Nelson Literacy 9a It Takes Courage Teenager Leaps to the Rescue Magazine Article True courage is risking your own safety to help a stranger. That’s what teenager Cody Phillips did on April 12, 2008, in his Tulsa, Oklahoma, neighbourhood. Cody Phillips and his neighbour Zach Miller hardly knew each other before, but everything changed that Saturday afternoon. Cody, 17, was stuck at home cleaning out his family’s garage. Immersed in his work, he wasn’t paying attention to the neighbours’ pit bull and Shar-pei, who were making a commotion in the yard beside his. When Cody’s mother, Shannon, heard a child scream, she dropped everything and ran next door to see what was wrong. To her horror, when she peered through the fence, she could see five-year-old Zach being viciously attacked by the two dogs. Zach had been playing outside when the dogs grabbed him and pulled him through the fence, dragging him more than 18 m. Cody, hearing his mother’s urgent calls for help, rushed to the scene and instinctively jumped over the fence to the boy’s rescue. “I had so much adrenaline going through my body … I wasn’t even scared,” says Cody. He sprinted to Zach’s side as fast as he could, spooking the dogs into dropping the boy and retreating. But Cody wasn’t convinced they would stay away. When he saw them getting ready to attack again, he protected Zach by throwing himself on top of the child. As the two boys lay cornered, Shannon’s husband, Andy, hurried outside, and he and his wife broke down the gate. Andy was then able to fight off the dogs with a board, while Cody rushed Zach to safety. Zach was taken to the hospital, where he was treated for extensive injuries and received over a hundred stitches. The Miller family couldn’t begin to thank Cody for saving their child. “He was a hero by putting his life at risk and saving my son,” said Zach’s mother, Dana. Zach was well enough to enjoy his birthday party a few days later, at which Cody—no longer a stranger—was a welcome guest. Copyright © 2010 by Nelson Education Ltd. 1 Nelson Literacy 9a 1 It Takes Courage Teacher Notes for “Teenager Leaps to the Rescue” FOCUS USING THE SELECTION Understanding Understanding Reading Reading Strategies: Strategies: Visualizing Visualize and Make Connections Students needto support withThen the content this e-mail. Access their prior knowledge Read the may selection students. reread of it using the suggested demonstrations. of Prince Edward Island, beach holidays, and sand dunes. Cover parts 2 to 5 of the transparency, revealing each part only as you begin instruction for it. MODELLING THE STRATEGY SUGGESTED DEMONSTRATION Visualizing, or using the words on a page to create pictures in my mind, helps me understand and respond to texts. Making connections from a text to something I already know helps me understand and remember what I read. Nelson Literacy 9a Teenager Leaps to the Rescue Magazine Article Visualize. Descriptive words help me visualize. When I read the • title, I think of a teenager leaping into the water to help another person. Make text-to-self connections. I can make a text-to-self connection to Cody’s actions • at the start of the story. I, too, have promised to help with housework. Usually when I’m doing chores I ignore everything around me so I can finish quickly. This connection helps me understand how Cody was feeling. Make text-to-world connections. I can make a text-to-world connection. This story • reminds me of some facts that I’ve heard about pit bulls on the news. I’ve heard about children being hurt by pit bulls, but I’ve also seen friendly pit bulls. From this, I can infer that the way a dog is trained can affect how it acts toward other people and animals. True courage is risking your own safety to help a stranger. That’s what teenager Cody Phillips did on April 12, 2008, in his Tulsa, Oklahoma, neighbourhood. Cody Phillips and his neighbour Zach Miller hardly knew each other before, but everything changed that Saturday afternoon. Cody, 17, was stuck at home cleaning out his family’s garage. Immersed in his work, he wasn’t paying attention to the neighbours’ pit bull and Shar-pei, who were making a commotion in the yard beside his. When Cody’s mother, Shannon, heard a child scream, she dropped everything and ran next door to see what was wrong. To her horror, when she peered through the fence, she could see five-year-old Zach being viciously attacked by the two dogs. Zach had been playing outside when the dogs grabbed him and pulled him through the fence, dragging him more than 18 m. Cody, hearing his mother’s urgent calls for help, rushed to the scene and instinctively jumped over the fence to the boy’s rescue. “I had so much adrenaline going through my body … I wasn’t even scared,” says Cody. He sprinted to Zach’s side as fast as he could, spooking the dogs into dropping the boy and retreating. But Cody wasn’t convinced they would stay away. When he saw them getting ready to attack again, he protected Zach by throwing himself on top of the child. As the two boys lay cornered, Shannon’s husband, Andy, hurried outside, and he and his wife broke down the gate. Andy