[parts of speech]
This poem contains both naïve or ironical.
Corrections: This poem contains both naïve or ironical expressions.
[usage] lack, responsible
Victor is lack of responsibility for take care of him.
Corrections: Victor lacks a proper sense of responsibility.
Victor is/should be responsible for taking care of him.
[punctuation]
The Chimney Sweeper has two poems, one is Songs of Innocence and the other is
Songs of experience. [punctuation] The main idea William Blake was trying to show
the background of these chimney sweepers who are only children. Showing that
children labor was well known during the 18th and 19th century in England. [Sentence
Fragment]
Corrections: There are two versions of “The Chimney Sweeper,” respectively from
William Blake’s Songs of Innocence and Songs of Experience. Though in different
tones, the two poems present the hardships of these chimney sweepers, who are
only children laboring with club feet in 19th-century industrial London.
[Sentence Construction][paraphrasing]
The image of “lift a Box” shows the dead part of her is awaking. The creak of crossing
her soul is as a clear consciousness appeared like a bell waking her up. It seems like
she is going to find her inner self successfully, but the bell and being gathered like an
ear makes her apart from the world.
Corrections: The image of “lift a Box” shows that the dead part of her is awaking. The
creaking sounds of the coffin-carriers crossing her soul seem to wake her up like a
bell. It seems like she is going to find her inner self successfully, while she is so
focused on her sensations that heaven becomes the bell, and her being, the ear
responding to its beckon.
[faulty parallelism]
1. In that place, the creature learns speak and words from the De Lacey family.
Corrections: In that place, the creature learns to speak and read from the De Lacey
family.
2. Although all the creatures hold quizzical speeches, always full of meanings and
interpretations, the Cat is the first character which seems to be granted with
self-awareness and consciousness, and have both critical sense and judgement
about the world of Wonderland, marked by a seeming absent (parts of speech
noun) of logic and shrouded in mystery.
Corrections: Although all the creatures hold quizzical speeches which are open to
interpretations, the Cat is the first character which seems to be granted with
self-awareness, critical sense about Wonderland, but also marked by a seeming
absence of logic and shrouded in mystery.
Conjunctions &
Millamant who is an independent woman and has a clear thought about herself
marriage. If Mirabell can’t follow the conditions that Millamant asks him to follow it.
Corrections: Millamant is an independent woman with some clear ideas about
marriage, so she asks Mirabell to follow the conditions she sets.
Being Text-Specific
The life of word is realized when poet has certain aims in his work. As the first line
suggests, the weapon serves simply as a means. But the meaning of word lies in the
hands of the poet. When literati hold inspiration, they have to illustrate the central
countenance of the idea. Especially for poet, the works must be polished over and
over again within limited words.
Corrections:
The life of the word is realized only when poet has certain aims in his
work, which “carry” the word away to the world. As the first line suggests, the word
can be a “loaded weapon” that stays un-used in a corner. But the meaning of word lies
in the hands of the poet. When a poet is inspired, s/he has to illustrate the central
countenance of their ideas through the interactions between the word and elements in
nature such as woods, mountains and does.