Joe Marzolf 4/4/14 Senior Seminar: Musical Worlds Course Paper Draft - Incomplete Long Blues Song Published in 1938, Uncle Tom’s Children presents four (five in the 1940 reissue) short stories by Richard Wright that deal with the African-American experience in postbellum, Jim Crow America. The collection as whole, I believe, represents a Blues and Jazz aestheticism that reflects the increasing stake of African-American art in American culture during and after the Harlem Renaissance. While this essay will give some time to the collection as a whole, I will focus mostly on the short story “Long Black Song” because I believe it most exemplifies the musical experience. First, however, Richard Wright must be examined. Wright grew up in Roxie, Mississippi, a place that was very much a segregated, Southern town. The introduction in Uncle Tom’s Children, “The Ethics of Living Jim Crow”, is a collection of autobiographical vignettes from Wright’s life. This “autobiographical sketch” (1) reveals Wrights first contact with the strict rules of race relation through the story of a cinder war he had with his friends against some white boys. In the course of the conflict, considered a game by at least Wright and his friends, Wright got hit with one of the broken milk bottles being thrown by the white boys. When his mother saw him, afterwards, she smacked him and chastised him for not hiding from the white children (1-2). Wright’s hardships weren’t only interracial; he faced tension within his own community. In his fleshed out autobiography, Black Boy, Wright tells the story of how he became a “drunkard” at age six after a black man dragged him into a bar, and he began repeating obscenities to bar-goers for change to afford more drinks even though his mother continually beat him for his actions (20). Even his own family was a source of torment for Wright. His mother was an invalid for most of his late adolescence and his adulthood. He was in the care of his heavily religious grandmother who opposed his views at every turn and punished him ruthlessly until he became completely disenfranchised with religion and turned to atheism and, later, Communism. Even at a young age, Wright’s actions mirror, in broad strokes, the lifestyle that many Jazz and Blues musicals took on during their careers. Richard Wright turned to alcohol in his youth. John Coltrane turned to heroin. Both attempt to dull the pain of the world around them that was actively trying to deny them the freedom to be who they like and do what they want. Now, that isn’t to say that all Jazz and Blues musicians were addicted to something or another, and, in fact, Wright’s “alcoholism” was a fixture of his adolescence, not his adulthood. It does inform on the world in which African-American artists worked, a world where there are so few afforded opportunities forcing escapism and transcendence through drugs and alcohol and, positively, art. I believe there are other Richard Wright novels and stories that better exemplify Jazz and the Blues. The Outsider, for example, is steeped in Jazz, I believe. However, something happened after Uncle Tom’s Children that leaves it as the purest of Wright’s expressions. Wright, after writing Uncle Tom’s Children, was very clear in his intent as an author. In “How Bigger Was Born”, a companion essay to Wright’s seminal novel, Native Son, Wright reflects on Uncle Tom’s Children by saying: I had written a book of short stories which was published under the title of Uncle Tom's Children. When the review of that book began to appear, I realized that I had made an awful naive mistake. I found that I had written a book which even bankers' daughters could read and weep over and feel good about. I swore to myself that if I ever wrote another book, no one would weep over it; that it would be so hard and deep that they would have to face it without the consolation of tears. (454) Wright felt that Uncle Tom’s Children was too compromising and didn’t portray the cold, dark world he believed the African-American community lived in. The change, then, in Native Son and The Outsider and others was a much more ruthless Wright. He began writing characters that the audience did not have to identify with. Bigger Thomas and Damon Cross were both murderers cast as the protagonists of their novels. While I don’t discredit the skill evident in either novel or any of Wright’s other work, reading them after reading Uncle Tom’s Children, however, I cannot help but feel the anger in the texts. It is justifiable anger. It is understandable anger, but I believe there is a purity in Uncle Tom’s Children that makes its message more objective. Uncle Tom’s Children, while primarily drawing on its contemporary music like Jazz, pays homage to classical, European roots like Jazz itself. The collection is structured like a musical suite. Each smaller piece – story – is indicative of, but still extracted from, the larger work, the societal position of African-Americans in the early twentieth century. That is important to remember throughout the collection. Every story is not a unique moment in time. They are ordinary life put under a microscope. “The Ethics of Living Jim Crow” opens the collection like a band tuning their instruments. It follows Wright’s life in small vignettes of racial discrimination that prepares the reader for what is to come. “Big Boy Leaves Home” opens the suite. The opening banter between Big Boy and his friends as they walk through the woods mirrors the “playing-off” nature of improvisational Jazz as they hurl insults at each other and sing insulting songs. After two of Big Boy’s friends, Lester and Buck, are killed and Big Boy and Bobo are forced to separate and flee, the narrative becomes a solo performance. Big Boy quickly finds himself all alone trying to escape the encircling mob. In that moment, the first appearance of a recurring motif appears. Bobo’s capture and lynching while Big Boy watches helplessly from his hiding place paints the violence that drips from every story in the collection. In fact, the story as a whole sets up a frame that each of the following stories improvise on. It establishes the skeleton of the narrative: a force calls for action, said action draws the ire of white society, the characters are forced to deal with the consequences levied from the dominant group. The treatment of this framework changes as the stories progress. “Down By the Riverside” signifies a gospel song by the same name and includes an excerpt of the song (Wright, Uncle Tom’s Children, 73). The story