was then able to fight off the dogs with a board, while Cody rushed Zach to safety. Zach was taken to the hospital, where he was treated for extensive injuries and received over a hundred stitches. The Miller family couldn’t begin to thank Cody for saving their child. “He was a hero by putting his life at risk and saving my son,” said Zach’s mother, Dana. Zach was well enough to enjoy his birthday party a few days later, at which Cody—no longer a stranger—was a welcome guest. Copyright © 2010 by Nelson Education Ltd. • Make text-to-text connections. I can make a text-to-text connection to another news report I read about a man rushing into a burning house to help save lives. This helps me understand that Cody is brave and selfless. Identify a disconnect. I would never face two angry dogs on my own. The • disconnect between what I would do and what Cody did helps me appreciate his courage. STUDENT TALK • Have students reread the selection, using a T-chart as they read. Have them write descriptive words from the selection in the left column and what the words make them visualize in the right column. Have partners compare their images and discuss why they are different. • Ask: What connections did you make during the reading of the selection? Why? What kind of connections do you make most often when you read? How does this kind of connection help you make meaning from what you read? Copyright © 2010 by Nelson Education Ltd. It Takes Courage 1 Nelson Literacy 9a It Takes Courage 2 Bungee! Speech by Kyle Shewfelt I recently watched a video that stirred up a lot of emotion inside of me. It was a video of a close friend who is on the adventure of a lifetime. She was strapped in by her ankles and standing on top of a bridge. You could tell that she was facing fear head on, and you knew, you just knew, that she was determined to conquer it. The way she stepped toward the edge showed something that I have never seen in her before. She had courage and excitement. They counted down: 5 … 4 … 3 … 2 … 1 … and she leaped off the bridge and took the plunge (or bunge!). She was bungee jumping in New Zealand! While I watched, I was both proud and scared, and I found myself feeling a little bit envious. She is pushing her boundaries, and I can honestly say that I would have never imagined it to be possible … until I saw it with my own two eyes. I think that moment will be a very symbolic one in her life. It’s like she told the world, “Get lost! I am brave. I am sick of standing on the edge of this bridge, contemplating what comes next. I am ready to start living!!!” And with that strength behind her decision, she dove into a new realm of herself, full of confident awareness and ready to stop settling for just standing on the edge. It got me to thinking: my life is seriously lacking adventure. My life is wonderful, but I am still sitting perched in the middle of comfort. I am not pushing myself as far as I should be. A quote I once heard comes to mind, “Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away.” Removing ourselves from our comfort zones is the only way that we can learn, grow, and evolve. I continually encourage others to push themselves, disregard judgment, and start living the life that they want. But am I preaching something that I am actually internally afraid of committing to myself? What about you? What is on your adventurous “things to do” list? Copyright © 2010 by Nelson Education Ltd. Nelson Literacy 9a 2 It Takes Courage Teacher Notes for “Bungee!” FOCUS Understanding Reading Strategies: Visualizing Understanding Listening and Speaking Strategies: Listen Effectively and Speak Effectively USING THE SELECTION Students needonce support with content demonstrations of this e-mail. Access their prior knowledge Read the may selection using thethe suggested for effective listening and a of Prince Edward beach holidays, sand dunes. Cover parts 2 to 5 of the second time usingIsland, the demonstrations forand effective speaking. transparency, revealing each part only as you begin instruction for it. MODELLING THE STRATEGY SUGGESTED DEMONSTRATION Listen effectively. There are strategies we can use while listening to an oral text that will help us retain what we are hearing. Visualize. When the speaker describes the video of his friend’s • bungee jump, I can visualize the setting from pictures I have seen of New Zealand. After he gives the countdown, I can picture his friend leaping into the air off the edge of the bridge. Ask questions. Asking questions can help me clarify information • I’ve heard. I’d ask the speaker why he said that his friend was “pushing her boundaries.” Did she have a fear of heights? Make connections. I can make a personal connection to how the speaker feels about wanting to step out of his comfort zone. I want to try something new to prove to myself that I can succeed. Speak effectively. There are also strategies we can use when speaking that will help us convey our messages effectively. Provide details to help listeners visualize and make connections. • The speaker’s depiction of the thoughts going through his friend’s mind before her jump