Essay 1: Rhetorical analysis Peer Review Worksheet Grading criteria: 1. page length (3 full pages – not one sentence less!!) 2. coherence of paragraphs 3. development of thoughts with detail and illustration 4. organization 5. usual surface level features As the writer reads his/her paper out loud, read along and think about and mark where appropriate these issues: the intro – does it clearly state what the paper is about (without rambling on and on) the body paragraphs – do they start with topic sentences and does each sentence in that paragraph support that topic (cross out any BS or extraneous material); mark where new paragraphs might begin, if necessary the conclusion – does it summarize the main points and give a philosophical or nicely “rounded” off feel to the paper? did the writer reach page length – if not, what can be done? When the writer is done reading, think first of several positive but specific things to say: “I liked the way you did …..” Then go over the marks you made on the paper, what they mean, what suggestions you had to deal with the above bulleted items.