Coming of Age and Identity 10th Grade Honors English 4 week Unit Jeana Eafanti and Nicole Eulberg EDUC463, Fall 2010 Informative Introduction Students: 10th graders ranging in ages 15-16, their interest range from athletics and school activities to their social popularity and relationship status, all the students in the class are of the honors ability level Unit Information: This unit will be a mid-semester unit falling in between the Intro to the Classics unit (1st unit) and the Play and Poetry unit (3rd unit) which would follow this unit. Texts: Realm of Possibility by David Levithan (1st book to be read in the unit) and Perks of Being a Wallflower by Stephen Chbosky (2nd book to be read in the unit) Standards being used: The Colorado Academic Standards for 10th grade Standard Grade Level Expectation Tenth Grade 1. Oral Expression and Listening 1. Content that is gathered carefully and organized well successfully influences an audience For our culminating project (unit 6), students are grouped together and asked to produce a video that demonstrates their knowledge of the overarching themes and concepts researched throughout the semester. 2. Effectively operating in small and large groups to accomplish a goal requires active listening In units 1-3 and 6, students are placed in groups or have the option to work with a partner for one of the two major assignments assigned. Each group setting allows them to listen and discuss with one another. 2. Reading for All Purposes 1. Literary and historical influences determine the meaning of traditional and contemporary literary texts In unit 3, students will use historical influences to create an informative essay 2. The development of new ideas and concepts within informational and persuasive manuscripts In unit 3, students use the media to create an informative poster that informs other students of how the major themes are still represented within the media today 3. Writing and Composition 1. Literary or narrative genres feature a variety of stylistic devices to engage or entertain an audience In unit 4, students keep a diary using of which will feature a variety of stylistic devices to engage or entertain an audience. 2. Organizational writing patterns inform or persuade an audience In unit 2, students create and perform a skit regarding a certain part in Trifles that will be used to inform the class. 3. Grammar, language usage, mechanics, and clarity are the basis of ongoing refinements and revisions within the writing process In unit 4, students are assigned a character from the play Othello and are asked to keep diary for two weeks written in that characters mindset. Throughout the writing process, students continue revising their entries to eventually turn in a finished booklet with all the entries presented. 4. Research and Reasoning 1. Collect, analyze, and evaluate information obtained from multiple sources to answer a question, propose solutions, or share findings and conclusions In unit 1, students use pictures, quotes, etc. to share findings or conclusions that relate to the overarching theme. 2. An author’s reasoning is the essence of legitimate writing and requires evaluating text for validity and accuracy In unit 5, students write their own critique of The Awakening evaluating text for validity and accuracy. Understanding By Design Unit Template Title of Unit Curriculum Area Developed By The Coming of Age and Identity Grade Level 10th Grade Honors English Time Frame 4 weeks Jeana Eafanti and Nicole Eulberg Identify Desired Results (Stage 1) Content Standards 1. Oral Expression and Listening 1. Content that is gathered carefully and organized well successfully influences an audience 2. Effectively operating in small and large groups to accomplish a goal requires active listening 2. Reading for All Purposes 1. Literary and historical influences determine the meaning of traditional and contemporary literary texts 2. The development of new ideas and concepts within informational and persuasive manuscripts 3. Writing and Composition 1. Literary or narrative genres feature a variety of stylistic devices to engage or entertain an audience 2. Organizational writing patterns inform or persuade an audience 3. Grammar, language usage, mechanics, and clarity are the basis of ongoing refinements and revisions within the writing process 4. Research and Reasoning 1. Collect, analyze, and evaluate information obtained from multiple sources to answer a question, propose solutions, or share findings and conclusions 2. An author’s reasoning is the essence of legitimate writing and requires evaluating text for validity and accuracy Understandings Overarching Understanding Students will understand the value of individuality and the effect stereotypes may have on ones identity. Essential Questions Overarching What does it mean to be different? What deems a human being as different? Related Misconceptions People who speak, act, and make different choices than me have nothing in common with me. Those who do things different than me are acting incorrectly. Is being different out of the norm? What makes up ones’ identity? Topical What do the relationships in the Realm of Possibility and Perks of Being a Wallflower contribute to the characters’ identity? How do stereotypes affect character identity? How is coming of age an example of identity? How can you relate to any given aspect of identity that has been evident throughout these two books? Knowledge Skills Students will know… Students will be able to… +How to identify and be aware of stereotypes that exist in everyday life +Demonstrate their ability to identify with characters +How to write and speak through free verse writing +Express their knowledge of free verse through their writing and speaking +More about life experience through literature + What it means to be “coming of age” +Express their understanding through various forms +How and what it means to gain interpretation from a text +Activate prior knowledge +Draw inferences about the text Assessment Evidence (Stage 2) Performance Task Description Goal To learn about and accept common differences among people in the world and recognize how those things can shape one’s identity. Role Students will act as readers, writers, and speakers Audience Teacher Situation To understand and recognize what contributes to a person’s identity Product/Performance Video Presentation Project Standards 1. 2. 3. 4. Oral Expression and Listening Reading for All Purposes Writing and Composition Research and Reasoning Other Evidence Students will complete the following activities: -Character Maps - Journal Entries -On-Going Poetry/ Free verse Speaking and Writing - Psycho Drama Learning Plan (Stage 3) Where are your students headed? Where have they been? How will you make sure the students know where they are going? Our students our headed towards achieving self discovery through the texts that we are reading and the assignments that they will be doing. We hope that students have enjoyed reading in the past, and can now find books that they can relate to. Each day we will try to reinforce the importance of self discovery through identity so that the students know what they should be achieving throughout this unit. How will you hook students at the beginning of the unit? At the beginning of our unit, we will hook students by playing a movie clip that they are familiar with and can relate to. What events will help students experience and explore the big idea and questions in the unit? How will you equip them with needed skills and knowledge? Major events that will help students experience and explore our big idea will be things like, Socratic seminars, psychodramas, personal reflections, letter writing, class discussions, and art related projects. These assignments will equip them with the needed skills and knowledge for our unit because they will be using their lives as examples that relate to the texts we read. How will you cause students to reflect and rethink? How will you guide them in rehearsing, revising, and refining their work? Students will reflect and rethink during specific assignments throughout the unit, like reflecting on their personal lives, and recreating themes that were explored during the unit in their culminating assessment. We will give them opportunities to rehearse, revise, and refine their work throughout the unit and will explain to them the importance of doing so. How will you help students to exhibit and self-evaluate their growing skills, knowledge, and understanding throughout the unit? Our culminating assessment will help students exhibit and self evaluate their knowledge and growth throughout the semester because they will have to demonstrate their understanding of the themes and important concepts represented throughout their unit. Along