Name: ______________________________ Teacher: Ms A. Gerzic 12ESE Theme Study Workbook This resource supports your study and records of the chosen theme for the year and is where you will store your notes for Achievement Standards 2.7: Analyse significant connections across texts, supported by evidence (internal, 4 credits) and 2.1: Analyse specified aspects of studied written texts, supported by evidence (external poetry essay, 4 credits). ChoIces Decision s What exactly is this elusive thing called theme? 1 This year you need to select four texts from a variety of genres, which have connections between them that you can analyse. The connecting aspect will be a theme. So, what is a theme? First, let’s get clear about what theme is NOT. It is not the “moral” of the story. A moral is a piece of practical advice that can be gained from the novel to apply to our own lives. A theme is more complex than a moral and may have no direct advice or philosophical value that the reader can apply. It is not a “hidden meaning” that needs to be pulled out of the story. THE THEMES OF A TEXT ARE ITS MOST GENERAL STATEMENTS – ITS “BIG IDEAS” ABOUT HUMAN EXPERIENCE REMEMBER THAT: It is not a subject of a story The setting, characters and plot only exist within the world of the text BUT The theme exists independently of the world of the text BUT The text informs, enriches and expands our thinking about the theme The theme is the underlying message or key idea in a text. Theme is deeper than simply topic and is deliberately presented by the writer. A text may have one or several themes. Themes which are relevant across expanses of time, societies and location are universal themes. Longer texts such as novels can explore numerous themes, while short texts such as poems and short stories are limited to one theme which is summarised in the ‘theme line’. Two main ways of stating a text’s theme are: in a single word (usually a noun), such as ‘jealousy’ or ‘belonging’ as a contention, such as ‘jealousy is evil’, or ‘belonging depends on a sense of place’ Some common general themes – expressed as a single word and then as a possible contention – are: COMMON THEMES growing up gender roles love family injustice prejudice war power survival CONTENTION Growing up is painful but necessary. Women are limited by their roles in marriage. Love does not respect moral values. Family is the basis of an individual’s happiness. Injustice is often perpetrated (carried out) by just individuals. Prejudice is embedded in social values and hard to recognise. War always harms the innocent. Power can liberate an individual to follow their dreams. Survival depends on luck as well as inner strength. Think of two more and add to the list above: ________________ __________________________________________________ 2 ________________ __________________________________________________ HOW DO YOU FIND A THEME? Sometimes the title of a text can give us a clue to what themes it might deal with. For example, Larissa Behrendt’s novel Home deals with themes of belonging and displacement, and the importance of having a place to call ‘home’. The cover of the book might also suggest certain themes. Sometimes the theme can be discovered by reading through the work and looking for topics that show up again and again. When you were reading the work, did you think, “Ah, didn’t he already talk about that?” If you did, then you have probably noted a theme. Repeating patterns and symbols will lead you to the theme. When trying to identify a theme, examine the relations among the parts of the story and the relations of the parts to the whole: Characters: What kind of people does the text deal with? Plot: What do the characters do? Are they in control of their lives, or are they controlled by fate? Motivation: Why characters behave the way they do, and what motives dominate them? Style: How does the author present reality? Does he use short or long sentences (in a novel/short story/play/film) ? What kind of paragraphs / stanzas (in poetry) are there? Are they short and conversational or are they long and involved? What is the rhythm of the poem (in poetry)? Is the work divided up? If so, how and where? Tone: What is the author’s attitude towards his subject? Values: Does it seem like the author is making a value judgement? What are the values of the characters/speaker in the story/poem? What values does the author seem to promote? REMEMBER that theme, plot, and structure are inseparable, all helping to inform and reflect back on each other. Also be aware that a theme we determine from a story never completely explains the story. It is simply ONE OF THE ELEMENTS THAT MAKE UP THE WHOLE. The theme allows the author to control or give order to his perceptions about life. MY THEME IS: CHOICES - a man is responsible for his choice(s) and must accept the consequences 3 - sometimes a more difficult life choice or decision makes us better people Decision making can be regarded as the mental processes (cognitive process) resulting in the selection of a course of action among several alternative scenarios. Every decision making process produces a final choice. Choice consists of the mental process of judging the merits of multiple options and selecting one of them. Most people regard having choices as a good thing, though a severely limited or artificially restricted choice can lead to discomfort with choosing and possibly, an unsatisfactory outcome. In contrast, unlimited choice may lead to confusion, regret of the alternatives not taken. (www.wikiedia.org ) Examples of difficult decisions or choices could be: _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ What makes a good person? Give some examples of truly good people that you know who made difficult life decisions. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ My theme impacts people because: _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ My theme is universal (globally relevant) because: _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ Some examples of this are: _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ My opinion of this theme is: _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ Suggested texts which may help you explore the theme of making a difficult choice or decision 5 Poems Films You, the Choice of My Parents - Konai Helu Thaman Juno Bike Ride with Older Boys- Laura Kasischke LOTR ( trilogy) The Road Not Taken - Robert Frost Sophie’s Choice Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening - Robert The Help Frost Atonement If – Rudyard Kipling Far from Heaven The Choice – Dorothy Parker A Short Stay in Switzerland The Fish - Elizabeth Bishop You Don’t Know Jack Temple Grandin Novels The Witness Fahrenheit 451 - Ray Bradbury Short stories Snow - Orhan Pamuk The Gift of the Magi - O. Henry Giovanni’s Room - James Baldwin The Story of an Hour - Kate Chopin If I Stay - Gayle Forman Barn Burning - William Faulkner The Lord of the Rings (trilogy – Arwen’s choice) – The Red Room - H.G. Wells J.R.R. Tolkien The Blue House – Graham Templeton Daniel Deronda - George Eliot Plays Bartleby the Scrivener - Herman Melville Our Town - Thornton Wilder The Twilight series ( Eclipse, Breaking Dawn, New The Crucible - Arthur Miller Moon) – Stephenie Meyer Hamlet – William Shakespeare The Stranger - Albert Camus Romeo and Juliet – W. Shakespeare Bleak House- Charles Dickens The Merchant of Venice – W. The Monkey's Paw - W.W. Jacobs Shakespeare The Mill on the Floss - George Eliot Macbeth – W. Shakespeare Non-fiction The Marriage Trap (Metro 2008) 6 Achievement Standard English 91104: Analyse significant connections across texts, supported by evidence (2.7) What is the standard you need to meet for Achievement Standard 2.7? Achievement Achievement with Merit Achievement with Excellence Analyse significant connections across texts, supported by evidence. Analyse significant connections across texts convincingly, supported by evidence. Analyse significant connections across texts perceptively, supported by evidence. This assessment activity requires you to select a particular aspect of text (in this case a theme) and analyse the significant connections across a range of texts. You will present your findings as a written report. The texts can be any combination of written, visual, and/or oral and short and/or extended. You will be assessed on your ability to recognise and interpret links between texts. Note that any connection that you find does not need to be evident in every text you have selected. You can identify and record significant connections between texts in any way you wish. For example, you may wish to use a chart so that as you read, you can note significant connections. Steps: 1) Choose a connecting aspect across texts Your investigation will be based on the THEME as a connecting ASPECT. Three suitable texts will be analysed in class and you will need to compare how your connecting aspect is presented across these selected texts. You will need to choose the fourth text. Check with your teacher that your text will provide you with the opportunity to achieve the standard at every level. 2) Identify significant connections Identify at least two significant connections between your chosen texts. Select specific supporting evidence (examples) from the texts. 3) Analyse the significant connections Study the links (connections) between the texts. Make reasoned points that interpret the links that you have identified between the texts. Provide supporting evidence for the points you make. 4) Present your analysis Present your findings in a suitable format. 7 Feedback Text #1: Feedback Text #2: Feedback text # 3: Feedback text #4: 8 Create a Theme Map Once you’ve identified a major theme in your text, you can create a concept map to understand exactly what your text is saying about this theme. The sample theme map below is for the film Look Both Ways, directed by Sarah Watt. EVIDENCE FROM CHARACTERS ------------------------------------------------------------Nick is plagued by thoughts of cancer, haunted by father’s death. ------------------------------------------------------------------------- Meryl sees death and disaster everywhere. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------Phil gives up smoking after Nick’s diagnosis. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------Characters have to come to terms with death before they can achieve happiness. EVIDENCE FROM PLOT -------------------------------------DEALING Nick reflects on his father’s death. with ------------------------------------------------DEATH Meryl goes through stages of grief after her father’s death. -----------------------------------------------Train accident haunts Meryl, interests Andy, causes grief to Julia. -------------------------------------------Film ends on hopeful note. ------------------------------------ OTHER EVIDENCE Setting could be any town or city, suggesting that issues are universal. Photo montages show that special moments in life should be appreciated, even if we die in the end. QUOTES ------------------------------------------------------------“It doesn’t matter how life ends, it matters how it was.” – Nick’s mother. ---------------------------------------------------------------------“Things just happen.” - Anna ----------------------------------------------------------------------“Everybody has to find a way to face their own death.” - Nick’s mother. 