Unit 1 is for 8th grade English/Language Arts students. Goals of the unit are for students to be able to write a meaningful and well written essay on topics that demonstrate a connection to their lives. Students are able to discover these topics from the journal prompts that are given by the teacher and completed by the students each day. Students can then pull concepts or entire journal entries from their journals to create a five paragraph essay. To more fully understand the components of essays, students are to look at texts discussed in class as examples of good writing and implement some of the writing styles in their own papers. Students are also given tools to extract these components and provided with independent and group practice to put these skills to use. Students will be evaluated several times throughout the course on their commitment to their assignments and willingness to work with each other. Another goal is for students to understand the process that goes into making a five paragraph paper a strong, cohesive unit that will grab readers’ attention and maintain their interest. At the end of the unit students will turn in a final copy of their five paragraph essay, a working outline, a copy of each draft, and all worksheets from class used to develop the paper, i.e. graphic organizers, peer critiques, articles, pictures, etc. The following standards are met throughout the course of this unit: RLA.O.8.1.8 recognize connections among ideas in literary and informational text (e.g. text to self, text-to-text, text to world connection) and recognize that global awareness promotes understanding, tolerance, and acceptance of ethnic, cultural, religious and personal differences. RLA.O.8.2.1 use notes to create an outline for developing a written and/or oral presentation noting the inclusion of computer graphics. RLA.O.8.2.2 analyze how analogies, illustrations, examples, and anecdotes are used to enhance oral and written communication (e.g., letters, poems, brief reports, descriptions, extended texts, illustrations). RLA.O.8.2.3 use pre-writing, editing and revision techniques (e.g., read, draft aloud, peer feedback or a provided rubric) to vary sentence length, change sentence order, eliminate organizational errors, and use vivid and concise words to create a personal style or voice while clarifying and enhancing the central idea. RLA.O.8.2.4 use the five-step writing process (pre-writing, drafting, revising, editing, publishing) to develop a creative or reflective composition (e.g., reflect on an experience or time in the past, draw upon imagination) and identify areas for further research by making personal connections to self, to texts, and to the world to demonstrate that written communication is affected by choices writers make in language, tone and voice. RLA.O.8.2.5 from a prompt use the five-step writing process to develop a focused composition that contains specific, relevant details, and vivid, precise words. RLA.O.8.2.6 recognize and write a simple thesis statement. RLA.O.8.3.5 perform a variety of roles in group discussions: collaboration facilitation persuasion RLA.O.8.3.7 plan, create, organize, and present an age-appropriate media product that demonstrates format, purpose, and audience. Focus for the Week Week: 1 Cultivating meaningful writing material Day 1 Day 2 Day 3 Day 4 Day 5 -Introduce students to complex and meaningful journaling. -Read teacher example. (Journal on how one particular song impacted my life) -Have students respond to prompt: Your school is about to enforce a rule requiring all students to wear uniforms. How do you feel about this situation and what would you do in response? -Discuss thoughts and review what could have been done to make the entry more appropriate for -Continue journaling. Prompt: The actions of this generation will impact the lives of all future generations. -Read examples form previous students’ journals. (Being adopted, differences in American and Korean education) -Review outline for five paragraph essay and briefly discuss important components of each in relation to each other and paper as a whole. Example outline to be handed outhttp://depts.gallaudet.edu/ -Continue journaling. Prompt: Discuss a social injustice that has been done unto you, i.e. bullying, age discrimination, race or religion discrimination, and what you did in response. -Look more deeply at 5 paragraph essay components through discussion and interactive online website: http://www.graphic.org/g oindex.html -Continue journaling. Prompt: Follow-up from previous day. Name a social injustice that needs to be worked on in America and some steps that can be taken to do so. -Look at interactive website with a model five paragraph essayhttp://ed101.bu.edu/Stu dentDoc/Archives/fall0 3/lhanson/resources/ess ay -Continue journaling. Prompt: Free write on an experience that has changed your life. -Introduce locating the five components in an essay using the following lesson