Gender and Technical Communication: A Collection of Scholarly Articles Michelle Partridge-Doerr October 3, 2008 ENG 512 Tasked with writing a book review of an edited volume within the field of technical communication, and being a feminist who is new to field, I first began searching for a volume dedicated to the changes that the feminist movement has prompted in the workplace. When I could not find that, I looked for a volume that discusses how feminism has affected the curriculum of technical communication. When I could not find that, I broadened my search to include all volumes about gender and technical communication. But there were no edited collections about gender issues in relation to technical communication. Instead, there is a gaping hole in the literature of the field. Lee Brasseur recognized the same deficiency while creating a college course that subverts the objectivist paradigm in technical communication. Because “there is no exclusive text on gender issues in technical communication,” she instead “chose from a variety of sources” ([1] p. 480) to build the curriculum. I decided to follow Brasseur’s lead and create my own collection of scholarly articles for the purposes of this review. I wanted my selection to mimic existing edited volumes, so I chose from among the journals in the field and limited the search to those printed within the last 15 years. Additionally, these articles represent several facets of the field of technical communication: rhetoric (Sherry Dell, “A communication-based theory of the glass ceiling: rhetorical sensitivity and upward mobility within the technical organization”); education and training (Lee Brasseur, “Contesting the objectivist paradigm: gender issues in the technical professional communication curriculum”); professional multimedia (Amelia Tong and Ela Klecun, “Toward accommodating gender differences in multimedia communication”); scholarly writing (Jo Allen, “Women and authority in business/technical communication scholarship: An analysis of writing features, methods, and strategies”); technical writing in the workplace (Beverly Sauer, “Sexual dynamics of the profession: articulating the ecriture masculine of science and technology” and Deborah Bosley, “Feminist theory, audience analysis, and verbal and visual representation in a technical communication writing task”); and visual design (Deborah Bosley, “Gender and visual communication: toward a feminist theory of design”). Because there is a history of contention among technical communicators, I included representatives from both academia (for example, Brasseur and Bosley) and industry (Dell and Tong). This is important to note because although the authors’ perspectives are different, the themes they discuss are the same. Specifically, the articles assume the masculinist tradition of science and technology that influences the field of technical communication. A result of that influence is the dominant paradigm of “masculine” objectivity and rationality and subsequent subordination of “feminine” subjectivity and emotion. The articles use these assumptions to explain the roots of gender differences in cognition and visual abilities as apparent in technical communication. In an attempt to accommodate those differences, the authors apply the theory of the social construction of knowledge to debate the dominant pedagogy and introduce a feminist perspective. My goal in choosing these articles and focusing on these themes is twofold. I want to be aware of some unified opinions about gender in technical communication so that I am aware of the difficulties I face as a woman in this field. I also want to be armed with solutions so that I can share them with my female co-workers and classmates, who I envision as the audience for this collection. Ultimately, I envision creating an edited volume about gender and technical communication that includes these articles, among others. It is my hope that my audience for this review will become aware of these issues and demand a more in depth and expansive edited volume. This volume would be a collaborative work from female technical communicators in workplace and university settings that would set the example of interagency efforts. It would also provide the blueprint for technical communicators, who have a unique position as mediator in most workplaces, to enact social change. Androcentric Bias of Science and Technology Feminist theory suggests that science and technology are biased toward what are considered “masculine” traits: rationality and objectivity. The reasoning behind this is that men dominated the field since its inception and created the epistemology based on their own biases. And, because “science and technology has reflected the views of the dominant group within its culture, the viewpoint has been a masculinist model of human experience which assigns goodness to certain valued ‘male’ traits such as rational thinking and objectivity” ([1] p. 477). Brasseur uses this theory in her article to argue for a redefinition of objectivity in the field of technical communication. Her goal is to propose a socially responsible discourse model through the conceptualization of a college course on gender issues in technical and professional communication [1]. She believes that it is important for students to examine the history of the androcentric bias so that the