with that, all of our assignments build upon one another. Each assignment requires students to access their previous knowledge and understanding of the lesson the day before. How will you tailor and otherwise We provide differentiation within each lesson so that each personalize the learning plan to optimize the engagement and effectiveness of ALL students, without compromising the goals of the unit? student is accommodated for and can acquire the highest level of learning along with the rest of the class. How will you organize and sequence the learning activities to optimize the engagement and achievement of ALL students? We organized all of our lessons by basing each activity off of one another, starting with our intro activity, and going from there. From: Wiggins, Grant and J. Mc Tighe. (1998). Understanding by Design, Association for Supervision and Curriculum Development ISBN # 0-87120-313-8 (ppk) Rationale For our unit plan, we have decided to focus on two novels, The Realm of Possibility and The Perks of Being a Wallflower. We feel as though both of these novels deal with issues that students can relate to and therefore will allow students to feel closer to the books they are reading. Too often students are asked to read books that they can’t make a personal connection to, or that are written in a time period or way that is of no interest to the student. By doing this unit based on these two novels we hope to motivate students to not only take away academic achievements, but to also to be aware of personal experiences. Hopefully they will know that no matter what they are going through, they can find a book that they can relate to that will help get them through a variety of situations. The Realm of Possibility and The Perks of Being a Wallflower both deal with adolescent issues that could be considered controversial such as; relationships, struggles with identity, stereotypes, social norms, and the coming of age. We realize many of these topics are touchy and will have to be taught in a very respectful manner. However, we feel as though each one of the instances that occur within these books will be relevant to at least one kid within our classroom. Since each of our students will personally be experiencing their own coming of age story, it will be important for them to read about kids who are going through the same kinds of things that they are. It will give them a way to relate to their personal lives, while being a part of class and connecting what they read to our learning environment. Within a lot of schools, these two books are banned because of their content. We are aware of the kinds of challenges and struggles we will face by teaching these novels and we are ready to tackle them head on. We understand that many parents and/or members of the school board ban these books because they want to keep their children safe, however, you can’t shelter kids forever. They need to be exposed to the realities of the world, and books give them a safe way to learn about those kinds of things in an enclosed but educational and eye opening manner. Students lack the motivation to read books that they cannot relate to, but are forced to read within school. So, if you give them the opportunity to take a break from reading classic literature and instead give them the chance to read books that they might be able to personally identify with, they will be excited to learn and experience reading books that are relevant to them. We have set up our unit on these two novels to take around four weeks. We feel it is important to give students’ ample time to read these novels and really connect with them. As a class we will be doing many assignments that will explore each student's coming of age story, the relationships, and defining moments, etc. that influenced who they are today. The first three weeks will be spent on the two novels and there will be small assignments like journal entries, Socratic seminars, and creative pieces that will help us explore each of the novels. The fourth week will be spent working on and presenting a culminating video project that students’ will be allowed to do in groups or individually. These projects will be mildly open ended, and will allow each group or individual to share how the novels that we read affected them. Overall, we think the value of reading The Realm of Possibility and The Perks of Being a Wallflower is very high. Classic literature is important to a student’s education, but so is literature that relates directly to the student. With these two novels we are doing just that, and therefore we are opening up a world to students that allows them to explore themselves and to relate to a novel in a way that they may never have before. This unit will be conducive to their lives as well as to our classroom as a whole. We will be able to learn about each other in a respectful way while exploring literature and enjoying ourselves. As teachers, we couldn’t ask for a better way to not only teach our students, but to learn with and about them. September and October 2011 Mon Tue 19 Realm of Possibility “Sandlot” Clip and Coming of age Socratic Seminar 20 Personal Coming of Age Stories 26 Character Maps and Final Socratic Seminar Present Findings based on Freshman Interviews 21 27 Anonymous Letters 22 28 Infinite Playlists 29 Facebook Perks 23 24 25 30 1 2 7 8 9 14 15 16 Introduce Video Project 13 Presentations Sun Meetings with Freshman for Interviews 6 12 Edit Video Projects Sat Present Me Bags Class Discussion and Planning of Interview Questions 5 11 Film Video Projects Fri Me Bags Reflections on Life 4 10 Plan Video Projects Thurs Workshop Coming of Age Stories Psychodrama Planning and Presenting 3 Perks of Being a Wallflower Wed Presentations Title: Coming of Age Day: 1 (intro activity) Standards: 1.2.b and f How students are addressing standards: Students will be participating in a large group discussion and individually contributing to the discussion to accomplish the goal of the seminar. Link: Students will have hopefully seen the movie The Sandlot before so they can relate to that, and students will have had class discussions before. However, now they will be having a discussion in a more structured from. Materials: Youtube clip of The Sandlot http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RxL3Ly1Hjzo Instructional Strategy: 1). We will explain to students that the unit we will be working on for the next few weeks is centered around the theme of “Coming of Age”. In order to introduce the kids to what that theme encompasses, we will show the trailer for the movie The Sandlot off of youtube. This trailer shows a young man who moves to a new city and experiences things with his friends and family that force him to grow up. The short clip gives a few examples of instances that he experiences that influence his coming of age. (10 minutes) 2). Once we have shown the video, we will ask students to move their desks so that everyone is sitting in a circle, (2 minutes). 3). Once we are all facing one another we will explain to the students that we will be having a Socratic seminar. Since this might be a new concept to our students, we will explain to them what a Socratic seminar is and what purpose it serves. (5 minutes) 4). After we have explained what a seminar is, we will ask the students if they have any questions and clear them up. (5 minutes) 5). From there, one of us will walk to the front of the room and write the words COMING OF AGE on the board. We will tell the students that we will want them to explore what this phrase means and what kinds of things could influence a person’s coming of age story through this Socratic Seminar. (5 minutes). 6). We will then open the floor and allow students to start and continue the conversation. We will add our input during the seminar if need be to help drive the conversation forward. (40 minutes). 