helps me visualize the proud, defiant look she probably had on her face. I could connect to this description of her feelings because I sometimes feel like I am always taking the safe road and wish that I took more risks. Use body language to convey meaning. Speakers often use gestures and expressions to help • convey their message. To help make his point, Kyle may have pointed to himself or shaken his head with a serious or thoughtful expression when he stated, “I am not pushing myself as far as I should be.” • Nelson Literacy 9a 2 Bungee! Speech by Kyle Shewfelt I recently watched a video that stirred up a lot of emotion inside of me. It was a video of a close friend who is on the adventure of a lifetime. She was strapped in by her ankles and standing on top of a bridge. You could tell that she was facing fear head on, and you knew, you just knew, that she was determined to conquer it. The way she stepped toward the edge showed something that I have never seen in her before. She had courage and excitement. They counted down: 5 … 4 … 3 … 2 … 1 … and she leaped off the bridge and took the plunge (or bunge!). She was bungee jumping in New Zealand! While I watched, I was both proud and scared, and I found myself feeling a little bit envious. She is pushing her boundaries, and I can honestly say that I would have never imagined it to be possible … until I saw it with my own two eyes. I think that moment will be a very symbolic one in her life. It’s like she told the world, “Get lost! I am brave. I am sick of standing on the edge of this bridge, contemplating what comes next. I am ready to start living!!!” And with that strength behind her decision, she dove into a new realm of herself, full of confident awareness and ready to stop settling for just standing on the edge. It got me to thinking: my life is seriously lacking adventure. My life is wonderful, but I am still sitting perched in the middle of comfort. I am not pushing myself as far as I should be. A quote I once heard comes to mind, “Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away.” Removing ourselves from our comfort zones is the only way that we can learn, grow, and evolve. I continually encourage others to push themselves, disregard judgment, and start living the life that they want. But am I preaching something that I am actually internally afraid of committing to myself? What about you? What is on your adventurous “things to do” list? Copyright © 2010 by Nelson Education Ltd. STUDENT TALK • Ask: What connections did you make while listening to this personal story? • Ask: What question would you ask Kyle after listening to his story? • Have partners practise reading this speech using different gestures, expressions, and vocal techniques. Ask: Which ones were the most effective? Why? Copyright © 2010 by Nelson Education Ltd. It Takes Courage Nelson Literacy 9a It Takes Courage Inspiring Tale of Courage: Soul Surfer Book Review When Bethany Hamilton was 13, a huge tiger shark attacked her while she was surfing off the coast of Hawaii. It bit her arm off. Three weeks later, Bethany was surfing again. Soul Surfer is her inspiring autobiography. Young readers should definitely read this book. Why read Soul Surfer? Because the story is amazing. After the shark attack, Bethany could think of only one thing—get to the beach. She pushed her pain and panic aside and used her one good arm to paddle as fast as she could to shore. Lifeguards believe her strong water sense and positive outlook helped save Bethany’s life. Another reason to read Soul Surfer is that the story is inspiring. It’s a story of courage and the ability to overcome life’s challenges. When Bethany awoke in hospital after surgery, she asked, “When can I surf again?” Just 10 weeks later, refusing any special allowances, Bethany competed in a surfing championship. She admits that she had to struggle with her fear of sharks—and she still is afraid of them. But she knew she couldn’t, and wouldn’t, let that fear defeat her. She’s now one of the most recognized female surfers in the world. Soul Surfer is written in Bethany’s own unforgettable, vivid voice. She engages her readers as she describes her life before and after the shark attack. Readers will be captivated as she tells about her recovery, challenges, and fears. Soul Surfer is a powerful page-turner that will inspire readers to achieve things they never thought possible. Bethany’s story proves that there is no obstacle that can’t be beaten and no dream that can’t be realized. All readers who like adventure, excitement, and inspiration should read this story. Copyright © 2010 by Nelson Education Ltd. 3 Nelson Literacy 9a 3 It Takes Courage Teacher Notes for “Inspiring Tale of Courage: Soul Surfer ” FOCUS USING THE SELECTION Understanding Strategies: Visualizing Understanding Reading Form: Identify the Elements of Persuasive Text Students may that needthey support with the content of this e-mail. Access their prior Tell students are going to read an example of persuasive writing. Askknowledge them to of Prince Edward Island, beach holidays, sand dunes. Cover parts to 5selection of the