plan, website, and graphic organizers: http://teachingtoday.gl encoe.com/lessonplans /expository-writingthe-five-paragraphessay-lesson-plan-1of-2 essay writing. EnglishWorks/writing/fiv eparagraph.html Week: 2 Learn from others -Continue journaling. Prompt: This weekend you are going to the Mall. Tell all that you will do. -Introduce Step Up To Writing. http://www2.pylusd.k12.c a.us/glk/jlaurich/StepUpT oWriting.htm -Read five paragraph essay at grade level 8. -Dissect essay into five components and then each paragraph. -Continue journaling. Prompt: We know that many students begin smoking, even as young as students in our class. Write a letter to your classmates convincing them not to begin smoking. -Read five paragraph essay at grade 10 level. -Look at improvements but note the similarity of structure. -Continue journaling. Prompt: Write about the most valuable thing you ever learned in school. What made it so useful for you? -Read five paragraph essay at the collegiate level. -Discuss similarities and differences between 8, 10, and collegiate level essays. -Read and discuss a personal essay in order to demonstrate the importance of sharing writing. Week: 3 Let’s talk about a good introduction -Continue journaling. Prompt: “Writing is thinking on paper.” -Discuss what makes a working introduction. -Look back at sample essays and study introductory paragraphs. -Continue journaling. Prompt: You are faced with the decision of whether or not to work while in high school. Present an argument to your parents either for or against teen employment. -Look at “broad to specific” introductory paragraph model. -Highlight broad to specific in sample papers. -Create an example introductory paragraph as -Continue journaling. Prompt: "Failure is often a better teacher than success." -Center work with introductory paragraphs (put sentences in order, create a thesis, create attention grabber about an object on table). -Regroup and reiterate reason for strong introduction and thesis. -Continue journaling. Prompt: What do you think are the most important qualities a president should have (and why)? -Discuss the importance of audience. Look to website for guidelineshttp://home.earthlink.ne t/~khatzi/essay/overvie w.htm -Read and discuss articlehttp://web.uvic.ca/wgui de/Pages/EssayWriting Aud.html -Discuss differences in audiences. -Continue journaling. Prompt: Name and discuss three things you could do to improve the world. -Look at alternative ways to begin an introductory paragraph and explore options. Use the following website for suggestions: http://grammar.ccc.com mnet.edu/GRAMMAR/ intros.htm -Continue journaling. Prompt: Free write on five things you would change academically/ socially about school. -Review understanding of thesis with handouthttp://www.unc.edu/de pts/wcweb/handouts/th esis.html -Have class vote on a journal entry to create an example thesis. -Continue journaling. Prompt: Free write on a time when you felt hurt. -Use graphic organizers as class to come up with two introductory paragraphs. Week: 4 Body paragraphs; the bulk of the essay -Continue journaling. Prompt: “Anger is the feeling that makes your mouth work faster than your mind.” -Introduce body paragraphs and their function. -Use following website for key points to discuss (can use as handout): http://www.indiana.edu/~ wts/pamphlets/paragraphs .shtml -Remind how introduction and thesis shapes rest of paper. Week: 5 Conclusion is key -Continue journaling. Prompt: “Men are respectable only as they respect.” -Introduce conclusion a class based on previous day’s prompt. -Continue journaling. Prompt: Free write on any topic of your choice. -Spend time reviewing importance of transitions. -Use previous day’s website and http://www.studygs.net/w rtstr6.htm for examples. -Show same papers with and without transition words. -Touch on thesis again. -Hand out graphic organizer; http://www.learningthrou ghlistening.org/SiteData/i mages/paragraphlarge/035eb026c02e8a0be b06f637cc5ad804/paragra ph-large.gif -Continue journaling. Prompt: Write a newspaper article to the local newspaper about what your class has been -Continue journaling. Prompt: Think of a rule you would like changed either at school or at home and discuss how this makes you feel and why. -Explore the following website: http://www2. actden.com/writ_den/tips/ paragrap/ -Use thesis from previous Tuesday and work on body paragraphs as a class. -Continue journaling. Prompt: If there was a new student in class and you could only ask that person three questions to -Continue journaling. Prompt: Think about where people live. People live in small towns, large towns or even big cities. Some people live on farms or in houses in the country. Think about where it is best to live and why. Choose the one place where you would like to live and give reasons why you think it is the best. -Center work (develop body paragraph for introduction given, see what is wrong/missing from paragraph (http://www.buowl.bou