Monthly Report
Report Date:
9/30
Date
Time(Log In~Out)
Preparer: Anita
Members
American Tutor(s)
Topic
9/11
07:05~07:59
Group1
Ram
9/18
07:05~07:59
Group1
Serena
My New High
School Life
My Favorite Song
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Coming Month Topic Assignment
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Michelle
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Cuture Shock
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Current Month Essays
My New High School Life
Anita
Topic
Preparer
9/8
Reviewed Date
Essay Editor Serena
Chu-Pei Group-01
Group Name
Anita:
This is my senior year in high school, Chu-Pei Senior High. I was very excited when the
school started. During this week, I have made lots of friends. And I also found our my
class is more active than other classes. It is a good sign, because we will have many
activities in the future and I believe we can have make tons of cooperation memories.
By the way, nice to meet you! My foreign friend!!~~
Nice to meet you, too! Very nice sentence structures, Anita. You need work on finding
the right places to put your articles (articles meaning, “the” and “a”), but other than that,
this essay is very good.
Leo:
I"m a freshman in CHU-PEI Senior High School.
Everything in the school is great. I had remembered
that I don't know not knowing anything about the school when during
the training of the freshman training, but I love the school
very much now. I hope that I can do my best in my
homework and sport, because I want to be a successful
graduate after in three years.
Your writing is very clean, Leo! Well done. Focus on your verbs: some are present tense
and some are past tense—you have to be consistent. Instead of saying, “I had
remembered that I don’t know anything…,” say, “I remember not knowing anything.” It
is present tense, since the rest of your article appears to be that way.
Franciae:
When I graduated from junior high school, I felt so excited! In the high school , you
have lots of choice of the clubs And I think there are which means many things to delay
the schoolwork. For example, if you join the a club which might that practices everyday,
your grade will get worse! Actually , how to keep your grade good and have fun in club
is important Keeping grades good and having fun in a club is important, right?
You have a great story here! However, you seem to be confusing the appropriate
articles. “The” and “a” are different. You’re also adding extra detail that makes the
essay a little unclear. But really, I enjoyed reading the essay!
Michelle:
I just graduate from junior high school. Now I’m a freshman in senior high school. On
August fifteenth, I had my orientation in at my new school . “I will have a good time
here,” I thought when I walked into the school . In those three days, I had a good time. I
met my new classmates and teachers . I also made new friends . All in all, I love my new
high school life . Wish that I could do I wish I will continue doing better in the rest of
my high school life .
You have very few mistakes! Excellent job, Michelle. The only problem you seem to be
having is punctuation. Don’t forget about your commas and periods. Great job!
Sandy:
I am a high school student now, and life in high school is pretty much the
exact opposite of everything I used to know. There are a lot of things that
interest me quite a bit. For instance, we have exchange students at our
school. You might be wondering whether it is true or not, but it’s definitely
true. The longer I stay at school, the more I enjoy my life there. All in all, I
have already loved my time at high school.
Wow. You have no mistakes at all. This is very awesome, Sandy! And very
exciting! You used the appropriate transititions and punctuation, also! Great
job!
Linda:
A new beginning, a new stage, a new school, a group of new classmates, a new trial……
There are many new things are in my life right now. I want to do anyeverything quickly
and learn a lot of knowledge and talent. Make a lot of friends. I hope that I can plenitude
my life and be happy everyday in the next three years. I joined the National Music Club,
because I want to learn how to play the cello. I have known about many high school way
of life since I stared to go to school. I have known a few friends who can chat with me. I
am very happy now.
Awesome, Linda! Very few mistakes and an interesting essay. Always be
aware of words that will make the rhthym of the writing better.
Leo’s
Sandy’s
Linda’s
Anita’s
My Favorite Song
Anita
Topic
Preparer
9/15
Reviewed Date
Essay Editer
Chu-Pei--01
Group Name
Anita:
"Call Me Maybe" is my favorite song. That my first time heard this song was in
English summer camp. This song is told a popular woman who fell in love with a
man. When I first heard this song, I really wanted to dance and followed the
music rhythm then. It is very exciting song that I ever listened to. Do you like it?
Correction: “Call Me Maybe” is my favorite song. The firsttime I heard this song
was in English summer camp. This song tells about a woman who falls in love
with a man. When I first heard this song, I really wanted to dance. It’s the most
exciting song I ever listened to. Do you like it, too?
Carly Rae Jepsen, (1985 November 21, 2010 -) is a singer from Mission, British
Columbia, Canada. In 2007, she participated in the Canadian Idol Season 5 and
get the third place, then participated in the Canadian Idol Top Three Music
Tour . After attending the draft, she quickly signed Fontana and Maple Music
record company, and released her debut album on September 30, 2008 "Tug of
War". 3 years later, Carly via 604 Records released "Call Me Maybe" singles,
then released EP "Curiosity". "Call Me Maybe" achieved great success, first in
the Billboard singles chart of Canada won the first and keep the top spot four
weeks, and subsequently achieved the same results in the U.S. standings. In
addition to the United States, the song still in Australia, Ireland and the United
Kingdom won the championship position. Carly Interscope Records contract in
2012. "Call Me Maybe" music video on Youtube elected as YouTube Baida
music 1 June to August also made a record ten weeks, and less than 220
million hits already 6 months . Carly joined Universal Music's first album "Kiss"
will be issued on September 28, 2012.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fWNaRrxAic&list=ALHTd1VmZQRNr4TtpzDOt5cpTNERAgncEx&index=1&feature=pl
cp
Michelle:
I knew Carly Rae Jepsen by broadcasting. At first I just thought she
was as same as other artists, but I was wrong. The more songs I
listened the more I like her. All of her songs I like “Sunshine On My
Shoulders” the most, but this song is not as famous as “Call Me
Maybe”. Even so when I listened to this song I feel my heart is full of
satisfied、courage and hope. I thought I could do everything because
of her lovely voice. Her voice gave me force to do something I like
but no one supports me. The more She is a hard-working girl I
thought that is the reason why I like her so much.
