The BIG Question Randy Faris/CORBIS UNIT 6 2 Why Do We Share Our Stories? “ I like a good story well told. —Mark Twain, writer ” LOOKING AHEAD The skill lessons and readings in this unit will help you develop your own answer to the Big Question. UNIT 6 WARM-UP • Connecting to the Big Question GENRE FOCUS: Folktale Brer Rabbit and Brer Lion . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 654 by Julius Lester READING WORKSHOP 1 Skill Lesson: Understanding Cause and Effect The Lion, the Hare, and the Hyena . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 660 by Phyllis Savory Charles . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 668 by Shirley Jackson WRITING WORKSHOP PART 1 Modern Folktale . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 676 READING WORKSHOP 2 Skill Lesson: Questioning The Boy and His Grandfather . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 684 by Rudolfo A. Anaya Jeremiah’s Song . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 690 by Walter Dean Myers READING WORKSHOP 3 Skill Lesson: Predicting The Tale of ‘Kiko-Wiko . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 706 by Mark Crilley We Are All One. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 716 by Laurence Yep WRITING WORKSHOP PART 2 Modern Folktale . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 724 READING WORKSHOP 4 Skill Lesson: Analyzing Voices—and Stories—from the Past . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 734 by Kathryn Satterfield, updated from Time for Kids Aunty Misery . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 742 by Judith Ortiz Cofer COMPARING LITERATURE WORKSHOP Comparing Cultural Contexts Aunt Sue’s Stories . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 751 by Langston Hughes I Ask My Mother to Sing . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 753 by Li-Young Lee UNIT 6 WRAP-UP • Answering the Big Question 649 UNIT 6 WARM-UP Connecting to Why Do We Share Our Stories? We share our stories for many reasons—sometimes just for fun. For example, you and your friends may have entertained each other with funny stories about school or your lives. We also share our stories to keep the past alive and preserve our memories. In your own life, your family may have shared stories with you about what you were like as a little kid. Through storytelling, we can even share words of wisdom and comfort. In this unit, you’ll read stories and poems that will help you explore these and other reasons that we share our stories. Real Kids and the Big Question Lannette has been very quiet. Her friends are worried. Her parents divorced six months ago, but Lannette has never talked about it. Her friend, ANA, wants to help. She remembers when her parents divorced and has some idea of how Lannette is feeling. Ana wants to share her experiences with Lannette. Do you think she should? Why or why not? ROBERT’S new stepsister, Cleo, has been getting into trouble at school. Robert was a troublemaker himself when he was Cleo’s age. But after getting expelled from school four years ago, he turned his life around. Now Robert is a “B” student and a lot happier. He’s thinking of sharing his story with Cleo. Do you think Cleo can learn from Robert’s experiences? Warm-Up Activity With other students, talk about what you think Ana and Robert should do and why. 650 UNIT 6 Why Do We Share Our Stories? (l)Think Stock/Getty Images, (r)CORBIS UNIT 6 WARM-UP You and the Big Question Reading different stories and poems will help you figure out your own answer to the Big Question. Plan for the Unit Challenge At the end of the unit, you’ll use notes from all your reading to complete the Unit Challenge. The Challenge will help you explore your answer to the Big Question. Big Question Link to Web resources to further explore the Big Question at www .glencoe.com. You will choose one of the following activities: A. Sharing-Stories Reading List You’ll work with classmates to make a list of stories you think other students your age would enjoy. B. Story Review You’ll choose a story you’ve read and explain why you think it is or is not worth sharing. • Start thinking about which activity you’d like to do so that you can focus your thinking as you go through the unit. • In your Learner’s Notebook, write about which you like better—working by yourself or working with other students. That may help you decide which activity you’d like to do. • Remember to take notes about possible answers to the Big Question. Your notes will help you do the Unit Challenge activity you choose. Keep Track of Your Ideas As you read, you’ll make notes about the Big Question. Later, you’ll use these notes to complete the Unit Challenge. See page R8 for help with making Foldable 6. This diagram shows how one side of it should look. 1. Use this Foldable for all of the selections in this unit. Label each “tab” with a title. (See page 649 for the titles.) You should be able to see all the titles without opening the Foldable. 2. Below each title, write My Purpose for Reading. 3. Further below each title, a third of the way down the page, write the label The Big Question. Warm-Up 651 UNIT 6 GENRE FOCUS: FOLKTALE A folktale is a story that was told by generations of storytellers before it was ever written down. We don’t know the names of all those storytellers. Some were professionals who told tales as entertainment. Some were teachers who used folktales to teach important lessons. Some were mothers and fathers who told stories to their children, just as parents still do. Skillss Focus • Keyy skills for reading fol olktales ol •K Key literary elements of folktales SSkills Model You will see how to use the key reading skills and literary elements as you read • Brer Rabbit and Brer Lion, p. 654 Folktales belong to a category called folklore. This more general term includes songs, speeches, sayings, and even jokes. In this unit, you’ll read several forms of folklore. • Trickster tale—a story in which a character, often an animal, outsmarts an enemy. An example of a trickster character is Brer Rabbit in the story you’ll read next. • Origin story—a story about the origins, or beginnings, of something in nature. In this unit, a story from Africa tells why the hyena has oddly long hairs growing on its back. Other origin stories explain such things as how tigers got their stripes and why the sky is blue. • Fairy tale—a story with magical beings who change the lives of ordinary people. The stories of Cinderella and Snow White—and their fairy godmothers—are fairy tales. One story in this unit features a magical being who is definitely not Cinderella’s fairy godmother. • Tall tale—a fantasy story about an amazing, larger-than-life person. At the end of this unit, you’ll read one of the many American tall tales told about Paul Bunyan. • Legend—a story about an amazing event or a hero’s amazing accomplishment. Some legends are about people who actually lived, but over the years their reputations grew “larger than life.” • Myth—a story about gods and goddesses and how they were involved in making things the way they are. Characters from ancient myths were featured in two popular TV series in the 1990s—Hercules: The Legendary Journeys and Xena: Warrior Princess. Two main things make all of these different forms alike. First, they were passed down over many generations. Second, they still help members of a culture to stay connected to one another. Objectives (pp. 652–655) Reading Understand cause and effect • Monitor comprehension: ask questions • Make predictions • Analyze text Literature Identify literary elements: theme, character, cultural context, dialect Why Read Folktales? Folktales are fun to read. The characters in them can make you smile and laugh, but they can also make you stop and think. Folktales may also bring back good memories. They’re the kinds of stories you heard and read when you were little. Maybe most important of all, reading folktales can help you understand why people share stories. 652 UNIT 6 Why Do We Share Our Stories? UNIT 6 GENRE FOCUS How to Read Folktales Key Reading Skills These key reading skills are especially useful tools for reading and understanding folktales. You’ll learn more about these skills later in the unit. ■ Understanding Cause and Effect As you read, look for causes—the reasons why things happen—and for effects—the things that happen as a result. (See Reading Workshop 1.) ■ Questioning To make sure you understand what you’re reading, ask yourself questions while you read. (See Reading Workshop 2.) ■ Predicting Guess what will happen next in a story to help yourself get more involved in what you’re reading. (See Reading Workshop 3.) ■ Analyzing To understand a text better, think about its parts and how they work together to make meaning. (See Reading Workshop 4.) Key Literary Elements Recognizing and thinking about the following literary elements will help you understand a text more fully. ■ Theme: the main idea, or message, of a story, poem, novel, or play. Sometimes this idea is stated directly. More often it’s revealed gradually through plot, character, setting, and other elements. (See “The Lion, the Hare, and the Hyena.”) ■ Character: a person or animal in a story. (If a character is an animal, it displays human qualities and behaviors.) Characterization is the methods a writer uses to develop a character’s personality. (See “Jeremiah’s Song.”) ■ Cultural allusions: a reference to something that has special importance or meaning for a particular group of people. (See “We Are All One.”) ■ Dialect: a variation of a language spoken by a particular group of people, usually within a certain region. In a dialect, words may have different pronunciations, forms, and meanings than the same words have in the standard language. (See “Voices—and Stories—from the Past.”) Genre Focus: Folktale 653 UNIT 6 GENRE FOCUS The notes in the side columns model how to use the skills and elements you read about on pages 652–653. Folktale ACTIVE READING MODEL retold by Julius Lester B rer Rabbit was in the woods one afternoon when a great wind came up. It blew on the ground and it blew in the tops of the trees. It blew so hard that Brer Rabbit was afraid a tree might fall on him, and he started running. 1 He was trucking through the woods when he ran smack into Brer Lion. Now, don’t come telling me ain’t no lions in the United States. Ain’t none here now. But back in yonder times, all the animals lived everywhere. The lions and tigers and elephants and foxes and what ’nall run around with each other like they was family. So that’s how come wasn’t unusual for Brer Rabbit to run up on Brer Lion like he done that day. 2 3 “What’s your hurry, Brer Rabbit?” “Run, Brer Lion! There’s a hurricane coming.” Brer Lion got scared. “I’m too heavy to run, Brer Rabbit. What am I going to do?” “Lay down, Brer Lion. Lay down! Get close to the ground!” Brer Lion shook his head. “The wind might pick me up and blow me away.” “Hug a tree, Brer Lion! Hug a tree!” “But what if the wind blows all day and into the night?” “Let me tie you to the tree, Brer Lion. Let me tie you to the tree.” 4 654 UNIT 6 Why Do We Share Our Stories? 1 Key Reading Skill Predicting I wonder what will happen next. It says the wind is blowing hard, so maybe a tree really will fall on Brer Rabbit. 2 Key Reading Skill Questioning I don’t understand what “trucking” means here. Is Brer Rabbit driving a truck? I’ll read on to see if I can answer my own question. 3 Key Literary Element Dialect, Character, and Cultural Context The storyteller speaks in a dialect. We learned in school that Brer Rabbit is in lots of African American folktales. So the dialect and culture must be old-time African American. 4 Key Reading Skill Understanding Cause and Effect The strong winds are the cause, and the effect is Brer Lion’s fear. UNIT 6 GENRE FOCUS Emma’s Lion, 1994. Christian Pierre, Acrylic on Masonite, 16 x 20 in., Private collection. Brer Lion liked that idea. Brer Rabbit tied him to the tree and sat down next to it. After a while, Brer Lion got tired of hugging the tree. “Brer Rabbit? I don’t hear no hurricane.” Brer Rabbit listened. “Neither do I.” “Brer Rabbit? I don’t hear no wind.” Brer Rabbit listened. “Neither do I.” “Brer Rabbit? Ain’t a leaf moving in the trees.” Brer Rabbit looked up. “Sho’ ain’t.” “So untie me.” “I’m afraid to, Brer Lion.” 5 Brer Lion began to roar. He roared so loud and so long, the foundations of the Earth started shaking. Least that’s what it seemed like, and the other animals came from all over to see what was going on. When they got close, Brer Rabbit jumped up and began strutting around the tied-up Brer Lion. When the animals saw what Brer Rabbit had done to Brer Lion, you’d better believe it was the forty-eleventh of Octorerarry before they messed with him again. 6 ❍ Folktale ACTIVE READING MODEL 5 Key Reading Skill Analyzing Brer Rabbit is afraid he’ll be killed if he unties Brer Lion! 6 Key Literary Element Theme Brer Rabbit gets everyone’s respect by outsmarting Brer Lion. So maybe the main message of this story is that being smart is better than being big and strong. Write to Learn You can learn a great deal through the dialogue in a story. Write a paragraph explaining what you learned about the main characters from the dialogue in this folktale. Study Central Visit www.glencoe.com and click on Study Central to review folktales. Genre Focus: Folktale 655 Christian Pierre/SuperStock READING WORKSHOP 1 Skills Focus You will practice using these skills when you read the following selections: • “The Lion, the Hare, and the Hyena,” p. 660 • “Charles,” p. 668 Reading • Understanding cause and effect Literature • Identifying the theme of a selection Vocabulary • Understanding and using idioms and slang Writing/Grammar • Identifying direct and indirect objects Skill Lesson Understanding Cause and Effect Learn It! What Is It? Understanding the reason things happen is a big part of what human beings do. We want to know “why.” Why is the sky blue? Why does water run downhill? These are the simple beginnings of all the complicated science we know today. We are always looking for the cause of things. • A cause is a person, event, or condition that makes something happen. • What happens as a result is an effect. You will find cause and effect relationships in just about everything you read. That’s because cause and effect is everywhere in life. And writers also use cause and effect to organize information for you, especially in social studies and science reading. rights reserved. RSAL PRESS SYNDICATE. All Reprinted with Permission of UNIVE BALDO © 2000 Baldo Partnership. Analyzing Cartoons Objectives (pp. 656–657) Reading Understand cause and effect 656 UNIT 6 Universal Press Syndicate Chewing gum while practicing soccer (cause) can lead to trouble (effect). Words and phrases like if/then, therefore, and as a result signal cause and effect. Sometimes “Now I know why” signals it, too. READING WORKSHOP 1 • Understanding Cause and Effect Why Is It Important? As you read, you often ask, “Why?” You need to be able to recognize when the author is giving you the answer. That applies to big questions: Why is there suffering in the world? It also applies to smaller questions: Why did the main character in this story tell a lie? Remember that one cause may have many effects. When someone drops a match in a forest, there are millions of effects. And one effect may have many causes. The causes of winning a race include being healthy, trying your best, and so forth. Study Central Visit www.glencoe .com and click on Study Central to review understanding cause and effect. How Do I Do It? First, keep asking “Why?” Then, look for signal words that help you know that your question is being answered, words like because, so, so that, if . . . then, and as a result of. These signal words are often there when you’re looking for a cause. When they’re not, your “why” question will give you a start. Here’s how one student identified cause and effect in ”The Lion, the Hare, and the Hyena.” Simba had hurt his leg so badly that he was unable to provide food for himself. Sunguru the Hare happened to be passing his cave one day. Looking inside, Sunguru realized that the lion was starving. How can a big lion like Simba starve? Guess there must be a reason. Ok, it said he hurt his leg and couldn’t get food. That means he can’t hunt. So the cause is his leg is hurt so bad that he can’t hunt, therefore he’s starving. That’s the effect of the hurt leg. Practice It! Look at the sentences below. See if you can identify the cause and the effect in each one. • Hal ate too many cookies, so he got sick. • Water runs downhill because of gravity. • The wind blew so hard that my hat went flying. Use It! As you read “The Lion, the Hare, and the Hyena” and “Charles,” take notes on the characters, what they do, and the situations each of them are in. This will help you to identify the cause-and-effect relationships. Reading Workshop 1 Understanding Cause and Effect 657 Getty Images READING WORKSHOP 1 • Understanding Cause and Effect Before You Read Meet the Author Phyllis Savory has written and edited tales that have strong African influences. By recording ancient tales told from generation to generation, she helps readers young and old discover delightful and enchanting worlds. Author Search For more about Phyllis Savory, go to www.glenocoe.com. The Lion, the Hare, and the Hyena Vocabulary Preview solitude (SOL uh tood) n. the state of being alone (p. 660) The lion enjoyed his solitude. accumulate (uh KYOO myuh layt) v. to increase gradually in quantity or number (p. 660) The hyena wanted the delicious bones that had begun to accumulate. conspicuous (kun SPIK yoo us) adj. quite noticeable (p. 662) The lion’s absence was very conspicuous. Definition Trade-Off With a partner or small group, take turns calling out a vocabulary word and having the partner give the definition, or call out the definition and have the partner give the word. English Language Coach Idioms An idiom (ID ee um) is a word or phrase that has a special meaning. Every language has idioms, and they can cause problems for someone who hasn’t heard them before or for someone who didn’t grow up speaking the language. Often, the problem can be solved quickly because many idioms make sense if you think about them. Even if an idiom is unfamiliar, you can often figure out what it means. “I can’t talk; I’m all tied up” would probably make sense to someone who’d never heard the expression. So would “I think I bit off more than I can chew.” These expressions are figurative. That is, they communicate an idea that is not the the literal (actual and ordinary) meaning of the words. Still, the ideas they communicate are clear. Some idioms, though, you just have to know. If you’d never heard “shoot the breeze,” how would you know what “They were shooting the breeze on the front porch” meant? You wouldn’t. All you could do would be to try to figure it out from the context, check shoot or breeze in the dictionary (sometimes idioms are listed), or ask someone. Objectives (pp. 658–663) Reading Understand cause and effect • Make connections from text to self Literature Identify literary elements: theme Vocabulary Understand idioms Group Talk With a small group, discuss what the following idioms mean. If you don’t know them, try to figure out what they might mean. 1. Maybe you should leave well enough alone. 2. I don’t think she’s playing with a full deck. 3. Try to keep your chin up. 658 UNIT 6 Why Do We Share Our Stories? 658-659U6BYR_845477.indd 658 3/9/07 3:54:19 PM READING WORKSHOP 1 • Understanding Cause and Effect Skills Preview Get Ready to Read Key Reading Skill: Understanding Cause and Effect Connect to the Reading In a story, cause and effect relationships are important for many reasons. One of the most important is that they move the story along. They are part of the plot. This event happens, causing that event to happen, which then causes another event to happen. The plot is a kind of chain reaction, a series of causes and events. As you read “The Lion, the Hare, and the Hyena,” notice the people, events, and conditions that cause other things to happen. Key Literary Element: Theme The theme of a story is the message that the writer most wants to communicate. It is the main idea of the story. Origin stories, such as “The Lion, the Hare, and the Hyena,” always include an explanation of something in nature. That provides the basic plot of the story. “Why is this the way it is?” “Because this happened.” Such stories have a cause and effect structure. But the structure is not the theme. Origin stories deal with another kind of “truth” about nature and human life. Doing the following while you read will help you understand the theme: • Look at the good and bad things the characters do. • Watch for who wins and who loses and why. • Does someone get punished? Why? • Does someone learn a lesson? What is it? Interactive Literary Elements Handbook To review or learn more about the literary elements, go to www.glencoe.com. How would you feel if you were all alone and so sick that you couldn’t do the things you needed to do? Who would you trust to come into your home and help you? Is there anyone you feel you could not trust? Why? Think-Pair-Share Discuss what friends do to help each other in times of need. What would you do to help a friend? How can you tell if a person is a true friend? Build Background “The Lion, the Hare, and the Hyena” is a folktale from Kenya. • In this folktale, you’ll read about animals that possess human traits. • One animal is greatly respected. • One animal is looked down on and hated and must resort to trickery to get what he wants. Set Purposes for Reading Read “The Lion, the Hare, and the Hyena” to find out how origin stories work and why people tell them. Set Your Own Purpose What would you like to learn from the selection to help you answer the Big Question? Write your own purpose on the “Lion, the Hare, and the Hyena” page of Foldable 6. Keep Moving Use these skills as you read the following selection. The Lion, the Hare, and the Hyena 659 READING WORKSHOP 1 Retold by Phyllis Savory A lion named Simba once lived alone in a cave. In his younger days the solitude had not worried him, but not very long before this tale begins he had hurt his leg so badly that he was unable to provide food for himself. Eventually he began to realize that companionship had its advantages. Things would have gone very badly for him, had not Sunguru the Hare happened to be passing his cave one day. Looking inside, Sunguru realized that the lion was starving. He set about at once caring for his sick friend and seeing to his comfort. Under the hare’s careful nursing, Simba gradually regained his strength until finally he was well enough to catch small game for the two of them to eat. Soon quite a large pile of bones began to accumulate outside the entrance to the lion’s cave. 1 1 Key Reading Skill Understanding Cause and Effect How did the hare come to live with the lion? Vocabulary solitude (SOL uh tood) n. the state of being alone accumulate (uh KYOO myuh layt) v. to increase gradually in quantity or number 660 UNIT 6 Why Do We Share Our Stories? 660-663U6SEL_845477.indd 660 3/9/07 3:54:40 PM READING WORKSHOP 1 One day Nyangau the Hyena, while sniffing around in the hope of scrounging something for his supper, caught the appetizing smell of marrow-bones.1 His nose led him to Simba’s cave, but as the bones could be seen clearly from inside he could not steal them with safety. Being a cowardly fellow, like the rest of his kind, he decided that the only way to gain possession of the tasty morsels would be to make friends with Simba. He therefore crept up to the entrance of the cave and gave a cough. “Who makes the evening hideous with his dreadful croakings?” demanded the lion, rising to his feet and preparing to investigate the noise. “It is I, your friend, Nyangau,” faltered2 the hyena, losing what little courage he possessed. “I have come to tell you how sadly you have been missed by the animals, and how greatly we are looking forward to your early return to good health!” 2 “Well, get out,” growled the lion, “for it seems to me that a friend would have inquired about my health long before this, instead of waiting until I could be of use to him once more. Get out, I say!” Practice the Skills 2 Key Literary Element Theme Why is Nyangau pretending to be Simba’s friend? Is he behaving the way a real friend would? Could his actions be a clue to the theme? Moonlight Studios 1. To scrounge is to get by finding, begging, borrowing, or stealing. Marrow is the soft substance found in the hollow centers of most bones. 2. When Nyangau faltered, he spoke brokenly or weakly because of fear. The Lion, the Hare, and the Hyena 661 READING WORKSHOP 1 The hyena shuffled off with alacrity, his scruffy tail tucked between his bandy legs, followed by the insulting giggles of the hare. But he could not forget the pile of tempting bones outside the entrance to the lion’s cave. “I shall try again,” resolved the thick-skinned hyena. A few days later he made a point of paying his visit while the hare was away fetching water to cook the evening meal. 3 He found the lion dozing at the entrance to his cave. “Friend,” simpered Nyangau, “I am led to believe that the wound on your leg is making poor progress, due to the underhanded treatment that you are receiving from your socalled friend Sunguru.” “What do you mean?” snarled the lion malevolently.3 “I have to thank Sunguru that I did not starve to death during the worst of my illness, while you and your companions were conspicuous by your absence!” “Nevertheless, what I have told you is true,” confided the hyena. “It is well known throughout the countryside that Sunguru is purposely giving you the wrong treatment for your wound to prevent your recovery. For when you are well, he will lose his position as your housekeeper—a very comfortable living for him, to be sure! Let me warn you, good friend, that Sunguru is not acting in your best interests!” 4 At that moment the hare returned from the river with his gourd filled with water. “Well,” he said, addressing the hyena as he put down his load, “I did not expect to see you here after your hasty and inglorious Visual Vocabulary A gourd is a harddeparture from our presence the other day. rinded inedible fruit Tell me, what do you want this time?” that’s sometimes Simba turned to the hare. “I have been used as a utensil. listening,” he said, “to Nyangau’s tales about you. He tells me that you are renowned throughout the countryside for your skill and cunning4 as a doctor. He also tells me that the medicines you prescribe are without rival. 3. To say or act with hatred is to do so malevolently. 4. To be renowned is to be famous. Here, cunning means “skillful in the use of resources.” Vocabulary conspicuous (kun SPIK yoo us) adj. quite noticeable 662 UNIT 6 Why Do We Share Our Stories? Siede Preis/Getty Images Practice the Skills 3 English Language Coach Idiom From the context of the sentence, can you figure out what thick-skinned means? Thick skin protects an animal so harmful things don’t get through. What didn’t “get through” to the hyena? 4 Key Literary Element Theme What was Sunguru willing to do to earn Simba’s friendship? How did Nyangau expect to get it? Do these motives give you a clue about the theme? READING WORKSHOP 1 Moonlight Studios But he insists that you could have cured the wound on my leg a long time ago, had it been in your interest to do so. Is this true?” Sunguru thought for a moment. He knew that he had to treat this situation with care, for he had a strong suspicion that Nyangau was trying to trick him. 5 “Well,” he answered with hesitation, “yes, and no. You see, I am only a very small animal, and sometimes the medicines that I require are very big, and I am unable to procure5 them—as, for instance, in your case, good Simba.” “What do you mean?” spluttered the lion, sitting up and at once showing interest. “Just this,” replied the hare. “I need a piece of skin from the back of a full-grown hyena to place on your wound before it will be completely healed.” Hearing this, the lion sprang onto Nyangau before the surprised creature had time to get away. Tearing a strip of skin off the foolish fellow’s back from his head to his tail, he clapped it on the wound on his leg. As the skin came away from the hyena’s back, so the hairs that remained stretched and stood on end. To this day Nyangau and his kind still have long, coarse hairs standing up on the crests of their misshapen bodies. 6 Sunguru’s fame as a doctor spread far and wide after this episode, for the wound on Simba’s leg healed without further trouble. But it was many weeks before the hyena had the courage to show himself in public again. 7 ❍ Practice the Skills 5 Key Literary Element Theme Using what you know about the characters and the plot of this story, what would you say the implied theme is? 6 Key Reading Skill Understanding Cause and Effect What thing in nature has this origin story tried to explain? According to the story, what was the cause and what was the effect? 7 Why do you think cultures all around the world have created origin stories? Write your answer on the “Lion, the Hare, and the Hyena” page of Foldable 6. Your response will help you complete the Unit Challenge later. 