n.edu.tr/students/Paragr aph%20Writing%20Ex ercises.htm), and piece together paragraphs). -Spend time developing own body paragraphs based on prompt given to class. -Discuss. -Continue journaling. Prompt: Write a page on what you want to do when you grow up. What career do you -Continue journaling. Prompt: Free write on a time when you could have gotten someone in trouble but you decided against it. -Review introduction, thesis, and body paragraphs. -Complete interactive activity; http://www.dialogueon learning.tc3.edu/classr oomapplications/activi ties/buildaparagraphact pg.htm -Continue journaling. Prompt: Free write on the weather. -Complete five paragraph paper. Week: 6 Putting it all together paragraph writing. Use following website: http://grammar.ccc.comm net.edu/grammar/composi tion/endings.htm -Discuss its importance in wrapping up paper and final chance to get point across. doing. -Study use of conclusion from previous papers studied (8, 10, collegiate level). -Provide examples of poorly written conclusions. -Write a conclusion from past weeks’ introduction and body paragraphs as a class. -Continue journaling. Prompt: Imagine that you are a political candidate for the Presidency, and you are asked at a debate to agree or disagree with one of the following statements: "All Americans are free," or, "All people are equal." Respond to the American public. -Finish outlines for five paragraph essays and have outlines approved. -Begin work on papers. -Continue journaling. Prompt: Free write on any topic of your choice. -Finish papers/finish papers for homework. get to know them, what would you ask them? -Center activities (piece together sentences in concluding paragraph, write a concluding paragraph as a group, each person create their own conclusion based off of introduction and body paragraphs used in class in previous weeks). -Discuss. -Continue journaling. Prompt: Some fifth graders think they are old enough to decide how late they can stay up at night. What do YOU think? Explain when you think kids are old enough to set their own bedtimes. Give reasons that will convince your readers to agree with you. -Review/brief discussion on peer editing. -Peer edit papers. Use following guidelines: http://www.timesaversfort eachers.com/freeforms/pe ereditingform.pdf, http://go.hrw.com/resourc es/go_ss/teacher99/toolkit /TOOLKT17.pdf (or rubric from previous assignment). want and what do you want to accomplish? -Begin work on five paragraph essay as a class. -Prompt used: Goal is to complete most of paper. -Give students time to leaf through journals and pick one meaningful to them. -If topic is approved, can begin outline. -Continue journaling. Prompt: To what extent should students have privacy in schools? -Submit revisions to online paper evaluation system: http://www.mhhe.com/s ocscience/english/tc/per elman/iMOATabbreviat edscreenshots.pdf -Work on any revisions. -Organize portfolio to turn in with final draft. -Continue journaling. Prompt: Free write on overall experience of unit. -Make any last minute corrections/organize portfolio. -Turn in portfolio (final draft, all revisions, all notes, all peer reviews/checklists, etc.). -Celebrate with portfolio exploration party! (students’ display portfolios and can participate in discussions on essay topics) -Make revisions for next class. Unit 2 is for 8th English/Language Arts students. The goal of this unit is to review old poetry concepts while integrating a helping the students to gain a deeper breadth of knowledge in poetry. This again highlights my philosophy of composition which is practice. Each day the students will be actively writing and learning about poetry while still having fun. Students will continue work in their journals and pull from the old entries to inspire their poetry. Students will be given assignments to practice different styles of poetry and will be encouraged to step out of their comfort zone and challenge themselves in their ability levels. Students will also learn from studying the works of others; professional poets, peers, non-professional poets, etc. Activities will be focused on actually developing poetry rather than informing the students what poetry is. Students will also continue to develop their peer editing tools as well as metacognition as to what helps they write the best. The students will share many of their works in class and will also be encouraged to share them with others around the world. The unit ends with the integration of technology when the students podcast their poems to share with others. The following standards are met throughout the course of this unit: RLA.O.8.1.9 summarize explicit and implied information from literary and informational texts to recognize the relationships among the facts, ideas, events and concepts (e.g., names, dates, events, organizational patterns, graphical representations as found in photographs, captions, maps, tables or timelines, textual features including table of