Sample AADSAS Personal Statements
Essay # 1 - Author Accepted for 2006 Entering Class
As an undergraduate student at the University of New Mexico I have become
increasingly aware of the complex network problems that I face as a citizen of the world.
I have also realized the progress and success that I enjoy in the same capacity as the
frontiers of medicine, technology and communication continue to expand. My desire to
participate in the resolution of those problems and in the further expansion of those
frontiers had inspired me to seek a degree in biology and entrance into a School of
Dentistry. I intend to successfully complete program of dentistry and further my
specialization in the area of endodontics. Upon completion of my degree programs I
would like to return to the southwest region of the country to make my services available
to the underserved population of the area. I would also like to spend some time serving
the populations of Central and South America where I could gain invaluable experience
and provide the much needed services of a specialist.
My desire to enter the field of dentistry has grown as I’ve participated with
professional oral health care providers in the field and observed a wide range of
procedures. My interest in dentistry began early on as I was involved in orthodontics for
eight years before undergoing corrective jaw surgery. I gained a deep appreciation and
understanding of what people in need of such services are experiencing, as well as a great
respect and admiration for the professionals of that field. Through the practice of
dentistry I desire to have a positive supportive impact on the lives of those I serve, as I
experienced in my own life through my oral healthcare providers. I also desire to be a
respected, contributing member of the community, and I feel that the field of dentistry
will afford me such opportunities as I participate in it.
I will be successful in dental school because of my dedication to the pursuit of
academic excellence and my desire to succeed. I have gained experience in public
speaking through my various service and academic activities and enjoy meeting and
dealing with people, which will serve me in dental school and as a professional
healthcare provider. I have increased my fine motor skills and manual dexterity through
my study of guitar, which will also aide me in pursuit of a DDS degree. My service as a
missionary in Mexico gave me a better understanding of the world and of life as I worked
with people in many different situations. I struggled and succeeded in my search for
ways to serve and help people in a language, land and culture that was not my own.
Those experiences have given me needed skills and attributes to become a successful
servant of the community and participant in the dental community.
I have repeatedly shown my determination in the environment of the university as
I have faced and conquered challenges. I was able to successfully return to the university
after my two-year absence and have been successful each semester since in maintaining
my scholarship. I have maintain my academic standing as I take full loads of course
work and hold employment outside of class as well as sustain my family. I feel that I
have been able to accomplish this because of the balance I seek as I participate in the
academic, spiritual, social and family spheres of my life.
Essay # 2 - Author Accepted for 2006 Entering Class
The smell alone used to make me nauseous. I could barely get through the front
door before I would feel the hair at the base of my neck stand on end. I would sit
uncomfortably in the waiting room chairs praying that my mom would have a change of
heart to take me back home.
This was the scene each and every time I had a dental appointment. Needless to
say, I feared the dentist. My memories of the dentist are not highlighted with visits to the
treasure box or the joy of picking out a new toothbrush. By the time I reached this part of
the dental visit, I wanted nothing to do with anything that would keep me in the office
even a second more.
My first exposure to dentistry, out of the chair, came when I began babysitting for
a dentist. He worked on the weekends, and his daughter and I would tag along. Initially
I stayed as far away from the dentist chair as possible, but later, I became curious, and
gradually observant. By the time I reached high school, I was intrigued by every aspect
of dentistry. The procedures quickly turned from one of torment into something more
familiar. Coming from a family of engineers and contractors, I recognized the doctor’s
instruments because they were similar to tools I had grown up watching my father use. I
began to think of dentistry as performing small scale construction in a small hole.
Performing such intricate procedures while simultaneously utilizing my mind and hands
both excited me and complimented my detail attentive personality.
