man’s road Points to Master [When a fifty-year-old father tells his fifteen-year-old son / that he will have to wait two years / before he can have S’1 V’1 tells S’2 V’2 S’3 V’3 a car of his own], that interval of 730 days represents / a mere 4 percent of the father’s lifetime to date. S V O that interval before ~ own that ~ days that It is hardly strange [that to the boy / the delay seems three or four times longer than to the father]. V It 12 C S’ that ~ father V’ than C’ to the boy to the father that www.ebsi.co.kr Type 8 Hospitalized patients often display subtle warning signs six to eight hours before a cardiac arrest. During this time, small problems begin to arise, such as changes in heart rate, blood pressure, and mental status. , hospital personnel do not necessarily notice the (A) symptoms. If they notice a problem, they often try to address it on their own, rather than on one's own = by oneself = 스스로, 혼자서 bringing their concerns to the attention of others. One study found that two-thirds of patients exhibited warning signs, such as an abnormally high or low heart rate, within six hours of a cardiac arrest, yet nurses and other staff members brought these problems to the attention of = but a doctor in only 25% of those situations. , staff members wait too long to bring (B) these small problems to the attention of others. Meanwhile, the patient’s health continues to deteriorate during this window of opportunity when an intervention could perhaps prevent a = worsen crisis. cardiac arrest (A) However However Moreover Moreover For example (B) In short Similarly Instead In short Instead Points to Master One study found [that two-thirds of patients exhibited warning signs, such as an abnormally high or low heart rate, S V S’1 V’1 O’1 within six hours of a cardiac arrest, yet nurses and other staff members brought these problems / to the attention S’2 V’2 O’2 of a doctor / in only 25% of those situations]. found yet bring ~ to one’s attention 13