contents, headings or side bars). RLA.O.8.1.10 evaluate the effect of figurative language in text. RLA.O.8.1.11 read, compare and interpret types of poetry (e.g., narrative poems, ballads, lyric, epic) and interpret elements (e.g., lines, stanzas, rhythm, meter or rhyme) to derive meaning of poetry. RLA.O.8.3.1 model effective oral communication skills (e.g., tone, volume, rate, audience, etiquette, standard English) through the presentation of compositions reports RLA.O.8.3.7 scripts plan, create, organize, and present an age-appropriate media product that demonstrates format, purpose, and audience. Focus for the Week Week: 1 Poetry Introduction and Practice Day 1 Day 2 Day 3 Day 4 Day 5 -Continue journaling. Prompt: Is there an event that took place in your life that has changed you? Explain how. -Introduce students to poetry as a whole. Make available samples (samples will be mentioned specifically later in the unit). -Hand out list of poetry terms. -Explain fluidity of poetry. -Continue journaling. Prompt: Describe a dream that you've had. How did the dream make you feel? -Introduce ABC poems. Study, explain, discuss, and practice. http://www.authorsden.co m/visit/viewpoetry.asp?A uthorID=10146&id=8690 0 http://www.scborromeo.or g/wisdom/abc.htm -Continue journaling. Prompt: What is your favorite sport? Why do you like it, and what do you like best about it? -Introduce Acrostic poems. Study, explain, discuss, and practice. http://www.holycross.edu/ departments/socant/dhum mon/acrostics/what_is_ac rostic.html -Continue journaling. Prompt: Free write on poetry you have read and enjoyed in the past. -Center activity: rotate between three stations. Several objects will be at each. Students will pick an object at the first station and write an ABC poem about it, a new object and Acrostic poem at the second, and an another new object and ___ poem at the third. Week: 2 Poetry is subjective -Continue journaling. Prompt: Think of something you have wondered about and write about it. -Introduce more complex concepts of poetry: scanning, -Continue journaling. Prompt: Free write on any topic of your choice. -More practice scanning and writing phrases in iambic pentameter. -Go outside again for inspiration. -Continue journaling. Prompt: What is silence to you? -Review scanning poetry with hands-on activity. Students cut out words from newspapers, magazines, etc, and create -Continue journaling. Prompt: If you could change places with anyone, who would it be and why? -Introduce students to haikus. Study, explain, discuss, and practice. -Take students outside have them write about something in nature (explain historical background). http://volweb.utk.edu/sc hool/bedford/harrisms/h aiku.htm http://www.cranberryde signs.com/poetry/haiku/ history.htm -Continue journaling. Prompt: What I know about...(Could be anything you are studying, or anything you feel you know a lot about). -More poetry work. -Continue journaling. Prompt: Free write on any topic you choose. -Complete “I Can’t Write a Poem” activity. Students list all of the reasons they cannot write a poem Week: 3 Learn from others and revision Week: 4 Revision/Portfolios syllabication, free verse, rhyme, rhyming couplet, imagery, etc. -Spend time on scanning a poem. Use exerpt from Paradise Lost http://www.types-ofpoetry.org.uk/70iambic-pentameter.htm -Continue journaling. Prompt: If I could be any color in a crayon box, I would be... -Introduce students to and work with imagery and figurative language. -Pick activities from website for students to practice their skills. http://42explore.com/fi glang.htm -Continue journaling. Prompt: Describe how your classroom will look the day after the last day of school. -Discuss Friday’s quiz. -Do online poetry activity. http://www.rif.org/read ingplanet/gamestation/ poetrysplatter/default. -Continue journaling. Prompt: Describe how your mother looks when she smiles at you. -Do “Fruit Poetry” to practice sensory and imagery skills. A piece of fruit will be placed in front of students with blindfold. They will need to describe the fruit to their partner using sensory adjectives and phrases, imagery, similes, etc. Students will then switch roles and repeat. -Continue journaling. Prompt: What is your favorite room in your home and why? -Complete another online activity: http://www.rif.org/reading planet/gamestation/poetry splatter/default.mspx their own poem using those words. They will need to color-code them demonstrating whether they are stressed or unstressed. -Students practice writing an autobiographical poem about themselves and share it with the class. http://www.coled.org/cur/lang/lang24.t xt and make that into a poem itself. -Continue journaling. Prompt: Ten crazy reasons why I couldn't do my homework. -Sonnet work. Introduce and practice. http://poetry.about.com/li brary/weekly/blshakespea resonnet18.htm -Continue journaling. Prompt: *Describe your feelings on waking up and seeing snow on the ground on a school