7). When the seminar is coming to a close, we will do a final whip around, which means we will ask every student to add their closing comment to the seminar. If a student is uncomfortable doing so, we will allow them to pass. However, we will encourage everyone to try to say something (Differentiation). (10 minutes) Closure: 8). We will ask the students to move their desks back into rows and we will then have a discussion based on the Socratic seminar. We will ask the students to give us feedback telling us what they thought of the seminar, how they thought it went, what they liked about it, what they would change, and if they would want to do it again etc. (Informal Assessment) (10 minutes) Title: Personal Coming of Age Stories Day: 2 Standards: 3.1.b How Students are addressing the Standards: Student will be using a variety of stylistic devices to support the theme of their personal coming of age story. Link: After participating in and listening to the Socratic Seminar from yesterday’s class, students possess prior knowledge about the theme Coming of Age and will be able to generate their own personal stories based off the knowledge they already know. Materials: Students will need their books, their notebooks with paper, and pencils Instructional Sequence: 1.) We will have a brief discussion about the Socratic Seminar that took place in class yesterday. We will guide the students into asking and answering questions they may have pertaining to the activity completed yesterday to ensure that the necessary knowledge was gained before continuing with the next activity. (i.e. coming of age and identity themes, the characters and their interactions, etc.) (15 minutes) 2.) Next, we will split the students up into groups of four and within their groups they will be directed to discuss at least three stories or instances within their own lives that they feel have forced them to mature or grow up in some way. Within this discussion, students, in their notebooks, will write down each of their personal instances in which they experienced coming of age themselves. (20 minutes) 3.) Then, we will hand out the Personal Coming of Age Story instruction sheet and go over the expectations for this assignment as a class. Students will be asked to choose one of the three coming of age instances and expand off of it telling their own story. We will answer any questions about the assignment. (15 minutes) 4.) Students will then work independently on their coming of age stories. We will be circling around the room answering any questions students have regarding this assignment. In allowing them to choose from their own personal experiences, student choice in honored within our classroom. (30 minutes) Closure: 5.) At the end of class, we will bring the class back as a whole and mention that a working draft of their story will need to be typed and read for editing by Thursday of the same week. Students will also have time to voluntarily share what they are writing about and why it is considered to be a coming of age story (informal assessment). (10 minutes) NAME_______________________________________________ DATE__________________ Personal Coming of Age Story For this assignment, you will be writing your own coming of age story using a particular experience or instance in your life which forced you to gain a new sense of maturity. This experience must be school appropriate so please keep this in mind when choosing your topic. Your final submitted story must include the following: A creative title 3-4 pages of typed, double-spaced writing Grammar correctness Well organized A paragraph explaining why and/or how your topic illustrates coming of age A copy of the edited drafts Your final submitted story will be graded based on the rubric that is attached. Personal Coming of Age Stories Teacher Names: Ms. Eafanti and Ms. Eulberg Student Name: ________________________________________ 2 1 Most of the story is related to the assigned topic and assigned topic. The allows the reader to story wanders off at understand much one point, but the more about the topic. reader can still learn something about the topic. Some of the story is related to the assigned topic, but a reader does not learn much about the topic. No attempt has been made to relate the story to the assigned topic. Organization The story is very well organized. One idea or scene follows another in a logical sequence with clear transitions. The story is a little Ideas and scenes hard to follow. The seem to be randomly transitions are arranged. sometimes not clear. Spelling and Punctuation There are no spelling There is one spelling or punctuation errors or punctuation error in the final draft. in the final draft. Character and place names that the author invented are spelled consistently throughout. There are 2-3 spelling and punctuation errors in the final draft. The final draft has more than 3 spelling and punctuation errors. Title Title is creative, Title is related to the sparks interest and story and topic. is related to the story and topic. Title is present, but does not appear to be related to the story and topic. No title. CATEGORY 4 3 The entire story is Focus on Assigned Topic related to the The story is pretty well organized. One idea or scene may seem out of place. Clear transitions are used. "Create Your Rubric." RubiStar Home. ALTEC, 2000. Web. 07 Nov. 2010. <http://rubistar.4teachers.org/>. Title: Workshop Coming of Age Stories Day: 3 Standards: 3.3.a-d How students are addressing Standards: Students are revising their writing therefore they are fixing grammar that is not grammatically correct, they are distinguishing between active and passive voice, and fixing sentence structures. Link: Students will have had 30 minutes of class time as well as a day outside of class to work on their first draft of their Coming of Age story. Materials: Students will need: - Their book - A copy of their working draft - At least three different colored pens to edit other students work - Their notebook Instructional Sequence: 1.) We will explain to students how the editing process will work. Each student will be editing a total of three other students’ stories. In a different colored pen, students will first write their names at the bottom of each of the last pages so the writer will know which editor was what color. (10 minutes) 2.) We will then ask students to get out their first draft along with a colored pen of their choice. We will break students into groups of four and ask that the group place their desks together so we know who is working together. Before students begin, we will walk around the room to make sure no two students within the group has like colored pens then tell the students to begin editing. Students will work on editing until each member in the group has received feedback from the other three students. (25 minutes) 3.) As students finish, we will then instruct the students to discuss all the student drafts individually as a group mentioning two pros and two cons to each story. This will continue until each student in every group has received verbal feedback from each group member. (25 minutes) 4.) After students have received constructive feedback about their stories they will return to their seats and be instructed to get out a piece of paper. Next, we will ask the students to write down answers to the following questions: how the editing workshop was helpful, if it was not then why, two areas they need to improve on within their story before final submission, three areas they feel they excelled at already in their drafted story, and any suggestions for future editing workshops they have. (15 minutes) Closure: 5.) When students have finished writing down their answers, we will then go around the room and hear one answer to one question from each student to gain a sense of where each student stands with understanding of both the assignment and their piece of writing (informal assessment). Also, in allowing students to choose which question they answer aloud gives us another opportunity to integrate student choice into our lesson for the day. (15 minutes) Title: “Me Bags” Day: 4 Standards: 1.2.c How Students are addressing the standards: Students are choosing specific words, phrases, or pictures etc. to convey themselves to a particular audience which is their peers. Link: Students will have to use their creative side that they have accessed before while doing posters or art projects etc. Materials: -Paper Grocery Bag -Scissors -Glue or Tape -Magazines -Colored pencils, markers, or crayons Instructional Sequence: 1). Today we will inform students that they will be doing a creative project. We will talk to them about The Realm of Possibility and how each character within the book has their own identity and we want them to explore their own identities. (10 minutes) 2). We will then explain to students what we want them to do. We will let them know that we want them to decorate a paper grocery bag in a way that represents them. They can use pictures cut out from magazines, they can write on them, they can draw their own pictures, etc. We will show them examples of “Me Bags” that we have made reflecting our own identities. (15 minutes) 3). We will then ask the students if they have any questions, and we will answer any that come up. (5 minutes) 4). Once all questions have been answered we will give the students some to brainstorm what kind of things they want to include on their “Me Bags”. (10 minutes) 5). We will then pass out a paper bag to each student and let them get to work. Materials like scissors, glue, magazines, and colored pencils will be on a table at the front of the room and students will be allowed to use whatever they want in order