9 Activity 1 (to be repeated for each class- studied and independently studied text): 1. What do you think is a major theme of your text? A major theme of your text: _____________________________________________________________________ Now you’ve identified a major theme in your text, you can create a concept map to understand exactly what your text is saying about this theme. 2. Draw a diagram like the sample theme map above. Put the name of the major theme in the middle. 3. Make a box for characters and a box for plot. In the boxes, write notes on how these relate to the major theme. 4. Add a third box, labelled ‘Other’. This is where you can note down any other elements in the text that relate to your major theme. For example, the setting is important to the theme or the time span reinforces the relevance of the theme. Symbols/techniques/language features could be in this box as well if you are analysing a poem. 5. Finally, add a box for quotations that relate to the major theme. Try to have at least three pieces of evidence. 6. Read back over what you’ve written. Do you have a better idea about what the author or poet or director is saying about the major theme in your text after looking at all the evidence you’ve gathered? Read the example below, then fill in the gaps in the following sentences to form a simple statement about the theme. Sample answer A major theme of Look Both Ways is dealing with death. Sarah Watt suggests that we shouldn’t waste out lives being afraid of death. Your answer A major theme of _________________________(title of your text) is ____________________________ (major theme). ___________________________(name of author, director or playwright) suggests that _____________________________(author or director’s point of view on the theme). 7. Next, show that you have some evidence for your contention. Fill in the gaps following the model provided, to create a paragraph about the theme in your text. Sample answer She suggests this by depicting Meryl and Nick as distressed and unhappy when they’re worried about death. It is also suggested by the fact that the film ends happily, with Meryl and Nick together and by Nick’s mother’s words, “It doesn’t matter how life ends, it matters how it was.’ 10 Your answer He/ She suggests this by _________________________________(one piece of evidence from the Characters box in your concept map). It is also suggested by ____________________________________(one piece of evidence from the Plot box in your concept map) and by _____________________(character’s name)’s words, ‘________________________________________________’ (key quotation about the theme). Different words for different genres One of the requirements of the Theme Study topic is that you look at texts from several different genres. You will have to be careful when choosing words to refer to different genres. The following table will help you. Creator Person who tells the story Special features Novel Short story Biography Autobiography Memoir Author Narrator Director Playwright Narrator/Voiceover Narrator Poet Speaker/Persona Language Chapters Point of view (firstperson or thirdperson) Film Camera shots Actors Sound effects and music Lighting Sets Props Play Acts Scenes Sound effects and music Lighting Sets Props Poetry Language Metaphor Simile Imagery 11 Metalanguage for novels and short stories To be able to discuss texts effectively, using the correct words will help you be precise when talking about those texts. We use special vocabulary to discuss texts, which is called METALANGUAGE. The following table shows some of the most useful words for talking and writing about novels and short stories. WORD EXAMPLE Author: The person who creates a text such as a novel or short story Context: The historical, social and cultural environment the story is set in. For example, context can refer to whether the story is set during a war, or among the working class or upper class. Fiction: Any piece of writing that isn’t intended to be a factual account of real-life people or events. Genre: The category a text belongs to. All genres have certain ‘rules’ or guidelines for their form or structure. For example, a novel is longer than a short story, and biography is a factual account of a real person’s life. Main character: Who the story is mostly about. This character usually has a realistic and complicated personality, just like a real person. Minor character: Other characters in the text who don’t play as big a role as the main character. Narrative: A story which may be true or fictitious. Narrator: The person or ‘voice’ who tells the story. The author of Maestro is Peter Goldsworthy. First-person narrative: A narrative told from one character’s point of view. That character uses words ‘I’ and ‘me’ to refer to themself. Third-person narrative: A narrative told from the point of view of someone who is not one of the characters in the text. All characters are referred to as ‘he’, ‘she’ and ‘they’. Nonfiction: A story that is based on real- life events or people. The novel The White Tiger is a first-person narrative. A Farewell to Arms is set in the context of World War I. Nineteen Eighty- Four is a fiction text. Hard Times belongs to the novel genre. The main character in A Man for All Seasons is Sir Thomas Moore. Margaret is a minor character in A Man for All Seasons. A Farewell to Arms is a narrative about war by Ernest Hemingway. The narrator of Aravind Adiga’s novel The White Tiger is an uneducated but confident young man, Balram Halwai. Hard Times is a third-person narrative. The Marriage Trap is a nonfiction text. 12 Plot: The arrangement of events in the text. It can also refer to the main storyline. Setting: The time and place the events in the text