Revision Worksheet 1: Essay 3
ENG 280:005
Please complete this sheet and bring it to our conference. As it is helpful, consider responding to
the following questions in regards to argument, evidence, organization, and style/ mechanics.
1. Strengths: Describe the strong elements of your essay. Why do you feel like these are
positive attributes of your work? How do you plan to retain, expand, and further develop
these aspects in your revised essay? Be specific and cite particular sections of your paper.
2. Improvement: Describe areas that require improvement. Why do you feel like these areas
need attention? How do you plan to revise and strengthen these areas? Be specific and cite
particular sections of your paper.
3. Expansion: How do you specifically plan to expand the scope of your paper? Which
additional formal film elements do you plan to analyze? What specific content do you
envision adding to the paper?
4. Cohesion: Successful essays will seamlessly incorporate new material to produce a cohesive
final essay. How do you plan to add new content without just “tacking it on”? How might
your organization need to be modified to account for the new content?