with look at how the writer organized the text and to persuade the reader. Read2the transparency, each part only as you begin instruction for it. students usingrevealing the suggested demonstrations. MODELLING THE STRATEGY SUGGESTED DEMONSTRATION Persuasive texts are clearly organized to convince an audience to do or believe something. A book review is one kind of persuasive text. Nelson Literacy 9a It Takes Courage Inspiring Tale of Courage: Soul Surfer Book Review Begin with a purpose. Use supporting ideas and arguments. Use transition words. End with a conclusion that restates the purpose. Persuasive writers begin with a clear statement of • purpose, called the thesis statement. This writer’s purpose is to convince young readers that they should read Soul Surfer. She uses an incredible fact from the book to grab the readers’ attention. We can predict that her review will explain why young readers will enjoy the book. • Supporting your thesis with arguments and examples is an important element of a persuasive text. This writer devotes each of her paragraphs to a different reason why young readers will enjoy the book. She uses engaging examples from the book and a quotation to help support her purpose. The author uses transition words such as because • and another reason to introduce her evidence. These words show the reader how the author’s ideas are connected. When Bethany Hamilton was 13, a huge tiger shark attacked her while she was surfing off the coast of Hawaii. It bit her arm off. Three weeks later, Bethany was surfing again. Soul Surfer is her inspiring autobiography. Young readers should definitely read this book. Why read Soul Surfer? Because the story is amazing. After the shark attack, Bethany could think of only one thing—get to the beach. She pushed her pain and panic aside and used her one good arm to paddle as fast as she could to shore. Lifeguards believe her strong water sense and positive outlook helped save Bethany’s life. Another reason to read Soul Surfer is that the story is inspiring. It’s a story of courage and the ability to overcome life’s challenges. When Bethany awoke in hospital after surgery, she asked, “When can I surf again?” Just 10 weeks later, refusing any special allowances, Bethany competed in a surfing championship. She admits that she had to struggle with her fear of sharks—and she still is afraid of them. But she knew she couldn’t, and wouldn’t, let that fear defeat her. She’s now one of the most recognized female surfers in the world. Soul Surfer is written in Bethany’s own unforgettable, vivid voice. She engages her readers as she describes her life before and after the shark attack. Readers will be captivated as she tells about her recovery, challenges, and fears. Soul Surfer is a powerful page-turner that will inspire readers to achieve things they never thought possible. Bethany’s story proves that there is no obstacle that can’t be beaten and no dream that can’t be realized. All readers who like adventure, excitement, and inspiration should read this story. Copyright © 2010 by Nelson Education Ltd. The conclusion should repeat the main purpose of the • text, and it may call on readers to do something. This author concludes by using new wording to summarize the evidence she provided in the body of her review. Her last sentence restates her thesis in a more specific way. STUDENT TALK • Tell students that persuasive writers need to choose strong words to elicit a specific response. Ask: Which words/phrases in this selection do you think are most powerful for encouraging people to read this book? What kind of evidence most persuades you to read something (e.g., quotations, statistics, examples, powerful words)? • Ask: How do you think the author planned this piece of writing? What type of organizer would you use to plan a persuasive text? • Ask: Does this review make you want to read the book Soul Surfer? Why or why not? Copyright © 2010 by Nelson Education Ltd. 3 Nelson Literacy 9a It Takes Courage Read-Aloud PURPOSE Literacy To model the reading strategies Visualizing and Making Connections BEFORE YOU READ • Ask students to reminisce about learning something new for the first time (e.g., riding a bike). Briefly discuss the emotions that students felt before, during, and after the learning process. • Ask students what they know about skateboarding (e.g., skateboarding terms, difficulty level). • Say, As I read this personal story, think about the connections you can make to the information in the text. Try to visualize the characters, the setting, and the actions in the story to help you better understand what I am reading. Learning to Skateboard … Again Personal Story Submitted to 2 Do Before I Die by Michael Ogden and Chris Day 1988: “Are you sure you want to do that?” I was about to say, as my friend Chris attempted a “boneless drop-in” at our local skate ramp. Jumping in the air onto his skateboard, Chris slipped and his face slammed into the concrete with a soft thud as his board flew backward. We loaded him into a shopping cart, blood trickling from his chin, and headed to the nearest emergency room. Four stitches