to create their bags (Differentiation). We will just instruct them to use the materials in a timely fashion so that other students have the opportunity to use them as well. (40 minutes) 6). When class is coming to a close we will ask the students to clean up and put the materials back. We will also have a space cleared for them to leave their “Me Bags” (5 minutes) Closure: 7). At the end of class we will have a mini discussion with the students and we will ask them to share with us how their “Me Bags” are coming along, and if they are learning anything about themselves while creating them (informal assessment). (5 minutes) “Me Bags” Teacher Name: Ms. Eafanti and Ms. Eulberg Student Name: ________________________________________ 4 3 2 1 Use of Class Time Used time well during each class period. Focused on getting the bag done. Never distracted others. Used time well during each class period. Usually focused on getting the bag done and never distracted others. Used some of the time well during each class bag. There was some focus on getting the project done but occasionally distracted others. Did not use class time to focus on the project OR often distracted others. Graphics Originality Several of the graphics used on the bag reflect an exceptional degree of student creativity in their creation and/or display. One or two of the graphics used on the bag reflect student creativity in their creation and/or display. The graphics are No graphics made made by the student, by the student are but are based on the included. designs or ideas of others. Attractiveness The bag is exceptionally attractive in terms of design, layout, and neatness. The bag is attractive in terms of design, layout and neatness. The bag is acceptably attractive though it may be a bit messy. CATEGORY "Create Your Rubric." RubiStar Home. ALTEC, 2000. Web. 07 Nov. 2010. <http://rubistar.4teachers.org/>. The bag is distractingly messy or very poorly designed. It is not attractive. Title: Presenting “Me Bags” Day: 5 Standards: 1.2.e How students are addressing standards: Students will be presenting their “me bags” and they will have to be respectful when actively listening to other’s presentations. Link: Students will be presenting the “Me Bags” they created two days earlier Materials: Students will need their “Me Bags” Instructional Sequence: 1. Today we will ask all of the students to present their “Me Bags”. We will explain to them that it will give the class a chance to get to know one another better and it will connect to our reading of The Realm of Possibility because we will get to see each individual’s identity just like we do within the novel. (10 minutes) 2. We will ask the students to be respectful as they are listening to every ones presentations. We will also make sure that it is ok with everyone if people ask questions about their “Me Bags” when they are done presenting. If they are then we will allow students to ask each other questions based on their “Me Bags”, and if they are not then we will refrain from asking questions (differentiation). (5 minutes) 3. We will then give each student time to present their “Me Bags”. We will decide who will go next based on a volunteer basis. (60 minutes) 4. Once everyone has presented we will thank them for presenting. (1 minute) Closure: 5. At the end of class we will have a mini class discussion (informal assessment) that is centered around what students learned about each other (positive things) and how they thought learning about one another related to the book. Title: Socratic Seminars Day: 6 Standards: 1.2.b and f How students are addressing the standards: Students will be participating in a large group discussion and individually contributing to the discussion to accomplish the goal of the seminar. Link: Students will have had class discussions before and now they will be doing that in a more structured and student oriented form. Materials: Students will need to have their books with them Instructional Sequence: 1). There are a lot of relationships represented within The Realm of Possibility, and many of the people represented within those relationships intertwine with other characters in the novel. Therefore, we will create a character map as a class that shows who is connected to who in the text. 2). We will introduce this idea to students by telling them that we will be creating a character map on the board that they should copy in to their notes. We will explain to them that we will first list out all of the characters represented in the novel. We will then draw a large circle and write the characters names around the inside of the circle. We will then explain that we will want student volunteers to come up to the board and draw lines from character to character that are connected in some way within the novel. (5 minutes) 3). We will ask the students if they have any questions thus for so that we are all clear on what we are about to create. (2 minutes) 4). Once all of the questions are answered, one of us will stand at the board and ask the students to shout out the names of the characters within the novel as we write them down so that we have a list. We will then draw a circle on the board and write the characters names within it. (3 minutes) 5). From there, we will ask student volunteers to come up and draw lines that connect the characters to one another. Therefore, we are not requiring students to participate, but we are giving them the opportunity if they want to (Differentiation). We will ask everyone to refrain from conversation until we think the map is finished. (10 minutes) 6). Once students think are done with the map we will open the floor up to conversation. We have a discussion based on looking at each line of who is connecting to whom and whether the connections are right or not. We will also discuss the relationship between those two people, and if there are any connections that we forgot, we will add them. (15) 7). Since this will be the second Socratic seminar that the kids will be doing we will give them a brief review of what they are and what purpose they serve. (2 minutes) 8). We will then explain to the students how we want the Socratic Seminar for today to go. We will explain to them that this seminar will be driven by the text, and that the input they give will be quotes from the book The Realm of Possibility that they found inspirational, or that they connected to, or that they found controversial etc. (5 minutes) 9). After our explanation we will ask the students if they have any questions about how the seminar will be run, and answer any that come up so that each student is clear on what to do. (2 minutes) 10). We will then give the students time to look through their book and mark the quotes that they will want to use within our seminar (10 minutes) 11). Once we have given the students time to find quotes we will ask them to put their desks in a circle so that we can all see one another. (3 minutes) 12). We will again give a quick explanation of how we want the Socratic seminar to go by telling them that we will just be reading quotes from the book out loud. We will explain to them that by doing so we will be creating a kind of ongoing poetry based on the book. We will also answer any more questions the students might have. (5 minutes) 13). To start out the ongoing poetry Socratic seminar, we will both read a quote that we enjoyed from the book and then open the floor for the students to read their quotes. (30 minutes) 14). As the students are reading their quotes, we will keep track of who has spoken and how many times they have done so. We will add in to the seminar occasionally as well. 15). When the seminar is coming to a close, we will ask the students to do a whip around which means we will ask every student to share a quote so that everyone will have contributed to the ongoing poetry. (2 minutes) 16). Once the seminar has come to a close we will ask the students to stay sitting in a circle so that we can have a discussion. We will ask them to share with us and the class what they thought of the seminar. We will want them to share what they liked, what they didn’t like, if they thought it was productive, and if they would like to do it again etc. This will be the closing to class and an informal assessment. (15 minutes) (Informal Assessment) Closure: 17). We will ask students to put their desks back into rows and to pack of their stuff for the remainder of class. Title: Psycho Drama Day: 7 Standards: 1.2.b and f How students are addressing Standards: Students will be effectively working in small and large groups to accomplish a goal and will be participating in their individual roles and responsibilities. Link: Students will have, in class, put together a character map showing how all characters connect to one another. In