Cobb County Middle School Proficiency Chart Title/Topic: Student: CRITERIA Structure C O N T E N T Focus/controlling idea Supporting ideas Organization Development Completeness Teacher Focus Style Word Choice Voice/individuality Tone Audience Transitions Teacher Focus Mechanics Spelling Capitalization Punctuation Visual format Teacher Focus C O N V E N T I O N S Grammar/Usage Parts of Speech Tenses/ Subject-Verb Agreement Possessives Personal Pronoun/Pronoun Reference Modifiers Teacher Focus Sentence Formation End Punctuation Complete Sentences Sentence Structure/Variety Coordination/Subordination Teacher Focus COMMENTS: Sixth SEVENTH Date: EIGHTH □ Writes paragraphs that include a controlling idea and supporting details. □Produces paragraphs and compositions for a variety of purposes. □Experiments with the organization of various types of multi-paragraph writing, using controlling ideas, supporting details, and appropriate development. □ Produces various types of focused writing for a variety of purposes that demonstrate a strong controlling idea, supporting details, logical organization, and a sense of completeness. □ Demonstrates development that has fluency, depth, and balance. □Identifies tone and approach in writing □Experiments with sense of audience in written work. □Uses descriptive phrases, varied word choice, and dialogue in writing. □ Experiments with transitions. □Experiments with tone and approach in writing. □Writes with a sense of audience using varied word choice, dialogue, precise language (accurate or technical), and engaging language (descriptive or figurative). □Experiments with transitions within and between paragraphs. □Engages audience using tone, approach, varied word choice, dialogue, precise and engaging language. □Demonstrates transitions within and between paragraphs. □Revises for correct use of internal punctuation, spelling, format (paragraph breaks, dialogue, margins, spacing between words), and capitalization. □Demonstrates the correct use of internal punctuation, spelling, format (paragraph breaks, dialogue, margins, spacing between words), and capitalization. □Experiments with the manipulation of the conventions of mechanics for dramatic effect (capitalization, repeated punctuation) □Consistently demonstrates the correct use of internal punctuation, spelling, format (paragraph breaks, dialogue, margins, spacing between words), and capitalization. □Effectively manipulates the conventions of mechanics for dramatic effect (capitalization, repeated punctuation). □Revises for the correct use of subjectverb agreement, cases of personal pronouns, principal parts of verbs, comparisons of adjectives, adverbs, and possessive pronouns versus contracted pronouns. □Demonstrates and applies the standards of American English to subject-verb agreement, cases of personal pronouns, pronouns reference, principals parts of verbs, comparisons of adjectives, adverbs, and possessive pronouns versus contracted pronouns. □Experiments with dialect, idiom, and nonstandard language within a quotation. □Writes simple and compound sentences with clarity □Experiments with the use of sentence variation (length, type, sentence beginnings, coordination, and subordination) for specific purposes □Uses appropriate end punctuation □Consistently demonstrates and applies the standards of American English to subject-verb agreement, cases of personal pronouns, pronoun reference, principal parts of verbs, comparisons of adjectives, adverbs, and possessive pronouns versus contracted pronouns. □Manipulates the conventions of usage for effect using dialect, idiom, and nonstandard language within a quotation. □Writes simple and compound sentences with clarity. □Revises to avoid run-ons and nonfunctional fragments. □Varies sentence types (interrogative, declarative, imperative, and exclamatory) □Uses appropriate end punctuation □Forms effective, complete sentences and functional fragments with clarity of meaning. □Varies sentences by length, type, sentence beginnings, coordination, and subordination. □Uses appropriate end punctuation