5. Procure means “to get or gain possession of.” The Lion, the Hare, and the Hyena 663 READING WORKSHOP 1 • Understanding Cause and Effect After You Read The Lion, the Hare, and the Hyena Answering the 1. Now that you’ve read this folktale, what are some stories that you’ve heard in your own family that you would like to continue to tell? 2. Recall Why was Simba starving at the beginning of the story? T IP Right There Critical Thinking 3. Interpret “The Lion, the Hare, and the Hyena” teaches a lesson. What do you think that lesson is? T IP Author and Me Moonlight Studios 4. Infer What would have happened to Simba the Lion had Sunguru the Hare not come along? T IP Author and Me 5. Interpret Were Nyangau’s claims that he was Simba’s friend honest? Explain. T IP Think and Search 6. Interpret What saved the situation for Sunguru? T IP Author and Me Write About Your Reading Use the RAFT system to write about “The Lion, the Hare, and the Hyena.” Role: Simba the Lion Objectives (pp. 664–665) Reading Understand cause and effect Literature Identify literary elements: theme Vocabulary Understand idioms Writing Use the RAFT system: letter to the editor Grammar Identify direct objects Audience: Newspaper readers Format: Letter to the editor Topic: Animals in the forest have been saying that Simba was wrong to tear a strip off Nyangau. Write a letter from Simba defending what he did. 664 UNIT 6 Why Do We Share Our Stories? READING WORKSHOP 1 • Understanding Cause and Effect Skills Review Key Reading Skill: Understanding Cause and Effect In each of the following sentences from the story, the underlined words state an effect. Explain what you think the cause is. 7. “In his younger days the solitude had not worried him, but not very long before this tale begins he had hurt his leg so badly that he was unable to provide food for himself.” 8. “His nose led him to Simba’s cave, but as the bones could be seen clearly from inside he could not steal them with safety.” 9. “Sunguru’s fame as a doctor spread far and wide after this episode, for the wound on Simba’s leg healed without further trouble.” Key Literary Element: Theme 17. But I was on pins and needles all day. I was very nervous about my test grade. 18. When I got my test paper back, I was on cloud nine! I was so happy I passed. Grammar Link: Identifying Direct Objects Some verbs just aren’t complete without an object. You know that a sentence requires a subject and a verb, but look at this sentence: • Kayla threw. To complete the thought (and the sentence), you need to say what Kayla threw. • Kayla threw the ball. In that sentence, ball is the direct object of the verb. It answers the question “What or whom?” 10. Who was successful in this story, the good friend or the bad friend? What does this tell you about the theme of the story? There can be more than one direct object in a sentence. • Kayla threw the ball and the glove. Vocabulary Check A direct object can have modifiers, just as a subject or verb can. • I baked a big cake with pink frosting. Write the vocabulary word that best matches each synonym below. Two words will be used twice. 11. increase 14. aloneness 12. visible 15. noticeable 13. gather English Language Coach Use the context clues in each sentence to help you figure out the meaning of the idioms. 16. English is very easy for my friend Aricelli. She thought the test was a piece of cake. Grammar Practice Identify the direct objects in the following sentences. Write your answers on a separate sheet of paper. 19. Dad served cabbage for dinner. 20. The falling tree smashed my bicycle. 21. Marc knows the names of all the presidents. 22. Peter told the story very well. Writing Application Look back at the Write About Your Reading assignment to see if you used any direct objects. Web Activities For eFlashcards, Selection Quick Checks, and other Web activities, go to www.glencoe.com. The Lion, the Hare, and the Hyena 665 READING WORKSHOP 1 • Understanding Cause and Effect Before You Read Charles Vocabulary Preview S h ir le y Ja ck so n Meet the Author Shirley Jackson’s fiction is filled with strange twists and turns. In most of her novels and short stories, she explores the darker side of human life. However, Jackson also wrote humorously about family life, as she does in “Charles.” Jackson was born in 1919 and died in 1965. See page R4 of the Author Files for more on Shirley Jackson. Author Search For more about Shirley Jackson, go to www.glencoe.com. raucous (RAW kus) adj. loud and rough sounding (p. 668) Laurie’s voice was sounding more and more raucous every day. insolently (IN suh lunt lee) adv. in a boldly rude manner (p. 668) He began to speak insolently to his parents. simultaneously (sy mul TAY nee us lee) adv. at the same time (p. 670) Laurie’s parents simultaneously decided they had to do something. reformation (reh fur MAY shun) n. a change for the better; improvement (p. 671) It was clear that Laurie’s behavior needed reformation. cynically (SIN uh kul ee) adv. in a way that shows doubt or disbelief; doubtfully (p. 671) His father cynically shook his head. Vocabulary Concentration With a partner, copy the words onto one set of index cards and the definitions onto another set. Mix the cards up and place them face down on a desk or table. Take turns turning the cards over two at a time. When you match a word and its definition, you may take the pair. Write sentences with the words you have matched. English Language Coach Slang Slang is informal language that is appropriate for casual conversation but not for formal speech or writing. Some slang is widely understood. Some, however, may be used and understood only by people within a certain social group. Slang may use made-up words, such as mondo or mongo, meaning “extremely.” Some, such as dis to mean disrespect, involves abbreviations. Most slang, though, consists of common English words used with different meanings. Slang down with bail Slang Meaning in agreement with a plan to leave or abandon tight emotionally close Objectives (pp. 666–673) Reading Understand cause and effect • Make connections from text to self Literature Identify literary elements: theme Vocabulary Understand slang 666 UNIT 6 Why Do We Share Our Stories? Lawrence J. Hyman/courtesy Bantam Books Example Sure, I’m down with that. I’m counting on you, so don’t bail. She’ll help me; we’re tight. READING WORKSHOP 1 • Understanding Cause and Effect Skills Preview Get Ready to Read Key Reading Skill: Understanding Cause and Effect Connect to the Reading Why do you hang out with certain people? You can answer that a lot of different ways. Because they’re my friends. Because I like them. Because we have a good time together. Those are your reasons. When it comes to characters in a story and their motives for doing certain things, you can look at these reasons as causes. As you read “Charles,” use the following tips to help you recognize cause and effect in both the plot and the characters’ motivations: • Look for each character’s reasons for doing what he or she does. • Look for signal words, such as why, because, if . . . then, so that, and therefore. • See what events cause the teacher to do certain things in class. Key Literary Element: Theme Because the theme of a story is not always direct, you must dig a little deeper to understand the main idea. Laurie, his parents, and Charles are the main characters in “Charles.” As you read the selection, think about each character. • What are the characters doing? • How are they feeling about the situation they are in? • What happens at the end? • How do the characters react to the ending? Who is affected by the ending? • What conclusions do you come to about the ending? Keep these questions in mind as you try to determine the theme. Interactive Literary Elements Handbook To review or learn more about the literary elements, go to www.glencoe.com. You have probably often heard just one person’s side of a story and found out later that there was more to the story than you knew. Think about a time when that happened. Did hearing more of the story change your mind about what happened? Write to Learn In your Learner’s Notebook, freewrite about a time a friend or family member told you only one side of a story. Build Background Children entering school must learn to get along with each other, follow directions, and help with classroom activities. In preschool and kindergarten, children become accustomed to a school setting and learn to play together. At least, that’s the plan. In “Charles,” things don’t exactly follow the plan. • Laurie, a kindergarten boy, takes delight in telling his parents about school each day. • His parents are shocked to hear Laurie’s descriptions of the horrible classroom behavior of a boy named Charles. • Seeing Charles as a bad influence on her son, Laurie’s mother decides to speak to the other boy’s parents. Set Purposes for Reading Read to find out why Laurie is sharing stories about Charles. Set Your Own Purpose What would you like to learn from the selection to help you answer the Big Question? Write your own purpose on the “Charles” page of Foldable 6. Keep Moving Use these skills as you read the following selection. Charles 667 READING WORKSHOP 1 by Shirley Jackson T he day my son Laurie started kindergarten he renounced1 corduroy overalls with bibs and began wearing blue jeans with a belt; I watched him go off the first morning with the older girl next door, seeing clearly that an era of my life was ended, my sweet-voiced nursery-school tot replaced by a longtrousered, swaggering2 character who forgot to stop at the corner and wave good-bye to me. 1 He came home the same way, the front door slamming open, his cap on the floor, and the voice suddenly become raucous shouting, “Isn’t anybody here?” At lunch he spoke insolently to his father, spilled his baby sister’s milk, and remarked that his teacher said we were not to take the name of the Lord in vain. “How was school today?” I asked, elaborately casual. “All right,” he said. “Did you learn anything?” his father asked. 1. When Laurie renounced overalls, he rejected or gave them up. 2. Swaggering means carrying oneself in a proud manner. Vocabulary raucous (RAW kus) adj. loud and rough sounding insolently (IN suh lunt lee) adv. in a boldly rude manner 668 UNIT 6 Why Do We Share Our Stories? Matt Meadows Practice the Skills 1 Reviewing Skills Connecting Do you remember your first day at kindergarten? How do you think your parents felt that day? READING WORKSHOP 1 Laurie regarded his father coldly. “I didn’t learn nothing,” he said. “Anything,” I said. “Didn’t learn anything.” “The teacher spanked a boy, though,” Laurie said, addressing his bread and butter. “For being fresh,” he added, with his mouth full. “What did he do?” I asked. “Who was it?” Laurie thought. “It was Charles,” he said. “He was fresh. The teacher spanked him and made him stand in a corner. He was awfully fresh.” 2 “What did he do?” I asked again, but Laurie slid off his chair, took a cookie, and left, while his father was still saying, “See here, young man.” The next day Laurie remarked at lunch, as soon as he sat down, “Well, Charles was bad again today.” He grinned enormously and said, “Today Charles hit the teacher.” “Good heavens,” I said, mindful of the Lord’s name, “I suppose he got spanked again?” “He sure did,” Laurie said. “Look up,” he said to his father. “What?” his father said, looking up. “Look down,” Laurie said. “Look at my thumb. Gee, you’re dumb.” He began to laugh insanely. “Why did Charles hit the teacher?” I asked quickly. “Because she tried to make him color with red crayons,” Laurie said. “Charles wanted to color with green crayons so he hit the teacher and she spanked him and said nobody play with Charles but everybody did.” 3 The third day—it was Wednesday of the first week— Charles bounced a see-saw on to the head of a little girl and made her bleed, and the teacher made him stay inside all during recess. Thursday Charles had to stand in a corner during story-time because he kept pounding his feet on the floor. Friday Charles was deprived of blackboard privileges because he threw chalk. On Saturday I remarked to my husband, “Do you think kindergarten is too unsettling for Laurie? All this toughness, and bad grammar, and this Charles boy sounds like such a bad influence.” “It’ll be all right,” my husband said reassuringly. “Bound to be people like Charles in the world. Might as well meet them now as later.” Practice the Skills 2 Key Reading Skill Understanding Cause and Effect What made the teacher spank Charles and put him in a corner? 3 Key Reading Skill Understanding Cause and Effect The teacher told the class not to play with Charles—but they did. What effect do you think this had on Charles? Charles 669 READING WORKSHOP 1 On Monday Laurie came home late, full of news. “Charles,” he shouted as he came up the hill; I was waiting anxiously on the front steps. “Charles,” Laurie yelled all the way up the hill, “Charles was bad again.” “Come right in,” I said, as soon as he came close enough. “Lunch is waiting.” “You know what Charles did?” he demanded, following me through the door. “Charles yelled so in school they sent a boy in from first grade to tell the teacher she had to make Charles keep quiet, and so Charles had to stay after school. And so all the children stayed to watch him.” “What did he do?” I asked. “He just sat there,” Laurie said, climbing into his chair at the table. “Hi, Pop, y’old dust mop.” 4 “Charles had to stay after school today,” I told my husband. “Everyone stayed with him.” “What does this Charles look like?” my husband asked Laurie. “What’s his other name?” “He’s bigger than me,” Laurie said. “And he doesn’t have any galoshes and he doesn’t ever wear a jacket.” Monday night was the first Parent-Teachers meeting, and only the fact that the baby had a cold kept me from going; I wanted passionately to meet Charles’s mother. On Tuesday Laurie remarked suddenly, “Our teacher had a friend come to see her in school today.” “Charles’s mother?” my husband and I asked simultaneously. “Naaah,” Laurie said scornfully. “It was a man who came and made us do exercises, we had to touch our toes. Look.” He climbed down from his chair and squatted down and touched his toes. “Like this,” he said. He got solemnly back into his chair and said, picking up his fork, “Charles didn’t even do exercises.” “That’s fine,” I said heartily. “Didn’t Charles want to do exercises?” “Naaah,” Laurie said. “Charles was so fresh to the teacher’s friend he wasn’t let do exercises.” Vocabulary simultaneously (sy mul TAY nee us lee) adv. at the same time 670 UNIT 6 Why Do We Share Our Stories? Simon Watson/Getty Images Practice the Skills 4 Reviewing Skills Connecting This is the second time Laurie has spoken rudely to his father. Would you talk to your parents like this? What effect would it bring if you did? READING WORKSHOP 1 “Fresh again?” I said. “He kicked the teacher’s friend,” Laurie said. “The teacher’s friend told Charles to touch his toes like I just did and Charles kicked him.” “What are they going to do about Charles, do you suppose?” Laurie’s father asked him. Laurie shrugged elaborately. “Throw him out of school, I guess,” he said. Wednesday and Thursday were routine; Charles yelled during story hour and hit a boy in the stomach and made him cry. On Friday Charles stayed after school again and so did all the other children. With the third week of kindergarten Charles was an institution3 in our family; the baby was being a Charles when she cried all afternoon; Laurie did a Charles when he filled his wagon full of mud and pulled it through the kitchen; even my husband, when he caught his elbow in the telephone cord and pulled telephone, ashtray, and a bowl of flowers off the table, said, after the first minute, “Looks like Charles.” 5 During the third and fourth weeks it looked like a reformation in Charles; Laurie reported grimly at lunch on Thursday of the third week, “Charles was so good today the teacher gave him an apple.” 6 “What?” I said, and my husband added warily, “You mean Charles?” “Charles,” Laurie said. “He gave the crayons around and he picked up the books afterward and the teacher said he was her helper.” “What happened?” I asked incredulously. “He was her helper, that’s all,” Laurie said, and shrugged. “Can this be true, about Charles?” I asked my husband that night. “Can something like this happen?” “Wait and see,” my husband said cynically. “When you’ve got a Charles to deal with, this may mean he’s only plotting.4” Practice the Skills 5 English Language Coach Slang What does the name Charles mean when Laurie’s family uses it in the phrases “being a Charles,” “did a Charles,” and “looks like a Charles”? 6 Key Reading Skill Understanding Cause and Effect How is Charles’s good behavior being rewarded? 3. Here, institution means a “regular feature or tradition.” 4. Plotting means planning with evil intent. Vocabulary reformation (reh fur MAY shun) n. a change for the better; improvement cynically (SIN uh kul ee) adv. in a way that shows doubt or disbelief; doubtfully Charles 671 READING WORKSHOP 1 He seemed to be wrong. For over a week Charles was the teacher’s helper; each day he handed things out and he picked things up; no one had to stay after school. “The P.T.A. meeting’s next week again,” I told my husband one evening. “I’m going to find Charles’s mother there.” “Ask her what happened to Charles,” my husband said. “I’d like to know.” “I’d like to know myself,” I said. On Friday of that week things were back to normal. “You know what Charles did today?” Laurie demanded at the lunch table, in a voice slightly awed. “He told a little girl to say a word and she said it and the teacher washed her mouth out with soap and Charles laughed.” “What word?” his father asked unwisely, and Laurie said, “I’ll have to whisper it to you, it’s so bad.” He got down off his chair and went around to his father. His father bent his head down and Laurie whispered joyfully. His father’s eyes widened. 7 “Did Charles tell the little girl to say that?” he asked respectfully. “She said it twice,” Laurie said. “Charles told her to say it twice.” “What happened to Charles?” my husband asked. “Nothing,” Laurie said. “He was passing out the crayons.” Monday morning Charles abandoned the little girl and said the evil word himself three or four times, getting his mouth washed out with soap each time. He also threw chalk. My husband came to the door with me that evening as I set out for the P.T.A. meeting. “Invite her over for a cup of tea after the meeting,” he said. “I want to get a look at her.” “If only she’s there,” I said prayerfully. 672 UNIT 6 Why Do We Share Our Stories? Bridgeman Art Library Practice the Skills 7 Reviewing Skills Comparing and Contrasting Compare Laurie’s behavior here to Charles’s behavior, as Laurie describes it. Playground, Crook, P.J. (b. 1945). Acrylic on canvas, 116.8 X 132 cm. Private collection. READING WORKSHOP 1 “She’ll be there,” my husband said. “I don’t see how they could hold a P.T.A. meeting without Charles’s mother.” At the meeting I sat restlessly, scanning each comfortable matronly5 face, trying to determine which one hid the secret of Charles. None of them looked to me haggard6 enough. No one stood up in the meeting and apologized for the way her son had been acting. No one mentioned Charles. After the meeting I identified and sought out Laurie’s kindergarten teacher. She had a plate with a cup of tea and a piece of chocolate cake; I had a plate with a cup of tea and a piece of marshmallow cake. We maneuvered up to one another cautiously, and smiled. “I’ve been so anxious to meet you,” I said. “I’m Laurie’s mother.” “We’re all so interested in Laurie,” she said. “Well, he certainly likes kindergarten,” I said. “He talks about it all the time.” “We had a little trouble adjusting, the first week or so,” she said primly, “but now he’s a fine little helper. With occasional lapses,7 of course.” “Laurie usually adjusts very quickly,” I said. “I suppose this time it’s Charles’s influence.” “Charles?” “Yes,” I said, laughing, “you must have your hands full in that kindergarten, with Charles.” “Charles?” she said. “We don’t have any Charles in the kindergarten.” 8 9 ❍ Practice the Skills 8 Key Literary Element Theme What does this story suggest about human nature? 9 Why do you think Laurie told stories about a boy who didn’t exist? Write your answer on the “Charles” page of Foldable 6. Your response will help you complete the Unit Challenge later. 5. Another word for matronly would be “motherly.” It refers to a mature woman, especially one who is married and has children. 6. A haggard person looks worn out as a result of grief, worry, illness—or dealing with a boy like Charles. 7. A lapse is a slipping or falling to a lower or worse condition. Charles 673 READING WORKSHOP 1 • Understanding Cause and Effect After You Read Charles Answering the 1. Why do you think Laurie tells stories about Charles? 2. Recall How does Laurie report Charles’s good behavior and Charles’s bad behavior? T IP Think and Search Critical Thinking 3. Interpret Why is Charles such a fascination in Laurie’s home? T IP Author and Me 4. Infer Who is Charles? T IP Author and Me 5. Synthesize What clues throughout the selection give you that information? T IP Think and Search 6. Evaluate Why do you think Laurie makes up all those stories? T IP Author and Me Write About Your Reading Objectives (pp. 674–675) Reading Understand cause and effect Literature Identify literary elements: theme Vocabulary Understand slang Writing Respond to literature: skit Grammar Identify indirect objects Write a skit about “Charles.” To get started, follow these steps: Step 1: Think about which characters to include. Your choices will depend on what you decide in Steps 2, 3, and 4. Step 2: Decide whether the action will take place at Laurie’s home or school. Step 3: Decide on at least one cause and effect to show. Step 4: Decide what will happen at the end. Step 5: Write the skit. Get some friends together to perform your skits for your class. (But behave. Don’t do a Charles!) 674 UNIT 6 Why Do We Share Our Stories? Matt Meadows READING WORKSHOP 1 • Understanding Cause and Effect Skills Review Key Reading Skill: Understanding Cause and Effect 7. Why do you think Laurie turns into a “swaggering character” when he starts kindergarten? Explain your answer. (Hint: Think about the fact that Laurie suddenly finds himself in a new place with new people and new rules.) 8. Identify two good or positive things that Charles does and how he is rewarded. Key Literary Element: Theme 9. What do you think is the theme of “Charles”? Explain your answer using examples from the story. Reviewing Skills: Comparing and Contrasting 10. Comparing and Contrasting Compare Laurie’s behavior at home with Charles’s actions at school. How are their behaviors similar? How are they different? Vocabulary Check Choose one of the vocabulary words to fill in each of the blanks in the sentences below. raucous cynically insolently simultaneously reformation . 11. “Hey, old man, get a horse!” Geri yelled 12. The sounds from the ape’s cage were so it sounded like a huge party! 13. The city council is dishonest and needs . 14. “I’m sorry, John. I don’t believe you can do it,” he said . 15. “You’re it!” Mary and Lisa shouted . 16. English Language Coach If a slang meaning for a word is used by enough people for a long enough period, it becomes a regular meaning. For example, fresh meaning “disrespectful,” was slang in the mid-1800s but is now found in dictionaries. The meaning “extremely nice or superior” is still slang. Write down two slang words or phrases and their meanings. Use each one in a sentence that illustrates its meaning. Grammar: Identifying Indirect Objects Direct objects answer the question “what or whom?” • Joel wrote a letter. If a sentence contains a direct object, it may also contain an indirect object. An indirect object answers the question “to what or whom?” or “for what or whom?” It usually comes before the direct object. • Joel wrote Leanne a letter. • Maya left Missy a beautiful present. It’s important to know that a word is only an indirect object if the word to or for is not stated. If it is, then you have a prepositional phrase. There are no indirect objects in the following sentences. • Joel wrote a letter to Leanne. • Maya left a beautiful present for Missy. Grammar Practice Identify the indirect object in each sentence. 17. The rider gave the horse an apple. 18. Habib handed them flowers. 19. James made me dinner last night. 20. My cousin gave her dog a bath. Web Activities For eFlashcards, Selection Quick Checks, and other Web activities, go to www.glencoe.com. Charles 675 WRITING WORKSHOP PART 1 Modern Folktale Prewriting and Drafting ASSIGNMENT Rewrite a folktale in the present Purpose: To tell a story using all of the elements of a folktale Audience: You, your teacher, and your classmates Writing Rubric As you work through this writing assignment, you should • develop characters • write dialogue • develop a theme • use third-person point of view • use correct spelling, grammar, usage, and mechanics Objectives (pp. 676–679) Writing Use the writing process: draft • Write a folktale • Use literary elements: point of view, dialogue, characterization, theme Grammar Use compound and complex sentences Folktales are organized like other stories, usually in time order. They also have characters, a setting, a plot (created through conflict), and a theme, just like other stories. But folktales have some special characteristics, too. • Characters in folktales are often larger-than-life humans or animals that act like humans. • The setting is usually long ago and sometimes in a faraway or makebelieve place. • Some folktales (specifically fairy tales) include magic. Other folktales have unusual elements such as talking animals. In this Writing Workshop, you’ll rewrite a folktale in the present (as if it were taking place today). Prewriting Get Ready to Write Before you start writing, you’ll have to decide what folktale you want to rewrite and plan the changes you’ll make. Choose a Story You can choose one of the folktales in this unit or another folktale you know. • Make a list of the folktales you already know. Remember, folktales include many different kinds of stories—animal stories, origin stories, legends, trickster tales, fairy tales, tall tales, and myths. • Look over the folktales in this unit. If one interests you, go ahead and read it. (You don’t have to wait for your teacher to tell you to read it!) • Choose a story that you think would be fun to rewrite. You may want to choose your favorite story, or you may want to choose a story you don’t like and make it into a story you do like. Think About the Story Think carefully about the story elements of the folktale you’re going to rewrite. If you’re rewriting a folktale that you don’t know very well, you may want to read the story a few times. Fill in a chart like the one on the next page to familiarize yourself with the key parts of the story. Make your chart in your Learner’s Notebook. 676 UNIT 6 Why Do We Share Our Stories? WRITING WORKSHOP PART 1 Folktale Brer Rabbit and Brer Lion Setting The woods, somewhere in the United States, a long time ago Characters Brer Rabbit, Brer Lion, the other animals Major Events Brer Lion lets Brer Rabbit tie him to a tree so he doesn’t get blown away by the hurricane. The storm never comes, but Brer Rabbit refuses to untie the lion. When Brer Lion roars, all of the other animals come and see that little Brer Rabbit has tied up the powerful lion. Writing Models For models and other writing activities, go to www.glencoe.com. Magical or Talking animals Unusual Element Theme If you are smart enough, you can beat others who are more powerful. Make a Plan Since your story is a retelling, you’ll need to keep some of the details from the original folktale. You may want to use the same characters, events, theme, or even setting. But don’t keep everything the same! Add your own flavor to the folktale. Figure out the main changes you want to make to the folktale before you start drafting your story. 1. Take another look at your notes about the original folktale. Ask yourself questions like the ones below. • Where else could these events take place? • What would these characters be like in current times? • What other events could teach the same theme or lesson? 