Compare/Contrast Essay Grading Rubric Great Introduction Body Paragraphs Conclusion Compare/ Contrast Language Quotes/ Citations Formatting Mechanics All intro expectations are met: - Attention grabbing start -Author and title mentioned for each story -Brief summary of each story -Clear well-written thesis that includes: -Both story titles -Compare/Contrast Language -Characterization, conflict, theme -Clear topic sentence matches the content of the paragraph and is only 1 sentence -Adequate and relevant examples from the stories are given to support the ideas in each paragraph -Ideas and connections to each topic are clearly explained -Ideas are focused and on topic -Clearly connects ideas back to thesis with a concluding statement -Directly and clearly compares and contrasts topics in each paragraph -All elements from outline are included REVISION Name: Okay Needs Work Most intro expectations are met: - Attention grabbing start -Author and title mentioned for each story -Brief summary of each story -Clear well-written thesis that includes: -Both story titles -Compare/Contrast Language - Characterization, conflict, theme -Topic sentence is somewhat clear and somewhat matches the content of the paragraph and is only 1 sentence - Examples from stories mostly support thesis -Ideas and connections to each topic are somewhat clear -Ideas are mostly focused on topic -Somewhat connects ideas back to thesis with a concluding statement -May need more support/evidence needed to fully develop ideas -Somewhat compares and contrasts topics in each paragraph but ideas may not be clear. -Some elements from outline are included -Reminds reader of thesis, recaps main points. Ideas may not be presented with new wording. Few intro expectations are met: - Attention grabbing start -Author and title mentioned for each story -Brief summary of each story -Clear well-written thesis that includes: -Both story titles -Compare/Contrast Language - Characterization, conflict, theme -Topic sentence does not clearly connect with paragraph and/or is more than 1 sentence -Examples from stories do not support thesis -Ideas and connections to each topic are unclear and/or hard to follow. -Ideas are not focused -Ideas are not connected back to thesis (no concluding statement) -More support/evidence needed to fully develop ideas -Does not clearly compare and contrast topics in each paragraph or C/C is not significant enough. -Missing numerous elements from outline -Does not remind reader of thesis and/or does not recaps main points Attempts using compare/ contrast language to show similarities and differences between the stories Not enough compare/ contrast language to show similarities and differences between the stories -Incorporates at least 2 quotes (1 from each story) -Follows the quote sandwich steps (Intro quote, quote, analyze quote) -Correct MLA format for works cited and in-text citations -Incorporates at least 2 quotes (1 from each story) -Somewhat follows the quote sandwich steps (Intro quote, quote, analyze quote) -Correct MLA format for works cited and in-text citations is attempted All formatting conventions are correct: 1” margins, correct heading, header, double spaced, Times New Roman size12 font, creative title Little to no problems with spelling, punctuation, run-ons, fragments, comma splices, capitalization, etc 3rd person used throughout. No I, you, etc Most formatting conventions are correct: 1” margins, correct heading, header, double spaced, Times New Roman size12 font, creative title -No quotes or only 1 quote is incorporated. -Does not follow the quote sandwich steps (Intro quote, quote, analyze quote) -Not clear how quote supports ideas -MLA format is not used and/or there is no works cited Few formatting conventions are correct: 1” margins, correct heading, header, double spaced, Times New Roman size12 font, creative title Many problems with spelling, punctuation, run-ons, fragments, comma splices, capitalization, etc causing problems with coherence. 3rd person not used throughout. -Well-rounded, reminds reader of thesis, recaps main points, reader isn’t left wondering about anything. Fluently uses compare/ contrast language to show similarities and differences between the stories Some problems with spelling, punctuation, run-ons, fragments, comma splices, capitalization, etc but writing is still easily understood. 3rd person used throughout. No I, you, etc