doing so, students will be able to take on the personas of chosen characters and answer questions about themselves as the character in the novel would. Materials: Realm of Possibility text Instructional sequence 1.) We will begin class by re-visiting the topics covered yesterday in doing the character mapping and the Socratic seminar. We will guide the conversation towards how these two activities magnify the character identity, relationships and interactions. (5 minutes) 2.) After brief discussion, we will then go over the expectations for the assignment and answer any questions students have along the way. We will explain that this will be a group participation grade and that each group will be assigned one of the five chapters within the book. Each group member will choose what character they act of role of. (10minutes) 3.) Next, we will give the groups time to pick which student will play which character and then as a group, come up with two questions for at least one other character from another chapter of their choice (student choice and Differentiation). We will be walking around the room making sure that the groups are not generating questions about the same few characters. (10 minutes) 4.) Then we will ask the Ch. 1 group to come up and take on the persona of their chosen characters. The class will then direct the questions to each individual character and the students acting that particular role will have to answer based on their knowledge of the character they are portraying. Each character should answer at least two to three questions. This process will be repeated until all five groups have gone and each student character has been represented. (35 minutes) 5.) When all the groups have finished, we will then do a whip around (Differentiation). Before the group presents to the class how they felt about the activity though, we will give them time to discuss their feelings within their groups. (5 minutes) Closure: 6.) We will then pull the groups back together as a class and ask each group to say their thoughts towards the activity (what they liked, what they didn’t like, what they would change, what they still don’t understand, etc.).(informal assessment) (15 minutes) 21st Century Skills: Students will demonstrate 21st century skills by using interactive communication and collaboration within the group work completed in class today. Students also contributed ideas to group conversation as well as class discussion. These are important skills because they demonstrate students’ proficiency levels for their current grade level as well as their future success. Title: Reflections on Life Day: 8 Standards: 3.1.c How students will be addressing Standards: Students are enhancing the expression of their voice and mood within their writing. Link: Students activate prior knowledge regarding their freshmen year. The main character Charlie in the book Perks of Being a Wallflower is beginning his freshmen year and this will link to his character. Materials: Pencil Paper Instructional Sequence: 1.) We will begin class with a discussion reflecting on their freshmen year. Students will answer and/or expand on the following questions of which will be written on the board: (20 minutes) What, if any advice were you given going into freshmen year? Was the advice useful, why or why not? Is advice necessary as a freshman? Why or why not? Do you think having an older sibling in the same high school helps with your experience of being a freshman? Why or why not? 2.) Stemming from the class discussion, students will then create a mini essay that is to be completed in class. We will explain that the essay will be deemed participation points because it is an in class writing assignment. We will asking students to keep in mind that their focus needs to be on expanding the questions we went over in class into a well developed essay about their experience as freshmen (why it was good, why it was bad, what helped get them through, why they may or may not have been nervous, etc.) ( Differentiation) (50 minutes) Closure: 3.) With the remaining time, we will ask students to finish up their writing and turn in what they have. We will then ask them to relate what they have written to the Charlie’s emotions towards being a freshman, students will identify with Charlie on a more personal level because there is already something they connect with right off the bat. Concluding in this manor will enable us to see how students are comprehending and identifying with the text. (Informal Assessment) (20minutes) Title: Interview Planning Day: 9 Standards: 1.2.a How students are addressing the Standards: Students work in pairs to generate questions and actively listen to one another to do so. Link: Based off the discussion and in class write completed yesterday, students will continue to examine Charlie’s character and use his experiences as a basis for their interview questions. Materials: The Perks of Being a Wallflower Pen or pencil Paper Instructions Sequence: 1.) We will begin class by briefly reviewing the end result of yesterday’s class. We will use the text and as a class, come up with and examine specific instances in which Charlie’s identity, coming of age, and emotions are shown through the text. We will also discuss how this relates to the topic from yesterday. (20 minutes) 2.) After examining the text further, we will then introduce their interview assignment of which they will conduct with the freshmen tomorrow. As we explain the process that will be taking place, students will take notes on their expectations for the assignment. We will first explain that their final grade for this assignment will be based on their participation throughout the planning process, interviewing process, and presenting process. Next we will explain the potential questions they should consider when speaking with the freshmen based off what they wrote and discussed in class yesterday. We will make it clear that through interviewing the freshmen, they will be able to compare the freshmen emotions and thoughts to those of Charlie on a different level than that of their sophomore comparisons to Charlie because they are the same age. We will remind students that there will be two freshmen together for the two sophomores conducting the interview. (20 minutes) 3.) After answering any questions students have about the assignment, we will then pair students off and ask that in their pairs they generate question by combining their individual answers to the questions they expressed in their writing yesterday. Students are welcome to use the text to generate questions as well. By the end of class, students should have a list of school appropriate questions for their interview tomorrow, enough to fill the 20 minutes we will take to conduct the interviews. (Differentiation) (30 minutes) Closure: 4.) At the end of class, we will come back together as a group and discuss some of the questions the pairs came up with. With each question that is shared, we will ask the pair to tell where the question came from, whether from their essay or the book, and explain what relevance it has (informal assessment). We will remind students to keep in mind how the freshmen’s’ answers relate to the text and also how they contrast with the answers or opinions they wrote about previously. We will answer any last questions students have and then dismiss them from class. (20 minutes) Title: Interviewing the freshmen Day: 10 Standards: 1.2.d How students are addressing the Standards: Students are facilitating discussion with the freshmen to accomplish their goal. Link: Students generated more discussion yesterday pertaining to this assignment and developed questions based off their prior assignments for the week to prepare them for the interviews taking place. Instructional Strategies: 1.) I will instruct students to get into their pairs and quickly go over their questions once more before leaving to go to the interviews. Students can take this time to also ask us any last minute questions that come up during their discussion with their partner. (10 minutes) 2.) As a class, we will head over to the freshmen English classroom where we the freshmen will have already been placed into pairs and are scattered around the room. The sophomores will line up at the door and we will assign them to their freshmen peers. Students will then introduce themselves and begin their interviews. (35 minutes) 3.) After the interviews have drawn to a close we will thank the freshmen for assisting us with our project and head back to our classroom to debrief. (5 minutes) 4.) When we return to the classroom, students will sit with their partners and individually reflect on their interview experience in their notebook. (5 minutes) 5.) Next, students will have a chance to share their thoughts