SUMMARY OF SPECIFIC COMMENTS (PDF FILES ATTACHED) SUSTAINABLE DEVELOPMENT (David E. Nash) Sustainable Cleveland: Must explain why Great Lakes restoration is critical; outlines five reasons for the importance of restoration. Tina Stearns: Improvements in the quality of the Lakes are needed to support tourism. Peggy B. Johnson: Loss of agricultural lands development is a serious problem for the Detroit area. (Carol Cook) Save the Dunes Conservation Fund: Need incentives for land use and taxes for non-sustainable practices, need to adopt more efficient, resource-conserving technologies, eliminate programs that fail to promote the necessary synergy between private and public businesses. (John K. Barstow) New York State Tug Hill Commission: Greater emphasis should be given to this section of the report. (Christine Ostern) Ashland Bayfield Douglas Iron Land & Water Conservation Department: Proposed biomass burning plants in Great Lakes region are problematic. (Brian S. Murphy and Sadhu A. Johnston) City of Chicago: Incorporate sustainable development and natural systems into urban planning. (F. Ned Dickman and Micheal J. Fischer) Great Lake's Boating Federation: Need greater recognition of the social and economic contributions of boating and fishing; address infrastructure needs of recreational boaters and marina operators; develop brownfields into marinas. David D. Lonsdale: Early protection of lakes needed in addition to restoration; need to address U.S. Army Corps' St. Lawrence Seaway Study. (Richard Hyde) City of Waukegan: more emphasis needed on corporations and municipalities; identify and support existing watershed management plans; recreational/educational component needed. Letter signed by 43 environmental groups (Also submitted separately by Tip of the Mitt Watershed Council): Sustainable development can address social needs; need a list of goals; misrepresentation of transportation drafting team's recommendations; first recommendation needs deadlines and well-defined targets; troubling "blended mission of ecological restoration and economic development;" brand Great Lakes ecosystem as "fragile;" concerns with Transportation appendices. (Mary Gulezian) Council of Great Lakes Industries: Incorporate Sustainable Development principles into all report areas. (David E. Jacobs) U.S. Department of Housing and Urban Development: Need to reference HUD's Community Development Block Grant Program. (Karen A. Winters) Ohio Steel Group: Prioritize economic health and vitality. Jane L. Campbell (City of Cleveland): Discuss sustainability first in the overall report. Ohio Environmental Protection Agency: More specific/focused problem statement needed; recommendations should focus on land use and development, transportation and recreation/tourism; outreach/educational component needed. Ohio DNR Recommendations are more philosophical than action-oriented; there is overlap with other issues; should consider the balanced growth approach included in Ohio Lake Erie Commission plan; should include priority of waterborne transportation issues; reword problem statement on page 45; consider use of taxes as a disincentive for non-sustainable practices; include a statement recognizing the role of working lands; recognize existing metrics for sustainability. Institute for Agriculture and Trade Policy: Agriculture needs to be further utilized as a primary driver for supporting sustainability; while the negative environmental impacts of the agricultural and forestry sectors get a lot of publicity, the many environmental, economic, and social benefits derived from these sectors should also be recognized; expanding sustainable agriculture is a key component of halting unsustainable development; report should provide more attention to sustainable agriculture, forestry, and fishing; draft should encourage use of ethanol as fuel; page 11 of the sustainable development appendix confuses price support and subsidies; recommended actions for sustainable agriculture in the report will result in negligible environmental benefits. Crop Life America: Balancing of environmental, social, and economic factors should be incorporated into each of the areas discussed in the report. Great Lakes Commission: Review opportunities to discuss the relationship between land use and development and GL watershed health. Council of Great Lakes Industries: Pursuing sustainable development by balancing environmental, social, and economic factors should be incorporated into each of the issue areas. Northeast Ohio Area Coordinating Agency: GLRC strategic plan should ensure that metropolitan planning agencies are key participants in a multi-state initiative. Michigan Dune Alliance: Submitted its 2005 Eastern Lake Michigan Coastal Conservation Plan which it feels is especially relevant to Habitat/Species, Sustainable Development, Indicators