Correction: I found out about Carly Rae Jepsen through TV. At first, I just thought she
was the same as other artists, but I was wrong. The more songs I heard by her, the
more I liked her. One of my favorite songs by her is: “Sunshine on my Shoulders,”
though it’s not as famous as “Call Me Maybe.” Still, when I listen to “Sunshine on my
Shoulders” my heart is filled with courage and hope. Her voice gives me the force to
do things that I like, though no one supports me in my actions. Because she is a hardworking girl, I admire her so much.
Sunshine on my shoulders
Sunshine on my shoulders makes me happy
Sunshine in my eyes can make me cry
Sunshine on the water looks so lovely
Sunshine almost always makes me high
If I had a day that I could give you
I'd give to you a day just like today
If l had a song that l could sing for you
I'd sing a song to make you feel this way
Sunshine on my shoulders makes me happy
Sunshine in my eyes can make me cry
Sunshine on the water looks so lovely
Sunshine almost always makes me high
If l had a tale that l could tell you
I'd tell a tale sure to make you smile
If l had a wish that l could wish for you
I'd make a wish for sunshine all the while
Sunshine on my shoulders makes me happy
Sunshine in my eyes can make me cry
Sunshine on the water looks so lovely
Sunshine almost always makes me high
Sunshine almost all the time makes me high
Sunshine almost always
Linda:I very like this song” Call Me Maybe”. I like its lyric because it is so funny and I
like its melody because it is very brisk. When I heard this song, I danced with the
song. I also like the song called Whistle by Flo Rida. I like its lyric and rhythm. He
can whistle, but I can not whistle. When I was little, I hoped that I can whistle to blow
a song. That sounds so cool. Its lyric and rhythm are as like as the song called” Call
Me Maybe “. I am looking forward to her first album” Kiss “ very much.
Correction: I like the song “Call Me Maybe.” I like the lyrics because It is so funny. Its
melody is also very fun. When I first heard this song, I danced with it. I can’t wait for
her album “Kiss” to debut.I also like the song “Whistle” by Flo Rida. I like the lurics
and rhythm. In the song, he whistles, but I can’t whistle. When I was little, I wished I
could whistle a song. Whistling sounds so cool.
Francine:She is pretty good, right? My first time to heard this song is in America!
When I
was shopping in the A&F(a store which sells clothes), I heard “Call me,maybe?”
She is also a popular singer , teenagers like her voice! And my favorite singer of
pop music is Katy Perry! She can make songs by herself ,and she won many
Grammy Awards in the past few years~ And another singer,Kelly Clarkson, has
A lots of good record on music creation! I love “Stronger” because it’s telling about
how to make yourself become strong after the break.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xn676-fLq7I
It’s melody will make you want to listen again and again!
Correction: Carly Rae Jepsen is pretty good right? The first time I heard this song
was in America, when I was shopping at Abercrombie and Fitch. Jepsen is a
popular singer, and a lot of teenagers like her voice. My favorite pop singer is Katy
Perry. She writes her songs on her own and she has won many Grammy Awards in
the past few years. Another singer, Kelly Clarkson, has a lot of good music. I love
“Stronger” because its message is to make yourself stronger after a break-up.
Sandy: Carly Rae Jepsen is known for her song "Call Me
Maybe". It is a very popular song everywhere. I could hear it
even when I had lunch at my school. “Call Me Maybe” have got
tons of thumbs-ups on YouTube, and many singers on YouTube
covered it. I like it because of its melody. It is really catchy.
Moreover, the twist at the end of its video is really funny.
Some people even thought this song should be called "Call my
guitarist maybe". This song never gets old!
Correction: Carly Rae Jepsen is known for her song “Call Me
Maybe.” It is a very popular song. I hear it a lot at lunch every
day. “Call Me Maybe” has gotten tons of thumbs-ups on
YouTube, as well as many covers by other singers. I like it
mostly because of its melody. It is really catchy. Morever, the
twist at the end of the video is really funny. Some people even
think this song should be called “Call My Guitarist Maybe.” It
never gets old!
Leo: There are many songs that I like, including Kelly
Clarkson’s” Strong” Timbaland’s ” Hands in the air” and
Eminem’s” Not afraid”……But the favorite song that I like is
Danel Powter’s” Bad Day”. The reason that I like the song is its
lyrics. The lyrics make me go out the deprossion. I can’t forget
the test which is between junior high school and senior high
school. I faided it. I was very sad at that time, but the song let
my point of view turn into positive. That’s why I like the song
very much.
Correction: There are many songs that I like, including Kelly
Clarkson’s “Stronger,” Timbaland’s “Hands in the Air,” and
Eminem’s “Not Afraid.” Byt my favorite song is Daniel Powter’s
“Bad Day.” The reason that I like the song is its lyrics. The
lyrics get me out of depression. I can’t forget how it got me out
of the depression of a failed test. That’s why I like the song so
much.