with their partners and discuss how they think their interview went. (5 minutes) Closure: 6.) We will then pull back together as a class and each group will go around and say one positive about their interview, one negative, one thing they would change about the activity if they have one and something that the freshmen said that related to Charlie’s experience (Differentiation and informal assessment at work). (30 minutes) Title: Presentations on Freshmen Interviews Day: 11 Standards: 1.2.e and f How students are addressing Standards: Students will be actively listening to and supporting each groups presentation and within their own presentation they will be fulfilling their personal responsibilities. Link: After conducting interviews with the freshmen, students will be presenting their findings to the class. Materials: The Perks of Being a Wall Flower book Their written information/notes from the interview Notebooks (for student note taking during presentations) Pencil Instructional Strategy: 1.) We will begin class with a short review of how presentations will go today. We will make it clear that when students are not presenting they will need to take notes on how the other interviews and things that stood out to them so we know students are paying attention and listening to the presentations. (10 minutes) 2.) After answering questions students have regarding presentations, etc. we will begin, allowing each student two minutes to present their findings so everyone can present today. (60 minutes) Closure: 3.) When each student has presented their findings, we will end with a class discussion where students can talk about what surprised then, what other students did that they found interesting, how the freshmen experiences were different from their own, etc. (Informal assessment) (20 minutes) Title: Anonymous Letters Day: 12 Standards: 3.1.c How Students are addressing Standards: Students are enhancing their expression of voice and tone through writing letters based off of the style the text is written in. Link: Students will have read enough of Perks of Being a Wallflower to see how the main character’s story is told through writing letters. Materials: Perks of Being a Wallflower Pencil Notebook paper Instructional Sequence: 1.) We will begin class with a discussion on how the author chooses to tell Charlie’s story. We will look at how Charlie tells his story and why we never know who he is writing to, how this affects the reader, how the reader responds to this style of writing, etc. (15 minutes) 2.) After finishing up class discussion on the style of the story, we will then hand out the Anonyms Letters assignment sheet and rubric. We will go over both sheets as a class and answer any questions students have regarding their task. We will remind student that they will need to respond to at least two of Charlie’s letters in and amount of time they are given to complete the task. Also that what they include in their responses is up to them (Differentiation and Student Choice). (20 minutes) 3.) Then we will allow students class time to individually complete the assignment. As students are writing, we will be going around the room answering questions and checking student work to make sure they are participating in the assignment. (40 minutes) Closure: 4.) After students have completed their writing assignments, we will pull the class back together as a whole and we will ask for volunteers to share what letters they chose to respond to, why they chose the ones they did, and then share their response. After sharing, the class will then be a loud to ask the student volunteer questions (school appropriate) pertaining to their anonymous letters (Informal Assessment). As the end of class draws near, we will wrap up the conversation and answer any final questions students have. (15 minutes) NAME: _________________________________________________ DATE_______________ Anonymous Letters As we have seen in reading Perks of Being a Wallflower, Charlie’s character writes letters to tell his story of identity and coming of age. As the reader, you hear and see all that Charlie does and experiences first hand, but never get to respond to questions he asks you. For this assignment, you will be responding to TWO of Charlie’s letters. What you say and how you respond is up to you. Please follow the checklist below for your TWO completed letters and see the rubric that is attached to see how your assignment will be graded. TWO, Letter format responses Each letter must be at least a page and a half of writing At the end of each letter, summarize why you chose the letter you did and relate it to your own identity Proper spelling and grammar usage Proper letter formant (Dear Charlie… From…, etc) Letter-Writing : Anonymous Letters Teacher Names: Jeana Eafanti and Nicole Eulberg Student Name: ________________________________________ 2 1 Grammar & spelling (conventions) Writer makes no Writer makes 1-2 errors in grammar or errors in grammar spelling. and/or spelling. Writer makes 3-4 errors in grammar and/or spelling Writer makes more than 4 errors in grammar and/or spelling. Ideas Ideas were expressed in a clear and organized fashion. It was easy to figure out what the letter was about. Ideas were expressed in a pretty clear manner, but the organization could have been better. Ideas were somewhat organized, but were not very clear. It took more than one reading to figure out what the letter was about. The letter seemed to be a collection of unrelated sentences. It was very difficult to figure out what the letter was about. Neatness Letter is typed, clean, not wrinkled, and is easy to read with no distracting error corrections. It was done with pride. Letter is neatly handwritten, clean, not wrinkled, and is easy to read with no distracting error corrections. It was done with care. Letter is typed and is crumpled or slightly stained. It may have 1-2 distracting error corrections. It was done with some care. Letter is typed and looks like it had been shoved in a pocket or locker. It may have several distracting error corrections. It looks like it was done in a hurry or stored improperly. Sentences & Paragraphs Sentences and paragraphs are complete, wellconstructed and of varied structure. All sentences are complete and wellconstructed (no fragments, no runons). Paragraphing is generally done well. Most sentences are complete and wellconstructed. Paragraphing needs some work. Many sentence fragments or run-on sentences OR paragraphing needs lots of work. CATEGORY 4 3 Title: Infinite Playlists Day: 13 Standards: 3.3.d How students are addressing standards: Students will be doing a timed write in class based on their ability to use voice within their writing. Link: Students will have read The Perks of Being a Wallflower Materials: -paper -pencils -computer -Asleep by The Smiths http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LK8H7Qn3ifA Instructional Strategy: 1). Within the novel The Perks of Being a Wallflower, Charlie discusses a song called Asleep by The Smiths. He discusses the importance of that song and how it has affected his life. So, today we will have our students write about a song that has had an impact on their life. 2). We will start classing by having a discussion about the song that is important to Charlie. We will first play the song for the students once or twice so that they get a feel for it, and we will also put the lyrics up on an overhead so that the kids can see them. We will then ask them why Charlie connected to this song, how it affected him, how it helped him etc. that will lead to a class discussion. (20 minutes) 3). Once the discussion has come to a close, we will ask the kids to do a timed write. We will inform them that we will want them to write about a certain song that has been important to them. The Writing prompt will be: “Tell us what the song is, why it’s important to you, how it has helped you, and anything else that is relevant about that song and their life. Once we have introduced the writing assignment, we will ask the kids if they have any questions, and we will answer any that come up. Once all the questions are answered, we will allow the students to begin writing. (5 minutes) 4). We will give the students an ample amount of time to write. (40 minutes) 5). Once the time is up and the students have turned in their papers, we will ask if any of the students will want to share their songs. They will tell us what the song is, and we will play it through our computer as long as it is appropriate. Once we have played their song, we will ask the student to explain to the class why that song is important to them. We will do this on a volunteer basis (differentiation). (25 minutes) Closure: 5). We will wrap up class by having a mini class discussion. We will ask the