follows Mann, a farmer, during a flood as he tries to get his pregnant wife to safety before being swept up in the effort to repair a failing levy. Like Big Boy, Mann is put in a position of having angered society. Unbeknownst to him, he utilizes the boat of a white man, Mr. Heartfield. When Mann arrives at Heartfield and asks for help, he is forced to kill Heartfield when the man begins shooting at him for stealing the boat. This mirrors Big Boys shooting of Jim at the pond. Neither wanted to kill. Instead, they were put in a situation where they had to protect themselves, but, ultimately, they are demonized for their actions. The characters diverge in their stories at the end. Where Big Boy hides and escapes, Mann is captured and decides to end his life on his terms by trying to run into the swollen river before the soldiers can kill him. The improvisation of Big Boys’ narrative in “Down By the Riverside” seems like a sadder, less hopeful telling. However, I argue there is more hope in it than “Big Boy Leaves Home.” Big Boy leave the South in secret and will have to start with nothing while still living in fear of being found. Mann, in his death, takes agency. He takes control from the soldiers when he runs and chooses his death. It is still a less than hopeful ending, but it is, I assert, an improvement over Big Boy’s place as fugitive-refugee. “Long Black Song” is a turning point in the collection, and the most important story in the collection in my opinion. The story itself is broken up into four parts, which is odd considering the pieces relatively short length, but this is present throughout the collection. The breaks don’t offer much in the way of division. Idea flow freely between the sections and they occur almost immediately after each other, temporally. I offer, then, that the division into four sections emulates a measure, specifically, a four-four measure. This story, then, would comprise of one bar of music not one full song. This frames the narrative not as an entire message but as a part of a larger message. The message isn’t that all of the collection adds up to a song. While the measure hypothesis could be and perhaps should be extended beyond “Long Black Song,” its title is unique. “Long Black Song” is not long. It is a slim thirty-two pages. The collection itself is only 263 pages. The titular “Long Black Song” is not self-referential. It, instead, speaks to the broader, real African-American experience. While the story is self-contained, Wright wants to make sure the reader understands this is not isolated; this is not special. This is a facet of real people that have to live in constant fear. Silas, though, acts as a sort of beacon for those in fear. He is “Long Black Song”’s Big Boy and Mann. Popular convention would label Sarah in that role in this story, and I believe that her and Silas have co-roles in this story. However, I believe the arc that Silas follows is closer to the established motif. He is placed in the situation of having a salesman come into his house and rapes his wife. Antebellum race relations would treat the whole situation by ignoring it. Silas would have no recourse. Here, though, he takes his compensation in a pound of flesh. This is radically different from Big Boy who acts out of an almost animalistic instinct, and significantly different from Mann who chooses agency only when faced with certain death. Silas has the opportunity to make it all go away. If he pays the man for the graphophone, everything goes back to normal. Instead, he stand up for himself and his family. Ultimately, this leads to his death, but dying was his choice and he chooses it while under no duress unlike Mann. In addition to Silas as a play on the Big Boy-motif, there is also a recurring, Wagnerian motif in “Long Black Song”. The story begins with Ruth, Sarah and Silas’ child, crying. After trying to sooth the child with water, Sarah gives the child an old clock. Ruth immediately starts slapping the clock with a rhythmic “Bink! Bink! Bink!” (126) This noise functions as a band leader calling a band to order with a “One, two, three.” Its placement at the beginning of the story establishes the frame of the narrative. Ruth’s crying is the tuning of the band, and her slapping the clock is the start of the piece. After Sarah gives Ruth a stick to hit the clock with, making the clock a true drum allegory, the sound changes. “Bink” is never heard again. Instead, the noise becomes “Bang!” (127) With her drum, Ruth acts like an accompaniment that keeps Sarah’s improvisations in context. Without them, the narrative floats off into the past as Sarah remembers Tom and reflects on his disappearance. Throughout Sarah’s memories, the sharp banging runs constantly to keep the piece grounded in the present. Upon the arrival of the white salesman, the banging becomes secondary to the music of the graphophone. The tribal, percussive melodies are usurped by the commercialized hymnal. The salesman insists that the graphophone is what Sarah needs. Its time keeping and its music are what it is needed. It isn’t until Sarah’s rape when the banging returns – with new players at the instrument. The refinement of the socially acceptable hymns fade out to the simple, animalistic rhythms of sex. After that, the only banging in the story comes from guns. The innocence of Ruth’s playing goes silent and is replaced by the sounds of violence. Even though delicate music tried to take over the piece, ultimately, it is the pounding percussion that perseveres because it is speaks to the every aspect of experience. Life and happiness through Ruth, sorrow through Sarah, and empowerment and death through Silas. I believe the remaining two stories represent a divergence in the narrative. Where the other narratives are increasingly more empowering of their main characters, “Fire and Cloud” and “Bright and Morning Star” represent equal power channeled through different avenues. Incomplete Draft Things to still do: 1. Apply thesis to “Fire and Cloud” and “Bright and Morning Star” 2. Further explore Sarah’s characterization in “Long Black Song” 3. Expand on all stories of the collection including the collection as a whole 4. More direct ties to music especially Jazz and the Blues Works Cited Wright, Richard. Black Boy. New York: HarperPerennial Modern Classics, 2008. Print. Wright, Richard. "How Bigger Was Born." Native Son. New York: Harper Perennial Modern Classics, 2005. 431-62. Print. Wright, Richard. Uncle Tom's Children. New York: Harper Perennial Modern Classics, 2008. Print.