happen. Subplot: A minor storyline within the main story. Structure: The way the elements or ‘bits’ of the text are arranged. For example, the text may have events happening chronologically, i.e. from earliest to most recent, as in real life. Or it might use flashbacks, have one or two subplots running alongside the major plot, or be divided into sections. Theme: A major idea running through the text. Examples are growing up, justice, oppression, freedom of choice, identity, etc. Values: Qualities that are thought to be important to live a good life. Examples are honesty, courage and loyalty. The plot of Maestro begins with Paul meeting Herr Keller and ends with Keller’s death. The setting of Richard III is England in the fifteenth century. A subplot of The White Tiger concerns the relationship between Balram Halwai and his family. The structure of The White Tiger has roughly three sections – Balram’s life in his village, his life and work in Delhi as a chauffeur, and his life after he had committed a murder. Death is a major theme in Look Both Ways. Remaining true to oneself is a value endorsed by A Man for All Seasons. The following table will help you use correct words when talking about poetry. Please note that it does not include figures of speech – you will get a special handout for that. Metalanguage for poetry WORD EXAMPLE Free verse: Poetry that doesn’t follow any regular pattern or rhythm or rhyme. Rhyme: When words at the end of a verse or line sound the same. Rhythm: The pattern of beats or stresses in a line. Kasischke’s ‘Bike Ride with Older Boys’ is written in free verse form. In Judith Wright’s ‘Bullocky’, the second and fourth lines of each stanza rhyme . The rhythm of “North Country” by Slessor stems from repeated alliterative endings such as ‘volleys/valleys’, ‘falling/feeling’ and ‘sucking/seeking’. Judith Wright often uses native Australian birds and plants as symbols in her poems. Symbol: An object used to represent something else; for example, a dove is a common symbol of peace. Stanza: a unit within a poem which consists of a grouping of lines or verses. Verse: A single line in a metrical composition. Frost’s ‘The Road Not Taken’ consists of four stanzas. Each stanza in Frost’s ‘The Road Not Taken’ consists of five verses. 13 Metalanguage for films Word Definition The use of camera to capture images on film. Cinematography Cinematography determines what we see and how we see it; for example, as a close-up, from a distance, as a static shot (where the camera doesn’t move) or as a tracking shot (where the entire camera moves). The most common type of edit. One shot ends and the next begins Cut immediately, usually with the sound continuing over the cut. For example, in one conversation there might be cuts between shots of different characters. Director The person who interprets the script, tells the actors what to do and runs the film shoot. Dissolve A kind of edit. Two shots overlap briefly as the shot that is ending ‘dissolves’ into the next. Edit A way of joining two shots. Often the edit is so smooth, the audience can’t tell where one shot ends and the next begins. Fade The screen fades to black between shots. This often indicates a significant change of pace or time. Mise-en-scene A French term meaning all the visual elements within the frame of the shot, including setting, costumes, lighting, etc. Shot A continuous, uninterrupted section of the film. Most shots don’t last more than ten seconds. A type of edit where there is a clear dividing line on the screen between Wipe one shot and the next. We see the new shot appear in part of the screen to ‘wipe away’ the shot that it’s replacing. Referring to texts Another important point to be aware of is that no matter what tense your text is written in, always use the present tense when referring to texts in your essays. WRONG: In her novel Year of Wonders, Geraldine Brooks detailed how the villagers of Eyam were driven to sometimes cruel and irrational behaviour due to the fear they endured as a result of the plague. RIGHT: In her novel Year of Wonders, Geraldine Brooks details how the villagers of Eyam are driven to sometimes cruel and irrational behaviour due to the fear they endure as a result of the plague. 14 Now that you have a number of tools to help you deal with your texts and tasks, you are ready to start. Remember to create a theme map with a summary paragraph for each text you study and read (see pages 9 &10). Use the blank space(s) provided to draw your map. TEXT 1- a novel (Fahrenheit 451 by Ray Bradbury) THEME MAP SUMMARY ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________. 15 THEME Themes are presented through elements of the text: setting, plot, character and style. Identify the main theme of the text. ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________. Identify the minor theme(s) if present. ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________. How are the themes presented in the text you have studied? How does this text connect to our theme? What does it deal with? Outline one incident in the text which explores the theme. Provide quotations and details in your answer. ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________. In what way does the text comment on society? ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________. In what way(s) does this text lead the reader to reconsider his/her values and/or beliefs? _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ 16 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________. In what ways has this text helped you to understand a situation unfamiliar to you? _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________. In what ways has this text helped you to understand a situation that is familiar to you? _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________. How is this text similar or different from something else you have read or viewed this year? Give details and quotations in your answer. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________. Evaluate the effectiveness of the text you have studied at presenting the theme. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________. 17 Copy and memorize key quotes which relate to the main theme of the text. Beneath each quote write a sentence or two about it. E.g. identify its location in the text, characters involved, outline the incident and explain why the text is significant. ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________. TEXT 2- a poem (The Road Not Taken by Robert Frost) THEME MAP 18 Summary: ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________. Identify the main theme of the text. ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________. Identify the minor theme(s) if present. ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________. How are the themes presented in the text you have studied? Outline one incident in the text which explores the theme. ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ How is this text similar or different from something else you have read or viewed this year? Give details and quotations in your answer. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ 19 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________. Evaluate the effectiveness of the text you have studied at presenting the theme. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________. In what way(s) does this text lead the reader to reconsider his/her values and/or beliefs? _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________. In what ways has this text helped you to understand a situation unfamiliar to you? _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________. In what ways has this text helped you to understand a situation that is familiar to you? _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________. Evaluate the effectiveness of the text you have studies at presenting the theme. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________. 20 Copy and memorise key quotes which relate to the main theme of the text. Beneath each quote write a sentence or two about it. E.g. identify its location in the text, characters involved, outline the incident and explain why the text is significant. ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________. What language techniques are evident in this text? Which language technique reinforces the theme? ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________. Discuss the distinctive features of the language techniques. ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________. What examples of symbolism are evident? ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________. 21 Discuss the importance of symbolism in the text. ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________. Discuss the importance of one of the following features: imagery, structure, sound, or vocabulary. ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________. Discuss the point of view taken by the writer and the effect it creates. ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________. Text 3 – your choice! THEME MAP 22 Summary: ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________. Identify the main theme of the text. ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________. Identify the minor theme(s) if present. ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________. How are the themes presented in the text you have studied? Outline one incident in the text which explores the theme. ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ 23 __________________________________________________________________________. How is this text similar or different from something else you have read or viewed this year? Give details and quotations in your answer. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________. In what way does the text comment on society/race/culture/personal growth/maturity etc? ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________. In what way(s) does this text lead the reader to reconsider his/her values and/or beliefs? _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________. In what ways has this text helped you to understand a situation unfamiliar to you? _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________. In what ways has this text helped you to understand a situation that is familiar to you? 24 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________. Evaluate the effectiveness of the text you have studies at presenting the theme. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________. Copy and memorise key quotes which relate to the main theme of the text. Beneath each quote write a sentence or two about it. E.g. identify its location in the text, characters involved, outline the incident and explain why the text is significant. ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________. TEXT 4 VISUAL TEXT Film summary sheet Title: __________________________ Director: ________________________ Main character(s):_________________________________________________________ 25 Minor characters: _________________________________________________________ This text is about (outline the basic details of the plot. Try to come up with between five and ten key events): ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________. Is the story told chronologically? YES/NO Are flashbacks (jumps back in timeline) used? YES/NO Example__________________________________________________________ Are flashforwards (jumps forward in time) used? YES/NO Example _______________________________________________________________ The text connects to our theme because it deals with ( provide specific details in your answer): ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________. What is the director’s point of view on our theme? ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ Identify more themes in this film. ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________. An exact shot/angle/costume/music choice/lighting/dialogue choice that showed the theme well was: 26 ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ The theme was reinforced/further developed by the director’s choice of: ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________. How is this text similar, or different from something else you have read/viewed this year? Give specific details in your answer. ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________. UNDERSTANDING ANALYSIS The first word in each of the levels of the Achievement criteria is ANALYSE. It is vital to know what is meant by the word in this context. The essay topic, which is more commonly an instruction than a question, will name specifically the aspect of text that you are going to write about ( in this case it is going to be a theme). The extra things that you are required to do are to comment on the details you have chosen and relate them to the topic. You will write a formal essay of the following structure: S.X.E. (Statement, eXample, Explanation). 27 The grade you get will depend on how much analysis you give and how clever that analysis is. Essays that get the higher grades tend to be longer and have more supportive evidence, but the main reason for the higher grade is that there is more, and more perceptive analysis. Simple analysis includes explanations like these: What does it mean? E.g. Fire is a symbol of power, it can be used destructively or constructively. Why did the character(s) do or say this? This explains setting, plot, character – things within the text. What difference did this make? This explains the importance of the details you have described and how the theme is conveyed. Perceptive analysis includes explanations like these: How does this fit in with things in the text? E.g. Is it part of the climax/contrast/parallel (main plot – subplot) structure? How does this work? (Does it continue or complete a developing idea or mood? Or is it a change or contradiction?) How does this make me feel? (How is the author/poet/director manipulating my feelings? Why?) What does this make me think? (How does this fit into the themes of the text?) How can this be linked to the world ‘beyond the text’? ( What cross-overs are there between the author and his/her life or us and our lives on the one hand and the world inside the text on the other?) How well does this work? (How appropriate, powerful, perceptive, clear or moving is the use of this technique here?) WRITING YOUR ESSAY Your Connections analysis will need to be well-structured, well-organised and have a sound form. A good introduction Shows that you understand the topic through rewording or defining the key words Shows a clear contention ( elaborated theme statement that you are going to analyse) Indicates the main supporting points you will include in your essay Sentence starters for introduction(s); The author/director/playwright/poet considers the idea that… (Name of text) suggests that… (Name of text) explores the themes of… While (name of text) suggests that…, it also suggests that… The author/director/playwright/poet of (name of text) uses (techniques) to convet 28 the point that… (Name of text) shows (name of character) to be… This is conveyed through… A good body paragraph Is specific and states what the paragraph is about Includes supporting evidence Explains and analyses details Relates your answer to the original topic Sentence starters for body paragraphs: (Name of text) shows that…through the use of techniques such as… (Character’s name) is depicted as…This is shown, for example, when he/she… (Character’s name) undergoes a significant change in the text. He /she is…at the beginning of the text but becomes…by the end of the text. The author/director/playwright/poet’s interest in the theme of…is expressed through the experiences of (character’s name) The structure of the text reflects the themes of… (Episode in the text) illustrates the author’s point of view on the (theme). A recurring symbol in the text is… which is associated with… This is evident when (event in the text) (Character’s name) embodies the values of… The author promotes/disapproves of these values, as shown by… (Name of the text) endorses the values of… A good conclusion: Is one paragraph only Re-states your contention and briefly summarises the main points Does not use the same words if possible Does not introduce new points Sums up your planning Sentence starters for conclusions: In summary, it is apparent that… The evidence suggests that… In conclusion, it can be seen that… As has been shown… The text demonstrates… 29 Linking words Using linking words will make your essay flow much better. Here are some examples to help you : To express a similar point To express an opposing point To expand on a point Similarly… Likewise… In the same way… Equally… So too… Besides… By contrast… On the other hand… However… Yet… While… Despite this… In comparison… Nevertheless… Furthermore… Moreover… In addition… For example… For instance… What’s more… Additionally… To express a logical progression in your analysis Therefore… As a result… Consequently… Thus… For this reason… In conclusion… 30