students to tell us if they enjoyed writing about and playing their songs and if they would do this assignment again (Informal Assessment). (5 minutes) Infinite Playlists Teacher Names: Jeana Eafanti and Nicole Eulberg Student Name: CATEGORY Adding Personality (Voice) ________________________________________ 4 3 2 1 The writer seems to be writing from knowledge or experience. The author has taken the ideas and made them "his own." The writer seems to be drawing on knowledge or experience, but there is some lack of ownership of the topic. The writer relates some of his own knowledge or experience, but it adds nothing to the discussion of the topic. The writer has not tried to transform the information in a personal way. The ideas and the way they are expressed seem to belong to someone else. Supporting details and information are relevant, but several key issues or portions of the storyline are unsupported. Supporting details and information are typically unclear or not related to the topic. Relevant, telling, Support for Topic (Content) quality details give Supporting details and information are the reader important relevant, but one key information that goes issue or portion of beyond the obvious the storyline is or predictable. unsupported. Sentence Structure (Sentence Fluency) All sentences are Most sentences are Most sentences are well-constructed with well-constructed with well-constructed but varied structure. varied structure. have a similar structure. Sentences lack structure and appear incomplete or rambling. Title: Facebook Perks Day: 14 Standards: 3.3.d How students are addressing standards: Students will be creating a Facebook about a character that is grammatically correct and in the active voice. Link: Students will know what Facebook is, because they will either have their own or will have heard about it through the news, friends, etc. Materials: -computers -The novel The Perks of being a Wallflower Instructional Strategy: 1). The students will meet in the computer lab for class today. 2). To begin class we will explain to the students what their task for the day will be. We will let them know that they will be splitting into groups of 2 or 3 and will be creating a Facebook page for one of the characters in The Perks of Being a Wallflower. We will tell them that we want them to create an info page for their character that includes; -their name -their siblings -their relationship status -political and religious views -their likes and interests Ex. Music, books, movies, or activities -an informational section that discusses the character -favorite quotes said by that character Once we have explained to them what we want them to do, we will ask them if they have any questions and answer any that come up. (15 minutes). 3). We will write the different characters up on the board and we will allow students to choose their groups and character. We will make sure that no more than 2 groups are doing the same character. (5 minutes) 4). Once students are in their groups, we will give them time to create their Facebook pages for their character (40 minutes) 5). When the students have finished creating their pages, we will ask each group to present their character and what kinds of things they put on their Facebook page. We will have groups present on a volunteer basis (differentiation). (25 minutes) Closure: 6). After each group has presented, we will close class with a mini class discussion. We will ask the students what they thought of this activity and what they liked or didn’t like about it (informal assessment). (5 minutes) Title: Introduce Video Project Day: 15 Standards: 4.1.a and d How students are addressing standards: Students will be narrowing and defining a topic for their presentation, and will be collecting and organizing information that is sufficient. Link: Students have had to critically analyze two texts and in doing so they will have been preparing for the culminating assessment. Materials: handout Notebook (for any additional notes) Pencil The Perks of Being a Wallflower and Realm of Possibility Instructional Strategy: 1.) We will pass out the handout and rubric that will be outlining this project. We will go over the expectations as a class and thoroughly explain the process in which they will be completing this assignment. After going over the instructions and the rubric, we will then show the class an example of how their final product should look. (20 minutes) 2.) Next we will allow students to ask any questions they have after seeing the video and going over the expectations for this project. We will also remind students that they do not have to physically be in their video if they choose not to, pictures, quotes, songs, etc. will be sufficient in creating the video as long as the themes are evident and shown in a creative way. (20 minutes) 3.) Next we will give students a few minutes to choose their group members for the project. They should be in groups of four or five students (Differentiation). (10 minutes) 4.) After choosing their groups, we will take the class to the lab to begin researching quotes, pictures, songs, etc. that they could potentially be using in their video. To ensure students are actually researching, we will make it clear that each group member will have had to found something that could potentially contribute to the final video and show us this before they are allowed to leave class (a ticket to leave) (student choice). (35 minutes) Closure: 5.) After giving the groups’ time to research ideas, we will bring students back to class and quickly walk around to each group checking their work (informal assessment). (5 minutes) Title: Planning Video Projects Day: 16 Standards: 1.2.a and d How students are addressing standards: Students will be working in groups in order to create a final project. They will have to collaborate and take on specific roles for planning purposes. Link: Students will have had to do culminating assessments before, so they will be aware of what the entail and what purpose they serve. Materials: -group members -both novels; The Realm of Possibility and The Perks of Being a Wallflower -paper -pencils Instructional Strategy: 1). Students were informed on the previous Friday that they would be doing a final project for this unit that would be a video project. They were told that this will be the culminating assessment for the unit, as opposed to an essay or a test. 2). Today we will remind students about the video project and what it is and we have students ask us any questions that they thought of over the weekend for us to answer. (10 minutes) 3). Once we have answered all of the questions, we will have the students break up into the groups that they chose on Friday (differentiation) and we will give them time to plan out their videos. We will explain to them that they will want to plan what they want their video to convey, how they will connect their video to the novels we read, what kind of pictures or dialogue they will want to use, what kind of music they will want to put in their video, and anything else that they feel will enhance their video to make it a strong final project. (10 minutes). 4). We will then give the students a substantial amount of time to collaborate with their group and plan out their videos. As they are planning, we will walk around the room to answer any questions that the students might come up with, and help students when they need it with ideas or struggles etc. (60 minutes) Closure: 5). Once students have had time to plan, we will talk about how their planning went. We will ask students to give us a thumbs or down that will indicate to us how they feel about the work that they got done today (informal assessment). We will then give them a heads up on the fact that they will need to film their projects the following day, so if they have anything that they need to bring from home to complete their video they will need to bring it the next day. (10 minutes) Title: Filming of Video Projects Day: 17 Standards: 1.2.c How students are addressing standards: Students will have to choose specific words or phrases for an intended effect on their audience within their video and presentation. Link: Students will continue to work on their culminating assessment. Materials: -both novels; The Realm of Possibility and The Perks of Being a Wallflower -video cameras -anything that they brought from home to help create their videos with Instructional Strategy: 1). At the beginning of class we will do a quick check in with the students to let them know that they will need to film their videos today. We will let them know that they will be allowed to leave the room in order to go somewhere quiet to film (differentiation). However, we will ask them to come back 10 minutes before the bell rings so that we can