ELA 8 Standard 1 8-30 9/3/02 12:37 PM Page 23 8.1.1 NAEP Idioms, Metaphors, and Similes Purpose Students will analyze idioms and comparisons to infer the literal and figurative meanings of phrases. Materials For the teacher: chalk, chalkboard For the students: copies of Black Line Master (BLM) Metaphor or Simile?, pen or pencil, paper Activity A. Pre-Activity Discussion 1. Begin the class by using as many idioms as you can, as outrageously as possible (e.g., “I’m pleased as punch to be your teacher today, because we’re going to kick up our heels and have a blast. I’ll bet you dollars to donuts you’ll grab the bull by the horns and get this material down cold!”) 2. Ask students what kind of speech you were just using. 3. Explain that you used idioms. Define idioms as vivid phrases that mean something different than they seem to say literally. 4. Go over some examples with the class. Encourage students to supply sample idioms (e.g., spill the beans, take the cake, talk one’s ear off, bury one’s head in the sand, pay through the nose, start with a clean slate). 5. Have students use each idiom in a sentence and explain what it means. 6. Encourage students to speculate on how each idiom came to mean what it does (e.g., students used to write on slates; a clean slate is one that has been erased, like a clean chalkboard). B. Discuss Metaphor and Simile 1. Explain that idioms can use the following two techniques to create meaning. They compare things using like or as (e.g., “busy as a bee”). Say that this is a simile and write the term on the board. They say that one thing is another, even though it is not that way in reality (e.g., “He’s a live wire”). Say that this is a metaphor and write the term on the board. 2. Reinforce that similes use like or as, and that metaphors do not use like or as. (continued) Standard 1 / Activity 1 Indiana English/Language Arts Grade 8 Curriculum Framework, October 2002 meeting individual NEEDS To help new English speakers remember common idioms, have them draw pictures showing their literal meanings and write sentences using each idiom. extending THE ACTIVITY Have students make up three idioms of their own and read one to the class. Have the class guess what the idiom means. To help students find ideas, give suggestions for idioms that describe a suggested thing, person, or situation, such as the following: an overly excitable person, a very boring movie, a person who tells great jokes, how one feels about going to the dentist, something very big, something very small. Standards Links 8.1.2, 8.3.6, 8.3.7 page 23 Standard 1 Standard Indicator ELA 8 Standard 1 8-30 8/30/02 5:16 PM Page 24 Standard 1 Activity (continued) 3. Explain that similes and metaphors are used in literary language, and are not limited to idioms. C. Discuss the Poems 1. Distribute the BLM Metaphor or Simile? 2. Have students look at the title of the first poem. If students are uncertain about what deferred means, explain the word to them. 3. Read the poem aloud to the class. 4. Ask students if the poem uses similes or metaphors. 5. Go through the poem line by line, having students identify each simile. 6. Ask students what they think the poem means. Explain that Langston Hughes was an African-American poet writing before the major successes of the civil rights struggle. 7. Repeat steps 3 to 6 with the second poem. D. Discuss the Idioms 1. Have students work independently to identify whether each idiom on the BLM is a simile or metaphor. 2. When students are finished, go through the list as a class. Make sure the students can identify similes and metaphors and understand what the idioms mean. E. Close the Activity 1. Discuss why we use idioms, metaphors, and similes (e.g., they are more vivid and memorable than conventional speech). 2. Encourage students to listen for idioms, metaphors, and similes over the next few days to see how often we rely on them in everyday speech. Classroom Assessment Basic Concepts and Processes Ask students the following questions: What is an idiom? What is a metaphor? What phrase in A Dream Deferred is a simile? What is your favorite idiom that uses a metaphor? page 24 Standard 1 / Activity 1 Indiana English/Language Arts Grade 8 Curriculum Framework, October 2002 ELA 8 Standard 1 8-30 8/30/02 5:16 PM Page 25 Name: METAPHOR OR SIMILE? Harlem (A Dream Deferred) Langston Hughes, 1951 What happens to a dream deferred? Does it dry up Like a raisin in the sun? Or fester like a sore − And then run? Does it stink like rotten meat? Or crust and sugar over − like a syrupy sweet? Maybe it just sags like a heavy load. Write “M” next to the idiom if it is a metaphor; write “S” if it is a simile. 1. He overreacted again and made a mountain out of a molehill. 2. What a pain. It’s like looking for a needle in a haystack. 3. Don’t go into so much detail − just say it in a nutshell. 4. She threw a whale of a party. Or does it explode? 5. They’re not talking. I think their friendship is on the rocks. Does the above poem use mostly similes or metaphors? ____________________ 6. My math teacher looks mean, but his bark is worse than his bite. 7. No way. You’re pulling my leg! Paper Matches Paulette Jiles, 1973 My aunts washed dishes while the uncles squirted each other on the lawn with garden hoses. Why are we in here, I said, and they are out there. That’s the way it is, said Aunt Hetty, the shrivelled-up one. I have the rages that small animals have, being small, being animal. Written on me was a message, “At Your Service” like a book of paper matches. One by one we were taken out and struck. We come bearing supper, our heads on fire. Does the above poem use mostly similes or metaphors? ______________________ 8. Look at all the food! They’ve really gone overboard. 9. Don’t worry. It’s as easy as falling off a log. 10. I don’t have anything to do with that. You’re barking up the wrong tree. 11. At formal parties, he’s like a fish out of water. 12. I can’t build models. I’m all thumbs. 13. Careful − you have to take what he says with a grain of salt. 14. Exactly! You hit the nail on the head. 15. That dress fits like a glove. Standard 1 / Activity 1 Indiana English/Language Arts Grade 8 Curriculum Framework, October 2002 Black Line Master 1 page 25