2. Use a story map to pull the elements of your folktale together. You might also want to make notes about any magic in your story. Characters Setting Jack Rabbit—lost in a dream world a city street in England Dan D. Lion—nervous, easily scared Plot Jack bumps into Dan on the street while thinking about a breeze he felt. Dan freaks out thinking that the breeze might have been a cyclone. Jack ties Dan to a taxicab. The taxi drives away, and Jack wanders on in his dream world. Theme Living in a dream world can cause problems in the real world. Writing Tip Characters Make some notes about how each character might talk. Does he or she use big words, speak with an accent, drag out every word, or speak only in questions? It’s up to you. Characters’ dialogue is based on the personality of the character and your imagination. Writing Workshop Part 1 Modern Folktale 677 WRITING WORKSHOP PART 1 Drafting Start Writing! Grab your favorite pen, pencil, or keyboard and some blank paper. It’s time to start writing! Tell the Tale Imagine you are a storyteller relating the folktale to a live audience. Use your story map to guide you. Be sure your story has these elements of effective folktales. • Tellers of folktales are usually outside the story. Use the third-person point of view to tell what happens. (Remember to refer to characters by name or as he and she.) Writing Tip Ideas You may want to write a few ideas for openers for your folktale and see which one would be most interesting to your readers. • Folktales usually get to the point quickly. The start of “Brer Rabbit and Brer Lion” sets up the story: “Brer Rabbit was in the woods one afternoon when a great wind came up.” You can also start right in with action, dialogue, or an interesting statement. Dan D. Lion was never the same after he bumped into Jack Rabbit. • Develop your characters by providing details about them. What are they thinking? How do they act? Your readers need to know. But, in his imagination, it had been a very nice tea party. Writing Tip Writer’s Craft Make your folktale more interesting by using words besides said to set up the dialogue. Try using more specific and descriptive words such as whined, shouted, giggled, and whispered. • Dialogue reveals characters’ personality and can give clues about the setting. A character that asks “What shall I do? Where can I hide?” is fearful and anxious. “Would hiding inside that telephone booth make you jumpy?” suggests a street setting. • Your folktale should have a theme, or main idea. In “Brer Rabbit and Brer Lion,” the theme appears through the characters and events of the story. Brer Rabbit struts around the tied-up Brer Lion to show off what he’s done. If you prefer, you can reveal the theme directly. The moral of the story is “Never get mixed up with someone who lives in a dream world.” 678 UNIT 6 Why Do We Share Our Stories? WRITING WORKSHOP PART 1 Grammar Link Compound and Complex Sentences Sentences are made up of independent clauses (which can stand alone as sentences) and dependent clauses (which cannot stand alone). Independent clause: The lion was big. Independent clause: The rabbit was smart. Dependent clause: though the lion was big What Are Compound and Complex Sentences? A compound sentence is made up of two or more independent clauses joined together. The lion was big, but the rabbit was smart. independent independent A complex sentence is made up of one independent clause and one or more dependent clauses joined together. Though the lion was big, the rabbit was smart. dependent independent Simple, complex, and compound: Writing only in simple sentences limits you. When every sentence has the same pattern, every sentence sounds the same. The sentences get boring, and the writing sounds choppy. How Do I Use Compound and Complex Sentences? Use compound sentences to show that two ideas that are equally important go together. • The wind howled. • The thunder roared. • The wind howled, and the thunder roared. Use complex sentences to show that two ideas that are not equally important go together. Put the main idea in the independent, or main, clause. Put the less important idea in the dependent clause. Main idea: The rabbit survived. Less important idea: He was smart • Because he was smart, the rabbit survived. Write to Learn Read your draft aloud. Does it sound choppy? Combine simple sentences to form compound and complex sentences. Why Are Compound and Complex Sentences Important? You need to use all the sentence types to write well. Compare the two paragraphs below. Simple sentences only: Writing only in simple sentences limits you. Every sentence has the same pattern. Every sentence sounds the same. The sentences get boring. The writing sounds choppy. Looking Ahead In Writing Workshop Part 2, you’ll revise and edit your folktale. Writing Workshop Part 1 Modern Folktale 679 READING WORKSHOP 2 Skills Focus You will practice using these skills when you read the following selections: • “The Boy and His Grandfather,” p. 684 • “Jeremiah’s Song,” p. 690 Reading Skill Lesson Questioning Learn It! • Questioning Literature • Understanding what a character is like • Recognizing direct and indirect characterization Vocabulary • Recognizing and understanding idioms • Understanding “phrase words” What Is It? Questioning is asking questions about what you are reading. Have a conversation with yourself as you read by asking and trying to answer questions about the text. Feel free to ask anything! Ask about what you don’t understand. Ask about the importance of what you’re reading. You might ask yourself questions like these: • Who are the people in the story? • Why did a person act a certain way? • What just happened and how does it relate to what happened before? Answer the questions in your head or on paper. Writing/Grammar • Combining sentences ate, Inc. Permission of King Features Syndic ©Zits Partnership, Reprinted with Analyzing Cartoons Objectives (pp. 680–681) Reading Ask questions 680 UNIT 6 King Features Syndicate The girl’s question here isn’t a bad one; it just shows she has more to learn. Asking questions helps us get specific information fast—and helps us figure things out. READING WORKSHOP 2 • Questioning Why Is It Important? As you answer your own questions, you’re making sure you understand what is going on. There may be times when you’ll need to re-read to get more information. How Do I Do It? As you read, stop after every paragraph or two. Ask yourself questions to make sure you understand what you’ve read so far. Here’s how one student checked to make sure he understood what he was reading. Read this passage from “Lafff” by Lensey Namioka. He sat down on the stool and twisted a dial. I heard some bleeps, cheeps, and gurgles. Peter disappeared. He must have done it with mirrors. I looked around the garage. I peeked under the tool bench. There was no sign of him. Study Central Visit www.glencoe .com and click on Study Central to review questioning. I just read about Peter disappearing. I can ask myself questions to check if I understood the paragraph. What happened to Peter? He seemed to have actually disappeared. Why do I wonder if he really disappeared? I’ve never seen a person disappear and don’t believe that it is possible. But the writer says Peter disappeared and that there was no sign of him anywhere in the garage. What do I know about Peter? Peter is very smart, gets good grades, and spends all of his time reading books. He called himself Dr. Lu Manchu, the mad scientist. Maybe, in this story, he built a time machine. Practice It! Read the first two paragraphs of “The Boy and His Grandfather.” In your Learner’s Notebook, write two questions about what you want to know. You might start your questions with the words what or why. Use It! As you read “The Boy and His Grandfather” and “Jeremiah’s Song,” remember to stop and ask yourself questions. Reading Workshop 2 Questioning 681 John Evans READING WORKSHOP 2 • Questioning Before You Read The Boy and His Grandfather Vocabulary Preview neglected (nih GLEK tud) v. ignored; not cared for; form of the verb neglect (p. 684) The grandfather was neglected by his family. frequently (FREE kwunt lee) adv. often (p. 685) The father wanted to see grandfather frequently. R ud o lf o A . A n a y a Meet the Author Rudolfo A. Anaya was one of the founding fathers of modern Hispanic American literature. He has written fiction, plays, and essays, mostly set in his native New Mexico. Anaya often weaves Hispanic legends and folktales into his work. See page R1 of the Author Files for more on Rudolfo A. Anaya. Ask About It! For each vocabulary word, ask a partner a question that uses the word correctly. Have your partner give you an answer that also uses the word correctly. English Language Coach Words in Phrases You know about multiple-meaning words. But there are some words that have too many meanings to learn. It’s easier to learn the way these words are used in combination with other words. In “The Boy and His Grandfather,” the narrator says that the grandfather “went hungry.” That simply means that he was hungry for longer than just a short while. The word went is a form of the verb go, and it’s one of several English words that are often used in phrases like this. Here are some others: get take make do have give set put Author Search For more about Rudolfo A. Anaya, go to www.glencoe.com. When you see these words, you should ignore the main meaning of the verb. The grandfather, for example, did not “go” anywhere. The important word in the phrase is the adjective: hungry. Group Work Look at the phrases below. Then, as a group, talk about other phrases in which you use these verbs. • do dishes • make progress • get ready • go crazy Objectives (pp. 682-685) Reading Ask questions • Make connections from text to self Literature Identify literary elements: characterization Vocabulary Understand words in phrases 682 UNIT 6 Why Do We Share Our Stories? Miriam Berkley READING WORKSHOP 2 • Questioning Skills Preview Get Ready to Read Key Reading Skill: Questioning Connect to the Reading When you ask questions as you read, you are making sure that you understand the selection. You are also asking about what is important. Have you ever heard of the Golden Rule? It says, “Treat others the way you want be treated.” In other words, don’t insult your friends if you do not want them to insult you. As you read this story, think about how you would have wanted to be treated if you were the grandfather. Ask Your Questions Write the heading I Want to Know in your Learner’s Notebook. As you read the story, write three questions about what you want to know about a character, an event, or something you don’t understand. Partner Talk With a partner, make a list of the people who taught you how to treat others. What did they teach you? Literary Element: Characterization A character is a person in a story. It could also be an animal if the animal shows human behavior. Writers use two ways to tell you about characters. • Writers sometimes use direct characterization. They tell you exactly what a character is like. They might tell you directly, “Sam is sloppy.” • Writers also use indirect characterization. They show a character’s personality through his or her words and actions and through what other characters think and say. The writer might indicate that Sam leaves dirty clothes, food, and papers on the floor in his room. Another character might say, “Sam, how long since you cleaned your room?” As you read, use these questions to help you learn about characters: • What does the writer tell you about the character? • What does the character do that helps you learn about his or her personality? • What does the character say that helps you learn about his or her personality? • What do other characters say and think about the character? • Based on this, what is the character like? Partner Talk Make up a character for a story about a boy and his grandfather. Use your imagination! Tell your partner something that character might do or say and something that another character might say or think about the character. Build Background • In cultures around the world, extended families live together. An extended family may include grandparents, parents, children, and even aunts and uncles all living together in one home. • In many cultures, older people, such as the grandfather in this story, are greatly respected. Caring for older family members is considered an important responsibility, even an honor. Set Purposes for Reading Read about a boy and his grandfather to decide why Anaya shares this story. Set Your Own Purpose What would you like to learn from the selection to help you answer the Big Question? Write your own purpose on the “Boy and His Grandfather” page of Foldable 6. Interactive Literary Elements Handbook To review or learn more about the literary elements, go to www.glencoe.com. Keep Moving Use these skills as you read the following selection. The Boy and His Grandfather 683 READING WORKSHOP 2 by Rudolfo A. Anaya I n the old days it was not unusual to find several generations living together in one home. Usually, everyone lived in peace and harmony, but this situation caused problems for one man whose household included, besides his wife and small son, his elderly father. 1 It so happened that the daughter-in-law took a dislike to the old man. He was always in the way, she said, and she insisted he be removed to a small room apart from the house. 2 Because the old man was out of sight, he was often neglected. Sometimes he even went hungry. They took poor care of him, and in winter the old man often suffered from the cold. One day the little grandson visited his grandfather. “My little one,” the grandfather said, “go and find a blanket and cover me. It is cold and I am freezing.” The small boy ran to the barn to look for a blanket, and Vocabulary neglected (nih GLEK tud) v. ignored; not cared for 684 UNIT 6 Why Do We Share Our Stories? (inset)Kevin Fleming/CORBIS, (frame)Getty Images Practice the Skills 1 Key Reading Skill Questioning In this paragraph, you learn that there are problems in the home that might be important to the story. What question could you ask about the problems? 2 English Language Coach Words in Phrases What does the phrase took a dislike to mean? READING WORKSHOP 2 Practice the Skills there he found a rug. “Father, please cut this rug in half,” he asked his father. “Why? What are you going to do with it?” “I’m going to take it to my grandfather because he is cold.” “Well, take the entire rug,” replied his father. “No,” his son answered, “I cannot take it all. I want you to cut it in half so I can save the other half for you when you are as old as my grandfather. Then I will have it for you so you will not be cold.” His son’s response was enough to make the man realize how poorly he had treated his own father. The man then brought his father back into his home and ordered that a warm room be prepared. From that time on he took care of his father’s needs and visited him frequently every day. 3 4 ❍ 3 Literary Element Characterization The writer does not give direct characterization of the grandfather’s son or grandson. You learn about them from their actions. What do you know about each from his behavior? 4 Why is it important to pass on stories like “The Boy and His Grandfather”? Write your answer on the “Boy and His Grandfather” page of Foldable 6. Your response will help you complete the Unit Challenge later. Vocabulary frequently (FREE kwunt lee) adv. often The Boy and His Grandfather 685 Art Resource, NY READING WORKSHOP 2 • Questioning After You Read The Boy and His Grandfather Answering the 1. This story tells an important lesson. What is that lesson? Why do you think we use stories to teach such lessons? 2. Recall Why does the boy want his father to cut the rug in half? T IP Right There 3. Summarize How does the father’s treatment of the grandfather change during the story? T IP Think and Search Critical Thinking 4. Infer Why does the father change the way he treats his father? T IP Author and Me 5. Infer What do you think the father realizes about what could happen to him when he gets old? T IP Author and Me 6. Evaluate Think about the way the father’s behavior toward the grandfather changes. Do you think the father becomes a better person? Explain. T IP Author and Me 7. Respond Did you like this story? Why or why not? T IP Author and Me 8. Respond What is the main thing from this story that you will remember? Explain your answer. T IP Author and Me Objectives (pp. 686–687) Reading Ask questions • Make connections from text to self Literature Identify literary elements: characterization Vocabulary Understand words in phrases (delexicalized words) Grammar Combine sentences Write About Your Reading Pretend you are the father in the story. Write a letter to your son. • Explain why you treated your father poorly at first. • Explain why your behavior was wrong. • Tell what you learned from your son. • Tell how you feel about your father. 686 UNIT 6 Why Do We Share Our Stories? Kevin Fleming/CORBIS READING WORKSHOP 2 • Questioning Skills Review Key Reading Skill: Questioning 9. Review the I Want to Know questions you wrote in your Learner’s Notebook. • How did asking questions help you figure out what was important? • How did asking questions help you understand the story? Literary Element: Characterization 10. What did the boy’s mother say and do about the grandfather? 11. What opinions do you have about the mother based on her actions? Vocabulary Check Write the correct answer to each question. 12. Does frequently mean often or hardly ever? 13. Which of the following would be described as neglected: a well-loved book or a starving kitten? 14. English Language Coach Review the phrase went hungry on page 684. Use it in a sentence. What’s another way to say the same thing? Grammar Link: Combining Sentences You can combine two simple sentences to make a compound sentence. To do so, you use coordinating conjunctions such as and, or, and but. • Harry loved chocolate. It made him sick. • Harry loved chocolate, but it make him sick. You can also use coordinating conjunctions to combine two sentences in another way, if they have the same subject. You can make them into a sentence with a compound verb. • Judith skated. Judith skied. • Judith skated and skied. You can do the same thing with two sentences that have the same verb. • Judith skated. Pam skated. • Judith and Pam skated. You can use correlative conjunctions to do this kind of combining, too. Correlative conjunctions are pairs of words that are used to connect compound parts of sentences. They include both . . . and, either . . . or, and neither . . . nor. • Both Judith and Pam skated. • Paul neither skated nor skied. If you have two sentences that are not equal in importance, you can use a subordinating conjunction to make one into a dependent clause. These conjunctions include after, although, as, before, until, and so forth. • Judith skated. Judith fell. • Judith skated until she fell. Grammar Practice Combine each pair of sentences below, using and, or, but, for, nor, or yet. 15. Carlos skated to the park. He practiced stunts. 16. I have a huge dog called Rascal. My friend Olivia doesn’t like her. 17. The jeans didn’t fit. I returned them to the store. Writing Application Look back at the letter you wrote from the father in the story to his son. See if you can find two sentences to combine, using a conjunction. Web Activities For eFlashcards, Selection Quick Checks, and other Web activities, go to www.glencoe.com. The Boy and His Grandfather 687 READING WORKSHOP 2 • Questioning Before You Read Jeremiah’s Song Vocabulary Preview Wa lt e r D e a n M y e r s Meet the Author Walter Dean Myers grew up loving stories—the ones his father and grandfather told him and the ones he read in books. Myers says his own stories mostly come from his own life. “What I want to do with my writing is to make connections—to touch the lives of my characters, and through them, those of my readers.” See page R5 of the Author Files for more on Walter Dean Myers. Author Search For more about Walter Dean Myers, go to www.glencoe.com. Objectives (pp. 688–699) Reading Ask questions • Make connections from text to self Literature Identify literary elements: characterization Vocabulary Understand dialect worthwhile (wurth whyl) adj. having value or goodness; deserving one’s efforts or attention (p. 691) Grandpa thought a college education was probably worthwhile. diagnosis (dy ug NOH sus) n. a doctor’s identification of a patient’s illness; any expert’s finding of the nature of a problem (p. 693) The diagnosis left little hope that he would fully recover. setback (SET bak) n. an unexpected difficulty or stop in progress (p. 696) Family members tried to keep Grandpa from getting too tired and having a setback. Write to Learn For each vocabulary word, write a sentence using the word correctly. English Language Coach Dialect In some parts of the United States, groups of people speak forms of English called dialects. Dialects have pronunciations, word forms, and meanings that are different from those in Standard English. The characters in “Jeremiah’s Song” speak in a dialect. Read this sentence from the story. Then look at how one reader has written the sentence in Standard English. Dialect Standard English Grandpa Jeremiah said they wasn’t stories anyway, they was songs. Grandpa Jeremiah said that they were not stories, but that they were songs. Partner Talk With a partner, read these sentences from “Jeremiah’s Song.” Then try to say them in Standard English. 1. I knowed my cousin Ellie was gonna be mad when Macon Smith came around to the house. 2. She didn’t have no use for Macon even when things was going right. 3. Grandpa wasn’t getting no better, but he wasn’t getting no worse, either. 688 UNIT 6 Why Do We Share Our Stories? Constance Myers READING WORKSHOP 2 • Questioning Skills Preview Get Ready to Read Key Reading Skill: Questioning Connect to the Reading Before you read “Jeremiah’s Song,” think about questions you might ask yourself to help you understand what you are reading such as: • Do I understand this part of the story? • What causes this character to act this way? • Why did the writer give this detail here? Think about stories you remember hearing or reading as a child. Which ones would you want to tell younger children? Why? As you read, think about the stories Grandpa Jeremiah tells and why he tells them. Write to Learn Write down other questions that you think of in your Learner’s Notebook. Refer to these questions to help you read the story. Key Literary Element: Character Character Motivation A character’s motivation is the reason he or she does something. For example, if a character’s friend suddenly becomes sick, he or she might be motivated to spend a lot of time with that friend. As you read, use these tips to help you learn about character motivation: • Ask yourself, Why does the character act this way? You might need to “read between the lines,” or make guesses, to answer the question. • Think about why you might do the things the characters do. Dynamic and Static Characters Some characters stay the same during a story. Others change. • Characters that change are called dynamic characters. They might realize something new that causes them to change the way they think or act. For example, a mean character who learns an important lesson might become kinder as a result. • Characters that stay the same are called static characters. As you read, notice which characters change, which ones stay the same, and what motivates them to do so. Partner Talk Think of a time when you learned a lesson that changed you. What was the lesson? How did you change? Tell your story to a partner. Partner Talk With a partner, talk about the stories you learned as a child. Were they read to you, or did someone tell them to you? Build Background For many centuries, people in Africa passed down stories to family and friends. When enslaved Africans were brought to the United States, they continued telling stories. Part of the reason for this was that they were not allowed to learn how to read and write. Some reasons for telling such stories might be • to teach moral lessons • to entertain friends and family • to pass on a community or family history Set Purposes for Reading Read “Jeremiah’s Song” to learn why Grandpa Jeremiah tells his stories. Set Your Own Purpose What would you like to learn from the selection to help you answer the Big Question? Write your own purpose on the “Jeremiah’s Song” page of Foldable 6. Interactive Literary Elements Handbook To review or learn more about the literary elements, go to www.glencoe.com. Keep Moving Use these skills as you read the following selection. Jeremiah’s Song 689 READING WORKSHOP 2 by Walter Dean Myers I knowed my cousin Ellie was gonna be mad when Macon Smith come around to the house. She didn’t have no use for Macon even when things was going right, and when Grandpa Jeremiah was fixing to die I just knowed she wasn’t gonna be liking him hanging around. Grandpa Jeremiah raised Ellie after her folks died and they used to be real close. Then she got to go on to college and when she come back the first year she was different. She didn’t want to hear all them stories he used to tell her anymore. Ellie said the stories wasn’t true, and that’s why she didn’t want to hear them. 1 I didn’t know if they was true or not. Tell the truth I didn’t think much on it either way, but I liked to hear them stories. Grandpa Jeremiah said they wasn’t stories anyway, they was songs. 2 “They the songs of my people,” he used to say. I didn’t see how they was songs, not regular songs anyway. Every little thing we did down in Curry seemed to matter to Ellie that first summer she come home from college.1 You couldn’t do nothin’ that was gonna please her. She didn’t even come to church much. ‘Course she come on Sunday or 1. Curry is a town in central North Carolina. Ellie is studying in Greensboro, a city about 60 miles north that has several colleges and universities. 690 UNIT 6 Why Do We Share Our Stories? Practice the Skills 1 Key Reading Skill Questioning Ask yourself a question about a character who was introduced in the first paragraph of the story such as, “Which character just came back home from college?” 2 Key Literary Element Character Readers learn that Grandpa Jeremiah loves to tell stories and that the narrator likes to hear them. What do we learn about Ellie’s opinions of the stories? Why does she feel that way? READING WORKSHOP 2 everybody would have had a regular fit, but she didn’t come on Thursday nights and she didn’t come on Saturday even though she used to sing in the gospel choir. “I guess they teachin’ her somethin’ worthwhile up there at Greensboro,” Grandpa Jeremiah said to Sister Todd. “I sure don’t see what it is, though.” “You ain’t never had no book learning, Jeremiah,” Sister Todd shot back. She wiped at where a trickle of sweat made a little path through the white dusting powder she put on her chest to keep cool. “Them old ways you got ain’t got nothing for these young folks.” 3 “I guess you right,” Grandpa Jeremiah said. He said it but I could see he didn’t like it none. He was a big man with a big head and had most all his hair even if it was white. All that summer, instead of sitting on the porch telling stories like he used to when I was real little, he would sit out there by himself while Ellie stayed in the house and watched the television or read a book. Sometimes I would think about asking him to tell me one of them stories he used to tell but they was too scary now that I didn’t have nobody to sleep with but myself. I asked Ellie to sleep with me but she wouldn’t. “You’re nine years old,” she said, sounding real proper. “You’re old enough to sleep alone.” I knew that. I just wanted her to sleep with me because I liked sleeping with her. Before she went off to college she used to put cocoa butter on her arms and face and it would smell real nice. When she come back from college she put something else on, but that smelled nice too. It was right after Ellie went back to school that Grandpa Jeremiah had him a stroke2 and Macon 2. A stroke is a sudden attack of illness caused by a problem with blood circulation in the brain. A stroke can cause brain damage that affects a person’s senses, speech, and ability to move. Paralysis or weakness on one side of the body is common. Practice the Skills 3 English Language Coach Dialect In Sister Todd’s dialect, book learning means “schooling.” How would you change Sister Todd’s comment to Grandpa Jeremiah into Standard English? Autumn Woes, 2000, Colin Bootman. Oil on board, Private Collection. Vocabulary worthwhile (wurth whyl) adj. having value or goodness; deserving one’s efforts or attention Jeremiah’s Song 691 Bridgeman Art Library READING WORKSHOP 2 started coming around. I think his mama probably made him come at first, but you could see he liked it. Macon had always been around, sitting over near the stuck window at church or going on the blueberry truck when he went picking down at Mister Gregory’s place. For a long time he was just another kid, even though he was older’n me, but then, all of a sudden, he growed something fierce. I used to be up to his shoulder one time and then, before I could turn around good, I was only up to his shirt pocket. He changed too. When he used to just hang around with the other boys and play ball or shoot at birds he would laugh a lot. He didn’t laugh so much anymore and I figured he was just about grown. When Grandpa got sick he used to come around and help out with things around the house that was too hard for me to do. I mean, I could have done all the chores, but it would just take me longer. 