Identity Portfolio 100 Points Name __________________________ The Identity Portfolio is the summative project designed to assess your understanding of the key unit objectives and essential questions: How does the past help shape our identity? & What can we learn about ourselves by asking questions about our past? Your grades will be based on the degree to which you have successfully completed the following tasks. Task 2 Pts. Cover Page (picture, name, title, & due date) Task 2 Pts. Table of Contents Task 2 Pts. Family Tree Task Maps/photos 2 Pts. Task 2 Pts. Timeline Interview (10 Points) IDEAS Content Examples/Details Development Exemplary (5) Strong (4) Effective (3) My interview has been skillfully and originally written. I have: Provided insightful and relevant questions about my relative’s involvement in the historical event in great detail Clearly and descriptively recorded my relative’s responses Properly discovered the moment which served as the focus of my paper using general, specific, and detailed questions My interview is strong. I have: Provided relevant questions about my relative’s involvement in the historical event in detail Descriptively recorded my relative’s responses Discovered the moment which served as the focus of my paper My interview addresses all three categories: Provided questions given to my relative about the historic event Recorded their responses Found a moment to write about Developing (2) My interview does not address all three categories of the prompt: Provided questions given to my relative about the historic event Recorded their responses Found a moment to write about Experimenting (1) My interview is lacking in many key areas, and needs to be revised and edited before it can be adequately assessed. Works Cited / Annotated Bibliography (10 Points) IDEAS Content Examples/Details Development Exemplary (5) Strong (4) Effective (3) My Works Cited has been skillfully and originally organized. I have: Provided MULTIPLE citations from a variety of sources Used the correct MLA citation format for every source Included a descriptive paragraph detailing how and where I used the sources in my paper My Works Cited is strong. I have: Provided MULTIPLE citations Used the correct MLA citation format for every source Included a paragraph explaining how and where I used the sources in my paper My Works Cited addresses all three categories: Provided citations Used the MLA format Included a paragraph about the sources in my paper Developing (2) My Works Cited does not address all three categories of the prompt: Provided citations Used the MLA format Included a paragraph about the sources in my paper Experimenting (1) My Works Cited is lacking in many key areas, and needs to be revised and edited before it can be adequately assessed. Reflection (10 Points) IDEAS Content Examples/Details Development Exemplary (5) Strong (4) My reflection has been skillfully and originally written. I have: Provided insightful and relevant information addressing all five questions in great detail Clearly and descriptively organized my responses so the reader can follow and appreciate it with ease My reflection is strong. I have: Provided relevant information addressing all five questions in detail Clearly organized my responses so the reader can follow and appreciate it with ease Effective (3) My reflection addresses both categories: Addressed all five questions Organized my responses using paragraphs Developing (2) My reflection does not address both categories: Answered all five questions Organized my responses using paragraphs Experimenting (1) My reflection is lacking in many key areas, and needs to be revised and edited before it can be adequately assessed. The Author’s Note (20 Points) IDEAS Content Examples/Details Development CONVENTIONS Mechanics Grammar/Usage Editing Exemplary (5) Strong (4) My author’s note has been skillfully and originally written. I have: Clearly and descriptively showed the 5 W’s associated with the event Insightfully provided relevant information about who was interviewed and how they were affected by the historical event Properly cited the information and data I used in my author’s note I have used correct spelling on even the more difficult words I have used accurate punctuation and capitalization The grammar and usage in my writing contributes to its clarity No editing needed My author’s note is strong. I have: Described and included the 5 W’s associated with the event of my narrative Provided relevant information about who was interviewed and how they were affected by the historical event My author’s note addresses each categories: Listed the 5 W’s associated with the event of my narrative Provided information about who was interviewed and their connection to the historical event Effective (3) My author’s note does not properly address both categories: Listed the 5 W’s associated with the event of my narrative Provided information about who was interviewed and their connection to the historical event Developing (2) My author’s note is lacking in many key areas, and needs to be revised and edited before it can be adequately assessed. Experimenting (1) I have used difficult words, and I still have very few spelling errors My punctuation and capitalization are sound with few