Fifth Grade Writing Rubric

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Criteria
Reading1
Comprehension
of Key Ideas &
Details
Note: Type of
textual evidence
required is prompt
specific
Written
Expression
Development of
Ideas
Written
Expression
Organization
Written
Expression
Clarity of
Language
GRADE 5 ANALYTIC SCORING RUBRIC
BASED ON PARCC RUBRIC FOR ARGUMENT, EXPLAIN/INFORM & NARRATIVE
WRITING
Performance
Scale with Descriptors
Level
3: Shows full comprehension1 of complex text ideas; accurate analysis of
what the text says explicitly and inferentially; explicit text references
support the analysis.
2: Shows comprehension1 of text ideas; mostly accurate analysis of what the
text says explicitly and inferentially; text references support analysis.
1: Shows limited comprehension1 of text ideas; minimally accurate text
analysis; may reference the text.
0: Shows little to no comprehension of text ideas; inaccurate analysis or no
analysis of the text.
3: On prompt; effective and comprehensive topic development and/or
narrative elements2; develops clear reasoning, details, and/or description;
consistently appropriate to task, purpose, and audience.
2: On prompt; effective topic development and/or narrative elements2;
developed reasoning, details, and/or description; largely appropriate to
task, purpose, and audience.
1: On prompt; minimal topic development and/or narrative elements2;
limited reasoning, details, and/or description; limited appropriateness to
task, purpose, and/or audience.
0: Writing may not address the prompt; does not develop the topic or
narrative elements; inappropriate to task and purpose.
3: Demonstrates effective coherence, clarity, and cohesion3; includes strong
introduction and conclusion.
2: Demonstrates coherence, clarity, and cohesion3; includes introduction and
conclusion.
1: Demonstrates limited coherence, clarity, and/or cohesion3; may or may not
include a clear introduction and/or conclusion.
0: Demonstrates a lack of coherence, clarity and cohesion.3
3: Uses language well; attends to norms and conventions of the discipline;
includes concrete words and phrases, sensory details, linking and
transitional words, and/or domain-specific vocabulary effectively to clarify
ideas.
2: Attends to norms and conventions of the discipline; includes concrete
words and phrases, sensory details, linking and transitional words, and/or
domain-specific vocabulary to clarify ideas.
1: Shows limited awareness of norms; includes limited descriptions, sensory
details, linking and transitional words, or domain-specific vocabulary to
clarify ideas.
0: Shows little to no awareness of norms; lacks the descriptions, sensory
details, linking and transitional words, or domain-specific vocabulary
needed to clarify ideas.
W.5.1c linking words: consequently, specifically; W.4.2.c linking words: in contrast,
especially.
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Writing
Knowledge of
Language &
Conventions
4: Command of standard English consistent with effectively edited writing;
may be a few minor errors in grammar and usage, meaning is clear
throughout the response.
3: Command over standard English conventions consistent with edited
writing; may be a few distracting errors in grammar and usage, but
meaning is clear.
2: Inconsistent command over standard English conventions; patterns of
grammatical and usage errors occasionally impede understanding.
1: Limited command over standard English conventions; multiple errors in
grammar and usage demonstrating minimal control over language. There
are multiple distracting errors in grammar and usage that sometimes
impede understanding.
0: Little to no command over standard English conventions; frequent and
varied errors in grammar and usage; little or no control over language;
frequent distracting errors in grammar and usage impede understanding.
th
5 grade Grammar & Usage Conventions L.5.1: Form and use the perfect tense; Use
verb tense to convey various times, sequences, states, and conditions; Recognize
and correct inappropriate shifts in verb tense; Use correlative conjunctions (e.g.,
either/or, neither/nor).
th
5 grade Capitalization, Punctuation & Spelling Conventions L.5.2: Use punctuation to
separate items in a series; use a comma to separate an introductory element from
the rest of the sentence; Use a comma to set off the words yes and no (e.g., Yes,
thank you), to set off a tag question from the rest of the sentence (e.g., It’s true,
isn’t it?), and to indicate direct address (e.g., Is that you, Steve?); use underlining,
quotation marks, or italics to indicate titles of works; spell grade appropriate
words correctly, consulting references as needed.
1
Reading comprehension is not assessed by PARCC in narrative writing; however, reading comprehension is assessed in argument & informational writing.
Per the CCSS, narrative elements at the 5th grade include the introduction of a narrator, development of characters, sequencing of events, the use of dialogue, “and
pacing, to develop experiences and events or show the responses of characters to situations.. and provide a conclusion that follows from the events” (see CCSS, p.
20).
