ACADEMIC SKILLS PROGRAM STUDENT SERVICES AND DEVELOPMENT TEMPLATES FOR ACADEMIC CONVERSATION (Balancing sources and your own thoughts) *The following templates and suggestions are taken from the text They Say, I Say by Gerald Graff and Cathy Birkenstein, published by the University of Chicago in 2006. 1. Templates for Introducing What “They Say” These are templates for someone who plans on defending X: A number of sociologists have recently suggested that X’s work has several fundamental problems. It has become common today to dismiss X’s contribution to the field of sociology. In their recent work, Y and Z have offered harsh critiques of Dr. X for ___________ 2. Templates for Introducing “Standard Views” The following templates can help you introduce a view that has become so widely accepted that by now it is essentially the conventional way of thinking about a topic. These templates are popular because they provide a quick and efficient way to perform one of the most common moves that writers make: challenging widely accepted beliefs, placing them on the examining table and analyzing their strengths and weaknesses. Canadians today tend to believe that ………………. Conventional wisdom has it that …………….. Common sense seems to dictate that ……………. The standard way of thinking about topic X has it that …………. It is often said that ………… My whole life I have heard it said that …………. ACADEMIC SKILLS PROGRAM STUDENT SERVICES AND DEVELOPMENT You would think that …………. Many people assume that …………. 3. Templates for Making What “They Say” Something You Say Another way to introduce the views you are responding to is to present them as your own. I’ve always believed that…. When I was a child, I used to think that… Although I should know better by now, I cannot help thinking that At the same time that I believe…, I also believe… 4. Templates for Introducing Something Implied or Assumed Although none of them have ever said so directly, my teachers have often given me the impression that ………….. One implication of X’s treatment of ……….is that …………. Although X does not say so directly, she apparently assumes that ………. While they rarely admit as much, …………often take for granted that ……… 5. Templates for Introducing An Ongoing Debate In discussions of X, one controversial issue has been ……………. On the one hand, …………argues………………….. On the other hand, ……………contends …………………… Others even maintain ……………. My own view is ………………………….. ACADEMIC SKILLS PROGRAM STUDENT SERVICES AND DEVELOPMENT Example: Theories of how the mind works have been dominated for centuries by Two opposing views. One, rationalism, sees the human mind as coming into this world more or less fully formed—preprogrammed, in modern terms. The other, empiricism, sees the mind of the newborn as largely unstructured, a blank slate. Mark, Aronoff, “Washington Sleeped Here” Starting with what many people agree on to highlight the points on which they disagree: When it comes to the topic of …….., most of us will readily agree that………… Where this agreement usually ends, however, is on the question of ……………. Whereas some are convinced that …………, others maintain that …………….. 6. Templates for Keeping What “They Say” in View Keep reminding readers what claims you are responding to. The longer and more complicated your text, the more important it is to do this. “At strategic moments throughout your text…include…return sentences.” In conclusion, then, as I suggested earlier, defenders of ……………..can’t have it both ways. Their assertion that ……………..is contradicted by their claim that………… 7. Templates for Introducing Summaries and Quotations She demonstrates that……… In fact, they celebrate the fact that ……… …………., he admits 8. Verbs for Introducing Summaries and Quotations Verbs for Making a Claim: argue assert insist observe ACADEMIC SKILLS PROGRAM STUDENT SERVICES AND DEVELOPMENT believe claim emphasize remind us report suggest Verbs for Expressing Agreement: acknowledge admire agree celebrate the fact that corroborate do not deny endorse extol praise reaffirm support verify concedes Verbs for Questioning or Disagreeing: complain complicate content contradict deny deplore the tendency to disavow deplores question refute reject renounce repudiate Verbs for Making Recommendations: advocate call for demand encourage exhort implore plead recommend urge warn 9. Templates for Introducing Quotations X states, “ ………..” As the prominent sociologist X puts it, “……………..” According to X, “ ………………..” X himself writes, “……………” ACADEMIC SKILLS PROGRAM STUDENT SERVICES AND DEVELOPMENT In here book, ……….., X maintains that “………….” Writing in the journal Commentary, X complains that “………….” In X’s view, “………………” X agrees when she writes, “……………….. X disagrees when he writes, “……………….” X complicates matters further when she writes, “…………….” Make sure the language chosen accurately reflects the spirit of the quoted passage. Don’t hesitate to express the tone of the passage. For example, “X is alarmed that “…..or X vehemently protests…” 10. Templates for Explaining Quotations Basically, X is saying…….. In other words, X believes………… In making this comment, X argues that ………… X is insisting that ………….. X’s point is that …………….. The essence of X’s argument is that ……… 11. Templates for Disagreeing, with Reasons I think X is mistaken because she overlooks…….. X’s claim that ________ rests upon the questionable assumption that ______ ACADEMIC SKILLS PROGRAM STUDENT SERVICES AND DEVELOPMENT I disagree with X’s view that _______ because, as recent research has shown, _________ X contradicts herself/can’t have it both ways. On the one hand, she argues _______. But on the other hand, she also says ________. By focusing on ___________, X overlooks the deeper problem of ______. X claims _______, but we don’t need him to tell us that. Anyone familiar with ________ has long known that _______________. 