Writing Layered Targets for: Sentence structure: punctuation Year Group: 1 End of Year Expectation: Use capital letters and full stops when punctuating sentences. Ability Level Target Teaching Points Examples Teach children to recognise units of meaning that can stand alone and make sense, i.e. a sentence. Show how these units of meaning are demarcated by capital letters and full stops. Once upon a time there was a boy called Jack. He lived in a cottage in the woods. He was rather a stupid boy. Must ( or Step 1) I can recognise a sentence in my reading, and say where it starts and ends. Teach children that a sentence is a unit of meaning. Encourage them to “think a sentence, say a sentence, write a sentence” establishing sense before writing so that punctuation is automatic. The harp sang loudly. Should ( or Step 2) I can use capital letters and full stops when writing a sentence. I can use commas to separate items in a list. Teach children to separate items, adjectives or actions in a sentence with a comma for all but the last item. Jack and his mother went to market to buy bread, butter, bacon and eggs. Could ( or Step 3) 1 Writing Layered Targets for: Sentence structure: punctuation Year Group: 2 End of Year Expectation: Use question marks, and use commas to separate items in a list. Ability Level Target Teaching Points Examples I can use capital letters and full stops when writing a sentence. Teach children that a sentence is a unit of meaning. Encourage them to “think a sentence, say a sentence, write a sentence” establishing sense before writing so that punctuation is automatic. The harp sang loudly. I can use commas to separate items in a list. Teach children to separate items, adjectives or actions in a sentence with a comma for all but the last item. Jack and his mother went to market to buy bread, butter, bacon and eggs. I can use a comma when I add detail to a sentence with a clause at the end. Teach the children to extend sentences by adding relevant detail at the end, placing a comma first. Jack ambled down the road, whistling as he went. Must ( or Step 1) Should ( or Step 2) Could ( or Step 3) 2 Writing Layered Targets for: Sentence structure: punctuation Year Group: 3 End of Year Expectation: Clarify meaning through commas. Ability Level Target Teaching Points Examples I can use commas to separate items in a list. Teach children to separate items, adjectives or actions in a sentence with a comma for all but the last item. Jack and his mother went to market to buy bread, butter, bacon and eggs. I can use a comma when I add detail to a sentence with a clause at the end. Teach the children to extend sentences by adding relevant detail at the end, placing a comma first. Jack ambled down the road, whistling as he went. I can use a comma after starting a sentence with an ‘ed’, ‘ing’ or ‘ly’ word. Teach the children that whenever they use an ‘ed’, ‘ing’, or ‘ly’ starter they must follow it with a comma. Smiling suspiciously, the man put his hand into his pocket, rummaged about and pulled out a handful of glossy, red beans. Must ( or Step 1) Should ( or Step 2) Mooing gently, Daisy’s big brown eyes looked at the strange man’s face. Could ( or Step 3) Dressed all in black, the man appeared very strange to Jack. 3 Layered Targets for: Sentence structure: punctuation Writing Year Group: 4 End of Year Expectation: ….. Use commas to mark clauses Ability Level Target Teaching Points Examples I can use a comma when I add detail to a sentence with a clause at the end. Teach the children to extend sentences by adding relevant detail at the end, placing a comma first. Jack ambled down the road, whistling as he went. I can use a comma after starting a sentence with an ‘ed’, ‘ing’ or ‘ly’ word. Teach the children that whenever they use an ‘ed’, ‘ing’, or ‘ly’ starter they must follow it with a comma. Smiling suspiciously, the man put his hand into his pocket, rummaged about and pulled out a handful of glossy, red beans. Must ( or Step 1) Should ( or Step 2) Mooing gently, Daisy’s big brown eyes looked at the strange man’s face. Dressed all in black, the man appeared very strange to Jack. Could ( or Step 3) I can combine three ideas and demarcate the first two with commas. Teach the children to join simple sentences together to make a ‘sentence of three’ by replacing the subject with commas. Jack clambered down the beanstalk. He picked up his axe. He shouted, “Timber!”. Jack clambered down the beanstalk, picked up his axe and shouted, “Timber!” 4 Layered Targets for: Sentence structure: punctuation Writing Year Group: 5 End of Year Expectation: Punctuate a variety of sentences accurately. Ability Level Target I can use a comma after starting a sentence with an ‘ed’, ‘ing’ or ‘ly’ word. Teaching Points Teach the children that whenever they use an ‘ed’, ‘ing’, or ‘ly’ starter they must follow it with a comma. Examples Smiling suspiciously, the man put his hand into his pocket, rummaged about and pulled out a handful of glossy, red beans. Mooing gently, Daisy’s big brown eyes looked at the strange man’s face. Must ( or Step 1) Dressed all in black, the man appeared very strange to Jack. Should ( or Step 2) I can combine three ideas and demarcate the first two with commas. I can use commas to demarcate clauses accurately. Teach the children to join simple sentences together to make a ‘sentence of three’ by replacing the subject with commas. Jack clambered down the beanstalk. He picked up his axe. He shouted, “Timber!”. Jack clambered down the beanstalk, picked up his axe and shouted, “Timber!” Teach children, when dropping in a clause, to place a comma before and after the clause. Could ( or Step 3) 5 The giant, howling with rage, raced after Jack. Layered Targets for: Sentence structure: punctuation Writing Year Group: 6 End of Year Expectation: Use punctuation to clarify meaning in complex sentences Where does the comma need to go to mark boundaries between [words, phrases or clauses]? Ability Level Target Teaching Points Teach the children to join simple sentences together to make a ‘sentence of three’ by replacing the subject with commas. Examples Jack clambered down the beanstalk. He picked up his axe. He shouted, “Timber!”. Must ( or Step 1) I can combine three ideas and demarcate the first two with commas. Teach children, when dropping in a clause, to place a comma before and after the clause. Should ( or Step 2) I can use commas to demarcate clauses accurately. The giant, howling with rage, raced after Jack. I can use a semicolon to separate two closely related main clauses in a sentence. Teach children to use a semi-colon where two closely related main clauses, which could stand alone as simple sentences, could be linked with a conjunction, but can be understood without. Jack was pleased with the beans; he was sure they were magic. (The missing conjunction here is “because”). Could ( or Step 3) Jack clambered down the beanstalk, picked up his axe and shouted, “Timber!” 6