day. -Practice sonnet writing. http://www.readwritethi nk.org/lessons/lesson_v iew.asp?id=830 -Continue journaling. Prompt: Free write -Final conceptual quiz using “To His Coy Mistress”- Andrew Marvell. Students look for symbolism, scanning the lines, etc. -Continue journaling. Prompt: What is the meaning of "He laughs best who laughs last"? -Revise poems completed from the beginning of the unit. -Pick five poems to polish for final portfolio and podcasting. -Continue journaling. Prompt: What is the best advice you ever received? -Peer edit the five chosen poems by center activity editing. -Continue journaling. Prompt: Free write on your overall experience of this unit. -Students present portfolios and record podcasts. mspx Unit 3 is for 8th English/Language Arts students. This unit’s goal is to get students to think creatively and understand the elements that go into making an effective story, movie, novel, etc. Practice is again an intricate part of this unit and students are writing in some capacity each and every day; journals are continued and class activities are geared towards the practice of composition. Students will be provided with an array of activities which help students develop strong settings and characters while maintaining a compelling storyline and following the guideline of Freytag’s Pyramid. Cross curricular activities are incorporated in this unit especially the art component aspect. By the end of the unit students are to have written a cohesive short story with the essential elements of a plot, strong characters, and a descriptive setting. All elements that went into writing the short story must be compiled into a creative writing portfolio that will be evaluated at the end of the unit. The following standards are met throughout the course of this unit: RLA.O.8.1.6 determine and interpret the elements of literature to construct meaning and recognize author’s purpose and/or reader’s purpose: <UL RLA.O.8.2.1 use notes to create an outline for developing a written and/or oral presentation noting the inclusion of computer graphics. RLA.O.8.2.3 use pre-writing, editing and revision techniques (e.g., read, draft aloud, peer feedback or a provided rubric) to vary sentence length, change sentence order, eliminate organizational errors, and use vivid and concise words to create a personal style or voice while clarifying and enhancing the central idea. Focus for the Week Week: 1 Setting Day 1 Day 2 Day 3 Day 4 Day 5 -Continue journaling. Prompt: What is your favorite movie? Describe the characters, the story, and what you like best about the movie. -Introduce students to creative writing. Hand out vocabulary list incorporating major concepts. -Read “The Chaser” by John Collier. -Continue journaling. Prompt: You are walking home from a late movie, and you have to cut through a cemetery. Describe your experience. -Discuss short story and dissect elements (exposition, rising action, climax, etc.) -Continue journaling. Prompt: You are visiting the zoo. You come across an animal that no one has ever seen before. Describe the animal. -Work on setting. Have students go to their “writing place” in the classroom and free write for 20 minutes on a familiar place from their childhood. -Come back as a class and discuss. -Continue journaling. Prompt: Rework old journal entry to make it new: Describe your feelings on waking up and seeing snow on the ground on a school day. -Review elements and importance of setting: http://www.brainpopjr.com / reading/story elements/setting/grownups. weml#teachers Week: 2 Characters -Continue journaling. Prompt: Most people have at least one strange relative. If you do, write about that person. Describe what is unusual about that person. What is their -Continue journaling. Prompt: Write about your friend(s). Describe each person and what they mean to you. -Provide a good example of a character in a story and look how -Continue journaling. Prompt: Write about the members of your family. Describe each person and what they mean to you. -Build character as a class from a pair of -Continue journaling. Prompt: If you could be any age at all, how old would you be (older or younger)? Write about why you would like to be this age and what you would do. -Have students share free write with a partner. Have partner close eyes and see if they can imagine the place the other person is describing. -Setting activity. Students pick a photo from a magazine or on the internet and describe the setting. -Continue journaling. Prompt: Draw a selfportrait, and describe yourself in writing. -Have students pick an object from box and create a character (animate or inanimate). -Continue journaling. Prompt: Free write about what Fridays mean to you. Perhaps tell a story or write a poem from the free write. -Center work. Work in small groups to create a character. Make up a relationship to you? Do you like that person? -Introduce character writing. Explain importance of developing a strong