Observations on the dispersal patterns of Catostomus commersoni in Black Earth Creek, WI OK, so I know that back in the day you might be able to pull off a title like that but, I think you should shoot for something more specific, perhaps: Determining stream habitat preferences for white sucker, Catostomus commersoni, in Black Earth Creek Or…. in a central Wisconsin stream. Abstract [Need a sentence that says physical attributes of a stream influence the presnence absence of Data regarding the distribution of the white sucker were analyzed to look for patterns in habitat type selected; to determine what factors are important in the fishes stream reach use. Primary habitat was predicted to consist of deep, slow moving pools that contain fine particled bottom substrate. Results show that white suckers density is positively related do indeed select deep, slow moving water for habitation but favored substrate was found to be gravel instead of silt. The analysis suggests the types of habitat white suckers in other streams are likely to use and what morphological and behavioral traits cause habitation of said reaches.[good this is a conclusion sentence, but it could be worded better. "Our results can be used to categorize what stream habitat types favor high sucker abundance…..and so on".] Introduction The white sucker, Catostomus commersoni common to streams, rivers and lakes over most of North America. It is a benthivore that feeds on mollusks, insect larvae and other invertebrates on the stream bottom (Saint-Jacques, 2000). Because of its dietary preferences, it is morphologically adapted to be an efficient benthic feeder exhibiting a subterminal mouth and papillate lips. Because of these adaptations, the white sucker is an effective stream competitor and able to exist and reproduce in a wide range of habitats (Saint-Jacques, 2000). Though a habitat generalist, the White sucker must have some patterns to its distribution in the stream. I know there is more on suckers, make the first paragraph general about their biology and their role in streams, then the second paragraph should be more specific, what other studies have shown for depth and substrate and velocity. Because of its morphological adaptations and prey preferences; I expect white sucker abundance will be positively related to depth and negatively related to water velocity.. The reason for this is that the finer substrates are easier foraged over than an area of cobble or boulders and benthic communities have greater abundance in slower flow areas (Jowett, 1991) [ This is discussion, don't put this here! Wait and use it later] Methods The sampling area was a stretch of Black Earth Creek approximately 200 meters long located just behind Salmo pond, between Cross Plains and Black Earth. The stream is spring fed and thus considered a coldwater stream (mean temp. 3.5°C) and contains a heterogeneous habitat with fast moving, rocky riffles and deep slow moving pools. The study reach was divided into seven sampling sections based on hydrogeomorphic class. .. Electrofishing Block nets were set at the ends of sections to keep fish from moving out of……. [See general comments] All fish were identified to species and had total length measured (mm).. Fish were released back into the section their respective stream section. Habitat data Stream habitat data was collected following the electrofishing sampling. Each transect was flagged in 5 meter intervals and the stream width and depth of each side were recorded at each interval. Due to instrument error the water velocity was measured by timing a floating object as it traveled a measured distance within the stream thalweg. Dominant substrate was categorized as silt, gravel, cobble or boulders For each transect. The other variables recorded were, dominant riparian vegetation, Mean buffer width, undercut bank length and temperature. Results So I see no analysis for lengths, I think you should explore this. Add a study question about how you think a stream physical habitat characteristic will influence sucker lengths. White suckers were collected in five of the seven reaches sampled, a total catch of 113. The distribution of the suckers was not equal among the five reaches producing positive catches[what is a positive catch?]. The max number of white suckers caught was 54 in reach three and the minimum was three in reach seven. The two reaches that did not produce any fish were two and six {so what}. The average length of sucker caught was 156.4mm and the longest individual was 451mm. The habitat and fish data show some trends about the preferences in microhabitat selection favored by white suckers in the sample stream.[ some trends huh?, delete this, the results need to be crisp, no extra words, don't worry if it is short] Depth The mean depth of the entire study area was 56.9 cm, with a maximum in reach 1 of 100cm and a minimum in reach 6 of 10cm. The mean depth of the pool reaches 1 and 3 was 78.4cm. The run and riffle reaches had mean depths of 57.3cm and 34.5cm respectively. The number of white suckers caught related to reach mean depth is positive and roughly linear (fig.1). The reach that produced the most suckers had a mean depth of 76.4 cm and the reach Fig.1 The number of suckers caught in each reach by depth (cm) that produced the White sucker frequency vs. Mean depth Number of suckers caught 60 lowest number of R2 = 0.4968 50 suckers had a mean 40 30 depth of 31cm. It is 20 clear that as the 10 reaches increase in 0 20 30 40 50 60 Depth (cm) 70 80 90 depth, the number of fish caught also increases. There were however two reaches that produced catches that differed from this trend. In reach 2 (mean depth 64.8cm) there were no white suckers caught and also in reach 7 (mean depth 49cm) there were only three suckers caught. Because those two reaches did not follow the trend of the rest of the data, it is likely that depth is not the only deciding factor in white sucker stream distribution. Substrate The substrate in the stream was judged at each transect by the size of the majority of bottom material. The one that held the most number of transects was then considered the dominant substrate for the reach. Cobble was the dominant substrate in reaches 1, 5 and 7. Gravel was dominant in 2, 3 and 5 while silt was dominant in 4. Boulders were the dominant substrate in reach 6. The distribution of suckers caught (fig.2) shows a clear Catch Frequency by Dominant Substrate Gravel, 73 Cobble, 40 Fig.2 The number of white suckers