12. Templates for Agreeing (while adding something to the conversation) I agree that _______ because my experience __________ confirms it. X is surely right about _____ because, as she may not be aware, recent studies have shown that ______ X’s theory of ___________ is extremely useful because it sheds insight on the difficult problem of _______ I agree that ____, a point that needs emphasizing since so many people believe ___________ Those unfamiliar with this school of thought may be interested to know that it basically boils down to ____________ 13. Templates for Agreeing and Disagreeing Simultaneously Although I agree up to a point, I still insist ____________ Although I agree with X up to a point, I cannot accept his overall conclusion that _________ Although I disagree with much that X says, I fully endorse his final conclusion that _______________ Though I concede that ________, I still insist that ___________ ACADEMIC SKILLS PROGRAM STUDENT SERVICES AND DEVELOPMENT X is right that ______, but she seems on more dubious ground when she claims that ________ While X is probably wrong when she claims that ____________, she is right that ___________ Whereas X provides ample evidence that ____________, Y and Z’s research on __________ and __________convinces me that __________ instead. I am of two minds about X’s claim that _____________. On the one hand, I agree that _________. On the other hand, I agree that _____________ My feelings on the issue are mixed. I do support X’s position that ______, but I find Y’s argument about ________ and Z’s research on _________to be equally persuasive. 14. Signaling Who Is Saying What X argues____ According to both X and Y, _________ Politicians _________, X argues, should ________ Most athletes will tell you that ________ My own view, however, is that _________ I agree, as X may not realize, that ________ But _______are real and, arguably, the most significant factor in _________. But X is wrong that ________ ACADEMIC SKILLS PROGRAM STUDENT SERVICES AND DEVELOPMENT However, it is simply not true that ______ Indeed, it is highly likely that ____________ But the view that __________does not fit all the facts. X is right that ___________ X is wrong that _______ X is both right and wrong that __________ Yet a sober analysis of the matter reveals_______________ Nevertheless, new research shows __________ Anyone familiar with ____________should see that _________ 15. Embedding Voice Markers X overlooks what I consider an important point about _______________ My own view is that what X insists is a _________________ is in fact a ______. I wholeheartedly endorse what X calls ________________ These conclusions, which X discusses in __________, add weight to the argument that ________. 16. Entertaining Objections At this point, I would like to raise some objections that have been inspired by the skeptic in me. She feels that I have been ignoring _____________. “___” she says to me, “_______” Yet some readers may challenge the view that ______. After all, many believe ______. Indeed, my own argument that ______ seems to ignore _______and ____ ACADEMIC SKILLS PROGRAM STUDENT SERVICES AND DEVELOPMENT Of course, many will probably disagree with this assertion that _______. 17. Naming Your Naysayers Here many feminists would probably object that ________ But social Darwinists would certainly take issue with the argument that ___________ Biologists, of course, may want to dispute my claim that ________. Nevertheless, both followers and critics of Malcom X will probably argue that ___ Although not all Christians think alike, some of them will probably dispute my claim that _________ Non-native English speakers are so diverse in their views that it’s hard to generalize about them, but some are likely to object on the grounds that_________ 18. Introducing Objections Informally But is my proposal realistic? What are the chances of its actually being adopted? Yet is it always true that ____? Is it always the case, as I have been suggesting, that _________? However, does the evidence I’ve cited prove conclusively that ___________? “Impossible,” you say, “Your evidence must be skewed.” 19. Making Concessions While Still Standing Your Ground Although I grant that ______, I still maintain that _____ ACADEMIC SKILLS PROGRAM STUDENT SERVICES AND DEVELOPMENT Proponents of X are right to argue that _____. But they exaggerate when they claim that ________ While it is true that ______, it does not necessarily follow that ________ On the one hand, I agree with X that _____. But, on the other hand, I still insist that _________ 20. Indicating Who Cares ________used to think ______. But recently [or within the past few decades}____suggests that _________ What this new research does, then, is correct the mistaken impression, held by many earlier researchers, that ________ These findings challenge the work of earlier researchers, who tended to assume that _________ Recent studies like these shed new light on ______, which previous studies had not addressed. Researchers have long assumed that ______. For instance, one eminent scholar of cell biology, ____, assumed in her seminal work on cell structures and functions, that fat cells ______. As ___herself put it, “_____” (200). Ultimately, when it came to the nature of fat, the basic assumption was that _____. But a new body of research shows that fat cells are far more complex and that that ____________. If sports enthusiasts stopped to think about it, many of them might simply assume that the most successful athletes _______. However, new research shows ___________. These findings challenge dieters’ common assumptions that __________. At first glance, teenagers appear to ______. But on closer inspection ______ ACADEMIC SKILLS PROGRAM STUDENT SERVICES AND DEVELOPMENT 21. Establishing Why Your Claims Matter X matters/is important because _____________ Although X may seem trivial, it is in fact crucial in terms of today’s concern over ________ Ultimately, what is at stake here is ___________________ These findings have important consequences for the broader domain of __________ My discussion of X is in fact addressing the larger matter of ________ These conclusions/This discovery will have significant applications in ________ as well as in ___________ Although X may seem of concern to only a small group of _______, it should in fact concern anyone who cares about _______.