and Information, and Aquatic Invasive species teams. Jane L. Campbell, Mayor of Cleveland, Ohio: Our city has prepared a Lakefront plan that seeks to maximize mixed-use development and public space; the City supports 2 Sustainable Cleveland's comment that sustainability should be discussed first in the Plan, not last. Great Lakes Sea Grant Network: The network provided a series of general recommendations and a set of comments based on a series of workshops held during the 2003-2004 Great Lakes Restoration Workshop Series; in addition the network provided more specific comments on each of the 8 issue areas contained in the Draft report. (Julie Magee) USEPA Region 5: The National Clean Diesel Campaign and Midwest Clean Diesel Initiative is working to reduce emissions from diesel engines. In her comments, Ms. Magee spells out how the collaboration could support the initiative. Bruce Lindgren: Section 8 of the report should be cut and repositioned; sustainability is and should be a fore-thought for all issues and actions affecting the future of the Great Lakes; sustainable development should be an overriding consideration for the entire Plan; need to include measures of progress as in the other sections; need to identify funding for sustainable development; the distinction between development and growth is inadequately addressed; there is a lack of clarity regarding what ecosystem services are and assumptions about them as economic services; this section does not adequately emphasize alternatives to "Basin Business as Usual." Water Environment Federation: The WEF strongly believes that sustainable development relates to all issues areas and supports the recommendation to adopt and maintain programs that promote sustainability. City of Chicago Department of the Environment: We believe nature and urban life can co-exist; we must demand a balance of development and rethink what constitutes and contributes to a strong economy. Ohio Environmental Council: Plan is vague about what sustainable development is; plan lacks deadlines and well-defined targets for creating incentives and other important activities. Izaak Walton League of America: Need to address the social needs of various watersheds in the basin; need to have all interested parties review the transportation appendixes. (Joseph Koncelik) Ohio EPA: The Ohio EPA provided specific comments on goals and recommendations in this section of the report. Pollution Probe: Submission has been made on behalf of a number of participants involved in the GL Futures Roundtable; submission includes the group's mission and vision statement as well as a series of goals, for possible inclusion as a supplement to the Plan. Douglas County Land Conservation Committee: We urge the committee to consider addressing the limitation of proposed biomass-burning plants in the Great Lakes region. 3 David Lonsdale: Mr. Lonsdale included a comprehensive discussion that includes suggestions for addressing invasive species; increasing research, and improving the sustainable development section of the report. Jane Schmitt: We need to document what we have; conserve what we have; preserve our resources; and restore our lost resources. Jim Sweeney: I have seen no progress on limiting the development in NW Indiana. Sharon Duerkop: I think we are beyond the point of a resource basis to sustain the current population; should consider a carbon tax; too often the ACE and DNR issue permits without adequate consideration of the consequences. Great Lakes Boating Federation: This team may have most impact on recreational boaters; the draft report does not reflect a completion of the task at hand; need to better incorporate how the economic resources of boating and fishing can be used to help tourism and improve the quality of life; recreational boating infrastructure is not receiving the federal attention warranted for dredging and maintenance; should consider marinas when reclaiming brownfields; the report must make an explicit call for coastal lands to be designated for water-dependent uses only. Housing and Urban Development: On page 46, the last paragraph of section 1 contains a discussion of tools to encourage sustainability practices; we recommend you include the following sentence: "HUD's Community Development Block Grant Program, which funds a broad array of locally determined activities, can be used to support sustainable development, pursuant to a local jurisdiction's Consolidated Plan." Great Lakes Water Institute: The important theme of sustainability in water use is missing from the report; education should be a key factor in any sustainability program. Macomb County Environmental Prosecutor (and Others): The Plan lacks sufficient specificity, especially when discussing the 3-year demonstration program; needs to be more emphasis on local governments. 4