character. Week: 3 Plot/Learn from others Week: 4 Plot/learn from others -Continue journaling. Prompt: Think of a person you really like or admire. Think of a personality trait that makes them so special. Write about this good trait and why you like it. -Elaborate more fully the elements of plot. -Use first activity on website to take a familiar children’s story and analyze its elements. http://readwritethink.or g/lessons/lesson_view.a sp?id=401 -Continue journaling. Prompt: Free write on any topic of your choice. -Learn from others. Read short story and discuss important elements. the character is revealed (first two chapters of The Great Gatsby) -Use graphic organizers to note the development http://www.teacherspay teachers.com/data/thum bnails/Character%20Sk etch%20Graphic%20or ganizer.doc.00.jpg -Continue journaling. Prompt: You have just been rescued after being lost for 24 hours. Relate what happened that made you scared. -Use graphic organizer to analyze plot of another familiar children’s story (student’s choice). http://www.literacyrule s.com/pdf/plot32.pdf shoes (bottom up method). Create a brief history and story about character. biography of character and illustrate the character. -Wrap up character activities. -Continue journaling. Prompt: Create a list of things you will never do. Pick three and explain. (Keep in mind this could make a great story). -Build a plot as a class. Create different angles (plot from different characters, how it would change, etc.). -Continue journaling. Prompt: Imagine you are walking outside. A spring storm is coming. Describe for your classmates what you see, hear, smell, taste, and touch. -Use same graphic organizer from Tuesday to analyze plot. http://www.classicreade r.com/book/3606/1/ -Continue journaling. Prompt: Free write on any topic of your choice that you feel will help you with your short story. -Comic book group activity. http://www.readwritethink. org/beyondtheclassroom/su mmer/grades9_12/ComicB ook/ -Continue journaling. Prompt: Write an essay as though you were 80 years old, looking back at your life. What have you accomplished, what are you proudest of, what is the world like, -Continue journaling. Prompt: What is your favorite month? Why? -Review and practice character work, http://www.essortment. com/all/creatingcharact _rdmv.htm -Continue journaling. Prompt: What would happen if everyone lived in space? What type of houses would they live in? What type of clothing would they wear? What type of -Continue journaling. Prompt: Free write -Tie up any loose ends. -Center activities on writing a collaborative story. One student writes the beginning, another writes the middle, another http://www.classicreade r.com/book/3603/1/ and do you have any regrets? -Read another short story and discuss elements, http://www.classicreade r.com/book/3616/1/ Week: 5 Journal/Outlines -Continue journaling. Prompt: What would you do if you wanted to be friends with someone who spoke no English? -Students look through past journal entries for short story prompts. Look through lists of prompts and see if any grab students’ attention. Week: 6 Drafting/revision -Continue journaling. Prompt: What do you think someone your age can do to help reduce the amount of pollution in our environment? -Continue working on short stories. -Continue journaling. Prompt: Imagine you are on a magic carpet that takes you anywhere you choose. Think about where you would go and what you might do. Write a story about your adventure. -Continue examining journals and prompts. -Narrow the topics of interest to three and/or three that can possibly be worked together. -Clarify and refine. -Continue journaling. Prompt: What do you think about when you can't fall asleep? -Go to computer lab so that students may insert pictures and other elements to grab reader’s attention. -Continue journaling. Prompt: What do you like most about yourself? -Use portions of unit plan to practice any skills that need extra help. http://www.mcn.org/ed/ cur/liv/Units/Creative.h tm -Continue journaling. Prompt: Where would you prefer to be right now--mountains, desert, beach--and why? -Peer edit short stories. food would they eat? How would they travel? -Writing a short story with newspaper photos, http://www.eduref.org/c gibin/printlessons.cgi/Virt ual/Lessons/Language_ Arts/Writing/WCP0011 .html -Continue journaling. Prompt: If you could have been someone in history, who would you have been? -Complete lesson on editing. http://www.nytimes.co m/learning/teachers/less ons/20071019friday.ht ml writes the end. http://www.eduref.org/cgibin/printlessons.cgi/Virtual /Lessons/Language_Arts/ Writing/WCP0009.html -Continue journaling. Prompt: Free write on your overall experience of this unit. -Share short stories. -Share favorite journal entries. -Finish sharing short stories and organize portfolio. -Continue journaling. Prompt: Free write -Begin work on short stories. -Create tentative outline and have it approved by the teacher.