Since my interest first peaked, I have continued towards my goal to become a
dentist, not only through high academic achievement, but with life experience. I obtained
my dental radiography license and worked as a dental assistant during high school and
was provided with the opportunity to observe a variety of dental procedures. I also
gained exposure to the additional responsibilities of a dental professional ranging from
the billing process to dealing with insurance companies. I got a glimpse of the
organizational skills necessary to run a small business. I continued gaining experiences
upon entering college by volunteering at a dental clinic that provides free services to the
homeless. My service at this clinic has strengthened my desire to become a dentist.
Volunteering at the homeless dental clinic has taught me the importance of dental
hygiene and how it can affect every aspect of a person’s life. Most of the homeless
patients have neglected their teeth for years, and realize that they need help. It is an
amazing experience to watch the transformation in a person as their teeth are fixed. For
most patients, it is a long process, and their self esteem visibly increases with each visit.
By the end of the treatment, some finally have the confidence to get a job, and may return
to let us know of their new found success. The personal contact incorporated with
dentistry is appealing as it provides the opportunity to interact with individuals of diverse
ages, cultures, and backgrounds.
As a student and an employee I have to realize the importance of integrity,
responsibility, and hard-work. I know that in order to earn the respect and trust of my
patients, I must be dependable, energetic, and professional. I must have the confidence to
take on the role of authority, while as the same time be willing to follow the lead of
someone else if necessary. I have equipped myself with these necessary traits to be a
successful dental student and professional through my classes, employment, and
extracurricular activities. Working as an administrative assistance has equipped me with
communication skills, and has taught me how to efficiently organize my time.
Conversing with children with a mental illness while working as a mental health
technician has built my character by improving my patience and revealing the traits
necessary to earn the trust of others. Leading my university’s pre-dental society as
president has taught me leadership skills and how to organize a group to work together.
As a native New Mexican, I realize the states vast need for dental health care
professionals, and would like to contribute by returning to the state after completion of
my dental degree. Becoming a dentist has been my desire throughout both high school
and college, and I have worked at becoming a well-round, educated, and experienced
individual to achieve this goal. I have developed a strong work ethic, which, when
combined with my choice of dentistry as a profession, has been greatly enhanced by the
opportunities that I have had to work in this field. I firmly believe that I have built a
foundation from with I will move forward to earn my dental degree. I am determined to
success, and ready to begin this challenge.
Essay # 3 - Author Accepted for 2006 Entering Class
I can vividly recall my grandfather opening his tool shed in hopes of inspiring his
five year-old grandson to create something beautiful out of pieces of wood that were old
and otherwise discarded. A passion for intricate artwork has seemingly always been a
part of my life. Whether it is "throwing" a pot on a wheel or tying flies to mimic aquatic
insects for the art of fly fishing, I have always loved to create pieces of art with my
hands. A true love for intricate artistic work is a necessary and an essential characteristic
of a dentist. I have devoted five years to playing guitar, and it has become part of my
everyday life. Great manual dexterity is required to play the guitar, and this manual
dexterity bears a direct correlation to dentistry. When trying to undertake a new musical
piece, the initial excitement overwhelms me and accomplishing a beautiful musical piece
provides great satisfaction. Similarly, in dentistry, when a patient has a problem, the
dentist will assess and treat the individual. On many occasions, I have found that the
dentist is eager to start the procedure and pleased with the work and the well being of the
patient. It is my belief that dentists' hands not only have the power to grasp the world but
the power to change it. I feel that dentistry will afford me with the opportunity to do
something I love, working with my hands. The manual dexterity involved in dentistry is
only a fraction of what makes the profession wonderful. To a further extent, a dentist
must have a humanistic instinct to provide care to others.