4 When the work for the day was finished and the sows fed, Grandpa would kind of ease into one of his stories and Macon, he would sit and listen to them and be real interested. I didn’t mind listening to the stories when Grandpa told them to Macon because he would be telling them in the middle of the afternoon and they would be past my mind by the time I had to go to bed. Macon had an old guitar he used to mess with, too. He wasn’t too bad on it, and sometimes Grandpa would tell him to play a tune. He could play something he called “the Delta 692 UNIT 6 Why Do We Share Our Stories? Jim Erickson/CORBIS Practice the Skills 4 Key Literary Element Character Name two things you learn about Macon. Besides helping out around the place, what might be Macon’s possible motivation for coming around? READING WORKSHOP 2 Blues” real good, but when Sister Todd or somebody from the church come around he’d play “Precious Lord” or “Just a Closer Walk With Thee.” 5 Grandpa Jeremiah had been feeling poorly from that stroke, and one of his legs got a little drag to it. Just about the time Ellie come from school the next summer he was real sick. He was breathing loud so you could hear it even in the next room and he would stay in bed a lot even when there was something that needed doing or fixing. “I don’t think he’s going to make it much longer,” Dr. Crawford said. “The only thing I can do is to give him something for the pain.” “Are you sure of your diagnosis?” Ellie asked. She was sitting around the table with Sister Todd, Deacon Turner, and his little skinny yellow wife. 6 Dr. Crawford looked at Ellie like he was surprised to hear her talking. “Yes, I’m sure,” he said. “He had tests a few weeks ago and his condition was bad then.” “How much time he got?” Sister Todd asked. “Maybe a week or two at best,” Dr. Crawford said. When he said that, Deacon Turner’s wife started crying and goin’ on and I give her a hard look but she just went on. I was the one who loved Grandpa Jeremiah the most and she didn’t hardly even know him so I didn’t see why she was crying. Everybody started tiptoeing around the house after that. They would go in and ask Grandpa Jeremiah if he was comfortable and stuff like that or take him some food or a cold glass of lemonade. Sister Todd come over and stayed with us. Mostly what she did is make supper and do a lot of praying, which was good because I figured that maybe God would do something to make Grandpa Jeremiah well. When she wasn’t doing that she was piecing on a fancy quilt she was making for some white people in Wilmington.3 Ellie, she went around asking everybody how they felt about Dr. Crawford and then she went into town and asked Practice the Skills 5 Grandpa Jeremiah tells his stories, while Macon sings and plays on his guitar. Why do you think people might tell their stories in different ways? Write your answer on the “Jeremiah’s Song” page of Foldable 6. Your response will help you complete the Unit Challenge later. 6 English Language Coach Dialect Does Ellie use her family’s dialect or Standard English here? Why do you think she does so? 3. Sister Todd is sewing (piecing) many small pieces of cloth into one big pattern for the quilt. Wilmington is a city on North Carolina’s Atlantic coast. Vocabulary diagnosis (dy ug NOH sus) n. a doctor’s identification of a patient’s illness; any expert’s finding of the nature of a problem Jeremiah’s Song 693 READING WORKSHOP 2 about the tests and things. Sister Jenkins asked her if she thought she knowed more than Dr. Crawford, and Ellie rolled her eyes at her, but Sister Jenkins was reading out her Bible and didn’t make no notice of it. Then Macon come over. He had been away on what he called “a little piece of a job” and hadn’t heard how bad off Grandpa Jeremiah was. When he come over he talked to Ellie and she told him what was going on and then he got him a soft drink from the refrigerator and sat out on the porch and before you know it he was crying. You could look at his face and tell the difference between him sweating and the tears. The sweat was close against his skin and shiny and the tears come down fatter and more sparkly. Macon sat on the porch, without saying a word, until the sun went down and the crickets started chirping and carrying on. Then he went in to where Grandpa Jeremiah was and stayed in there for a long time. 7 Sister Todd was saying that Grandpa Jeremiah needed his rest and Ellie went in to see what Macon was doing. Then she come out real mad. “He got Grandpa telling those old stories again,” Ellie said. “I told him Grandpa needed his rest and for him not to be staying all night.” He did leave soon, but bright and early the next morning Macon was back again. This time he brought his guitar with him and be went on in to Grandpa Jeremiah’s room. I went in, too. Grandpa Jeremiah’s room smelled terrible. It was all closed up so no drafts could get on him and the whole room was smelled down with disinfect4 and medicine. Grandpa Jeremiah lay propped up on the bed and he was so gray he looked scary. His hair wasn’t combed down and his head on the pillow with his white hair sticking out was enough to send me flying if Macon hadn’t been there. He was skinny, too. He looked like his skin got loose on his bones, and when he lifted his arms, it hung down like he was just wearing it instead of it being a part of him. 8 Practice the Skills 7 Reviewing Skills Drawing Conclusions What does Macon’s reaction to Ellie’s words about Grandpa tell you about Macon’s feelings? 8 Key Literary Element Character How does the narrator react to how Grandpa Jeremiah has changed? 4. In the region’s dialect, disinfect is short for disinfectant, a substance used to kill germs. 694 UNIT 6 Why Do We Share Our Stories? READING WORKSHOP 2 Macon sat slant-shouldered with his guitar across his lap. He was messin’ with the guitar, not making any music, but just going over the strings as Grandpa talked. “Old Carrie went around out back to where they kept the pigs penned up and she felt a cold wind across her face. . . .” Grandpa Jeremiah was telling the story about how a old woman out-tricked the Devil and got her son back. I had heard the story before, and I knew it was pretty scary. “When she felt the cold breeze she didn’t blink nary5 an eye, but looked straight ahead. . . .” All the time Grandpa Jeremiah was talking I could see Macon fingering his guitar. I tried to imagine what it would be like if he was actually plucking the strings. I tried to fix my mind on that because I didn’t like the way the story went with the old woman wrestling with the Devil. We sat there for nearly all the afternoon until Ellie and Sister Todd come in and said that supper was ready. Me and Macon went out and ate some collard greens, ham hocks, and rice. Then Macon he went back in and listened to some more of Grandpa’s stories until it was time for him to go home. I wasn’t about to go in there and listen to no stories at night. 9 D r. Crawford come around a few days later and said that Grandpa Jeremiah was doing a little better. “You think the Good Lord gonna pull him through?” Sister Todd asked. “I don’t tell the Good Lord what He should or should not be doing,” Dr. Crawford said, looking over at Sister Todd and at Ellie. “I just said that my patient seems to be doing okay for his condition.” “He been telling Macon all his stories,” I said. Young Musician, 1992. Maurice Faulk. Acrylic on canvas. Private Collection. Practice the Skills 9 Key Reading Skill Questioning Asking yourself questions about these paragraphs can help you understand the story and the characters. How would you answer these questions? Why was Macon silently fingering his guitar as Grandpa told his story? Why did Macon listen to Grandpa’s stories until he had to go home? 5. The word nary is a shortened form of never and is often used to add emphasis. It’s almost always followed by a or an and means “not any.” Jeremiah’s Song 695 Maurice Faulk/SuperStock READING WORKSHOP 2 “Macon doesn’t seem to understand that Grandpa Jeremiah needs his strength,” Ellie said. “Now that he’s improving, we don’t want him to have a setback.” “No use in stopping him from telling his stories,” Dr. Crawford said. “If it makes him feel good it’s as good as any medicine I can give him.” 10 I saw that this didn’t set with Ellie, and when Dr. Crawford had left I asked her why. “Dr. Crawford means well,” she said, “but we have to get away from the kind of life that keeps us in the past.” She didn’t say why we should be trying to get away from the stories and I really didn’t care too much. All I knew was that when Macon was sitting in the room with Grandpa Jeremiah I wasn’t nearly as scared as I used to be when it was just me and Ellie listening. I told that to Macon. “You getting to be a big man, that’s all,” he said. That was true. Me and Macon was getting to be good friends, too. I didn’t even mind so much when he started being friends with Ellie later. It seemed kind of natural, almost like Macon was supposed to be there with us instead of just visiting. 11 Grandpa wasn’t getting no better, but he wasn’t getting no worse, either. “You liking Macon now?” I asked Ellie when we got to the middle of July. She was dishing out a plate of smothered chops for him and I hadn’t even heard him ask for anything to eat. “Macon’s funny,” Ellie said, not answering my question. “He’s in there listening to all of those old stories like he’s really interested in them. It’s almost as if he and Grandpa Jeremiah are talking about something more than the stories, a secret language.” I didn’t think I was supposed to say anything about that to Macon, but once, when Ellie, Sister Todd, and Macon were out on the porch shelling butter beans after Grandpa got tired and was resting, I went into his room and told him what Ellie had said. Vocabulary setback (SET bak) n. an unexpected difficulty or stop in progress 696 UNIT 6 Why Do We Share Our Stories? Practice the Skills 10 Why do you think it might be important for Grandpa Jeremiah to keep telling his stories even though he is very ill? Write your answer on the “Jeremiah’s Song” page of Foldable 6. Your response will help you complete the Unit Challenge later. 11 Key Literary Element Character How have the narrator’s feelings toward Macon changed? READING WORKSHOP 2 “She said that?” Grandpa Jeremiah’s face was skinny and old looking but his eyes looked like a baby’s, they was so bright. “Right there in the kitchen is where she said it,” I said. “And I don’t know what it mean but I was wondering about it.” “I didn’t think she had any feeling for them stories,” Grandpa Jeremiah said. “If she think we talking secrets, maybe she don’t.” “I think she getting a feeling for Macon,” I said. “That’s okay, too,” Grandpa Jeremiah said. “They both young.” “Yeah, but them stories you be telling, Grandpa, they about old people who lived a long time ago,” I said. “Well, those the folks you got to know about,” Grandpa Jeremiah said. “You think on what those folks been through, and what they was feeling, and you add it up with what you been through and what you been feeling, then you got you something.” “What you got, Grandpa?” “You got you a bridge,” Grandpa said. “And a meaning. Then when things get so hard you about to break, you can sneak across that bridge and see some folks who went before you and see how they didn’t break. Some got bent and some got twisted and a few fell along the way, but they didn’t 12 Key Reading Skill break.” 12 “Am I going to break, Grandpa?” Questioning Do you understand Grandpa’s explanation “You? As strong as you is?” Grandpa Jeremiah pushed about stories? If not, read it again himself up on his elbow and give me a look. “No way you and think about it. It’s a very going to break, boy. You gonna be strong as they come. One important part of the story. day you gonna tell all them stories I told you to your young’uns and they’ll be as strong as you.” “Suppose I ain’t got no stories, can I make some up?” “Sure you can, boy. You make ‘em up and twist ‘em around. 13 Grandpa Jeremiah says that Don’t make no mind. Long as you got ‘em.” 13 whether stories are true or not “Is that what Macon is doing?” I asked. “Making up stories is not important. It’s just importo play on his guitar?” tant that you tell them. Do you “He’ll do with ‘em what he see fit, I suppose,” Grandpa agree? Why or why not? Write Jeremiah said. “Can’t ask more than that from a man.” your answer on the “Jeremiah’s Practice the Skills Song” page of Foldable 6. Your response will help you complete the Unit Challenge later. Jeremiah’s Song 697 READING WORKSHOP 2 I Practice the Skills t rained the first three days of August. It wasn’t a hard rain but it rained anyway. The mailman said it was good for the crops over East but I didn’t care about that so I didn’t pay him no mind. What I did mind was when it rain like that the field mice come in and get in things like the flour bin and I always got the blame for leaving it open. When the rain stopped I was pretty glad. Macon come over and sat with Grandpa and had something to eat with us. 14 Key Literary Element Sister Todd come over, too. 14 “How Grandpa doing?” Sister Todd asked. “They been Characterization In this paragraph, Macon sits with asking about him in the church.” Grandpa. From Macon’s actions “He’s doing all right,” Ellie said. here and earlier, what have you “He’s kind of quiet today,” Macon said. “He was just learned about him as a person? talking about how the hogs needed breeding.” What have you learned about his “He must have run out of stories to tell,” Sister Todd said. feelings toward Grandpa? “He’ll be repeating on himself like my father used to do. That’s the way I hear old folks get.” 698 UNIT 6 Why Do We Share Our Stories? Will & Deni McIntyre/Getty Images READING WORKSHOP 2 Everybody laughed at that because Sister Todd was pretty old, too. Maybe we was all happy because the sun was out after so much rain. When Sister Todd went in to take Grandpa Jeremiah a plate of potato salad with no mayonnaise like he liked it, she told him about how people was asking for him and he told her to tell them he was doing okay and to remember him in their prayers. Sister Todd came over the next afternoon, too, with some rhubarb pie with cheese on it, which is my favorite pie. When she took a piece into Grandpa Jeremiah’s room she come right out again and told Ellie to go fetch the Bible. 15 It was a hot day when they had the funeral. Mostly everybody was there. The church was hot as anything, even though they had the window open. Some yellowjacks flew in and buzzed around Sister Todd’s niece and then around Deacon Turner’s wife and settled right on her hat and stayed there until we all stood and sang “Soon-a Will Be Done.” At the graveyard Macon played “Precious Lord” and I cried hard even though I told myself that I wasn’t going to cry the way Ellie and Sister Todd was, but it was such a sad thing when we left and Grandpa Jeremiah was still out to the grave that I couldn’t help it. During the funeral and all, Macon kind of told everybody where to go and where to sit and which of the three cars to ride in. After it was over he come by the house and sat on the front porch and played on his guitar. Ellie was standing leaning against the rail and she was crying but it wasn’t a hard crying. It was a soft crying, the kind that last inside of you for a long time. Macon was playing a tune I hadn’t heard before. I thought it might have been what he was working at when Grandpa Jeremiah was telling him those stories and I watched his fingers but I couldn’t tell if it was or not. It wasn’t nothing special, that tune Macon was playing, maybe halfway between them Delta blues he would do when Sister Todd wasn’t around and something you would play at church. It was something different and something the same at the same time. I watched his fingers go over that guitar and figured I could learn that tune one day if I had a mind to. 16 ❍ 6. The yellowjacks, or yellow jackets, are wasps whose name comes from their bright yellow markings. Practice the Skills 15 Reviewing Skill Drawing Conclusions What has happened to Grandpa Jeremiah? How do you know? 16 How will Macon and the narrator carry on Grandpa Jeremiah’s storytelling tradition? How do you know? Write your answer on the “Jeremiah’s Song” page of Foldable 6. Your response will help you complete the Unit Challenge later. Jeremiah’s Song 699 READING WORKSHOP 2 • Questioning After You Read Jeremiah’s Song Answering the 1. Why do you think Grandpa Jeremiah and Macon share their stories? 2. Recall Why doesn’t Ellie listen to Grandpa Jeremiah’s stories any more? T IP Right There 3. Summarize How does the narrator change by the end of the story? T IP Think and Search Critical Thinking 4. Infer Why does the narrator believe he can learn Macon’s tune at the end of the story? T IP Author and Me 5. Infer What are Macon’s feelings toward Grandpa? Support your answers with details from the story. T IP Author and Me 6. Evaluate Which is more important to you—learning about the past from people like Grandpa Jeremiah or “book learning”? Explain. T IP On My Own 7. Synthesize Imagine that you’re creating a sequel, or follow-up story, for “Jeremiah’s Song.” Who would be the main characters? What would happen in the new story? T IP On My Own Write About Your Reading Objectives (pp. 700-701) Reading Monitor comprehension: ask questions • Make connections from text to self Literature Identify literary elements: characterization Vocabulary Understand dialect Writing Use the RAFT system: personal letter Grammar Combine sentences Use the RAFT system to write about “Jeremiah’s Song.“ Role: The narrator of this story Audience: Ellie Format: A letter Topic: Explain the importance of Grandpa Jeremiah’s stories. Here’s a beginning for your letter. Dear Ellie, I know you didn’t think that Grandpa Jeremiah’s stories were important. But I thought they were very important. Here’s why. 700 UNIT 6 Why Do We Share Our Stories? Jim Erickson/CORBIS READING WORKSHOP 2 • Questioning Skills Review Key Reading Skill: Questioning 8. How did the questions that you wrote in your Learner’s Notebook help you read this story? • Were you able to answer the questions you thought of before you read the story? • Did asking questions help you understand parts of the story that might have been confusing or unclear to you? • Did asking questions help you understand the characters’ dialects and motivations? Key Literary Element: Character 9. Dynamic characters change. Name one dynamic character in the story. Explain your answer. 10. Static characters stay the same. Name one static character in the story. Explain your answer. 11. Motivation is what causes someone to do something. Tell Grandpa Jeremiah’s motivation for telling stories. Reviewing Skills: Drawing Conclusions 12. Think about Grandpa Jeremiah’s reasons for telling stories. What conclusions can you draw about Grandpa Jeremiah’s life and the life of his parents and grandparents? Vocabulary Check Use the words below to complete the sentences. worthwhile diagnosis setback when she 13. Anna’s training suffered a serious broke her arm. 14. We all felt the review session before the test was very . 15. The mechanic inspected the car and gave us his . 16. English Language Coach Review the differences between dialect and Standard English. Name two ways that they are different. Grammar Link: Combining Sentences You can combine simple sentences to form complex ones. Simple: I left early. Simple: I felt sick. Complex: I left early because I felt sick. Complex: Because I felt sick, I left early. Adding because (or any other subordinating conjunction) to a clause makes it dependent. The clause cannot stand alone as a complete sentence. Independent (complete): I left early. Dependent (incomplete): because I left early Common Subordinating Conjunctions because cause and effect if condition although, though, whereas opposite ideas after, before, when, while time Grammar Practice Combine each pair of sentences below. Use the chart to choose a conjunction for each sentence. 17. (Condition) It is raining. We won’t go. 18. (Opposite ideas) It is raining. We’ll go. 19. (Time) Be sure to study. You take the test. Writing Application Review your RAFT assignment. Combine two simple sentences to form a complex sentence. Web Activities For eFlashcards, Selection Quick Checks, and other Web activities, go to www.glencoe.com. Jeremiah’s Song 701 READING WORKSHOP 3 Skills Focus You will practice using these skills when you read the following selections: • “The Tale of ‘Kiko-Wiko,” p. 706 • “We Are All One,” p. 716 Reading • Predicting Literature • Recognizing cultural allusions • Analyzing what cultural allusions add to a work Vocabulary • Identifying dialogue • Understanding how to read dialogue Writing/Grammar • Using commas in compound sentences • Using commas in complex sentences Skill Lesson Predicting Learn It! What Is It? Predicting means making guesses about what will happen next in a story. To predict, you think about the events and details you’ve read about so far. Then you guess what might happen next. Once you make a prediction, you read on to see if you guessed right. If you didn’t, that’s okay. You predict to get more involved in the story and to make it more interesting. To make good predictions: • Pay attention to details in the story. • Use what you know about the subject of the story. For example, in a story about a boy and his grandmother, you might predict he will learn something from her. ate, Inc. Permission of King Features Syndic ©Zits Partnership, Reprinted with Analyzing Cartoons Jeremy thinks his dad is predictable. Did you ever predict what a friend or family member or teacher would say next? How did you know? What information or experiences led to your prediction? Objectives (pp. 702–703) Reading Make predictions 702 UNIT 6 King Features Syndicate READING WORKSHOP 3 • Predicting Why Is It Important? Predicting helps you look forward to events and pay attention to details in a story. For example, usually the hero of a folktale faces challenges but wins in the end. You might expect it, but you read on to find out whether you’re right. Predicting can be useful in real life also. You can predict that if you’re late to meet your friends, they will be annoyed. Study Central Visit www.glencoe .com and click on Study Central to review predicting. How Do I Do It? Before you read, notice the title. Then skim some of the story to get an idea of what it’s about. Think about what is most likely to happen to these characters, based on what you already know about life and about folktales. Here’s how one student predicted events in a story. She read the title and skimmed the first paragraph. The Weaver and Her Brothers Ari and her three brothers were playing near a tumbledown house one day when a man came out of the house and yelled at them. He pointed at the boys and flapped his hands, and they all turned into crows. He said to Ari, “They will never be human again unless you find them and weave sweaters for them.” The man says only Ari can save her brothers, and she has to do it by weaving sweaters for them. I see from the title that Ari is a weaver, so I predict that she will succeed. Also, I know that fairy tale heroes usually win in the end. I think she’ll find her brothers and save them. Practice It! Cause and effect are very important in predicting. Look at the situations and events below and predict some of the possible effects, things that might happen. In your Learner’s Notebook, copy and complete the sentences with a prediction. • If a little girl suddenly saw a monster, she might . . . • If a very rich man was going blind, he might . . . • If a kind man saw an anthill about to be flooded, he might . . . Use It! As you read these selections, remember the lists you made to practice predicting. If new knowledge about the characters makes you change your predictions as you read, write your revised predictions on your lists. Reading Workshop 3 Predicting 703 John Evans READING WORKSHOP 3 • Predicting Before You Read The Tale of ‘Kiko-Wiko Vocabulary Preview whimsical (WIM zih kul) adj. light and natural; not serious (p. 706) The whimsical story made me think of knights and castles. disruptions (DIS rup shunz) n. unwanted breaks or interruptions (p. 709) It was hard to watch the game because of my sister’s disruptions. M a r k C r ill e y Meet the Author Mark Crilley began drawing at a young age. After college, he taught in Japan, where he invented the character Akiko. Since then, he has published more than 50 issues of the Akiko comic book series. He writes,“ . . . somewhere underneath all the silly drawings and slapstick humor lies a gentle reminder of the little 4th grader within us all. . . .” Author Search For more about Mark Crilley, go to www.glencoe .com. English Language Coach Dialogue Conversation between characters in a story is called dialogue. In most text, dialogue appears between quotation marks. In a comic book or graphic story, dialogue usually appears in bubbles. HEY! Stop that! In most comic books, words that are not inside a bubble are not spoken dialogue. They are not spoken by any character in the story. They are like the words that would be spoken by a narrator in a play or movie. Dialogue helps to • bring characters to life by showing their personalities and what they are thinking and feeling • move the plot forward by noting a passage of time and introducing new characters, locations, or actions Look at these sentences from the graphic story you are about to read. Narration Dialogue Objectives (pp. 704–711) Reading Make predictions • Make connections from text to self Literature Identify literary elements: cultural allusions Vocabulary Understand dialogue On Your Own Read the sentences below. Which sentences are probably dialogue? Which ones are probably narration? How can you tell? 1. Ari and her three brothers were playing near a tumbledown house. 2. Hey, you kids! Get off my lawn! 3. He pointed at the boys, and they all turned into crows. 704 UNIT 6 Why Do We Share Our Stories? Mary Moylan Once upon a time there was a little girl named ‘Kiko-Wiko. What’s up? READING WORKSHOP 3 • Predicting Skills Preview Get Ready to Read Key Reading Skill: Predicting Connect to the Reading When you predict, you combine clues from the text with what you already know. Then you make predictions, or good guesses, about what will come next. Before you read, you may predict what a selection is about. While you read, you may also predict what will happen later. The next selection is about a girl who doesn’t like the story she’s in. As a result, she tries to change parts of the story. Think about a story you’ve written. How did you invent the characters? What were some of the traits of your characters? If your characters could talk to you, what would they tell you about the story? These clues will help you make predictions: • The title of the story • The illustrations • The qualities or characteristics of the author or main character Build Background Think-Pair-Share Think about the title “The Tale of ‘Kiko-Wiko.” Who or what do you think ‘Kiko-Wiko is? What do you predict the story is about? Use your imagination. With a partner, talk about your predictions. Key Literary Element: Cultural Allusions When a writer refers to something that has meaning for a particular group of people, it is called a cultural allusion. For example, in a Native American story, a spider may refer to the legend of Grandmother Spider. She brought corn and light to the people. For readers from that culture or tradition, the spider is a positive symbol. Writers often use cultural allusions because they are brief but rich in meaning. As you read, pay attention to characters and objects. Ask yourself: • Could this person, animal, or thing be more important than I think? • Does this remind me of my own traditions? Why is it important? Partner Talk With a partner, talk about some animals or objects in your cultures that refer to other ideas. Why are they important? Are they positive or negative symbols? The graphic story you are about to read is from a comic book series called Akiko. • Akiko is a fourth-grade girl who goes on many weird adventures. • In the series, Akiko travels to strange planets with her friends. • More than 50 issues of Akiko have been published. Set Purposes for Reading Read “The Tale of ‘Kiko-Wiko” to find out what happens when a character tries to change the story she is in. Set Your Own Purpose What would you like to learn from the selection to help you answer the Big Question? Write your own purpose on the “Tale of ‘Kiko-Wiko” page of Foldable 6. Interactive Literary Elements Handbook To review or learn more about the literary elements, go to www.glencoe.com. Keep Moving Use these skills as you read the following selection. The Tale of ‘Kiko-Wiko 705 READING WORKSHOP 3 Practice the Skills 1 Key Reading Skill 1 Predicting ‘KikoWiko tells you that the story is a fairy tale. Using this information and the illustrations on this page, what do you predict will happen in the story? Write your answer in your Learner’s Notebook. 2 Key Literary Element Cultural Allusions ‘Kiko-Wiko makes a cultural allusion here. What popular fairy tale features stepsisters? 2 Vocabulary whimsical (WIM zih kul) adj. light and natural; not serious 706 UNIT 6 Why Do We Share Our Stories? Written and Illustrated by Mark Crilley. Used with Permission. AKIKO is a trademark of Sirius Entertainment READING WORKSHOP 3 Practice the Skills 3 3 English Language Coach Dialogue The words outside the bubbles are usually narration and not the voice of a character. What is different about this graphic story? 4 Key Literary Element 4 Cultural Allusions What is a happy meal? Is a happy meal an important part of a particular group of people or culture? Why or why not? 1. A devil’s advocate is someone who argues in favor of a less popular or less accepted idea. 2. An ogre (OH gur) is an imaginary monster in fairy tales. The Tale of ‘Kiko-Wiko 707 Written and Illustrated by Mark Crilley. Used with Permission. AKIKO is a trademark of Sirius Entertainment READING WORKSHOP 3 Practice the Skills 5 Key Reading Skill 5 Predicting How do you think ‘Kiko-Wiko will react to this new ogre? Why? Write your answer in your Learner’s Notebook. 