caught in each type of dominant substrate Silt, 19 Boulder, 0 preference for gravel (73 caught) followed by cobble (40 caught). Suckers were caught less frequently over silt (19) and none at all were caught in reaches dominated by boulders. The role of substrate is certainly important in the distribution of white suckers though it does not follow the prediction that they prefer the finest substrate available. The role of gravel as a bottom component is clearly a deciding factor in the habitat selection process. Hydrogeomorphic class The relationship between hydrogeomorphic class and white sucker distribution is definitely not something the fish takes into account when selecting its habitat; fish do not know the difference between a run and a riffle section and would not use that as a reason for or against habitation. However, it is useful to examine which reaches fish were caught in (fig.3) because the hydrogeomorphic class gives a good overall picture as to the general conditions of the reach. Pools held the most fish (82), runs the second most (22) and riffle reaches were the least likely to hold suckers (9). The pool reaches also had the most depth and were Catch Frequency by Hydrogeomorphic Class Riffle, 9 less likely to contain boulders and cobble Run, 22 as the dominant substrate. Riffles were the shallowest and Fig. 3 Sucker catch was higher in pools than in riffles. Pool, 82 had the largest dominant substrate. The association of white suckers to hydrogeomorphic classification of the reach, though not a factor in selection by the fish serves to support the prediction that the fish distribute more to deeper reaches of the stream. Flow velocity The flow velocity was measured for each reach in the stream and the resultant data show a clear affinity for slower moving water (fig.4). The flow velocity ranged from Catch frequency by flow velocity LOW (0-.25) 63 Fig.4 Sucker catch numbers were highest in reaches with low flow velocities. INT (.25-.60) 47 HIGH (>.60) 3 0.21m/s in reach 5 to 1.1m/s in reach 6. The reaches were lumped into categories based on flow, Low flow (0-.25m/s), intermediate flow (.25-.60m/s) and high flow (>.60m/s). The most fish were caught in reaches in the low category (63). The next highest catch rate was in the intermediate category (47) and only 3 were caught in the fast flow category.The fact that the majority of fish caught came from reaches that experience low flow rates supports the prediction that flow velocity is a factor in the dispersal patterns of the white sucker in Black Earth Creek. Discussion There are certainly many complex and little understood factors that cause a stream fish to choose which microhabitat it uses in a stream, many of which are impossible to measure. However the data collected on white suckers in Black Earth Creek demonstrates that depth, bottom substrate and flow velocity are heavily relied upon by the fish to determine what part of the habitat it uses. These data can be used to illuminate what a stream needs to have to support large populations of white suckers. It needs to have relatively deep pools with a predominantly gravel substrate and must also contain areas where the flow velocity is less than .60m/s. There are several reasons for the white sucker’s affinity for deep, slower moving reaches. Small benthic organisms constitute the majority of its diet; the majority of the benthic invertebrates in a stream reside in areas of slow to intermediate flow (Jowett, 1991). Substrate also determines where the highest concentrations of prey species are found. Though I predicted the sucker would prefer silty areas due to their high prey content, the highest concentrations of benthic organisms are in areas containing mostly gravel bottoms (Jowett, 1991). The results are supportive of prey density being an important factor in habitat selection. Because of its prey preferences and morphology, the white sucker can generally be grouped into a guild of pool-selected species (Vadas, 2000). These are fishes that spend the majority of their time in pool reaches of streams. The energy costs that go along with maintaining position in faster moving water is one of the main reasons suckers distribute more frequently in pools than other reaches. In fact, many stream fishes use deep pool/run complexes at least some part of the day to avoid the energetic costs of swimming (Webb, 2006). The reduced energy cost and pool-selected morphology are also certainly factors that cause the sucker to choose a predominantly pool based habitat. Predation is certainly a factor in any fishes habitat use, there are different results in the presence or absence of predators. In a study done on a creek in Illinois, the presence of large piscivores caused adult white suckers to shift their dispersal to shallower runs and riffle reaches which the control group in the absence of predators did not use (Schlosser, 1987). This suggests that predation is a large enough factor to cause an entire habitat use shift even as the only experimental treatment. It also suggests that the test area on Black Earth Creek does not contain significant predators of adult white suckers. [ your original title was too broad, you don't have any data to talk about spawning, photoperiod, etc. Sure you know something about biology of suckers, but you don't have the data therefore you must limit a paper to what you have. Now if you talk about these factors in how you might design a more comprehensive study…then that is ok and worth while! Conclusion The prediction that depth, dominant substrate and flow velocity are significant factors in the dispersal of white suckers in Black Earth Creek was supported by the data collected. It should be said however, that they are not the only parameters involved; predation, reproductive cycle and weather are also some of the many factors in the process of habitat selection by white suckers in stream habitats. Sources 1. Jowett I, Richardson J, Biggs B, Hickey C, Quinn J, 1991. Microhabitat Preferences of Benthic Invertebrates and the Development of a Generalised Deleatidium spp. Habitat Suitability Curves, Applied to Four New Zealand Rivers. New Zealand J. Marine and Fisheries Res. 25 187-199 2. Saint-Jacques N, Harvey H, Jackson D, 2000. Selective Foraging in the White Sucker. Can. J. Zool. 78 1320-1331 3. Schlosser I, 1987. The Role of Predation in Age- and Size-Related Habitat Use by Stream Fishes. Ecology 68 651-659 4. Vadas R, Orth D, 2000. 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