3
The elements of organization to be assessed are expressed in the grade-level standards 1-3
2
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GRADE 5 ANALYTIC SCORING RUBRIC
BASED ON PARCC RUBRIC FOR ARGUMENT, EXPLAIN/INFORM & NARRATIVE WRITING
Criteria
Performance
Level
1
Reading
Comprehension
of Key Ideas &
Details
Note: Type of
textual evidence
required is
prompt specific
Written
Expression
Development of
Ideas
4
3
Shows full
1
comprehension of
Written
Expressi
on
Clarity of
Languag
e
1
comprehension of
Shows limited
comprehension
1
of text ideas;
minimally
accurate text
analysis; may
reference the
text.
0
Shows little to
no
text ideas; mostly
accurate analysis of
accurate analysis of
what the text says
what the text says
explicitly and
explicitly and
inferentially; explicit
inferentially; text
analysis of the
text references
references support
text.
support the analysis.
analysis.
On prompt; effective
and comprehensive
topic development
and/or narrative
2
elements ; develops
clear reasoning,
details, and/or
description;
consistently
appropriate to task,
purpose, and
audience.
Demonstrates
coherence, clarity,
3
and cohesion ;
includes strong
On prompt; effective
topic development
and/or narrative
2
elements ;
developed
reasoning, details,
and/or description;
largely appropriate
to task, purpose,
and audience.
Demonstrates
coherence, clarity,
3
and cohesion ;
includes
introduction and
conclusion.
On prompt; minimal
topic development
and/or narrative
2
elements ;
limited reasoning,
details, and/or
description;
limited
appropriateness
to task, purpose,
Demonstrates
limited
and/or audience.
coherence, clarity,
3
and/or cohesion ;
may or may not
include a clear
introduction and
introduction
conclusion.
and/or conclusion.
Uses language well;
attends to norms
and conventions
of the discipline;
includes concrete
words and
phrases, sensory
details, linking and
transitional words,
and/or domainspecific vocabulary
effectively to
clarify ideas.
W.5.1c linking words:
consequently,
specifically; W.4.2.c
linking words: in
contrast,
especially.
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Shows
1
complex text ideas;
effective
Written
Expression
Organizatio
n
2
Attends to norms and
conventions of the
discipline; includes
concrete words
and phrases,
sensory details,
linking and
transitional words,
and/or domainspecific vocabulary
to clarify ideas.
Shows limited
awareness of
norms; includes
limited
descriptions,
sensory details,
linking and
transitional words,
or domain-specific
vocabulary to
clarify ideas.
comprehension
of text ideas;
inaccurate
analysis or no
Writing may
not
address the
prompt;
does not
develop
the topic or
narrative
elements;
inappropria
te to task
and
Demonstrates
purpose.
a lack of
coherence,
clarity and
3
cohesion.
Shows little to
no
awareness
of norms;
lacks the
description
s, sensory
details,
linking and
transitional
words, or
domainspecific
vocabulary
needed to
clarify
ideas.
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Writing Knowledge
of Language &
Conventions
Command of
standard English
consistent with
effectively edited
writing; may be
a few minor
errors in
grammar and
usage, meaning is
clear
t hroughout the
response.
Command over
standard English
conventions
consistent with
edited writing;
may be a few
distracting errors
in grammar and
usage, but
meaning is clear.
Inconsistent command
over standard
English
conventions;
patterns of
grammatical and
usage errors
occasionally
impede
understanding.
Limited command
over standard
English
conventions;
multiple errors in
grammar and
usage
demonstrating
minimal control
over language.
There are
multiple
distracting errors
in grammar and
usage that
sometimes
impede
understanding.
Little to no
command over
standard English
conventions;
frequent and
varied errors in
grammar and
usage; little or
no control over
language;
frequent
distracting errors
in grammar and
usage impede
understanding.
Notes
5
th
grade Grammar & Usage Conventions L.5.1: Form and use the perfect tense; Use verb tense to convey various times,
sequences, states, and conditions; Recognize and correct inappropriate shifts in verb tense; Use correlative conjunctions
(e.g., either/or, neither/nor).
th
5 grade Capitalization, Punctuation & Spelling Conventions L.5.2: Use punctuation to separate items in a series; use a
comma to separate an introductory element from the rest of the sentence; Use a comma to set off the words yes and no (e.g.,
Yes, thank you), to set off a tag question from the rest of the sentence (e.g., It’s true, isn’t it?), and to indicate direct address
(e.g., Is that you, Steve?); use underlining, quotation marks, or italics to indicate titles of works; spell grade appropriate
words correctly, consulting references as needed.
1Reading comprehension is not assessed by PARCC in narrative writing; however, reading comprehension is assessed in
argument & informational writing.
2Per the CCSS, narrative elements at the 5th grade include the introduction of a narrator, development of characters,
sequencing of events, the use of dialogue, “and pacing, to develop experiences and events or show the responses of
characters to situations.. and provide a conclusion that follows from the events” (see CCSS, p. 20).
3 The elements of organization to be assessed are expressed in the grade-level standards 1-3
Resources
Common Core State Standards, 2010.
PARCC Expanded Rubric for Analytic and Narrative Writing Grade 4-5
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