708 UNIT 6 Why Do We Share Our Stories? Written and Illustrated by Mark Crilley. Used with Permission. AKIKO is a trademark of Sirius Entertainment READING WORKSHOP 3 Practice the Skills 6 6 English Language Coach Dialogue Look again at how ‘Kiko-Wiko and the narrator talk to each other. How do you think the narrator feels about ‘KikoWiko? Vocabulary disruptions (dis RUP shunz) n. unwanted breaks or interruptions The Tale of ‘Kiko-Wiko 709 Written and Illustrated by Mark Crilley. Used with Permission. AKIKO is a trademark of Sirius Entertainment READING WORKSHOP 3 Practice the Skills 7 Key Reading Skill 7 Predicting Do you think this fairy tale will have an ending? Why or why not? Write your answer in your Learner’s Notebook. 710 UNIT 6 Why Do We Share Our Stories? Written and Illustrated by Mark Crilley. Used with Permission. AKIKO is a trademark of Sirius Entertainment READING WORKSHOP 3 Practice the Skills 8 8 Could the author have told this story using text only? How did the dialogue and images help you understand and enjoy the story? Write your answers on the “Tale of ‘Kiko-Wiko” page of Foldable 6. Your response will help you complete the Unit Challenge later. The Tale of ‘Kiko-Wiko 711 Written and Illustrated by Mark Crilley. Used with Permission. AKIKO is a trademark of Sirius Entertainment READING WORKSHOP 3 • Predicting After You Read The Tale of ‘Kiko-Wiko Answering the 1. Why do you think the author wanted to share this story? Did he want to inform, persuade, or entertain you? How can you tell? 2. Recall According to ‘Kiko-Wiko, what is wrong with the first ogre? T IP Right There 3. Recall What happens when the second ogre tries to scare ‘Kiko-Wiko? T IP Right There Critical Thinking 4. Infer Where are the characters in this story? Are they inside or outside? Are they in a natural setting? Use details from the story to explain your answers. T IP Author and Me 5. Evaluate Do you think ‘Kiko-Wiko behaves like a good cartoon character? Why or why not? Explain your answer with examples from the story. T IP Author and Me 6. Infer Why does the narrator quit? T IP Author and Me 7. Respond What surprised you about the story? T IP Author and Me Write About Your Reading Objectives (pp. 712–713) Reading Make predictions Literature Identify literary elements: cultural allusions Vocabulary Understand dialogue Writing Write dialogue Grammar Use punctuation: commas in compound sentences Use dialogue and narration to rewrite the last two pages of “The Tale of ‘Kiko-Wiko.” After you have written the text, draw pictures to add to the end of the story. Think about the questions below as you write your new ending. • How will ‘Kiko-Wiko react to the new ogre? • Will the narrator continue to talk with the characters, or will he only explain what happens in the fairy tale? • Will the fairy tale have a happy or sad ending? 712 UNIT 6 Why Do We Share Our Stories? READING WORKSHOP 3 • Predicting Skills Review Key Reading Skill: Predicting 8. Look back at the predictions you wrote in your Learner’s Notebook. Did you predict any of the events that happened in the story? Do you think that making predictions helped you learn more from the story? Explain. Key Literary Element: Cultural Allusions 9. Ogres are monsters in Northern European mythology. Do you think ogres are cultural allusions? Why or why not? Is an ogre a positive or negative symbol? Vocabulary Check 10. Give an example of a time when making faces or telling jokes would be considered disruptions. 11. Give an example of a situation in which it would be a bad idea to be whimsical. English Language Coach The following types of dialogue bubbles are supposed to communicate something about what is being said. Can you tell what each type is supposed to communicate? (You may discuss this question with a partner.) 12. NO! I WON’T! Grammar Link: Commas in Compound Sentences Put a comma before the coordinating conjunction in a compound sentence. • I would like to ski every day, but James prefers reading. You can leave out the comma when the two simple sentences, or independent clauses, are short (five words or less). • Skiing is fun and it is good exercise. Look Out! Do not put a comma before a coordinating conjunction that is joining compound words or phrases. Wrong: My hobbies are skiing, and skating. Right: My hobbies are skiing and skating. Grammar Practice Rewrite each sentence that needs a comma. Punctuate each sentence correctly. 14. ‘Kiko-Wiko walked up to the ogre. 15. The ogre raised his fists and growled at ‘KikoWiko. 16. The ogre was confused about his lines and ‘KikoWiko argued with the narrator. 17. The narrator quit but ‘Kiko-Wiko didn’t care. Writing Application Look at the Write About Your Reading assignment you completed. Join some of your sentences and write three compound sentences. 13. Go away, and don’t ever come back! Web Activities For eFlashcards, Selection Quick Checks, and other Web activities, go to www.glencoe.com. The Tale of ‘Kiko-Wiko 713 READING WORKSHOP 3 • Predicting Before You Read We Are All One Vocabulary Preview L au re n c e Ye p Meet the Author Laurence Yep grew up as a Chinese American kid in a mostly African American neighborhood in San Francisco. He liked to read fantasy and science fiction. The stories were about adapting to new situations and customs, which he did every day. See page R7 of the Author Files for more on Laurence Yep. Author Search For more about Laurence Yep, go to www.glencoe .com. Objectives (pp. 714–721) Reading Make predictions • Make connections from text to self Literature Identify literary elements: cultural allusions Vocabulary Understand dialogue scurrying (SKUR ee ing) v. running or moving quickly or excitedly; form of the verb scurry (p. 717) The peddler noticed ants scurrying across the ground. regretfully (rih GRET ful ee) adv. in a way that shows sorrow, distress, or disappointment (p. 718) Unable to help, the queen shook her head regretfully. omen (OH mun) n. a sign or event thought to predict good or bad fortune (p. 718) The peddler believed his dream was a good omen. frustration (frus TRAY shun) n. irritation at being kept from doing or achieving something (p. 720) The old man’s frustration nearly drove him to tears. Listen to Learn Work with a partner. As one of you reads each definition aloud, the other person identifies the vocabulary word. Take turns until you know each word well. English Language Coach Conventions of Dialogue Almost all stories use dialogue, conversation between characters. One convention, or way of doing things, that is used with dialogue is to begin a new paragraph whenever a different character speaks. “It might be dangerous to go,” said Mara. “But that’s silly!” replied Jeff. “Nothing bad could possibly happen. We’ll be completely safe.” “I’m not so sure.” “Oh, don’t be ridiculous!” Because of the convention, a reader knows that it is Mara, not Jeff, who says “I’m not so sure” and Jeff who says “Oh, don’t be ridiculous!” On Your Own In your Learner’s Notebook, rewrite the paragraph below, creating as many paragraphs as are needed. “One of the things I like about folktales,” said Lucy as she removed a thick book from the shelf, “is that they have happy endings.” “You know, you’re right,” said Jeff. “I’ve noticed that myself.” “The hero or heroine might have to struggle for quite a while,” Lucy continued, “but good always wins out in the end.” 714 UNIT 6 Why Do We Share Our Stories? Courtesy Scholastic Books READING WORKSHOP 3 • Predicting Skills Preview Get Ready to Read Key Reading Skill: Predicting Connect to the Reading In the folktale “We Are All One,” you will read about • A rich man whose money cannot buy a cure for the disease he has • A poor man who gives away as much as he can • The connection between all living beings • The importance of not giving up Think about what it would mean if we were all one, if every creature on the planet were equally important and connected. How would that point of view change your way of life? Would you be able to kill a mosquito? As you read, pay attention to the relationship between all the events and people in this story so that you can predict how they will affect each other. Write to Learn Use your imagination; your answers can involve magic. In your Learner’s Notebook, write • a reason a poor man might want to help a rich man • a way an insect might be able to help a person • an example of people and animals communicating with each other Key Literary Element: Cultural Allusions When a writer mentions, or alludes to, something important to a particular group of people, it is called a cultural allusion. As you read, notice characters and objects. Ask yourself: • Is this person or animal important to the story? • Does this object remind me of an object from my own culture? Whole-class Discussion Listed below are some cultural allusions. Talk about the ones with which you are familiar. What is the importance or meaning? Whole-class Discussion Talk about the meaning of the expression “We are all one.” Do you agree with any of these statements? • What happens to one person affects everyone. • Every person or thing is connected to every other one; we’re all part of one family. • Every person and thing is equally important. Build Background Chinese people who left their homeland to live in America brought with them many traditional stories. They retold these tales to remind themselves of life at home and to show how to survive in a strange and often hostile land. The tales were meant to teach children how a Chinese person should behave. “We Are All One” retells one of those stories. Set Purposes for Reading Read “We Are All One” to find out why storytellers told this ancient tale. Set Your Own Purpose What would you like to learn from the selection to help you answer the Big Question? Write your own purpose on the “We Are All One” page of Foldable 6. mountain • star • lion • beads • tree • moon eagle • cross • mask • shawl • pyramid Interactive Literary Elements Handbook To review or learn more about the literary elements, go to www.glencoe.com. Keep Moving Use these skills as you read the following selection. We Are All One 715 READING WORKSHOP 3 by Laurence Yep L ong ago there was a rich man with a disease in his eyes. For many years, the pain was so great that he could not sleep at night. He saw every doctor he could, but none of them could help him. “What good is all my money?” he groaned. Finally, he became so desperate that he sent criers1 through the city offering a reward to anyone who could cure him. Now in that city lived an old candy peddler. He would walk around with his baskets of candy, but he was so kindhearted that he gave away as much as he sold, so he was always poor. 1 1. Before modern forms of communication, criers gave people the news. Some criers were public officials who announced important events; others were hired by individuals. 716 UNIT 6 Why Do We Share Our Stories? Bridgeman Art Library Practice the Skills 1 Key Reading Skill Predicting What do you expect this folktale will be about? What will happen to the rich man? What will the peddler do? Base your answers on the story’s title and on the first three paragraphs. Write your predictions in your Learner’s Notebook. READING WORKSHOP 3 When the old peddler heard the announcement, he remembered something his mother had said. She had once told him about a magical herb that was good for the eyes. So he packed up his baskets and went back to the single tiny room in which his family lived. When he told his plan to his wife, she scolded him, “If you go off on this crazy hunt, how are we supposed to eat?” 2 Usually the peddler gave in to his wife, but this time he was stubborn. “There are two baskets of candy,” he said. “I’ll be back before they’re gone.” The next morning, as soon as the soldiers opened the gates, he was the first one to leave the city. He did not stop until he was deep inside the woods. As a boy, he had often wandered there. He had liked to pretend that the shadowy forest was a green sea and he was a fish slipping through the cool waters. As he examined the ground, he noticed ants scurrying about. On their backs were larvae2 like white grains of rice. A rock had fallen into a stream, so the water now spilled into the ant’s nest. 3 “We’re all one,” the kind-hearted peddler said. So he waded into the shallow stream and put the rock on the bank. Then with a sharp stick, he dug a shallow ditch that sent the rest of the water back into the stream. Without another thought about his good deed, he began to search through the forest. He looked everywhere; but as the day went on, he grew sleepy. “Ho-hum. I got up too early. I’ll take just a short nap,” he decided, and lay down in the shade of an old tree, where he fell right asleep. In his dreams, the old peddler found himself standing in the middle of a great city. Tall buildings rose high overhead. He couldn’t see the sky even when he tilted back his head. An escort of soldiers marched up to him with a loud clatter of their black lacquer armor. “Our queen wishes to see you,” the captain said. Practice the Skills 2 English Language Coach Dialogue One purpose of dialogue is to give information about characters. What can you tell about the candy seller’s wife from what she says here? 3 Key Literary Element Cultural Allusions In many cultures, ants stand for the positive values of hard work and determination. Anyone who has ever watched ants has seen how busy they seem. Why do you think the storyteller uses ants here? What message might they give to the peddler and to readers? 2. Larvae (LAR vee) is the plural form of larva. They’re insects at a very young, wormlike stage of development. Vocabulary scurrying (SKUR ee ing) v. running or moving quickly or excitedly We Are All One 717 READING WORKSHOP 3 The frightened peddler could only obey and let the fierce soldiers lead him into a shining palace. There, a woman with a high crown sat upon a tall throne. Trembling, the old peddler fell to his knees and touched his forehead against the floor. But the queen ordered him to stand. “Like the great Emperor Yü of long ago, you tamed the great flood. We are all one now. You have only to ask, and I or any of my people will come to your aid.” The old peddler cleared his throat. “I am looking for a certain herb. It will cure any disease of the eyes.” The queen shook her head regretfully. “I have never heard of that herb. But you will surely find it if you keep looking for it.” And then the old peddler woke. Sitting up, he saw that in his wanderings he had come back to the ants’ nest. It was there he had taken his nap. His dream city had been the ants’ nest itself. “This is a good omen,” he said to himself, and he began searching even harder. He was so determined to find the herb that he did not notice how time had passed. He was surprised when he saw how the light was fading. He looked all around then. There was no sight of his city—only strange hills. He realized then that he had searched so far he had gotten lost. 4 Night was coming fast and with it the cold. He rubbed his arms and hunted for shelter. In the twilight, he thought he could see the green tiles of a roof. He stumbled through the growing darkness until he reached a ruined temple. Weeds grew through cracks in the stones and most of the roof itself had fallen in. Still, the ruins would provide some protection. Vocabulary regretfully (rih GRET ful ee) adv. in a way that shows sorrow, distress, or disappointment omen (OH mun) n. a sign or event thought to predict good or bad fortune 718 UNIT 6 Why Do We Share Our Stories? CORBIS Practice the Skills Detail of Eight Views at the Confluence of the Hsiao and Hsiang Rivers. Zosan. 4 Key Reading Skill Predicting Why does the peddler think that he will find the herb? Will he find his way home? Write your predictions in your Learner’s Notebook. READING WORKSHOP 3 As he started inside, he saw a centipede with bright orange skin and red tufts of fur along its back. Yellow dots covered its sides like a dozen tiny eyes. It was also rushing into the temple as fast as it could, but there was a bird swooping down toward it. The old peddler waved his arms and Visual Vocabulary A centipede is a long, shouted, scaring the bird away. Then he put flat insect with many down his palm in front of the insect. “We pairs of legs. The prefix centi- means are all one, you and I.” The many feet either “hundred” or tickled his skin as the centipede climbed “hundredth part of.” The root word pede onto his hand. comes from the Latin Inside the temple, he gathered dried word for “foot.” leaves and found old sticks of wood and soon he had a fire going. The peddler even picked some fresh leaves for the centipede from a bush near the temple doorway. “I may have to go hungry, but you don’t have to, friend.” Stretching out beside the fire, the old peddler pillowed his head on his arms. He was so tired that he soon fell asleep, but even in his sleep he dreamed he was still searching in the woods. Suddenly he thought he heard footsteps near his head. He woke instantly and looked about, but he only saw the brightly colored centipede. “Was it you, friend?” The old peddler chuckled and, lying down, he closed his eyes again. “I must be getting nervous.” “We are one, you and I,” a voice said faintly—as if from a long distance. “If you go south, you will find a pine tree with two trunks. By its roots, you will find a magic bead. A cousin of mine spat on it years ago. Dissolve that bead in wine and tell the rich man to drink it if he wants to heal his eyes.” The old peddler trembled when he heard the voice, because he realized that the centipede was magical. He wanted to run from the temple, but he couldn’t even get up. It was as if he were glued to the floor. 5 But then the old peddler reasoned with himself: If the centipede had wanted to hurt me, it could have long ago. Instead, it seems to want to help me. So the old peddler stayed where he was, but he did not dare open his eyes. When the first sunlight fell through the roof, he raised one eyelid cautiously. There was no sign of the centipede. He sat up and looked around, but the magical Practice the Skills 5 English Language Coach Dialogue How can you tell that, this time, it is not the peddler who says “We are one, you and I”? Whose voice does the peddler hear? Why do you think this character begins by repeating what the peddler said earlier? We Are All One 719 C. Allan Morgan/Peter Arnold, Inc. READING WORKSHOP 3 centipede was gone. He followed the centipede’s instructions when he left the temple. Traveling south, he kept a sharp eye out for the pine tree with two trunks. He walked until late in the afternoon, but all he saw were normal pine trees. 6 Wearily he sat down and sighed. Even if he found the pine tree, he couldn’t be sure that he would find the bead. Someone else might even have discovered it a long time ago. 7 But something made him look a little longer. Old Man Seated with a Servant Reading, 18th century. Artist unknown. Gouache on paper. Just when he was Nottingham City Museums and Galleries, Great thinking about turning Britain. back, he saw the odd tree. Somehow his tired legs managed to carry him over to the tree, and he got down on his knees. But the ground was covered with pine needles and his old eyes were too weak. The old peddler could have wept with frustration, and then he remembered the ants. 8 He began to call, “Ants, ants, we are all one.” Almost immediately, thousands of ants came boiling out of nowhere. Delighted, the old man held up his fingers. “I’m looking for a bead. It might be very tiny.” Then, careful not to crush any of his little helpers, the old man sat down to wait. In no time, the ants reappeared with a tiny bead. With trembling fingers, the old man took the bead Vocabulary frustration (frus TRAY shun) n. irritation at being kept from doing or achieving something 720 UNIT 6 Why Do We Share Our Stories? Bridgeman Art Library Practice the Skills 6 Key Literary Element Cultural Allusions The pine tree is an allusion to eternal life and health because it stays green year round, even in the snow. How might the pine tree relate to the way the peddler feels? 7 Key Reading Skill Predicting Does the peddler’s conversation with the centipede make it seem more likely or less likely that he will find the herb? Why? Write your prediction in your Learner’s Notebook. 8 Reviewing Skills Comparing and Contrasting What part of the description of the peddler here reminds you of the rich man? READING WORKSHOP 3 from them and examined it. It was colored orange and looked as if it had yellow eyes on the sides. There was nothing very special about the bead, but the old peddler treated it like a fine jewel. Putting the bead into his pouch, the old peddler bowed his head. “I thank you and I thank your queen,” the old man said. After the ants disappeared among the pine needles, he made his way out of the woods. The next day, he reached the house of the rich man. However, he was so poor and ragged that the gatekeeper only laughed at him. “How could an old beggar like you help my master?” The old peddler tried to argue. “Beggar or rich man, we are all one.” But it so happened that the rich man was passing by the gates. He went over to the old peddler. “I said anyone could see me. But it’ll mean a stick across your back if you’re wasting my time.” The old peddler took out the pouch. “Dissolve this bead in some wine and drink it down.” Then, turning the pouch upside down, he shook the tiny bead onto his palm and handed it to the rich man. The rich man immediately called for a cup of wine. Dropping the bead into the wine, he waited a moment and then drank it down. Instantly the pain vanished. Shortly after that, his eyes healed. The rich man was so happy and grateful that he doubled the reward. And the kindly old peddler and his family lived comfortably for the rest of their lives. 9 ❍ Practice the Skills 9 Why do you think Chinese parents shared this story from their homeland with their children who were born in America? What advice does the story offer? Write your answer on the “We Are All One” page of Foldable 6. Your response will help you complete the Unit Challenge later. We Are All One 721 READING WORKSHOP 3 • Predicting After You Read We Are All One Answering the 1. Why do you think telling this story is a part of Chinese culture? 2. Recall What is the peddler’s first act of kindness toward another creature? T IP Right There 3. Scan Glance quickly through the story to find each person and creature the peddler talks to throughout the story. Name each one. T IP Think and Search Critical Thinking 4. Infer What do the rich man’s first words to the peddler tell you about his personality? Do you think that the disease in his eyes is the reason for his bad behavior? T IP Think and Search 5. Analyze Do you think the peddler’s behavior will change now that he is rich? Explain. T IP Author and Me 6. Evaluate Did the story present lifelike characters, an interesting plot, and a good ending? Why or why not? T IP Author and Me Talk About Your Reading Objectives (pp. 722–723) Reading Make predictions • Make connections from text to self Literature Identify literary elements: cultural allusions Vocabulary Understand dialogue Grammar Use punctuation: commas in complex sentences Literature Groups The theme of much popular literature is a quest, a search for some object or an attempt to reach some goal. What is the quest in “We Are All One”? In other words, what is the peddler searching for or trying to achieve? With your group, share ideas about other stories you know that are based on a quest. Write to Learn Think about the quest stories your group discussed. Besides the quest, what else do these stories have in common? Write your thoughts in a short paragraph. 722 UNIT 6 Why Do We Share Our Stories? CORBIS READING WORKSHOP 3 • Predicting Skills Review Key Reading Skill: Predicting 7. You were asked to write down three predictions as you read the story. Which of your predictions turned out to be right? Which were wrong? Key Literary Element: Cultural Allusions 8. In Chinese tradition, the pine tree stands for health and eternal life. Does it seem right that the peddler is looking for a pine tree? Explain your answer. Reviewing Skills: Comparing and Contrasting 9. Compare and contrast the peddler’s dream city to the ants’ real city. What is the same about them? What is different about them? Vocabulary Check Answer each of the following questions. 10. Which is the best synonym for scurrying? • stomping • whizzing • running 11. Which of the following is supposed to be said regretfully? • an apology • an invitation • a joke 12. What do people think an omen can tell them about? • the present • the past • the future 13. Which of the following might a person do to show frustration? • clap wildly • throw something • shrug 14. English Language Coach Think back to the dialogue in the story. Did you ever have trouble figuring out who was talking? What helped you know? Grammar Link: Commas in Complex Sentences When a complex sentence begins with a dependent clause, put a comma after the clause. • If you have questions, you can call me. dependent independent Watch Out! Put a comma after the dependent clause, not after the subordinating conjunction. Wrong: Although, I studied I did not get an “A.“ Right: Although I studied, I did not get an “A.“ When a complex sentence begins with an independent clause, the comma is usually omitted. Compare the following complex sentences: Dependent first—comma: Because I am the oldest kid in my family, I often have to baby-sit. Independent first—no comma: I often have to babysit because I am the oldest kid in my family. Grammar Practice On a separate piece of paper, copy the complex sentences below. Add or leave out a comma in any sentence that is punctuated wrong. (Not all sentences are punctuated wrong.) 15. Eduardo has loved cars, since he was a child. 16. When he was little he played with toy cars. 17. Eduardo would own a real car if he could. 18. When he is sixteen, he will go for his license. Web Activities For eFlashcards, Selection Quick Checks, and other Web activities, go to www.glencoe.com. We Are All One 723 WRITING WORKSHOP PART 2 Modern Folktale Revising, Editing, and Presenting ASSIGNMENT Rewrite a folktale in the present Purpose: To tell a story using all of the elements of a folktale Audience: You, your teacher, and your classmates Revising Rubric Your revised folktale should have • well-developed characters • dialogue • a theme • a third-person point of view • correct spelling, grammar, usage, and mechanics Now it’s time to make any changes you want to make to your folktale. That’s right. You can change anything! You can even rewrite entire sections if you’re not happy with them. When you’re finished revising, you’ll prepare your folktale to share it with others. Also, you’ll keep a copy of it in a writing portfolio so that you and your teacher can evaluate your writing progress over time. Revising Make It Better Parts of your story that seemed perfectly clear when you were writing your draft may sound confusing to you now. Don’t worry. Now’s your chance to experiment with changes. 1. Read the latest version of your draft. Write down any thoughts you have or changes you want to make in the margins of your paper. You can pause and make the changes as you read, or you can just make notes about what you want to change and go back later. be mciofrice spe “Where are you going?”asked Dan. 2. Check your draft against the Revising Rubric to make sure you have all of the elements that you need to have in your folktale. Ask yourself questions like these. Then make any necessary changes. • Is the third-person point of view consistent throughout the story? • Will readers feel like they “know” my characters? Objectives (pp. 724–729) Writing Revise writing for key elements, style, and word choice Grammar Write compound and complex sentences Listening, Speaking, and Viewing Present folktale • Use appropriate expressions and gestures • Maintain effective eye contact and posture • Ask for feedback • Is the dialogue interesting and descriptive? • Is the theme well-developed? 3. Don’t bore your readers! Mix up the way you start your sentences and use different types of sentences. If most of your sentences start with the same word or words, try starting some of your sentences with an adjective or an adverb. If you use a lot of simple sentences, combine some sentences to make them compound or complex sentences. 724 UNIT 6 Why Do We Share Our Stories? WRITING WORKSHOP PART 2 Editing Finish It Up You’ve done a lot of work writing your folktale. Now clean up your writing so readers can focus on your story instead of your mistakes. Writing Models For models and other writing activities, go to www.glencoe.com. Guide Your Readers Remember that a paragraph is a group of sentences that relate to one main idea. Your use of paragraphs should guide readers through your writing. When you write expository texts such as summaries and reports, you often have a topic sentence followed by supporting details. You start a new paragraph when you change topics. Sometimes it’s tricky to know where to start a new paragraph when you’re writing a story. It can be hard to tell exactly when you’re changing topics, and you often don’t use a clear topic sentence and supporting details structure. Here are some good reasons to start a new paragraph in a story. The narrator switches to a new idea (such as from description to action or from description of one character to description of another). The time or place changes. The action switches from one character to another. You are quoting dialogue and the speaker changes.