Advanced Creative Writing Proehl Form Poetry Packet Overview: You’ve already had practice reading, analyzing, and writing several different kinds (e.g., narrative and lyrical) and movements of poetry. Today, you’ll be introduced to four types of poems that have very specific forms—and thus may present more of a challenge to write. Task: You will become familiar with the sonnet (both Shakespearean and Petrarchan), villanelle, and sestina. Then, you will choose one of these forms to use for your next original poem. Directions: STEP ONE – Review the poetry terms in the box below. Glossary Form = how the poem is arranged into lines and stanzas Meter = a particular number of syllables in a line; a regular pattern of stressed and unstressed (i.e., accented and unaccented) syllables Rhyme Scheme = purposeful arrangement of rhyming words at the end of each line Stanza = group of lines Couplet = stanza with 2 lines Tercet = stanza with 3 lines Quatrain = stanza with 4 lines Quintet = stanza with 5 lines Sestet = stanza with 6 lines Septet = stanza with 7 lines Octet/Octave = stanza with 8 lines STEP TWO – Work with a partner to read through the examples of sonnets, a villanelle, and a sestina, and complete the tasks for each. Type #1 – Shakespearean Sonnet SONNET 130 by William Shakespeare My mistress' eyes are nothing like the sun; Coral is far more red than her lips' red; If snow be white, why then her breasts are dun; If hairs be wires, black wires grow on her head. 1. What’s the form of a Shakespearean sonnet? That is, how many stanzas compose the poem, and which kinds of stanzas (e.g., four tercets and a quintet)? I have seen roses damask'd, red and white, But no such roses see I in her cheeks; And in some perfumes is there more delight Than in the breath that from my mistress reeks. I love to hear her speak, yet well I know That music hath a far more pleasing sound; I grant I never saw a goddess go; My mistress, when she walks, treads on the ground: And yet, by heaven, I think my love as rare As any she belied with false compare. 2. Go through the poem, and label the rhyme scheme next to the lines. Remember that to label the rhyme you begin with A for the first rhyme, and go to the next letter for each new rhyme you come across. 3. Determine the meter of a Shakespearean sonnet. That is, how many syllables (approximately) are in each line? 1 Type #2 – Petrarchan Sonnet "London, 1802" by William Wordsworth Milton! thou shouldst be living at this hour: England hath need of thee: she is a fen Of stagnant waters: altar, sword, and pen, Fireside, the heroic wealth of hall and bower, Have forfeited their ancient English dower Of inward happiness. We are selfish men; Oh! raise us up, return to us again; And give us manners, virtue, freedom, power. 1. What’s the form of a Petrarchan sonnet? 2. Go through the poem, and label the rhyme scheme. Thy soul was like a Star, and dwelt apart; Thou hadst a voice whose sound was like the sea: Pure as the naked heavens, majestic, free, So didst thou travel on life's common way, In cheerful godliness; and yet thy heart The lowliest duties on herself did lay. 3. What’s the meter or a Petrarchan sonnet? Type #3 – Villanelle “Do Not Go Gentle Into that Good Night” by Dylan Thomas Do not go gentle into that good night, Old age should burn and rage at close of day; Rage, rage against the dying of the light. 1. What’s the form of a villanelle? Though wise men at their end know dark is right, Because their words had forked no lightning they Do not go gentle into that good night. 2. Go through the poem, and label the rhyme scheme next to the lines. Good men, the last wave by, crying how bright Their frail deeds might have danced in a green bay, Rage, rage against the dying of the light. 3. Villanelles are unique in that they have refrains – lines that repeat throughout the poem. There are two different refrains in a villanelle. Go through the poem and label the first refrain with a 1 and the second refrain with a 2. Wild men who caught and sang the sun in flight, And learn, too late, they grieved it on its way, Do not go gentle into that good night. Grave men, near death, who see with blinding sight Blind eyes could blaze like meteors and be gay, Rage, rage against the dying of the light. And you, my father, there on the sad height, Curse, bless me now with your fierce tears, I pray. Do not go gentle into that good night. Rage, rage against the dying of the light. 2 4. What’s the meter of a villanelle? Type #4 – Sestina “Sestina” by Elizabeth Bishop September rain falls on the house. In the failing light, the old grandmother sits in the kitchen with the child beside the Little Marvel Stove, reading the jokes from the almanac, laughing and talking to hide her tears. 1. What’s the form of a sestina? She thinks that her equinoctial tears and the rain that beats on the roof of the house were both foretold by the almanac, but only known to a grandmother. The iron kettle sings on the stove. She cuts some bread and says to the child, 2. Sestinas are unique in that they don’t simply repeat rhymes—they repeat the same six words at the end of lines throughout the poem. Go through the poem and label the repeating words using the same method you would use to label rhyme scheme. It's time for tea now; but the child is watching the teakettle's small hard tears dance like mad on the hot black stove, the way the rain must dance on the house. Tidying up, the old grandmother hangs up the clever almanac on its string. Birdlike, the almanac hovers half open above the child, hovers above the old grandmother and her teacup full of dark brown tears. She shivers and says she thinks the house feels chilly, and puts more wood in the stove. It was to be, says the Marvel Stove. I know what I know, says the almanac. With crayons the child draws a rigid house and a winding pathway. Then the child puts in a man with buttons like tears and shows it proudly to the grandmother. But secretly, while the grandmother busies herself about the stove, the little moons fall down like tears from between the pages of the almanac into the flower bed the child has carefully placed in the front of the house. Time to plant tears, says the almanac. The grandmother sings to the marvelous stove and the child draws another inscrutable house. 3 STEP THREE – Choose ONE of these forms, and attempt to write your own original poem! For each poem type, I’ve given some tips for approaching that particular type of poem and also an outline where you can record your lines. Your poem should be complete for the next class period and shared with me on Google Docs. Sonnets Think of what you want your poem to be about, and brainstorm words associated with your subject matter. Try to come up with words that rhyme with those you’ve already brainstormed and that could possibly be incorporated into your poem. A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z Br Pr Tr Sh Ch St Bl Cl Pl Sl Compose your stanzas, making sure to pay attention to the rhyme scheme. (Shakespearean) Stanza 1: ___________________________________________________________________________A ___________________________________________________________________________B ___________________________________________________________________________A ___________________________________________________________________________B Stanza 2: ___________________________________________________________________________C ___________________________________________________________________________D ___________________________________________________________________________C ___________________________________________________________________________D Stanza 3: ___________________________________________________________________________E ___________________________________________________________________________F ___________________________________________________________________________E ___________________________________________________________________________F Couplet: ___________________________________________________________________________G ___________________________________________________________________________G 4 (Petrarchan) Octave: ___________________________________________________________________________A ___________________________________________________________________________B ___________________________________________________________________________B ___________________________________________________________________________A ___________________________________________________________________________A ___________________________________________________________________________B ___________________________________________________________________________B ___________________________________________________________________________A Sestet: ___________________________________________________________________________C ___________________________________________________________________________D ________________________________________________________________________E / C ___________________________________________________________________________C ___________________________________________________________________________D ________________________________________________________________________E / C Villanelles Think about the message you’d like to send with your villanelle. Brainstorm a few different lines that could be the refrain…the core of the poem. Make sure that the ending word of the refrains rhyme, and try to find words that will be easy to rhyme with throughout the rest of the poem. Decide on your two refrains, and write the first stanza of the poem. Try to end the second line with a word that will be easy to rhyme with for the rest of the poem. Fill in the rest of the stanzas with your chosen refrains. 5 Stanza 1: ____________________________________________________________________Ref 1 (A) ___________________________________________________________________________B _____________________________________________________________________Ref 2 (A) Stanza 2: ___________________________________________________________________________A ___________________________________________________________________________B _____________________________________________________________________Ref 1 (A) Stanza 3: ___________________________________________________________________________A ___________________________________________________________________________B _____________________________________________________________________Ref 2 (A) Stanza 4: ___________________________________________________________________________A ___________________________________________________________________________B _____________________________________________________________________Ref 1 (A) Stanza 5: ___________________________________________________________________________A ___________________________________________________________________________B _____________________________________________________________________Ref 2 (A) Quatrain:___________________________________________________________________________A ___________________________________________________________________________B _____________________________________________________________________Ref 1 (A) _____________________________________________________________________Ref 2 (A) 6 Sestinas Think of what you want your poem to be about, and brainstorm words associated with that subject matter. Try to use concrete nouns and/or active verbs for your six words. Once you have chosen your six words, attempt to write your first stanza (or maybe your last) Once you have written a stanza and your words are in place, plot out where the words will go in the rest of the poem (their placement in the stanzas). With your words in place, attempt to write the rest of the lines. Even though these six words are the *stars* you should still focus on word choice in the rest of the line. Don’t forget that the final tercet has a slightly different format. Stanza 1: ___________________________________________________________________________A ___________________________________________________________________________B ___________________________________________________________________________C ___________________________________________________________________________D ___________________________________________________________________________E ___________________________________________________________________________F Stanza 2: ___________________________________________________________________________F ___________________________________________________________________________A ___________________________________________________________________________E ___________________________________________________________________________B ___________________________________________________________________________D ___________________________________________________________________________C Stanza 3: ___________________________________________________________________________C ___________________________________________________________________________F ___________________________________________________________________________D ___________________________________________________________________________A ___________________________________________________________________________B ___________________________________________________________________________E 7 Stanza 4: ___________________________________________________________________________E ___________________________________________________________________________C ___________________________________________________________________________B ___________________________________________________________________________F ___________________________________________________________________________A ___________________________________________________________________________D Stanza 5: ___________________________________________________________________________D ___________________________________________________________________________E ___________________________________________________________________________A ___________________________________________________________________________C ___________________________________________________________________________F ___________________________________________________________________________B Stanza 6: ___________________________________________________________________________B ___________________________________________________________________________D ___________________________________________________________________________F ___________________________________________________________________________E ___________________________________________________________________________C ___________________________________________________________________________A Tercet: _________________________________A_________________________________________B ________________________________C__________________________________________D ________________________________E__________________________________________F 8