As a college freshman, I volunteered every weekday of my summer as a literacy
leader for Americorps. While volunteering as a literacy leader 40 hours a week at Cesar
Chavez Community Center, I had the privilege of mentoring and teaching young boys
how to read. Spanish happened to be the children's first language and overcoming the
language barrier became easier as I immersed myself deeper into the language. Teaching
these children allowed me to develop a greater understanding of people and a trusting and
caring relationship with each child. For the past three years, I have been part of Healthy
Smiles, Special Smiles, and Give Kids A Smile Day. These three volunteer events give
opportunities for the entire dental community to work together for the sake of children's
dental healthcare and I have established that this is important to me and my character. I
have had many memorable experiences from these volunteer events and they have all
taught me how to be kind, gentle, and comforting to the patients. I look forward to
dedicating my time to such volunteer events as a dentist.
In addition to these volunteer events, I also enjoy participating in extracurricular
activities such as running, lifting weights, snowboarding, reading, and fly-fishing. All of
these activities help me cope with stress and give me time to see where I fit in this world.
For the past year, I have been working at Starbucks as a Barista. This job has shown me
people from all walks of life and has given me a better understanding of people. Many
people who come into Starbucks are fascinating and I enjoy learning about their lives.
The social skills obtained from this job are an invaluable asset to my character. One of
my greatest accomplishments has been being an active member of the Pre-Dental Society
for my entire career at the University of New Mexico. It was my pleasure to be the Vice
President of the Pre-Dental Society for the past year. I am currently the President of the
Pre-Dental Society and look forward to the upcoming year. These two leadership
positions have enriched my public speaking ability and given me the confidence to
articulate my ideas clearly. Extracurricular activities give you a time to reflect on the type
of person you are and the merit of your character and this, too, is important to me. These
extracurricular activities have refined me as a person and given me new and satisfying
experiences.
There is something unique about dentistry that draws you in the more you
immerse yourself into the profession. Maybe it is the dedication to excellence or the
altruism that gives you a sense of belonging. Regardless of what brought me to dentistry,
I am here to stay because it is where I belong.
Essay # 4 - Author Accepted for 2006 Entering Class
Activities that challenged my curious mind such as solving crossword puzzles and
riddles thrilled me as a child, and my love for challenges expanded into other areas as I
grew older. I began playing musical instruments at the age of six, beginning with the
piano and ultimately moving on to the clarinet, which I have played for the past 9 years.
The clarinet allowed me to achieve greater manual dexterity through countless hours of
practice, as I have trained my hands to move carefully and precisely. There is no greater
feeling than that of having mastered the fingering for a particularly difficult musical
piece. Similarly, it will be necessary as a dentist to devote many hours perfecting the
techniques essential for providing high-quality oral healthcare and I will feel great
satisfaction in doing so. Not only should good dentists acquire great manual dexterity, but
they should also have excellent hand-eye coordination. While helping a PhD student
conduct research using Drosophila flies, I was required to manipulate the small specimen
to identify their species, sex, and size. This experience permitted me the opportunity to
improve on the eye-hand coordination skills that are crucial for good dentistry. The
challenges I will confront throughout my course in dental school do not daunt me, but
motivate me. It has always been exciting for me to take problems and solve them using
my mind and my hands.
Not only has the technical difficulty of playing an instrument satisfied me, but
also the sheer beauty of the art form. Music has the ability to impact the emotions of
people. I see a similar opportunity in dentistry to bring joy and happiness to people's
lives. By providing a person with the appropriate treatment, a person who has a low selfesteem due to untreated dental problems can be transformed into a person who has self-
confidence. As a child, I had a terrible overbite and was in dire need of an orthodontist.
The result of braces was more than a corrected bite. It yielded a higher self-esteem and a
greater sense of self-confidence in me. I would like to provide others with the chance to
have this same experience. Shadowing in many different dental offices allowed me to
realize that all forms of dentistry can have this effect on patients, whether it was crowns
from a general dentist or a set of dentures from a prosthodontist.
Helping people psychologically is an additional result of what is most important,
which is taking care of the patients' overall oral health. One of the most influential
moments that lead me to pursue a career in dentistry was the day a UNM Pre-Dental
Society guest speaker discussed the underserved communities in New Mexico. I was
astonished to learn that all but a few counties are in dire need of dentists. From that day
forward I made it my personal goal to become a dentist so that I could help the people of
New Mexico.