* *In truth, this last reason to start a new paragraph is not optional. When you are using dialogue, you must start a new paragraph every time the speaker changes. Here’s an example from “Brer Rabbit and Brer Lion,” retold by Julius Lester. “What’s your hurry, Brer Rabbit?” “Run, Brer Lion! There’s a hurricane coming.” Brer Lion got scared. “I’m too heavy to run, Brer Rabbit. What am I going to do?” “Lay down, Brer Lion. Lay down! Get close to the ground!” Writing Tip The narrator may not always say who is talking, but readers can keep track by looking at the paragraphing. (In the dialogue above, readers can also figure out who is talking by looking at the direct address in the dialogue.) Look over your draft and make sure that your paragraphing guides your readers through your story. Conventions Be sure to punctuate your dialogue correctly so readers know exactly what words the character says. If you need a reminder on how to punctuate dialogue, see page R36. Writing Workshop Part 2 Modern Folktale 725 WRITING WORKSHOP PART 2 Applying Good Writing Traits Presentation How Do I Do It? The way you present, or share, the final version of your writing makes a difference. Your ideas and writing could be fantastic, but if your presentation is poor, few people will want to read your writing. • If you write your final folktale by hand, make sure to form the letters clearly and leave the same amount of space between words. If you type your folktale on a computer, make sure to choose a readable font and double-space the lines of text. • Leave a big enough margin (space) around your writing so that the page does not look sloppy or cramped. • Include a title and page numbers so that readers can follow your organization. • If you enjoy drawing, you might include one or more illustrations. You could, instead, use illustrations from other sources. (Look at “We Are All One” and “Aunty Misery” for ideas if you want to illustrate your folktale.) What Is Presentation? Presentation is the way words and design elements such as titles and illustrations look on a page. When you are making notes or jotting down ideas, it does not matter much what your writing looks like. It’s just for you at that point. But when you are preparing any final assignment, you want to make it look polished and professional. Why Is Presentation Important in My Writing? • A neat, clean presentation makes your work more inviting. • Readers will take your writing more seriously if it looks like you put time into the presentation. • A thoughtful presentation makes your work easy to understand and is more likely to get your ideas across. Write to Learn After you edit your writing, follow the guidelines above to make a clean, neat draft of your folktale. Analyzing Cartoons It only takes the guy on the left a quick look to see that his friend’s report is better than usual. He knows that good presentation makes any written assignment more inviting. © 20 05 Zits Part nership, distribut ed by K ing Feat ures Syndica te 726 UNIT 6 Why Do We Share Our Stories? Randy Glasbergen WRITING WORKSHOP PART 2 Editing Checklist For your final copy, read your folktale aloud and use the Editing Checklist to help you spot errors. Use the proofreading symbols in the chart on page R19 to mark needed corrections. ✓ Sentences are complete. There are no fragments or run-ons. ❑ ✓ Compound and complex sentences are correctly punctuated. ❑ ✓ Spelling and capitalization are correct (Remember that the first word in ❑ each line of dialogue should be capitalized). ✓ ❑ Quotation marks and end punctuation are in the correct places. ✓ English conventions are broken only to create a specific effect. ❑ Presenting Show It Off You’ve probably made a lot of changes to your folktale, so now make a clean copy of it. If you’re writing by hand, copy your folktale neatly in print or cursive on a separate piece of paper. If you’re using a computer, make your changes and corrections and print a clean copy. Follow these steps to make a class binder called Folktales of Our Times. 1. Make a cover for your story. On a clean sheet of paper, neatly write the name of your folktale in fancy lettering. 2. Add illustrations that represent the action or the theme of your story. You may also cut and paste images from magazines or images downloaded from your computer. 3. If you want, you can also decorate the pages of your story or add pages with designs and images. 4. Three-hole punch your papers and put them all in a binder. You may want to work with your classmates to design a cover for the binder, too. Active Writing Model The beginning of the folktale starts right away with the action of the story. The writer develops Jack’s character by showing that he has a wild imagination. Writing Tip Spelling Check your writing against a list of commonly confused or misused words. Common mistakes include their/they’re/there, its/it’s, and your/you’re. Writing Tip Punctuation Place a question mark or exclamation point inside quotation marks when it punctuates the quotation and outside when it punctuates the main sentence. Writing Tip Handwriting The slant of your writing should be consistent, whether you are printing or writing in cursive. Writer’s Model Sir John J. Rabbit strolled across the park. He had just come from tea with the Queen and the other knights. Well, he hadn’t actually been inside the palace. Or seen the Queen. Or drunk a single sip of tea. But, in his imagination, it had been a very nice tea party. He only imagined being a knight too. (To everyone else, he was Jack.) Being “Sir John” was just much more interesting. Writing Workshop Part 2 Modern Folktale 727 WRITING WORKSHOP PART 2 Active Writing Model The writer uses third-person point of view here and throughout the story. The words “me,” “my,” and “I” appear only in dialogue. This dialogue gives clues to Jack’s character and lets readers “hear” how he speaks. The writer plays with the conventions of writing to create a specific effect. Here and elsewhere, the writer uses an incomplete sentence to show that one character interrupted the other. The setting is vague, but the park, the street, and the taxi let readers know that the story takes place in a city. The theme is stated indirectly, through the events of the folktale. Writer’s Model As he was about to cross the street, a few leaves blew into his face. “My word!” he said, brushing them away. “Was that a cyclone? How interesting!” Now, Jack had never seen or heard or been in a cyclone. He’d never even been anyplace where there’d ever been a cyclone. It was just such an interesting word. Suddenly, he bumped into someone. It was Duke Lion. (He wasn’t a real duke. He had as much royal blood as a turnip has, and his name was Dan D. Lion.) “Oh, my dear sir,” said Jack, “forgive me. The cyclone, you see—” “Cyclone? Cyclone! Cyclone!” For such a big, strong beast, Dan tended to be rather nervous. “Where’s the cyclone? What shall I do? Where can I hide? How—” “Relax, dear fellow,” said Jack. “You look as though you’re going to faint. Lie down on the ground.” “The wind might blow me away!” “Maybe if you held on to that tree…” Jack suggested. “Are there ants?” asked Dan. “Ants make me jumpy.” Jack thought a bit longer. “Why don’t I tie you to the Queen’s water fountain?” Jack asked, as he pointed to a taxicab parked in the street. Dan was confused, but he was running out of time so he let Jack tie him to the taxi. After being firmly tied to the taxi for a few minutes, however, he grew impatient. “Where’s the cyclone? And,” he went on, “what is a cyclone?” Sir John J. Rabbit didn’t hear the question. In fact, he barely noticed the now-distant roar of Dan D. Lion. The taxicab had driven away, and the knight was lost in thought. “I wonder when the Queen’s enemies will strike next. We knights must protect her.” 728 UNIT 6 Why Do We Share Our Stories? WRITING WORKSHOP PART 2 Listening, Speaking, and Viewing Storytelling Storytelling is a very old tradition and a great way to share a tale. What Is Storytelling? Storytelling is just what it looks like—telling a story. The term storyteller refers to a person who passes down traditional stories or who creates and tells new stories. Why Is Storytelling Important? Stories are entertaining, but they can also teach you about yourself, others, and the world. They can help you figure out who you are and who you want to be. And you can learn about others’ experiences through stories. How Do I Tell a Story? Whether you’re spinning a tale you know by heart or telling a story you’ve written yourself, the following guidelines can help. • Practice, practice, practice! Learn your story well enough so you don’t have to read it word-forword. Practice in front of a mirror or in front of a friend who can provide feedback. • Stand or sit with good posture; it helps your voice to carry. • Look at your listeners. When they return your gaze, you have their attention. Maintain eye contact as you speak. • Change positions from time to time so that you don’t get tense. • Vary your volume and pacing to fit the story. • Keep checking your listeners’ responses. If they fidget, ask yourself why. • Change your voice, posture, and gestures to fit your characters. • Use silence. A well-timed pause is powerful. When your story’s action peaks, pause for a beat. Let your listeners feel the suspense. Share Your Story Tell your folktale to a small group of listeners. Practice your story enough so you can maintain eye contact with your audience. Use the guidelines above to really bring your audience into your story. When you’re finished, ask the listeners to comment, using these questions as guides: • Which of my techniques were especially effective? • What is one change that might improve my storytelling? Analyzing Cartoons Before TVs, CDs, DVDs, and video games, storytelling was what entertainment was all about. Today, storytelling links us to other places, people, and events—past and present, far and near. What? You’ve never heard a story—or told one? RSAL PR ission of UNIVE ted with Perm tions. Reprin duc Pro on Lynn Johnst RSE © 2004 OR FOR WO FOR BETTER ed. erv res ts righ All TE. ESS SYNDICA Writing Workshop Part 2 Modern Folktale 729 Universal Press Syndicate READING WORKSHOP 4 Skills Focus You will practice using these skills when you read the following selections: • “Voices—and Stories—from the Past,” p. 734 • “Aunty Misery,” p. 742 Reading • Analyzing Literature • Recognizing and understanding dialect • Understanding what dialect contributes to a nonfiction selection Vocabulary • Distinguishing between literal and metaphoric meanings • Academic Vocabulary: analyzing Skill Lesson Analyzing Learn It! What Is It? Analyzing is looking at separate parts of a thing so that you can better understand the whole thing. When you read, you analyze the different parts of a selection in order to understand the whole selection. For example, to analyze • characters, think about what they think, do, and say • plot, think about the problem or conflict, the events, the climax, and the resolution • an informational essay, think about main ideas and supporting details Analyzing Art Writing/Grammar This man looks deep in thought. He may be analyzing a problem. When you analyze something, you look at its separate parts to help you understand the entire thing. • Identifying and correcting run-on sentences Objectives (pp. 730–731) Reading Analyze text Academic Vocabulary analyzing (AN uh ly zing) n. the act of taking something apart to examine the separate pieces 730 UNIT 6 Images.com/CORBIS READING WORKSHOP 4 • Analyzing Why Is It Important? Analyzing helps you look carefully at a piece of writing. When you analyze a selection, you’ll learn the author’s purpose for writing. You’ll figure out what a character is really like. Analyzing can also help you understand characters’ actions. How Do I Do It? Think about what the author says through characters, setting, and plot, particularly when analyzing fiction. Also look at the characters’ values, and the author’s style to figure out the story’s theme. To analyze informational text, look at the main ideas and how the piece is organized. Below are points from a fictional story. • Crystal, Sara, and May are sisters. • They each have different interests and groups of friends. Crystal loves theater, Sara is a cheerleader, and May is in the National Honor Society. • Crystal is falsely accused of cheating on a test. The PTA wants to make an example of her, although she did nothing wrong. • Sara and May rally around their sister. Three very different groups of teenagers come together to protest unfair treatment. Study Central Visit www.glencoe .com and click on Study Central to review analyzing. Three different sisters—what kind of girls are they? Crystal has to be smart to learn all those lines, so why would she cheat? At least her sisters believe her. They all must be pretty popular to be able to get all their friends to protest for Crystal. I guess the main thing is even though they’re different, they’re still sisters. Practice It! Look back at a story or article you have already read from this book. Choose a paragraph or two. Look at the characters’ actions and what they say and do in certain situations. Decide what the author may want you to understand. Use It! As you read, remember how you examined parts of other selections in order to get a better understanding of the whole work. Reading Workshop 4 Analyzing 731 John Evans READING WORKSHOP 4 • Analyzing Before You Read Meet the Author Kathryn Satterfield is the editor of Time for Kids. She shares stories because she likes “the idea of being able to reach out to a lot of people at once.” Author Search For more about Kathryn Satterfield, go to www.glencoe.com. Voices—and Stories— from the Past Vocabulary Preview emancipation (ih man suh PAY shun) n. the act of freeing or being freed, as from slavery (p. 734) Enslaved people dreamed of emancipation and a new life. contemporary (KUN tem puh rair ee) adj. living now; of the present time (p. 736) The American Memory Web site is a great resource for contemporary Americans. illuminate (ih LOO muh nayt) v. to light up; make clear (p. 736) The stories on the Web site illuminate the life of slavery. Write to Learn For each vocabulary word, write a sentence using the word correctly. English Language Coach Literal and Metaphoric Word Meanings A metaphor is a way of describing something by saying it is something else. The two things are actually very different, but they are similar in some way. For example, “Rex is a bear of a man” is a metaphor. It uses the word bear to suggest that Rex is big and powerful. Most words started out with just one meaning and gradually developed more. Originally, a rat was only an animal. It came to also have the meaning “one who is disloyal” because it was so often used metaphorically to mean this. Here is a word you will read in “Voices—and Stories—from the Past.” Early Meaning low place, dip depression Metaphoric Meaning low place in the economy Objectives (pp. 732–737) Reading Analyze text • Make connections from text to self Literature Identify literary elements: dialect Vocabulary Distinguish literal from metaphoric meanings Partner Talk The underlined words below use meanings that developed metaphorically over time. Work with a partner to decide what each word probably means. 1. What he said was full of poisonous lies. 2. Her response to my question was icy. 732 UNIT 6 Why Do We Share Our Stories? READING WORKSHOP 4 • Analyzing Skills Preview Get Ready to Read Key Reading Skill: Analyzing Connect to the Reading Before you read “Voices—and Stories—from the Past,” think about the purpose of the parts of an informational article: • What are the main ideas in the introduction, body, and conclusion? • What information do the headings provide? Reflect on things you have learned about slavery through books and television. History doesn’t capture what slavery was really like—only those who were there can truly tell the story. How would you feel to be enslaved? How would it feel to taste freedom? Write to Learn Use your Learner’s Notebook to jot down what you already know about the parts of informational articles. Keep your ideas in mind as you read the selection. Key Literary Element: Dialect Dialect is the language spoken in one area or by one group of people. When we read dialect, it is different from words we usually see in print. Words are spelled differently—they are spelled according to how the speaker pronounces them. The grammar is usually in non-standard English. Some forms of dialect even have their own vocabulary. Some of the quotations you read in “Voices—and Stories—from the Past” are written in the dialects that they were spoken in. Use this tip to understand and appreciate dialect: • Try to hear each speaker. How is the voice different from your own? List-Group-Label Think of the different regions of the United States and try to list the dialects. Do you have cousins in the South? Do they sound different from you? What about a friend from the East Coast? As a class, share your examples. Group the examples and label them with the names of places or groups of speakers. Interactive Literary Elements Handbook To review or learn more about the literary elements, go to www.glencoe.com. List Ideas With a small group, predict what you may hear in the voices and words of former enslaved Americans. Build Background This article is about a remarkable collection of voices telling stories of what it was like to live in slavery. • The Library of Congress is our national library. It contains the history of the United States in many forms of media. • Finding the important pieces of African American history can sometimes be difficult. Often, museums and archives in the past did not think this history was important. • The people who conducted these interviews tried to record the spoken dialect of the formerly enslaved people as closely as possible. Set Purposes for Reading Read “Voices—and Stories—from the Past” to learn what life was like for some enslaved persons in America. Set Your Own Purpose What would you like to learn from the selection to help you answer the Big Question? Write your own purpose on the “Voices— and Stories—from the Past” page of Foldable 6. Keep Moving Use these skills as you read the following selection. Voices—and Stories—from the Past 733 Library of Congress READING WORKSHOP 4 History, as told by the people who lived it By KATHRYN SATTERFIELD T SARAH ASHLEY was 93 when she recalled her days on a Texas plantation. he American Civil War (1861–1865) freed some 4 million people from slavery. Every one of these people had a story to tell about their lives. Now, two Slave Narratives collections at the Library of Congress give people around the world a chance to hear and read some of those stories. 1 In January 2004, the Library of Congress released a collection of audio recordings, Voices from the Days of Slavery. For the first time, 23 recordings of interviews with formerly enslaved African Americans—as told in their own voices— can be heard online at the Library of Congress’s American Memory website. Speaking at least 60 years after their emancipation, the African American storytellers discuss their experiences as enslaved people. They also tell about their lives as free men and women. Written transcripts are provided to help listeners follow along. Visitors to the site can hear people like Charlie Smith recall coming from Africa as an enslaved boy and working on a ranch in Texas. Vocabulary emancipation (ih man suh PAY shun) n. the act of freeing or being freed, as from slavery 734 UNIT 6 Why Do We Share Our Stories? Library of Congress 1 Reviewing Skills Predicting Quickly skim the headings in this article. What type of information do you predict you will read about the formerly enslaved people? The audio recordings on the website were made between 1932 and 1975. Language and folklore experts and others working to preserve American history conducted the interviews in nine southern states. Isom Moseley was just a boy at the time of emancipation, but he recalls that things were slow to change. “It was a JAMES GREEN, shown here in 1937, told of being bought for $800. year before the folks knowed they was free,” he says. Michael Taft, the head of the library’s archive1 of folk culture, says the recordings help reveal something that written stories cannot. “The power of hearing someone speak is so much greater than reading something from the page,” Taft says. “It’s how something is said—the dialect, the low pitches, the pauses—that helps tell the story.” 2 2 Key Reading Skill Analyzing Here, Taft analyzes the things that make hearing someone speak powerful. What advantages are there to reading someone’s words instead of hearing them? 3 English Language Coach Literal and Metaphoric Word Meanings Has the writer used the early meaning of depression here or the metaphoric meaning that developed over time? How do you know? The Narratives in Print If you want to read stories of formerly enslaved African Americans, the Library of Congress’s American Memory website also offers print versions of their stories. During the Great Depression of the 1930s, the federal government hired out-of-work writers to interview and record the experiences and opinions of everyday people. As part of this project, thousands of formerly enslaved people in 17 states were interviewed. 3 One result of these oral history interviews is the Born in Slavery collection, a set of 2,300 autobiographical documents. The interviewers—most of whom were white—made an effort to capture in writing the speech patterns of the men and women with whom they spoke. 1. An archive (AR kyv) is a collection of items kept safe for the future in a special place. Library of Congress Library of Congress READING WORKSHOP 4 JENNY PROCTOR began working in the cotton fields when she was 10. She was 87 when she shared her memories of slavery. Voices—and Stories—from the Past 735 (l r)Library of Congress READING WORKSHOP 4 Courtesy Polk County Democrat These interviews gave formerly enslaved African Americans a chance to share their memories of life in bondage. For contemporary Americans, the audio and print versions of the Slave Narratives provide historical accounts of what it was like to be enslaved in the United States. The narratives reflect the time and place at which they were created. They illuminate a world that is important for all Americans to explore. Following are excerpts from the Slave Narratives collections. 4 Masters, the Big House, and Learning Enslaved people started working at a very early age: CHARLIE SMITH spoke to interviewers in 1975. many began their labors in the master’s house, where they served as playmates for white children. Despite this closeness, African American and white children could not attend school 4 English Language Coach together. In fact, in most states it was against the law for enslaved Literal and Metaphoric Word people to be educated. “My earliest recollection is the day my old boss presented me to his son, Joe, as his property. I was about 5 years old, and my new master was only 2. . . . No, sir, I never went into books. I used to handle a big dictionary three times a day, but it was only to put it on a chair so my young master could sit up higher at the table. I never went to school. I learned to talk pretty good by associating with my masters in their big house.” —Martin Jackson, Texas “I remember quite well how those poor little children used to have to eat. They were fed in boxes and troughs, under the house. They were fed cornmeal mush and beans. When this was poured into their box they would gather around it the same as we see pigs, horses, and cattle gather around troughs today.” —Octavia George, Oklahoma “None of us was ’lowed [allowed] to see a book or try to learn. Dey say we git smarter den dey was if we learn anything, but we slips around and gits hold of dat Webster’s Vocabulary contemporary (KUN tem puh rair ee) adj. living now; of the present time illuminate (ih LOO muh nayt) v. to light up; make clear 736 UNIT 6 Why Do We Share Our Stories? Courtesy Polk County Democrat Meanings Do you think reflect is being used with its earliest meaning, here, or one that developed metaphorically? Why? READING WORKSHOP 4 old blue-back speller, and we hides it ’til way in de night, and den we lights a little pine torch . . . and studies dat spellin’ book. We learn it too.” —Jenny Proctor, Texas Work By age 12, most children worked in the fields, where they grew crops like tobacco, rice, and cotton. Enslaved people generally worked six days a week, from sunrise to sunset. “Bells and horn! Bells for dis, and horns for dat! All we knowed was go and come by de bells and horns! Old ram horn blow to send us all to de field. We all line up, about 75 field [workers], and go by de tool shed and git our hoes, or maybe go hitch up de mules to de plows.” —Charley Williams, Arkansas “I used to have to pick cotton, and sometime I pick 300 pound and tote it a mile to de cotton house. Some pick 300 to 800 pound cotton and have to tote de bag de whole mile to de gin2. Iffen dey didn’t do dey work, dey git whip till dey have blister on ’em. . . . I never git whip, ’cause I allus git my 300 pound.” 5 —Sarah Ashley, Texas 5 Dialect This page includes good examples of dialect. Which words are different from words you might write or say? Slave Family Life Approximately one in three enslaved families was split apart. Onefifth of all enslaved children were separated from their parents. “I never knowed my age till after de war . . . and then marster gits out a big book, and it shows I’s 25 year old. It shows I’s 12 when I is bought and $800 is paid for me. . . . My mammy was owned by John Williams in Petersburg, in Virginia, and I come born to her on dat plantation. . . . Then, one day along come a Friday, and that a unlucky star day, and I playin’ round de house, and Marster Williams come up and say, ‘Delis will you ’low Jim walk down de street with me?’ My mammy say, ‘All right, Jim, you be a good boy,’ and dat de las’ time I ever heard her speak, or ever see her.” 6 —James Green, Texas —Updated 2005, from TIME for Kids, February 6, 2004 2. The word gin (jin) refers to the cotton gin, a machine that removes sticky seeds from cotton. The invention of the cotton gin led to a great increase in the number of enslaved persons in America because cotton then became highly profitable. Key Literary Element 6 Why is it important that the stories of formerly enslaved people be shared? Write your answer on the “Voices—and Stories—from the Past” page of Foldable 6. Your response will help you complete the Unit Challenge later. Voices—and Stories—from the Past 737 READING WORKSHOP 4 • Analyzing After You Read Voices—and Stories— from the Past Answering the 1. Why do you think these people wanted to share their stories? Explain your answers with details from the article. 2. Recall Who conducted these interviews? T IP Right There 3. Summarize In two or three sentences, describe the work and family life of enslaved people. Base your summary on facts from this article. T IP Author and Me Critical Thinking 4. Compare and Contrast The Library of Congress released two collections: Voices from the Days of Slavery and Born in Slavery. List three ways in which these two collections are alike and/or different. T IP Think and Search 5. Evaluate Slavery officially ended in 1863. What do you think would have happened if we had waited any longer to interview former slaves? T IP On My Own Write About Your Reading Make a cluster diagram, spider web, or other graphic organizer to show the main parts of this article and what you learned about slavery from reading the article. Objectives (pp. 738–739) Reading Analyze text Literature Identify literary elements: dialect Vocabulary Distinguish literal from metaphoric meanings Writing Create a graphic organizer Grammar Identify run-on sentences Your organizer should show facts about how enslaved people lived. Include details about topics such as these: • Plantation work • Education • Family life and life on the plantation Share your work with a partner. Talk about the best ways to combine your work into one organizer that shows the most important ideas. 738 UNIT 6 Why Do We Share Our Stories? Library of Congress READING WORKSHOP 4 • Analyzing Skills Review Key Reading Skill: Analyzing 6. You did some reading and thinking before you read “Voices—and Stories—from the Past.” Decide how helpful each activity listed below was to you by rating it as very helpful, helpful, or not helpful. Explain why. Look back at page 733 if you need help recalling the activity. • Reviewing the parts of an informational article • Reading the facts in Build Background • Setting a purpose for your reading Key Literary Element: Dialect 7. Write one example of dialect in this article. 