check in with everyone to see how things are going. Before they leave we will ask the students if they have any questions that they need cleared up before they begin filming. Once the questions are answered, we will send them on their way. (15 minutes) 2). We will give the students a substantial amount of time to work and be checking in with groups. (65 minutes) Closure: 3). When the students return 10 minutes before the end of class we will again check in with them and ask them if they have any more questions. We will also have them give us a thumbs up or down that will show us how they think their video is coming along (informal assessment). Finally, we will let them know that tomorrow during class they will be editing their videos. Title: Editing Video Projects Day: 18 Standards: 1.2.b and c How students are addressing standards: Students will be contributing effectively in small groups in order to create their video project. Link: Students will continue to work on their culminating assessment Materials: -video cameras -computers Instructional Strategy: 1). The students will need ample time to edit their videos, which they learned how to do in previous classes, so we will do a very brief check in with them at the beginning of class to go over any questions that they have and to let them know that we will be working in the computer lab today. We will then walk as a class to the computer lab. (10 minutes) 2). Once in the computer lab, we will let the students, in their groups, get to work on editing their video projects. We will walk around the room to help students when needed and to answer any questions (differentiation). When their videos are finished they will need to post them on our class YouTube site that we have already created. (70 minutes) Closure: 3). In the last ten minutes of class we will again check in with the students to make sure that each group got their video posted on youtube. They will then give us a thumbs up or down that will let us know if they feel prepared for presentations the following day (informal assessment). We will let them know that presentations will be given on a volunteer basis however, everyone will have to present. (10 minutes) Title: Presentations of Video Projects Day: 19 Standards: 1.2.e and f How students are addressing standards: Students will be actively listening to and supporting each group’s presentation and within their own presentation they will be fulfilling their personal responsibilities. Link: Students will be presenting their culminating assessments Materials: -computer provided by teachers Instructional Strategy: 1). Today the students will be presenting their final video projects. We will inform them that not everyone will get the opportunity to go, so some people will have to present tomorrow. We will also let them know that when it is their turn to present, every member of the group will need to go to the front of the room and they will need to explain what their video project is about. Then, we will tell them that they will need to show us their video, and once it is over the class will ask them questions about it. We will then ask the students if they have any questions about the process in which presentations will go and we will answer them accordingly. (10 minutes) 2). We will then open up the floor and allow groups of students to present as they volunteer (differentiation) and we will continue that process until 10 minutes before class is over. (70 minutes) Closure: 3). Once the presentations are over for the day, we will have a mini class discussion on how students think presentations are going so far (informal assessment). We then make sure of what groups will need to present the following day (10 minutes). Title: Presentations of Video Projects day 2 Day: 20 Standards: 1.2.e and f How students are addressing standards: Students will be actively listening to and supporting each group’s presentation and within their own presentation they will be fulfilling their personal responsibilities. Link: We will be following the same lesson plan as the previous day with a few modifications Materials: -computer provided by teachers Instructional Strategy: 1). We will inform the students that we will be following the same format for presentations that we did the previous day. We will again explain to them that when it is their turn to present, every member of the group will need to go to the front of the room and they will need to explain what their video project is about. Then, we will again tell them that they will need to show us their video, and once it is over the class will ask them questions about it. We will then ask the students if they have any questions about the process in which presentations will go and we will answer them accordingly. (10 minutes) 2). We will then open up the floor and allow groups of students to present as they volunteer (differentiation) and we will continue that process until 10 minutes before class is over, or until all groups are done with their presentations. (70 minutes) Closure: 3). With the time remaining or within the last 10 minutes we will ask students how they liked the video projects. We will ask them to tell us if they enjoyed doing the videos, what they thought went well with the projects, what they would change, and if they would want to do them again etc (informal assessment). (10 minutes) Name: ________________________________________ Date: _____________________ Other Group Members: _______________________________________________________ Identity and Film In groups of four, you will all collaborate to create a film to express intertwining aspects within in the text read for this unit. The purpose of this video project is to reflect your clear understanding of the themes discussed within each text while contributing your own creative development of what these themes mean to you in our world today. Your film should include the following: A Title Ending credits Some sort of sound track Images and/or dialogue that prove your understanding (direct quotes, drawings, etc.) Each group member must be included Video must be a minimum of 6 minutes long, maximum of 10 minutes A written component explaining the role of each group member Group reflection giving an overall grade on your final product, describing any bumps in the road your group faced, and the overall opinion of the group for this project. (i.e. If you liked it, why? If not, why? Etc.) An individual reflection completed by each group member giving yourself a grade based on the time you contributed, giving each individual in your group a grade based on their contribution, and an explanation of how you feel the group worked together. (i.e. What worked and why? What did not and why? Etc.) You will be receiving an individual grade as well as a group grade for this assignment. The groups’ grade will be based on the grading rubric that is attached. Your individual grade will be based on your self-reflection and the grades given to you from your group members. Identity and Film Teacher Names: Ms. Eafanti and Ms. Eulberg Student Name: ________________________________________ 4 3 2 1 Point of View Purpose Establishes a purpose early on and maintains a clear focus throughout. Establishes a purpose early on and maintains focus for most of the presentation. There are a few lapses in focus, but the purpose is fairly clear. It is difficult to figure out the purpose of the presentation. Voice Conversational Style Uses a Uses a conversational style conversational style throughout. the majority (8595%)of the time Uses a Presentation style is conversational style primarily monologue. most (70-84%) of the time. Duration of Presentation Length of presentation was 8 to 10 minutes. Length of presentation was 6 to 8 minutes. Length of Presentation was presentation was 4 to less than 4 minutes 6 minutes. long Grammar Grammar and usage were correct (for the dialect chosen) and contributed to clarity, style and character development. Grammar and usage were typically correct (for the dialect chosen) and errors did not detract from the story. Grammar and usage were typically correct but errors detracted from story. Repeated errors in grammar and usage distracted greatly from the story. Images Images create a distinct atmosphere or tone that matches different parts of the story. The images may communicate symbolism and/or metaphors. Images create an atmosphere or tone that matches some parts of the story. The images may communicate symbolism and/or metaphors. An attempt was made to use images to create an atmosphere/tone but it needed more work. Image choice is logical. Little or no attempt to use images to create an appropriate atmosphere/tone. CATEGORY "Create Your Rubric." RubiStar Home. ALTEC, 2000. 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