Helping people has always been a part of my life. I have always enjoyed helping
classmates with schoolwork as well as spending many hours teaching my younger sisters.
In the past year, I was employed as a Biology/Chemistry tutor, which allowed me to help
other students succeed. I have also been able to help others through community service
and volunteer work such as annual clothing donations to homeless shelters, participating
in volunteer events such as Making Strides Against Breast Cancer walk, Give Kids a
Smile and Special Olympics Special Smiles. These events helped me to realize that I
want to continue helping people in the future. Being elected Historian of the UNM PreDental Society gives me yet another way to help other students, now in their pursuit of a
dental career. I would like to have the opportunity to continue helping others through
dentistry.
The desire to help people was instilled in me by my family. They have always
encouraged me to work hard and praised me for my accomplishments. As the first person
in my family who will graduate from college, I can understand the importance of family
encouragement in having accomplished this goal. In the future I would like to have my
own family, providing the same encouragement I was so fortunate to have as a child.
I will be successful in dental school because I possess perseverance. Being
determined and persistent has helped me overcome many obstacles in the paths towards
many goals in my life, and these attributes will prove just as beneficial in my pursuit of a
dental career.
Essay # 5 - Author Accepted for 2006 Entering Class
My name is “name of author.” I am twenty-four years old and have graduated
from the University of New Mexico in Albuquerque. My studies were concentrated on
Biology as my major, and Spanish as my minor. I was adopted from South Korea when I
was seven months old. My family and I resided in Milwaukee, Wisconsin until I was
four, then Chicago, Illinois until I was twelve. After that we lived in Glendive, Montana.
I have a unique perspective of lifestyles and culture due to the diversity of the places that
have shaped me and helped me become who I am today and they have defined what I
want to pursue professionally, which is Dentistry.
I have come to understand the importance of comparative and contrasting
qualities. In Chicago, the city was the hub of civilization and in Montana the citizens
relied on and lived for the land and cattle. Presently, in Albuquerque, I have come to
love and appreciate the Southwest style and diverse culture. Everywhere that I have lived
and traveled has taught me something new and offered irreplaceable life experiences. I
chose the University of New Mexico because I wanted to be far enough away from home
to be independent, and also because they offered majors in biology and dance. I was on
the UNM dance team for three years. Throughout college my interests have expanded
which is why I now still study Spanish as well as biology. After attending an exchange
program to Trujillo, Spain, I plan to utilize the Spanish language in the dental practice. I
have come to respect and love the now-thriving language in America. I plan to educate
and assist people in upholding a condition of well being of every ethnicity and
background. I am constantly seeking new experiences as well as responsibility and have
been a resident advisor for two years and then a Student Head Resident for one year.
This is my second year that I am an Area Coordinator in the residence halls. Working
directly with student, faculty, staff, and peers, I know I thrive to work directly with many
people in a personal setting. With the responsibilities of these occupations, I have also
learned many managerial skills, which are applicable to the dental field.
My family is an important aspect of my life. Since I am adopted I have learned
that the value of a family is measured in love, not in bloodlines. My family has
supported me in everything that I do, especially now as I apply to dental school. They
have taught me trust, responsibility, respect, determination, honesty, and of course, love.
With these attributes and the support from my family, I am confident in myself to further
broaden and excel in the pursuit for an education in dentistry.
I have been involved in a variety of activities throughout my life. These
experiences have helped me to define who I am as a person and where I fit into society.
Trying different activities has broadened my horizons and raised the expectation for
myself. They have taught me how to learn and attempt to strive for my ultimate best.
They have also taught me that trying new things is constantly a good lesson to remember
throughout my life. The most important thing that I have taken from these different
activities is the ability to narrow and define exactly what it is that I want to do with my
life, which is working in the dental field. I started thinking about career choices while
attending college; and while I have always had a passion for biology and the fact that it is
the study of life, I have not had a desire to be a dentist since I was little. From my love
for biology derived my compassion and drive to improve the quality of life for others.