8. How does dialect help you experience the voices from the past? Reviewing Skills: Predicting 9. Explain what you were able to correctly predict about what you read in this selection by using the title, illustrations, or headings. Grammar Link: Run-on Sentences Do not run two or more sentences together. This mistake is called a run-on sentence. Run-on: Randi plays her guitar it relaxes her. It’s also incorrect to separate sentences by putting just a comma between them. Wrong: Randi plays her guitar, it relaxes her. To fix a run-on sentence, separate the sentences with a period. Or put a comma and a coordinating conjunction between the run-together sentences. Period: Randi plays her guitar. It relaxes her. (,) and coordinating conjunction: Randi plays her guitar, and it relaxes her. You can also fix a run-on sentence by adding a subordinating conjunction to one of the clauses. Subordinating conjunction: Randi plays her guitar because it relaxes her. Vocabulary Check For 10–12, copy the vocabulary words. After each word, add its correct meaning. 10. emancipation current or present 11. contemporary to shed light on 12. illuminate the act of granting freedom 13. Academic Vocabulary What do you think it was like for a person to eat from a feeding trough or not to be able to learn to read? Analyze and explain. 14. English Language Coach Charley Williams describes the bells and horns that sent workers to their plows. Given what you know about plows and the work involved in using them, what do you think plow means in this statement: “I can’t go to bed until I plow through this homework”? Grammar Practice On another piece of paper, copy and fix the following run-on sentence two different ways. It takes practice to play well Randi doesn’t mind. Web Activities For eFlashcards, Selection Quick Checks, and other Web activities, go to www.glencoe.com. Voices—and Stories—from the Past 739 READING WORKSHOP 4 • Analyzing Before You Read Aunty Misery Vocabulary Preview Ju d i t h O r t iz C o fer Meet the Author Judith Ortiz Cofer was born in Puerto Rico in 1952. Today, she lives in Georgia, but her close ties to a Spanishspeaking culture show up in “Aunty Misery” and many of her other works. As she says, “I’ve just brought the island with me.” See page R2 of the Author Files for more on Judith Ortiz Cofer. Author Search For more about Judith Ortiz Cofer, go to www.glencoe.com. sorcerer (SOR sur ur) n. a person who practices magic with the help of spirits (p. 743) The sorcerer cast a spell to help Aunty Misery. taunt (tawnt) v. to make fun of in a mean way (p. 744) Children often stopped to taunt Aunty Misery. gnarled (narld) adj. rough, twisted, and knotty, as a tree trunk or branches (p. 744) That gnarled tree hadn’t grown straight for many years. potions (POH shunz) n. drinks, especially drinks that are supposed to have magical powers (p. 745) People stopped buying medicines and potions, believing they weren’t necessary. Write to Learn For each vocabulary word, write a clue, such as “It can describe a tree trunk.” Have a partner name the word. English Language Coach Literal and Metaphoric Word Meanings A metaphor is a comparison between two unlike things that says that one is the other. “The team’s catcher was a tank” is a metaphor because the catcher isn’t actually a tank; he’s just big and strong and hard to overcome, like an army tank. If a word is used metaphorically for long enough, its metaphoric meaning may become one of its literal meanings—an actual meaning found in a dictionary. So if you plant your feet, you just put them down firmly. A man with a heart of gold does not have metal in his chest. Pearls of wisdom are simply valuable bits of knowledge. If you know one meaning of a word, such as plant, you can usually figure out a meaning that developed metaphorically. Or if a word is used metaphorically, such as tank, you can usually figure out what is being suggested by its use. As with many other vocabulary skills, you can use what you know to figure out what you don’t know. Objectives (pp. 740–745) Reading Analyze text • Make connections from text to self Literature Identify literary elements: dialect Vocabulary Distinguish literal from metaphoric meanings Partner Talk Each underlined word below has a meaning that developed metaphorically from its original meaning. Work with a partner to decide what is meant by each sentence. 1. Isn’t that big car a gas hog? 2. Give me time to digest the idea. 3. The police officer chased the thief and collared him. 4. The workers were unhappy that their boss was such a dinosaur. 740 UNIT 6 Why Do We Share Our Stories? Miriam Berkley READING WORKSHOP 4 • Analyzing Skills Preview Reading Skill: Analyzing • Relate the words to the characters, the plot, or the theme. What do the words tell you about the story? Analyzing a story involves looking at the different parts and the way they work together. As you read “Aunty Misery,” think about these parts of the story: • Character: Who is the main character and what kind of person is this character? • Setting: What do you learn about the setting? Is it very clear and realistic? Is it simple, like a poster or a mural? • Plot: Does the plot move logically from one event to the next? • Theme: What seems to be the main message the author wants you to come away with? • Decide what using the words adds to the story. How do these words make the story more interesting, true to life, wise, or funny? Write to Learn Use your Learner’s Notebook to jot down what you already know about analyzing stories. Keep your ideas in mind as you read the selection and use this skill. Build Background Key Literary Element: Dialect When you read a story, you expect all the words to be in English. Sometimes an author will use words from another language in the story, especially if the author is from another country or speaks another language. Dialect can also be mixing words from two languages, which is something that a native speaker would not do. For example, La Tia Misery. La Tia is Spanish for “aunt.” Native speakers would simply say La Tia Miseria, or Aunt Misery. Use these tips to help you figure out the effect of those words. • Learn what the words mean. • Ask yourself: Why does the author put these words and not other words in a different language? Interactive Literary Elements Handbook To review or learn more about the literary elements, go to www.glencoe.com. Get Ready to Read Connect to the Reading What good and bad things can everyone expect to find, or “run into,” in life? As you read “Aunty Misery,” think about how her problems are like and unlike those of everyone else. This folktale is set in a Spanish-speaking country in the distant past. • A folktale is a story that has been handed down. This folktale has magical characters and presents some events that could never really happen. • In folktales, Death is often presented as a character that comes to visit. Naturally, few characters are happy to see him. • Folktales often include trickster characters. Their cleverness helps them overcome people or things who are stronger or more powerful. Set Purposes for Reading Read “Aunty Misery” to see how one culture tries to explain suffering and death. Set Your Own Purpose What would you like to learn from the selection to help you answer the Big Question? Write your own purpose on the “Aunty Misery” page of Foldable 6. Keep Moving Use these skills as you read the following selection. Aunty Misery 741 READING WORKSHOP 4 by Judith Ortiz Cofer T his is a story about an old, a very old woman who lived alone in her little hut with no other company than a beautiful pear tree that grew at her door. She spent all her time taking care of this tree. The neighborhood children drove the old woman crazy by stealing her fruit. They would climb her tree, shake its delicate limbs, and run away with armloads of golden pears, yelling insults at la Tia Miseria,1 Aunty Misery, as they called her. 1 One day, a traveler stopped at the old woman’s hut and asked her for permission to spend the night under her roof. Aunty Misery saw that he had an honest face and bid the pilgrim come in. She fed him and made a bed for him in front of her hearth. In the morning the stranger told her that he would show his gratitude for her hospitality by granting her one wish. 1. La Tia Miseria (luh TEE uh mih zuh REE uh) 742 UNIT 6 Why Do We Share Our Stories? Practice the Skills 1 Key Reading Skill Analyzing Think about the main character. Does she have a family? How does she spend her time? Why does the tree mean so much to her? What problem does she have? READING WORKSHOP 4 Still Life with Skull, 1895–1900. Paul Cezanne. Oil on canvas. ©The Barnes Foundation, Merion, PA. “There is only one thing that I desire,” said Aunty Misery. “Ask, and it shall be yours,” replied the stranger, who was a sorcerer in disguise. “I wish that anyone who climbs up my pear tree should not be able to come back down until I permit it.” “Your wish is granted,” said the stranger, touching the pear tree as he left Aunty Misery’s house. 2 Practice the Skills 2 Reviewing Skills Understanding Cause and Effect What causes the stranger to grant Aunty Misery’s wish? Vocabulary sorcerer (SOR sur ur) n. a person who practices magic with the help of spirits Aunty Misery 743 Bridgeman Art Library READING WORKSHOP 4 And so it happened that when the children came back to taunt the old woman and to steal her fruit, she stood at her window watching them. Several of them shimmied2 up the trunk of the pear tree and immediately got stuck to it as if with glue. She let them cry and beg her for a long time before she gave the tree permission to let them go on the condition that they never again steal her fruit, or bother her. 3 Time passed and both Aunty Misery and her tree grew bent and gnarled with age. One day another traveler stopped at her door. This one looked untrustworthy to her, so before letting him into her home the old woman asked him what he was doing in her village. He answered her in a voice that was dry and hoarse, as if he had swallowed a desert: “I am Death, and I have come to take you with me.” 2. Shimmied means climbed by using the hands, arms, feet, and legs to pull and push oneself up. Vocabulary taunt (tawnt) v. to make fun of in a mean way gnarled (narld) adj. rough, twisted, and knotty, as a tree trunk or branches 744 UNIT 6 Why Do We Share Our Stories? Stapleton Collection/CORBIS Practice the Skills 3 English Language Coach Literal and Metaphoric Word Meanings The original meaning of stuck is “fastened to something with a sharp object.” How do you suppose the later meanings “unable to move” and “unable to go forward” developed from this? READING WORKSHOP 4 Thinking fast Aunty Misery said, “All right, but before I go I would like to pluck some pears from my beloved tree to remember how much pleasure it brought me in this life. But I am a very old woman and cannot climb to the tallest branches where the best fruit is. Will you be so kind as to do it for me?” With a heavy sigh like wind through a tomb, Señor3 Death climbed the pear tree. Immediately he became stuck to it as if with glue. And no matter how much he cursed and threatened, Aunty Misery would not allow the tree to release Death. Many years passed and there were no deaths in the world. The people who make their living from death began to protest loudly. The doctors claimed no one bothered to come in for examinations or treatments anymore, because they did not fear dying; the pharmacists’ business suffered too because medicines are, like magic potions, bought to prevent or postpone the inevitable; priests and undertakers were unhappy with the situation also, for obvious reasons. There were also many old folks tired of life who wanted to pass on to the next world to rest from miseries of this one. 4 La Tia Miseria was blamed by these people for their troubles, of course. Not wishing to be unfair, the old woman made a deal with her prisoner, Death: if he promised not ever to come for her again, she would give him his freedom. He agreed. And that is why there are two things you can always count on running into in this world: Misery and Death: La miseria y la muerte.4 5 ❍ Practice the Skills 4 Key Literary Element Dialect If foreign words appear often in a story, that may indicate that it is written in a dialect. A few foreign words can also give the story a foreign feeling. Which do you think is the case here? 5 Death has always been a fear and a fascination for people. Why do you think people have shared this folktale again and again? Write your answer on the “Aunty Misery” page of Foldable 6. Your response will help you complete the Unit Challenge later. 3. Señor (sen YOR) is Spanish for “Mister.” 4. Y la muerte (ee luh MWAIR tay) Vocabulary potions (POH shunz) n. drinks, especially drinks that are supposed to have magical powers Aunty Misery 745 READING WORKSHOP 4 • Analyzing After You Read Aunty Misery Answering the 1. Would you share this story with someone else? Why or why not? 2. Recall How does Aunty Misery punish the children who steal her pears? T IP Right There 3. Summarize What happens when the first stranger visits Aunty Misery? T IP Think and Search Critical Thinking 4. Analyze Aunty Misery is a problem solver. Support this statement with two events from the story. T IP Author and Me 5. Infer What causes Aunty Misery to finally make a deal with death? T IP Author and Me 6. Evaluate Do you think this story has a good ending? Explain. T IP On My Own Talk About Your Reading Objectives (pp. 746–747) Reading Analyze text Literature Identify literary elements: dialect Vocabulary Distinguish literal from metaphoric meanings Writing Write a fable Grammar Correct run-on sentences Literature Groups Folktales like “Aunty Misery” are brief, but they usually have all the elements of a short story. With your group, identify these elements of “Aunty Misery.” • characters—the people in the story • setting—the time and place • plot—the events of the story • moral—a lesson about right and wrong Write to Learn Think about a fable you might write. On a separate sheet of paper, make notes on the characters, setting, plot, and moral of your own fable. 746 UNIT 6 Why Do We Share Our Stories? Bridgeman Art Library READING WORKSHOP 4 • Analyzing Skills Review Key Reading Skill: Analyzing 7. The story described the problems that occurred when people could not die. In your opinion, what good things would happen if people could not die? Key Literary Element: Dialect 8. Which Spanish words appear in this story and what do they mean? Reviewing Skills: Understanding Cause and Effect 9. Explain what causes Señor Death to get stuck in Aunty Misery’s tree. Vocabulary Check Complete each group with the correct word from the list. sorcerer taunt gnarled potion 10. 11. 12. 13. drink, beverage, twisted, knotty, tease, insult, wizard, magician, English Language Coach Each of the underlined words is used with an easy meaning in “Aunty Misery.” Use that meaning to figure out the related meaning used in the question. 14. Which of the following is one of a person’s limbs? • a backbone • an ear • an arm Grammar Link: Run-on Sentences Run-on: I like baseball I like football even more. Run-on: I like baseball, I like football even more. Review the three ways to fix a run-on sentence: A. Separate the sentences with a period. • I like baseball. I like football even more. B. Put a comma and a coordinating conjunction between the sentences. • I like baseball, but I like football even more. C. Add a subordinating conjunction to one of the clauses. • Though I like baseball, I like football even more. Grammar Practice 17. Copy the following paragraph on another piece of paper. Then find and fix the two run-on sentences. Use any of the three ways shown above to make your corrections. Last summer my family and I went to New York City. I had never been in a big-city cab before, it was quite an experience. At first the traffic was heavy we just crawled along. When we got out of the traffic, the driver started speeding. He was going so fast that I thought we were going to crash. I was relieved to reach our hotel. 15. A fruitful effort is one that • has good results. • bad results. • no results. 16. If stories touch you, they • bore you. • confuse you. • affect your feelings. Web Activities For eFlashcards, Selection Quick Checks, and other Web activities, go to www.glencoe.com. Aunty Misery 747 COMPARING LITERATURE WORKSHOP by Langston Hughes & by Li-Young Lee Skills Focus You will use these skills as you read and compare the following selections: • “Aunt Sue’s Stories,” p. 751 • “I Ask My Mother to Sing,” p. 753 Reading • Comparing and contrasting Literature • Recognizing and analyzing cultural context Writing • Writing a compare and contrast essay If you compare groups or singers, you probably think— among other things—about the songs they perform, the way you feel when you hear them, and the images that go through your mind when you listen to them. When you compare two poems, you also think about these things. Poems can also make you feel a certain way and imagine certain images. How to Compare Literature: Cultural Context Before you can compare anything, you need to know what points, or characteristics, you’ll use for your comparison. When you read and compare “I Ask My Mother to Sing” and “Aunt Sue’s Stories,” you’ll be looking especially at the cultural context of each poem. Cultural context involves the values, beliefs, goals, and customs of a particular group of people or of a community. The two poets you’ll look at in this workshop are both Americans, but they have links to very different cultures. As you read their poems, look for details that give you information about the cultural context. Consider these things: Objectives (pp. 748–749) Reading Compare and contrast: cultural context 748 UNIT 6 • • • • setting places mentioned feelings expressed what people in the poem value • references to past events • experiences, shared or otherwise COMPARING LITERATURE WORKSHOP Get Ready to Compare As you read, keep track of the cultural details in a chart like the one below. Copy it into your Learner’s Notebook and take notes as you read the poems. Categories “Aunt Sue’s Stories” “I Ask My Mother to Sing” Setting Places Mentioned Feelings Expressed References To Past Events What People in the Poem Value Experiences—Shared or Otherwise Other Details Use Your Comparison After you read the selections, think about the influence of cultural context and its power over what happens. For example, in “I Ask My Mother to Sing,” the poet says that both his mother and grandmother are crying. Use the steps to think about how important culture is to that moment: 1. Both are singing and thinking about another place, another time. 2. What they are thinking about is something they can no longer experience. 3. The speaker may share the emotion, but he describes his mother and grandmother crying. 4. What the speaker feels may be different from what the two women feel. 5. Therefore, cultural context seems to be key to what people in the poem are feeling. When you make your comparison later, you will use these steps to figure out how important cultural context is in these two poems. Comparing Literature Workshop 749 COMPARING LITERATURE WORKSHOP Before You Read Aunt Sue’s Stories Get Ready to Read English Language Coach Lan gs to n H u g he s Meet the Author Langston Hughes was born in Joplin, Missouri. He attended Columbia University in New York and quickly became a major figure in the Harlem Renaissance of the 1920s. Controversial for his references to race, Hughes was both praised and attacked. He lived in many places throughout the world and died in New York in 1967. See page R4 of the Author Files for more on Langston Hughes. Author Search For more about Langston Hughes, go to www.glencoe.com. Double Meanings in Poetry When a word has both literal and metaphorical meanings, writers can never completely ignore either one. When you read, you will often think of both meanings, whether you realize it or not. In fact, poets count on you to “get” the different meanings. In “Aunt Sue’s Stories,” Langston Hughes uses the phrase “the flow of old Aunt Sue’s voice.” Aunt Sue is talking smoothly and without stopping. That’s all it really means. But Hughes talks about black people mingling in that flow. He expects you to think about and feel Aunt Sue’s voice as a river. As you read this poem, look for words that carry a lot of meaning. Say the words of the poem out loud and feel the meanings those words have for you. Connect to the Reading This poem is about people whose culture is rooted in America, though they came from another land originally. African slaves were brought from Africa, and the culture of slavery left a deep mark on the entire country. Think back to what you know about slavery. If you didn’t grow up in this country and never studied that subject, don’t worry. Classmates may be able to help you out. As you read, try to get a sense of how the people in the poem feel about their experiences and how alive the past is for them. Set Purposes for Reading Read to find out how the speaker in the poem thinks about the stories his aunt has to tell. Set Your Own Purpose Objectives (pp. 750–751) Reading Compare and contrast: cultural context Vocabulary Interpret metaphorical meanings What would you like to learn about the experiences and stories of the people in the poem? Write your own purpose on the Comparing Literature page of Foldable 6. 750 UNIT 6 Why Do We Share Our Stories? Schomburg Center for Research in Black Culture, The New York Public Library - Astor, Lenox and Tilden Foundation COMPARING LITERATURE WORKSHOP by Langston Hughes 5 Aunt Sue has a head full of stories. Aunt Sue has a whole heart full of stories. 1 Summer nights on the front porch Aunt Sue cuddles a brown-faced child to her bosom And tells him stories. Under the Midnight Blues, 2003. Colin Bootman. Oil on board. Private collection. Black slaves Working in the hot sun, And black slaves Walking in the dewy night,* 10 And black slaves Singing sorrow songs* on the banks of a mighty river 2 Mingle themselves softly In the flow of old Aunt Sue’s voice, Mingle themselves softly 15 In the dark shadows that cross and recross Aunt Sue’s stories. And the dark-faced child, listening, Knows that Aunt Sue’s stories are real stories. He knows that Aunt Sue never got her stories 20 Out of any book at all, But that they came Right out of her own life. The dark-faced child is quiet Of a summer night 25 Listening to Aunt Sue’s stories. 3 ❍ 9. Dewy (DOO ee) means “covered with dew,” the moisture that settles on plants and grass during the night or early morning. 11. Sorrow songs refers to music like the blues, spirituals, and other traditional African American songs. Practice the Skills 1 English Language Coach Double Meanings in Poetry Is a “whole heart full” any different from “a heart full”? Do you think you’re supposed to think of more than one meaning for heart ? 2 Comparing Literature Cultural Context Two rivers have strong associations with slavery. The Ohio River divided slave states from free states. Many slaves worked plantations near the Mississippi River and in its ports. 3 Why does Aunt Sue tell her stories? Write your answer on the Comparing Literature page of Foldable 6. Aunt Sue’s Stories 751 Colin Bootman/Bridgeman Art Library COMPARING LITERATURE WORKSHOP Before You Read I Ask My Mother to Sing Get Ready to Read Connect to the Reading L i -Yo u n g L e e Meet the Author Li-Young Lee was born in 1957 in Indonesia of Chinese parents. His family left Indonesia because of antiChinese attitudes there. They came to the United States in 1964. Lee currently lives in Chicago with his wife and children. Asked how he creates poetry, Lee replied, “I am on the job twenty-four hours a day. I’m absorbing it. I just absorb it.” See page R4 of the Author Files for more on Li-Young Lee. You’re going to read a poem about people whose cultural heritage is from China. You may already know a lot about China, and this could help you with the reading. Don’t worry, though, if you’ve never heard of the places the poem mentions. What’s important is to imagine the scene the poem paints. Try to connect the poem to your own experience. Build Background • Li-Young Lee spent his early childhood in Asia but never lived in China. He was educated in the United States. • Lee’s father read to him in both Chinese (poems) and English (the King James Bible). • Peking is an old name for Beijing (bay JING), the capital of the Republic of China. The Summer Palace was one of several beautiful palaces in Beijing built by the Chinese emperors. • The Stone Boat is an amazing work of art at the Summer Palace. Not a real boat, it’s made of marble and has colored glass windows. • According to an old Chinese saying, “water can carry the boat as well as overturn it.” It means that water (symbolizing the people) can keep the royal boat (the country’s leader or government) floating but can also make it sink. Set Purposes for Reading Author Search For more about Li-Young Lee, go to www.glencoe.com. Read to find out how the speaker relates to his mother’s song and how he feels about it. Set Your Own Purpose What would you like to learn about the experiences and stories of the people in the poem? Write your own purpose on the Comparing Literature page of Foldable 6. Objectives (pp. 752–753) Reading Compare and contrast: cultural context 752 UNIT 6 Why Do We Share Our Stories? Dorothy Alexander COMPARING LITERATURE WORKSHOP by Li-Young Lee 5 She begins, and my grandmother joins her. Mother and daughter sing like young girls. If my father were alive, he would play his accordion and sway like a boat. I’ve never been in Peking, or the Summer Palace, nor stood on the great Stone Boat to watch the rain begin on Kuen Ming Lake, the picnickers running away in the grass. 1 Practice the Skills 1 Cultural Context What details help you imagine the scene that the poem describes? List them on your Comparison Chart. But I love to hear it sung; 10 how the waterlilies fill with rain* until they overturn, spilling water into water, then rock back, and fill with more. Both women have begun to cry. But neither stops her song. 2 ❍ 10. Waterlilies have large, showy flowers and big, flat leaves that float on the water. Comparing Literature 2 The speaker’s mother sings a song about life in another country. The song makes the speaker think about memories of the past. What does the song seem to mean to the speaker? I Ask My Mother to Sing 753 Keren Su/CORBIS COMPARING LITERATURE WORKSHOP After You Read & Reading/Critical Thinking 1. Infer The first two lines of “Aunt Sue’s Stories” are: Aunt Sue has a head full of stories. Aunt Sue has a whole heart full of stories. What is the difference in meaning between the two lines? T IP Think and Search 2. Infer What does the speaker mean when he says that “Aunt Sue never got her stories / Out of any book at all”? T IP Author and Me 3. Analyze How do the two poems differ in their use of figurative language? T IP Think and Search Objectives (pp. 754–755) Reading Compare and contrast: cultural context Writing Create a chart to compare and contrast texts 4. Interpret How does the speaker’s attachment to the culture of China compare with that of his mother and grandmother? T IP Author and Me 5. Infer At the end of the poem, why do the women continue to sing, even though they are crying? T IP Author and Me 754 UNIT 6 Why Do We Share Our Stories? (t)Colin Bootman/Bridgeman Art Library, (b)Keren Su/CORBIS COMPARING LITERATURE WORKSHOP Writing: Compare the Literature Use Your Notes Get It on Paper Follow these steps to use the notes on your Comparison Chart to compare the cultural context in “I Ask My Mother to Sing” and “Aunt Sue’s Stories.” To show what you think about the importance of cultural context in “I Ask My Mother to Sing” and “Aunt Sue’s Stories,” copy and complete these statements on a separate sheet of paper. 1. In “I Ask My Mother to Sing,” references to place are important because (add your ideas). 2. The most important aspect of culture in “I Ask My Mother to Sing” is (add your ideas) because (add your reasons). 3. In “Aunt Sue’s Stories,” cultural context is important because (add your ideas). 4. The most important aspect of culture in “Aunt Sue’s Stories” is (add your ideas) because (add your reasons using details from the Comparison Chart). Step 1: Look over the chart you completed. Underline the details that are similar for both selections. Circle the details that are different. Step 2: On a separate sheet of paper, make a list of those details that are similar and those that are different. Step 3: Look at the new list you’ve made. For example, both poems bring out feelings of sorrow about the past. Think about whether that means the people in both poems feel sorry that the past is behind them or whether they have quite different feelings about the past. Step 4: Notice which cultural points are important in both poems and which are important in just one of the poems. You will use this information to back up your statements in the assignment. Put a check beside the details that are most important to the speaker. 