Term Two Descriptive Writing Sample
2010
By Asher Lim
The Haunted House.
I see a dark sky, dead trees, and a horrible
house. It looks haunted too. I can see graves
and a muddy path. When I stood in it, it was so
muddy, I almost got stuck. When I looked up, I
saw some windows, and one window had a
light on. The house was brown. There were lots
of shadow places out side the house. I could
hear the whistle of the wind. Thunder storms
crashing, it was so loud, I felt like I was going
deaf. I could hear doors creaking, ghosts
wailing, and people screaming. I smelt,
disgusting gas, it smelt so bad, I felt like I was
going to faint. I could smell the gooey mud,
and the stench of the dead guys in the graves.
I had a taste of the muddy stuff for some
reason, it tasted like sloppy glop. I threw up. I
could feel the disgusting mud in my bare
hands, all runny and that. It was gross!