CORRECTION SYMBOLS EXAMPLES The correction symbols are placed before the word or phrase. sentence boundaries (Create a new sentence or clause.) // new paragraph P// Each sentence should begin with a capital letter and end with a period. If more than one S+V+O group is used, they must be added using: punctuation (:) (;), or a connector (and, or, but, so, for, yet, ), or a relative clause pronoun (who, that, which, whose, where, when) ERROR: Jane went to work and helped her boss finish a project //and it had a lot of problems but came out well. CORRECTION: Jane went to work and helped her boss finish a project, which had a lot of problems but came out well. CORRECTION: Jane went to work and helped her boss finish a project. It had a lot of problems but came out well. fragment sentence FRAG Each sentence must have an implied subject and verb to be a complete sentence. (complete thoughts) ERROR: My friend, who is a priest who works in the rural areas of my country. FRAGOften in the city as well. CORRECTION: My friend, who is a priest and who works in the rural areas of my country, often works in the city as well. Each verb must agree with the time frame or time word in the sentence: (present tense summary) (present perfect summary) ERROR: I Tlived here since 1992 . CORRECTION: I have lived here since 1992. verb tense T Each verb must agree with the general time frame in the context the whole writing. Tense Unity: ERROR: Scientists at MIT discovered a new life form last year. They published their research in "The Journal of Biology ". Others Tare questioning the validity of their work. CORRECTION: Others have been questioning the validity of their work. Active Voice AV Passive Voice PV subjectverb agreement SVAGR number (singular- www.grammar-quizzes.com An active verbs is used when the subject is the "agent" doing the action. EXAMPLE: The pilot AVwas caused the accident. CORRECTION: The pilot caused the accident. In the passive, the object of an active verb becomes the subject of a passive verb; the subject is the "receiver" of the action. (passive summary) ERROR: The accident PVcaused by the pilot. CORRECTION: The accident was caused by the pilot. The verb must agree in number with the subject noun: (agreement summary) ERROR: The number of students in community colleges SVAGRare increasing. CORRECTION: The number of students in community colleges is increasing. The nouns and pronouns must agree within each sentence. 20 July 2009 plural) agreement NAGR article use ART preposition use PREP spelling use SP delete this [....] instructor suggests or rephrase this way (....) word-use error <error> Word forms: WF – word form N – noun ADJ – adjective ADV – adverb GER – gerund INF – infinitive CAP – capitalization error www.grammar-quizzes.com (agreement summary) ERROR: Every one of the students N-AGRhave to carry NAGRtheir books in N-AGRtheir backpacks. CORRECTION: Every one of the students has to carry his books in his backpack. or CORRECTION: All of the students have to carry their books in their backpacks. Every noun needs to be considered for article use. Ask your self if the noun is count or noncount. Is the noun definite (already identified-by earlier mention, later mention, shared knowledge, or uniqueness), or is the noun indefinite. Does the noun follow a more specific rule: See article summary. ERROR: We saw the White House and ARTthe Buckingham Palace on our two trips last year. CORRECTION: We saw the White House and Buckingham Palace on our two trips last year. Some rules cover preposition; however, most preposition use has to be learned as individual expressions: Preposition Summary. ERROR: I parked my car PREPon the parking lot and couldn't find it later. CORRECTION: I parked my car In the parking lot and couldn't find it later. (When in doubt, look it up in your dictionary.) Right-clicking (Control or command + click) will bring up a dictionary feature on most operating systems. ERROR: The hotel SPaccomodations were very luxurious. CORRECTION: The hotel accommodations were very luxurious. ERROR: My friend also attends [to] Stanford University. CORRECTION: My friend also attends Stanford University. Avoid wordiness. Stating things simply improves readability. shortening clauses My friend [who was] born in Turkey was traveling with me. My friend born in Turkey was traveling with me. ERROR: My friend is taking (choosing/considering ) a Business major. CORRECTION: My friend is considering a Business major. ERROR: <Their>, you can see ducks. CORRECTION: There, you can see ducks. (correct) ERROR: The WF?fly-about kite was beautiful. CORRECTION: The flying kite was beautiful. ERROR: I love Nmysterious movies. CORRECTION: I love mystery movies. (noun modifiers ) ERROR:It was a ADJbeauty day. CORRECTION: It was a beautiful day. (adjective summary) ERROR:He ran ADVslow to his home. CORRECTION: He ran slowly to his home. (adverb summary) ERROR: GERRace horses was his career. CORRECTION: Racing horses was his career. (gerund summary ) ERROR: I expect INFto seeing him today. CORRECTION: I expect to see him today. (infinitive summary ) ERROR: Mr.CAPjanowksi is coming at four o'clock. - should 20 July 2009 P – punctuation error AWK - awkward phrase or word use WO - word order error www.grammar-quizzes.com be: CORRECTION: Mr. Janowski .... ERROR: I will study there during the CAPFall semester. CORRECTION: the fall semester. ERROR: I am attending college P , because I want to improve my English. CORRECTION: I am attending college because I want to improve my English. (Punctuation summary) ERROR: He was trying AWKlooking important to everyone. CORRECTION: He was trying to look important to everyone. (gerund objects - try ) ERROR: She gave WO to me the paper. CORRECTION: She gave the paper to me. / She gave me the paper. (dative verbs) 20 July 2009