5. In both poems, the cultural context of the past was something that the speaker and his family (choose: grieved for or wanted to return to or felt completely differently about) as shown in the stories that they tell. Web Activities For eFlashcards, Selection Quick Checks, and other Web activities, go to www.glencoe.com. Comparing Literature Workshop 755 UNIT 6 WRAP-UP Answering Why Do We Share Our Stories? You’ve just read folktales, stories, and poems that help you think about why we share our stories. Now use what you’ve learned to do the Unit Challenge. The Unit Challenge Choose Activity A or Activity B and follow the directions for that activity. A. Group Activity: Sharing-Stories Reading List Best-of-the-best lists are always popular. There are lists of the best movies, songs, and music videos. Now it’s your turn to make a list. • You and four other students will share your favorite stories by listing what you think are the ten best stories for kids your age. 1. Discuss the Assignment • Choose one group member to be the note-taker for the discussion. • Use your Unit 6 Foldable to review your notes about why we share our stories. • Recall funny stories like “Charles” as well as serious stories like “The Boy and His Grandfather.” Are these the kinds of stories that kids will like? 2. Brainstorm a List • Brainstorm a list of stories that illustrate the answer to the Big Question. • For example, if one of your reasons for sharing stories is to have fun, then you would include stories that are funny, scary, or entertaining. They might be stories in this unit or earlier units in this textbook. Or they might be stories you’ve read on your own. (It’s okay to list books, too.) If you want, make your list look like this one. 756 UNIT 6 Why Do We Share Our Stories? SHARING-STORIES READING LIST Best Stories to Read for Fun 1. 2. 3. 4. 3. Select the Best of the Best As a group, decide which stories best illustrate each reason. Answer the following questions: • Would most of my friends enjoy reading this story? Why or why not? (If not, think about crossing the title off your list.) • Is there anything about this story that parents or teachers might object to? (If so, cross the title off your list.) • Does this story clearly demonstrate one of our reasons for sharing stories? (If not, cross the title off your list.) 4. Present Your List • Check to make sure all the titles on your list are correctly spelled. • Make sure you have listed at least ten stories. • Read your list aloud to the class or post it on a bulletin board in your classroom or school library. UNIT 6 WRAP-UP B. Solo Activity: “Two Thumbs Up, Two Thumbs Down!” Sometimes it’s easy to get into a story. The characters seem real. Their problems interest you. Then, when you read the ending, you think, Aha! Perfect! That’s exactly the way this story should end! Other times, you can hardly wait to put a story down. In Activity B, you’ll write a short review telling why you think a story of your choice is—or is not—worth sharing with other kids your age. 1. Decide on a Story • Choose a story that you strongly like or dislike. The story might be from Unit 6 or earlier units in this textbook. Or the story might be one you’ve read on your own. • Review the notes you made on your Unit 6 Foldable. Then ask yourself these questions: • Which selection in Unit 6 did I enjoy the most? • Why do I think this story should be shared with other kids my age? • Which selection did I enjoy the least? • What are some reasons that I think this story isn’t worth sharing? 2. Analyze the Story • Look at the separate parts of the story. • Think about whether each part is good or bad and why. That will help you figure out why you like (or dislike) the story as a whole. • Jot down your ideas on a chart like the one pictured. characters problems worth sharing / not worth sharing plot ending 3. Start Writing • Begin by stating your opinion of the story. (Be sure to include the title of the story and the name of the author.) Then give a few short reasons for your opinion. Your opening might be as simple as this: • “The Boy and His Grandfather,” by Rudolfo A. Anaya, is definitely worth sharing with other students. I think they’ll like this story for many reasons. (Then list the reasons.) 4. Present Your Story Review • When you have finished writing, reread your review. • Correct any misspellings or errors in grammar. • Present your review to your classmates. Big Question Link to Web resources to further explore the Big Question at www.glencoe .com. Wrap-Up 757 UNIT 6 Your Turn: Read and Apply Skills A u dre y W o od Meet the Author Storytelling and art have always been part of Audrey Wood’s life. When she was very young, her mother told her fantasy stories about amazing people. Wood’s father was an artist for Ringling Bros. Circus. A little later in life, Wood carried on the family storytelling tradition by making up stories to entertain her little sisters. Today Wood is a well-known author and illustrator of children’s books. Author Search For more about Audrey Wood, go to www.glencoe.com. by Audrey Wood Storyteller’s Note Now I suppose that you have heard about the mighty logger Paul Bunyan and his great blue ox named Babe. In the early days of our country, Paul and Babe cleared the land for the settlers, so farms and cities could spring up. And you probably know that Paul was taller than a redwood tree, stronger than fifty grizzly bears, and smarter than a library full of books. But you may not know that Paul was married and had two fine children. O ne day when Paul Bunyan was out clearing a road through the forests of Kentucky, a great pounding began to shake the earth. Looking around, Paul discovered an enormous hole in the side of a hill. The lumberjack pulled up an acre of dry cane and fashioned a torch to light his way. Paul climbed inside the hole and followed the sound underground for miles, until he came to a large cavern glistening with crystals. By the flickering light of his torch, he saw a gigantic woman banging a behemoth1 pickax against a wall. It was love at first sight. “I’m Carrie McIntie,” the gigantic woman said. “I was sitting on the hill when my lucky wishbone fell down a crack into the earth. I’ve been digging all day trying to find it.” With a grin on his face as wide as the Missouri River, Paul reached into his shirt pocket. “I’ve got one too,” he said, 1. A behemoth (bih HEE muth) object is really, really big. 758 UNIT 6 Why Do We Share Our Stories? Courtesy Audrey Wood YOUR TURN: READ AND APPLY SKILLS The Bunyans, illustration by David Shannon from THE BUNYANS by Audrey Wood. Published by the BLUE SKY PRESS. Illustrations © 1996 by David Shannon. Reprinted by permission of Scholastic Inc. THE BLUE SKY PRESS is a registered trademark of Scholastic Inc. pulling out his lucky wishbone. “Marry me, Carrie, and we’ll share mine.” Carrie agreed, and their wedding invitations were mailed out right away. The invitations were so large, only one needed to be sent to each state. Everyone could read them for miles! The invitations said: You are cordially invited to the mammoth2 wedding of Paul Bunyan and Carrie McIntie. The couple were married in the enormous crystal chamber that Carrie had carved, and after the ceremony, folks began to call it “Mammoth Cave.” The giantess had dug more than two hundred miles, making it the longest cave in the world, so the name fit perfectly. Paul and Carrie settled down on a farm in 2. Cordially means “in a genuinely warm and friendly way.” Mammoth means “really big; huge.” Maine, and soon there were two new Bunyans. While Pa Bunyan traveled with his logging crew, Ma Bunyan worked the farm and cared for their jumbo boy, named Little Jean, and their gigantic girl, named Teeny. One morning when Pa Bunyan was home between jobs, Ma Bunyan cooked up a hearty breakfast of pancakes and syrup. Teeny was wrestling with her big purple puma named Slink and Visual Vocabulary The puma (PYOO accidentally dumped a muh) is a large, silo of syrup on her yellowish, wild cat. It’s also called cougar head. Teeny’s hair was and mountain lion. so sweet, bears crawled into it and burrowed deep in her curls. Try as they might, Pa and Ma Bunyan couldn’t wash them out. Your Turn: Read and Apply Skills 759 (t)Reprinted by permission of Scholastic., (b)Daniel J. Cox/CORBIS YOUR TURN: READ AND APPLY SKILLS “We’ll need a forceful shower of water to get rid of those varmints!”3 Ma Bunyan declared. Pa Bunyan had an idea. He placed his daughter on Babe, and he led them to the Niagara River in Canada. The gargantuan4 father scooped out a huge hole in the middle of the riverbed. As the great river roared down into the deep hole, Teeny cried out in delight, “Niagara falls!” Teeny showered in the waterfall, and the pesky bears were washed downstream. When Little Jean was five, he wanted to work too, so he followed his pa out to his logging camp in Montana. Thinking his son was too young to do much of anything, Paul set Little Jean down in a barren canyon in Utah to play for the day. When the lumberjack went to fetch him, he couldn’t believe his eyes. Little Jean had carved the canyon into a wonderland of fanciful5 shapes. Pa Bunyan got tongue-tied and said, “That’s a mighty brice nanyon, coy, I mean, a mighty nice canyon, boy!” Somehow part of the mix-up stuck. To this day the canyon is known as Bryce Canyon. After all that sculpting, Little Jean’s shoes were full of sand. Pa knew Ma Bunyan wouldn’t want her clean floors dirtied up, so he told Little Jean to sit down and empty out his shoes. The sand from Little Jean’s shoes blew away on the eastern wind and settled down a state away. It covered a valley ten miles 3. Here, the varmints are pesky animals. long, making sand dunes eight hundred feet high. Everyone knows that’s how the Great Sand Dunes of Colorado came to be. One summer, Little Jean and Teeny wanted to go to the beach. Ma Bunyan told them to follow a river to the ocean. But all the rivers flowed west back then, so they missed the Atlantic Ocean and ended up on the other side of the country instead. Ma Bunyan tracked them out to the Pacific Ocean, where she found Teeny riding on the backs of two blue whales and Little Jean carving out fifty zigzag miles of the California coast. When Ma Bunyan saw what her son had done, she exclaimed, “What’s the big idea, sir!?” From that time on, the scenic area was known as Big Sur. Ma Bunyan knew she had to put up a barrier to remind her children not to wander off too far. So, on the way home, everyone pitched in and built the Rocky Mountains. Teeny gathered up and sorted out all the rivers, letting some flow east and others west. After that, the children had no trouble following the eastern rivers down to the Atlantic Ocean. And when they wanted to go out exploring, Ma Bunyan would call out, “Now don’t cross the Continental Divide, children!” The best thing about camping is sleeping outdoors, and the worst thing is not having enough hot water. That’s why the Bunyans always camped in Wyoming. By the time their camping years were over, Ma Bunyan had poked more than three hundred holes in the ground with her pickax and released tons of hot water from geysers.6 But Ma got 4. The word gargantuan comes from the name of a fictional giant, and it’s another word that means “really big; huge.” 5. A barren place has little or no plant life. Anything that is fanciful shows imagination in design or construction. 760 UNIT 6 Why Do We Share Our Stories? 6. A geyser (GY zur) is an underground spring heated by hot lava under the earth’s surface. YOUR TURN: READ AND APPLY SKILLS tired of poking so many holes, so she made a geyser that blew every hour on the hour. After that, there was a steady supply of hot water to keep the giants’ clothes and dishes sparkling clean. Teeny named the geyser Old Faithful, and to this day, Old Faithful still blows its top every hour in Yellowstone National Park. As our great country grew up, so did the Bunyan children. When the kids left home, Ma and Pa Bunyan retired to a wilderness area, where they still live happily. Teeny hitched a ride on a whale over to England and became a famous fashion designer. Her colorful skirts made from air balloons and her breezy blouses cut from ship sails were a sensation7 at the first World’s Fair in London. Little Jean traveled to Venice, Italy, The Bunyans, illustration by David Shannon from THE BUNYANS by Audrey Wood. Published by the BLUE SKY PRESS. Illustrations © 1996 by David where he studied astronomy and art. Shannon. Reprinted by permission of Scholastic Inc. THE BLUE SKY PRESS is Every day, the gondoliers would take a registered trademark of Scholastic Inc. their passengers down In 1976, the year of our country’s the Grand Canal8 to bicentennial, a spacecraft sent by the watch the giant artist National Aeronautics and Space chiseling his marble Administration was on a mission to study sculptures. Visual Vocabulary Mars. The spacecraft was named Viking I, After graduation, Little A gondolier (gon and it took many photographs of the surface duh LEER) operates Jean decided to explore a gondola—a long, of the planet. One mysterious photo looked new lands, as his parents narrow, flat-bottomed like a face carved out of colossal rock. boat with high peaks had done. So he took two at the ends. Some say the photograph is not a face, great jumps and one but an illusion caused by light and shadows flying leap and bounded on the rock. Others think the famous up into outer space. “Martian face” is just the spitting image of Little Jean Bunyan. If that’s so, who knows 7. Here, sensation means “a cause of excitement of great interest; a wonder.” what he’s up to on the other planets. 8. The city of Venice (VEN is) has canals for streets, and the Grand Only time will tell! ❍ Canal is its main street. Your Turn: Read and Apply Skills 761 (l)Dennis Degnan/CORBIS, (r)Reprinted by permission of Scholastic. UNIT 6 Reading on Your Own To read more about the Big Question, choose one of these books from your school or local library. Work on your reading skills by choosing books that are challenging to you. Fiction The People Could Fly: American Black Folktales retold by Virginia Hamilton On Her Way: Stories & Poems about Growing Up Girl This collection contains twenty-four folktales told by enslaved people and formerly enslaved people. Included are animal tales, tall tales, supernatural tales, and tales of freedom. If you like folktales, The People Could Fly is a must-read. edited by Sandy Asher Where Angels Glide at Dawn: New Stories from Latin America Big Men, Big Country: A Collection of American Tall Tales edited by Lori M. Carlson and Cynthia L. Ventura Homes and families provide the background for several of these ten stories from Latin America. The stories display a variety of cultures and writing styles. 762 UNIT 6 Why Do We Share Our Stories? (tl tr bl br)Eclipse Studios Whether traveling west in a wagon train or overcoming terrible illness, the girls in this collection face life’s challenges with strength and courage. Read this collection to discover what’s great about “growing up girl.” by Paul Robert Walker The stories in this collection portray nine American tall-tale heroes, including Paul Bunyan, Pecos Bill, Sluefoot Sue, and Davy Crockett. UNIT 6 READING ON YOUR OWN Nonfiction Taking Flight: My Story by Vicki Van Meter by Vicki Van Meter; with Dan Gutman Before she turned thirteen, Vicki Van Meter had piloted flights across the United States and the Atlantic Ocean. Read this true story of how one girl’s discipline, drive, and desire to soar led her to heights she hardly dreamed possible. Shipwrecked! The True Adventures of a Japanese Boy by Rhoda Blumberg Shipwrecked on an island and rescued by whalers, Manjiro goes on to experience a life of adventures that takes him around the globe and back again. From the high seas to the samurai sword, Manjiro’s story will thrill and inspire the adventurer in you. Left for Dead: A Young Man’s Search for Justice for the USS Indianapolis by Pete Nelson; with a preface by Hunter Scott When Japanese torpedoes sank the USS Indianapolis in July 1945, survivors were stranded in cold Pacific waters for four days before help arrived. Fifty years later, eleven-year-old Hunter Scott’s research on the subject brought new facts to light about what happened, and why, that harrowing week in July. My Family Shall Be Free! The Life of Peter Still by Dennis Brindell Fradin Born a slave on a plantation around 1800, Peter Still was over forty years old when he bought his freedom and, amazingly, reunited with the mother and siblings he thought he’d lost forever. Reading on Your Own 763 (tl tr bl br)Eclipse Studios UNIT 6 SKILLS AND STRATEGIES ASSESSMENT Test Practice Part 1: Literary Elements Read the passage. Then write the numbers 1 through 4 on a separate sheet of paper. For the first three questions, write the letter of the right answer next to the number for that question. Write your answer to the final question next to number 4. from “Blues Ain’t No Mockin Bird,” by Toni Cade Bambara “Go tell that man we ain’t a bunch of trees.” “Ma’am?” “I said to tell that man to get away from here with that camera.” Me and Cathy look over toward the meadow where the men with the station wagon’d been roamin around all mornin. The tall man with a huge camera lassoed to his shoulder was buzzin our way. “They’re makin movie pictures,” yelled Tyrone . . . . “They’re makin movie pictures,” sang out Terry. “That boy don’t never have anything original to say,” say Cathy grown-up. By the time the man with the camera had cut across our neighbor’s yard, the twins were out of the trees swingin low and Objectives Literature Identify literary elements: theme, character, dialect, cultural context 764 UNIT 6 Why Do We Share Our Stories? Granny was onto the steps, the screen door bammin soft and scratchy against her palms. “We thought we’d get a shot or two of the house and everything and then—” “Good mornin,” Granny cut him off. And smiled that smile. “Good mornin,” he said, head all the way down the way Bingo does when you yell at him about the bones on the kitchen floor. “Nice place you got here, aunty. We thought we’d take a—” “Did you?” said Granny with her eyebrows. Cathy pulled up her socks and giggled. “Nice things here,” said the man, buzzin his camera over the yard. The pecan barrels, the sled, me and Cathy, the flowers, the printed stones along the driveway, the trees, the twins, the toolshed. “I don’t know about the thing, the it, and the stuff,” said Granny, still talkin with her eyebrows. “Just people here is what I tend to consider.” Camera man stopped buzzin. Cathy giggled into her collar. “Mornin’, ladies,” a new man said. He had come up behind us when we weren’t lookin. “And gents,” discoverin the twins givin him a nasty look. “We’re filmin for the county,” he said with a smile. “Mind if we shoot a bit around here?” “I do indeed,” said Granny with no smile. Smilin man was smilin up a storm. So was Cathy. But he didn’t seem to have SKILLS AND STRATEGIES ASSESSMENT UNIT 6 another word to say, so he and the camera man backed on out the yard, but you could hear the camera buzzin still. “Suppose you just shut that machine off,” said Granny real low through her teeth, and took a step down off the porch and then another. “Now, aunty,” Camera said, pointin the thing straight at her. “Your mama and I are not related.” Smilin man got his notebook out and a chewed-up pencil. “Listen,” he said movin back into our yard, “we’d like to have a statement from you . . . for the film. We’re filmin for the county, see. Part of the food stamp campaign. You know about the food stamps?” Granny said nuthin. 1. Which of the following sentences from the passage is written in dialect? 4. What makes Granny treat the camera men the way she does? Use details from the passage to support your answer. A. Cathy giggled into her collar. B. “I said to tell that man to get away from here with that camera.” C. “That boy don’t never have anything original to say,” say Cathy grown-up. D. “We thought we’d get a shot or two of the house and everything and then—” 2. Granny’s statements and actions suggest that she is A. B. C. D. quiet and shy confident and firm selfish and uncaring friendly and cooperative 3. What does this passage suggest a theme of the story will be? A. B. C. D. Making movies can be difficult. It’s peaceful and pretty in the country. We should make visitors feel welcome. People’s privacy and dignity should be respected. Unit Assessment To prepare for the Unit test, go to www.glencoe.com. Skills and Strategies Assessment 765 UNIT 6 SKILLS AND STRATEGIES ASSESSMENT Part 2: Reading Skills Read the passage. Then write the numbers 1 through 5 on a separate sheet of paper. For the first four questions, write the letter of the right answer next to the number for that question. Write your answer to the final question next to number 5. Global Warming 1 It’s getting warmer here on Earth. Scientists say our planet’s surface temperature has gone up one degree F over the last century. And there’s reason to believe the temperature will keep on rising in the future. This trend is known as global warming. Many scientists think that global warming is a serious problem. They believe that even small rises in temperature could cause big changes on Earth. Here are some of those possible changes: 2 Rise in Sea Level A warmer climate might cause the world’s glaciers to melt. (These huge, thick slabs of ice are found mainly in Antarctica, Greenland, and other cold places.) When glaciers melt and form water, some of the water goes into the sea. More water in the sea means a higher sea level. The level could also rise for another reason. Water expands, or takes up more space, as it becomes warmer. So if global warming raises the temperature of sea waters, the warmer water will expand and the sea level will rise. 3 Flooding and Damage to Plants and Animals A rise in sea level could cause huge floods to occur. Land along seacoasts could end up under water or could be washed away. Salt from seawater could get into the soil, harming plant and animal life. 4 Drought and Smaller Food Supply Global warming might also cause less rain to fall in some areas of the Earth. Droughts—long periods without rain— could harm crops in these areas. And smaller crops could lead to food shortages. 5 Health Problems Some scientists believe that global warming may also cause an increase in malaria rates. Malaria is a serious disease that is spread by a certain kind of mosquito. Like all mosquitoes, the malaria mosquito breeds in hot weather. Warmer temperatures might also cause an increase in the number of heart attacks that people suffer. That’s because very warm weather can be a strain on the human heart. Objectives 6 Reading Make predictions • Ask questions • Understand Clearly, the possible effects of cause and effect • Analyze text global warming are serious. Can we stop them from happening? Some scientists believe that we can. But in order to do so, we 766 UNIT 6 Why Do We Share Our Stories? SKILLS AND STRATEGIES ASSESSMENT 7 UNIT 6 will have to change our ways. Our use of fossil fuels may be the number one cause of global warming. Here’s why. When fossil fuels are burned, they give off a gas called carbon dioxide. This gas absorbs heat from the sun. Then it reflects the heat back into the Earth’s lower atmosphere (the gases near the surface of the Earth). When too much heat is reflected back, the temperature of the Earth rises. We release carbon dioxide into the atmosphere whenever we drive cars powered by a fossil fuel such as gas. And because much of our electricity is made by burning coal, another fossil fuel, our use of electricity also adds to the carbon dioxide level. The solution to the global warming problem lies with us. To cut down on the amount of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere, we must cut back on our use of fossil-fuel energy. Here are some ways to do that: • Drive less Walk, ride your bike, take public transportation, or carpool. Do what you can to cut down on the amount of time your family spends driving the car. • Use less electricity Turn out the lights when you leave a room. Turn off your computer and your TV when you’re not using them. • Support the use of solar power Solar power—power created by the heat of the sun—is clean, natural, and renewable. That means that as long as there’s a sun, there will be solar energy. Let people know the pluses of solar power. And use solar power yourself. For example, dry your clothes on a clothesline outdoors instead of in a dryer. 1. Which of the following is a cause of global warming? A. B. C. D. the addition of sea salt to the soil the melting of glaciers in Antarctica a decrease in rainfall in farming country an increase in the level of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere 2. Which of the following would most likely occur if everyone switched from fossil fuels to solar power? A. B. C. D. Air pollution would increase. Global warming would decrease. The supply of solar energy would decrease. The level of carbon dioxide in the air would increase. 3. The answer to which of the following questions would help readers understand paragraph 6? A. B. C. D. What are fossil fuels? Why does the sun give off heat? Who discovered global warming? Where is the upper atmosphere located? 4. Which of the following is the best analysis of how the passage is organized? A. B. C. D. time order comparison and contrast problem, cause, and solution most important idea to least important idea 5. Name and explain three possible effects of global warming. Use details from the passage to support your explanations. Skills and Strategies Assessment 767 UNIT 6 SKILLS AND STRATEGIES ASSESSMENT Part 3: Vocabulary Acquisition and English Language Skills On a separate sheet of paper, write the numbers 1 through 10. Next to each number, write the letter of the right answer for that question. Write the letter of the word that means about the same as the underlined word. 6. Which phrase contains slang? 1. to taunt someone A. hit B. teach C. tease D. praise 2. gnarled fingers A. long B. smooth Choose the correct answer for each question. C. crossed D. twisted A. a cool breeze B. cool the soup C. a cool song D. such cool weather 7. What does the underlined idiom mean in the following sentence? This is hard; would you lend a hand? A. clap B. help me C. watch me D. write it down 3. solemnly made a promise A. falsely B. seriously C. carelessly D. needlessly 4. regretfully saying no A. angrily B. secretly C. repeatedly D. sadly 5. contemporary fads A. present-day B. short-lived C. high-risk D. old-fashioned 8. Read the following dialogue. What does the underlined dialect mean? “I’m right peckish, mate,” Algie complained. “Okay. We’ll get something to eat in a few minutes,” Ben replied. A. “I’m very hungry, friend.” B. “I’m eager to work, sailor.” C. “I’m right and you’re wrong, wife.” D. “I’m in an awfully good mood, buddy.” 9. Use what you know about the word pull to figure out what pull means in the following sentence. I wish I had some pull where I work. A. time B. supplies C. influence D. vacation time Objectives Vocabulary Understand idioms • Understand slang • Distinguish literal from metaphoric meanings Grammar Identify direct objects • Identify indirect objects • Use compound and complex sentences • Combine sentences • Identify and correct run-on sentences • Correct errors in writing conventions 768 UNIT 6 Why Do We Share Our Stories? 10. In which sentence is the phrase “in hot water” used figuratively? A. B. C. D. Wash the dishes in hot water. We poached the eggs in hot water. She burned her finger in hot water. If you lie to Dad, you’ll be in hot water. SKILLS AND STRATEGIES ASSESSMENT UNIT 6 Part 4: Grammar and Writing Skills Write the numbers 1–8 on a separate sheet of paper. Then write the letter of the right answer next to the number for that question. 1. Which of the following sentences contains a direct object? A. B. C. D. The trees bent in the storm. Jeff returned at four o’clock. Jaguars run as fast as the wind. Casey loves cereal for breakfast. 3. Which of the following is a run-on sentence? A. I’ll help you with math I’m good at it. B. We could study together at my house or yours. C. Call me if you don’t understand the story problems. D. At first they seem hard, but they get easier with practice. 2. What is the indirect object in the sentence below? 4. Which of the following is correctly punctuated? Maurice showed the doctor his swollen ankle. A. B. C. D. Maurice doctor swollen ankle A. The game was great our team won by three points. B. I thought we would lose, our star player was injured. C. We will probably be in the playoffs, but there are no guarantees. D. We can’t lose any more players, or any more games in our division. Read the paragraph. Then answer the questions that follow. 1I didn’t want to go to school I was feeling sick. 2“I wonder just how sick you are” my mom said. 3“I guess your much too sick to go to the mall and look at new radios and cell phones tonight.” 4I had forgotten that we were suppose to go shopping for my birthday presents. 5. Which correction should be made to sentence 1? A. B. C. D. Insert a comma after “school.” Insert “and” after “school.” Insert “because” after “school.” Insert a comma and “but” after “school.” 6. Which correction should be made to sentence 2? A. B. C. D. Change “I” to “i.” Insert a comma after “are.” Insert a question mark after “are.” Change “mom” to “Mom.” 7. Which correction should be made to sentence 3? A. B. C. D. Change “your” to “you’re.” Change “too” to “to.” Change “mall” to “Mall.” Change “radios” to “radioes.” 8. Which correction should be made to sentence 4? A. Change “had forgotten” to “have forgot.” B. Insert a period after “forgotten” and capitalize “that.” C. Change “suppose” to “supposed.” D. Change “presents” to “presence.” Skills and Strategies Assessment 769