later, Chris vowed never to return to the half-pipe. 2004: I thought about Chris as I stood outside the Extreme Skateboard Park and watched a teenager perform a picture-perfect boneless drop-in (where one foot is lifted off the board in midair while turning around). I felt a sense of longing for my own skateboarding days. Then I remembered that world champion skater Tony Hawk is at least three years older than I am and still skates every day. Perhaps it wasn’t too late, after all. At the skate shop, I was relieved to see a few others who were my age—even a little bit older. Perhaps I wasn’t entirely crazy. Then I found out that they were buying skateboards for their kids. So I plunked down $200 for the best skateboard, pads, and XL helmet money could buy. In order to minimize the number of witnesses to my return to the sport, I showed up minutes after the park opened and headed straight to the “micro-pipe”—the skateboarding equivalent of a kiddies’ pool. I was thankful for my wrist guards as my muscle memories slowly resurfaced after 16 years of dormancy. By the time a few 14-year-old skaters arrived at the micro-pipe, I had regained my skating legs, but had yet to “drop in.” Almost telepathically, a freckle-faced 14-going-on-40-year-old said, “Have you dropped in yet?” “Not for 16 years.” “Because it’s really hard to rock to fakie if you don’t drop in.” I was perplexed. “Rock to fakie?” “Yeah, what you were trying to do.” NEL The author uses descriptive words in this opening paragraph that helped me to create a movie in my mind of the accident. I was able to visualize Chris’s facial expression when he realized that he wasn’t going to land on his feet. I could almost hear the sound of his body hitting the pavement. I had a similar experience when I was learning to ski for the first time. I had to start on the “bunny slopes,” and I didn’t want anyone to see me. I can connect to the author’s feeling of embarrassment and fear of failing when trying something new. 1 Nelson Literacy 9a It Takes Courage In the process of moving back and forth along the ramp, I had been trying to “rock to fakie,” the same trick I had been practising when Chris split his chin 16 years earlier. It involves locking one set of wheels on the top of the ramp, pausing for a moment, then returning to the bowl without turning around. It’s a “fakie” because the skater is pointed the opposite way from usual. It’s ramp-riding 101. The boy had observed my failed attempts silently for about five minutes before saying, “You should really drop in.” “I’m kind of freaked out by it.” The boy smiled. “Oh, yeah, I was scared the first time I did it too.” He proceeded to demonstrate the proper technique with accurate foot placement and weight distribution. I stood on the edge of the micro-pipe (we’re talking a metre drop maximum), put my feet into the prescribed position, and hesitated. The boy laughed. “You just have to go for it. The longer you stand there, the more freaked you’ll get.” So I pushed my front foot forward and rolled into the middle of the ramp, where I lost my balance and fell backward. “You got it. Just lean forward more next time.” So I leaned forward and this time made it across to the other side. I didn’t look particularly cool, but I wasn’t falling or splitting my chin. The boy rubbed the chinstrap on his helmet thoughtfully. “You’re ready to rock to fakie now.” “I’m not sure.” The boy-teacher shrugged and said, “You gotta learn sometime.” I dropped in down the ramp, locked my wheel, paused for a single glorious moment, then rolled back into the pipe and fell very, very hard. As a final punctuation to the move, my board flew 6 m up in the air. After making sure that I had not broken any bones, I felt disheartened. I looked up at the boy, who nodded his head slowly and smiled. “You got it. You rocked to fakie.” Obviously, there was still a lot of work to do, but the boy was right. It wasn’t graceful, but I had rocked to fakie. It’s a long way from a boneless drop-in, but, like the kid said, “You gotta learn sometime.” Read-Aloud Since I’m not familiar with skateboarding, I had to rely on the narrator’s descriptive words to visualize what it would look like to “rock to fakie.” This story conflicted with something I had heard in the past. I have often heard the expression, “you can’t teach an old dog new tricks,” but this story shows that if you have good instruction and take time to practise, you can learn, or relearn, a skill at any age. STUDENT TALK Encourage students to discuss these questions: • I asked you to visualize the situations in the story as I read it aloud. Which of your visualizations stands out the most to you now? Why do you think this picture remained in your mind? • Did the connections you made before reading the story help you to understand the information better? Why or why not? Did you continue to make connections as the story went on? • Did anything in the text conflict with something you already knew about the topic? If so, what was it? • Why did the author include the event that occurred in 1988? How would the story have changed if this had been omitted? 2 NEL