errors Few grammar and usage errors do not distort from the meaning of the writing Needs little editing My spelling is generally correct on commonly used words The punctuation and capitalization needs work, but does not impede understanding The grammar usage needs work, but does not impede understanding Needs moderate editing I have numerous spelling errors, except on common words My punctuation and capitalization errors are distracting in my writing My grammar errors demonstrate my misunderstanding of the rules Needs significant editing My spelling errors impedes readability My writing is full of incorrect punctuation and capitalization My writing has many usage and grammar errors an impedes the understanding of my writing Needs extensive editing The Historical Narrative (40 Points) Exemplary (5) IDEAS Content Examples/Details Development VOICE Audience Purpose Point of View WORD CHOICE Vocabulary Meaning Message CONVENTIONS Mechanics Grammar/Usage Editing Effective (3) Developing (2) Experimenting (1) My historical narrative has been skillfully and originally written. I have: Provided setting, characters and situation in great detail Clearly and descriptively showed the details of the historical event throughout the focused moment Thoroughly reflected on the impact this event had on me (as my relative) with some evidence I have established an immediate connection with the reader as my relative, and have enhanced it throughout the writing. I take risks and show effective originality in my writing My tone is sincere, expressive, and moves the reader My paper is powerful and engaging I have used powerful and engaging vocabulary My wording is thoughtful and the expressions are specific My writing has an artful use of figurative language My words create meaningful pictures My historical narrative is strong. I have: Provided the necessary background information (characters, setting, situation) of the moment Described and showed some details of the historical event involved in the focused moment Reflected on the impact this event had on me (as my relative) Strong (4) My historical narrative addresses all three categories: Setting, character, and situation Telling of the moment that happened during the historical event Mentioning the impact this event had on me (as my relative) My historical narrative does not address all three categories of the prompt: Setting, character, and situation Telling of the moment that happened during the historical event Mentioning the impact this event had on me (as my relative) My historical narrative is lacking in many key areas, and needs to be revised and edited before it can be adequately assessed. I have established a connection with the reader as my relative, and have maintained it. My writing reflects my interest in and commitment to my historical narrative I use an appropriate tone and show some originality My paper is effective, but safe I have used accurate and precise vocabulary My wording is purposeful, and I experiment with the language My writing is strengthened by my use of figurative language My words enhance the meaning of my writing My voice as my relative is present, but not strong My writing is pleasing to the reader yet safe My tone is inconsistent The purpose of my writing is credible but not powerful I struggle with becoming my relative I took some risks, but was unable to connect with the reader I have done a lot of telling and not enough showing The purpose of my narrative lacks conviction I have shown no concern for my audience, and I have failed to become my relative My writing is lifeless and mechanical My writing is flat & inappropriate The purpose of the writing in not present I have used some active verbs and precise nouns I used functional expressions and have some fine moments I have shown some use of figurative language My words convey the intended message. I have generally used the correct words, but they have no spice My language is functional I have made attempts at figurative language My words convey the general meaning of my writing My vocabulary is limited The simple words used in my narrative are used incorrectly I have included no figurative language My words do not convey the proper meaning I have used correct spelling on even the more difficult words I have used accurate punctuation and capitalization The grammar and usage in my writing contributes to its clarity No editing needed I have used difficult words, and I still have very few spelling errors My punctuation and capitalization are sound with few errors Few grammar and usage errors do not distort from the meaning of the writing Needs little editing My spelling is generally correct on commonly used words The punctuation and capitalization needs work, but does not impede understanding The grammar usage needs work, but does not impede understanding Needs moderate editing I have numerous spelling errors, except on common words My punctuation and capitalization errors are distracting in my writing My grammar errors demonstrate my misunderstanding of the rules Needs significant editing My spelling errors impedes readability My writing is full of incorrect punctuation and capitalization My writing has many usage and grammar errors an impedes the understanding of my writing Needs extensive editing