Secondary English/Literacy Team Shakespeare Paper Marking Grid To get a Level 5 or higher on the Shakespeare paper you need to: Achieved Developing Write about both parts of the text referred to in the question. Discuss how the audience might respond to the characters or scene. Explain how Shakespeare makes us feel and think the way we do by the language he uses and by what characters do and say. Analyse the features of language and what they contribute to character and action. Say why characters speak and behave as they do, don’t just describe what they do. Use quotations and examples from the extracts to support and develop points. Focus on overall question - points linked and refer back to the question. Demonstrate understanding of ideas, themes and issues. Target My strengths in the Shakespeare paper are: To further improve my performance in the Shakespeare paper my two targets are: 1. 2. EA2008 Secondary English/Literacy Team Longer Writing Task Achieved Developing Target Secure movement between tenses and verb forms. Variety of sentence types and structures used for effect. Accurate use of a range of punctuation. The whole text is structured and sequenced clearly. Different paragraph lengths and structures are used for effect. Paragraphs are linked to guide the reader through the text. Within paragraphs a range of devices are used to link ideas. The chosen form is adapted to suit task and purpose. The writing is interesting and influences the reader. Maintains a consistent viewpoint that acknowledges the wider context of the issue. Wide vocabulary and precise use of language. Use of a range of language devices for effect and impact. My strengths in the Longer Writing Task are: To further improve my performance in the Longer Writing Task my two targets are: 1. 2. EA2008 Secondary English/Literacy Team Shorter Writing Task Achieved Developing Target Length, focus and structure of sentences varied to add interest. Variety of verb forms, including movement between tenses, used confidently to create interest. Within paragraphs, ideas linked by a range of devices. Range of punctuation used to give clarity. Clear focus on task, reader and purpose. The form is adapted to engage the reader. Develops and maintains a consistent viewpoint. Use of a range of language features to add interest and variety. Wide vocabulary and precise use of language. Accurate spelling, including of ambitious or complex words My strengths in the Shorter Writing Task are: To further improve my performance in the Shorter Writing Task my two targets are: 1. 2. EA2008