Having worked with people all my life, there is nothing I would rather do. The field of
dentistry gives hope, confidence, and health to others. I want to give back to the
community my erudition to better the lives for individuals and families in sustaining a
soundness of body and mind. I am determined to do whatever it takes to excel in the
field of Dentistry.
Essay # 6 - Author Accepted for 2007 Entering Class
He gave me something valuable, something I could not have done for myself.
That is how I felt each time I left my dentist’s office as a teenager. I wondered
how the dentist must feel on the giving side of the relationship and I hoped to one day be
in a profession that would allow me to help people daily in such a tangible way. As I
matured and became more serious about choosing a profession during my college career,
I realized that dentistry is exactly what I want to do with my life.
In my preparation for a dental career, I have spent many hours observing this
same dentist who inspired me years ago as he helps others maintain their dental and
overall health. I clearly see the satisfaction that can be achieved by practicing dentistry. I
have also been able to observe all the nine dental specialties (except radiology and
pathology) seeing a wide variety of dental procedures ranging from simple fillings to
more technical gingival grafts, osseous regeneration surgery, apicoectomy, veneer smile
makeovers, etc. The more I see, the more eager I become to actively participate in such
an exciting profession.
Success in the dental field requires dedication, compassion, and the ability to
work intimately and effectively with people. I am well prepared to take on this challenge.
I have worked as a corporate trainer for a 500-employee quick-lube franchise in the
Southwest for the past three years while completing a Bachelor of Business degree at the
University of New Mexico. My professional experience continuously hones my
interpersonal communication skills, public speaking skills, and leadership as I help
manage a business and educate hundreds of people. As a corporate trainer, I have become
more self-motivated, organized, and detail-oriented through being responsible for
designing company training programs, modifying company policies, and teaching new
skills to managers and employees alike. I have also developed further dedication and
commitment working to provide for a family while attending classes full time and
participating in other extracurricular activities.
Dentists frequently tell me that managing a practice is one of the activities they
struggle with the most. My business background and strong interpersonal skills will
enhance my ability to succeed in dentistry. I am serving as the Vice President of the New
Mexico Pre-dental Society this coming year where I can use these skills to help New
Mexico produce more dentists and reduce the state’s immense shortage. As a dentist I
would like to be actively involved in advancing the profession and promoting improved
oral health in my underserved state and our nation. My professional experience provides
a strong foundation to achieve these goals.
I spent two years living in remote areas of Brazil serving an ecclesiastical mission
and learning to read, write, and speak fluent Portuguese. In Brazil I witnessed the great
suffering caused by poor oral health. So many teenagers had mouths full of decayed
permanent teeth, which must have caused great pain and loss of self esteem. They did not
even have a way to get these teeth safely extracted. Access to dental care and proper oral
hygiene education could have prevented nearly all these problems. I hope to someday
participate in humanitarian health care programs in Brazil and I also know that there are
far too many Americans with limited access to care. I plan to serve in one of the smaller
towns of New Mexico to help alleviate this great need.
For the past three years I have volunteered for a program called Taxhelp New
Mexico where I did free tax preparation for low income and elderly families. I love
working with people and enjoy the opportunity to teach them ways to save money on
taxes. They leave so grateful and I get that same feeling that I gave them something
valuable they could not do for themselves. I greatly enjoy teaching others and have
already started to ponder ways to educate and motivate patients to better maintain their
oral health.
These, and many other events, have kindled my aspirations to become a dentist
and have prepared me to be successful during and after dental school. Dentistry is a
perfect way to combine my affinity for business, my passion for learning the biological
sciences, and my desire to teach and serve others. I am anxious to achieve my goals and
consider it a privilege to be starting a career in a field that is so respectable and that gives
back so much to our communities.