students can recognize its effects and failings. Beverly Sauer discusses those effects on technical writing in her article. She critiques the sexually loaded metaphors and violent imagery in technical operator’s manuals and explains how they interfere with the proper operation of dangerous machinery. The “sexual metaphors of penetration, power, and dominance reflect a deeper masculinist bias in science and technology… particularly the notion that the rational observer can analyze and master the complexities of nature” ([2] p. 317). The danger inherent in that notion is the “complexity of the phenomenological reality” ([2] p. 318); “the notion of a pure and consistent reason reflects masculinist assumptions about the ability of the Rational Man to act without emotion of subjective feeling” ([2] p. 320). In Sauer’s case study, the expert testimony of a technical writer speaking about a tool’s operator’s manual, the objective and simplified text failed to accurately describe the operation, contributing to fatal user error ([2] p. 315). Deborah Bosley echoes this sentiment in her articles: “technical communication devoid of a political or ethical context, and removed from the human, can have quite dangerous effects” ([3] p. 228). She adds that technical communication, because it has roots in scientific positivism, is considered an objective translation of facts and data [3]; however, “the irony is that, although technical communication exhorts us to be cognizant of audience… at the same time it traditionally adheres to a theoretical perspective that privileges knowledge and truth as objective, distanced, and uninfluenced by linguistic, human intercession” ([4] p. 296). This paradox highlights the inherent power imbalance that has been created by the patriarchal influence in science and technology. As many authors in this collection have discussed, valuing certain traits and cultures necessarily means devaluing others. Power and Domination The logical effect of the dominance of one group in society and its subsequent dominance of many aspects of that society is that other groups, and the aspects of society with which they are associated, are marginalized. When the “dominant group makes rules to govern society and its institutions, it naturally imposes an order upon the other, more subordinate parts of the culture” ([1] p. 476). In terms of the objectivist bias in technical communication, the “same language practices can obscure or hide the complexity of the social environment and may end up, in many cases, telling only one side of the story,” which is not good communication ([1] p. 476). Brasseur makes this point to underscore the importance of teaching students studying technical communication about alternative viewpoints. Sauer, in the article about the operator’s manual, examines the use of sexual slang by the author of a scholarly article. Using the slang term “studgun” in scholarly writing, she posits, gives the term authority. Word usage, especially in academic writing, is governed by social constraints. In other words, words chosen for scholarly prose has the “seal of approval” of the society, or at least its most dominant group [2]. At the same time, the term, which is overtly sexual and characterizes the tool as masculine and potent, marginalizes the female readership. Therefore, “if the discourse of scholarship excludes women… scholarly language will impede women’s ability to express themselves; dominant (male) groups will have an unfair advantage” ([2] p. 313). Jo Allen makes a similar point in her 1994 article, which examines women’s business and technical writing and looks for characteristics of authoritative rhetoric. As a result of the masculinist bias in technology, “what counts as knowledge (especially in academic circles) has been more frequently defined by men and, as a male-dominated enterprise, has largely excluded women from knowledge-making” ([5] p. 281). Academic writing has also ignored women’s experiences, which helps explain why classical rhetoric does not recognize traditionally “feminine” language features, like hedging, as authoritative [5]. Sherry Dell addresses this theme of dominance from an industry standpoint. In her 1992 article, Dell describes two forms of communication and discusses how they contribute to the glass ceiling in the workplace. She states that glass ceiling affects men as well and women, and the reason for its existence is the communicative ability of the employee and not the gender. Her theory “proposes that the expressive communicator will be seen as member of the dominant organizational communication style, and the rhetorically sensitive communicator will be seen as an outsider” ([6] p. 231). What is important to note is (1) that the dominant group dictates the acceptable form of communication and (2) that rhetorical outsiders are marginalized. It is no coincidence that features of the ostracized communication style, rhetorical sensitivity, are the features most often associated with women’s language. As is evident in the next section, traits associated with women are considered inferior, even though those traits were arbitrarily assigned by the patriarchy. Gender Differences At the root of much research on gender and communication is the idea of the “culture of difference,” wherein “reported differences between males and females in the works on Carol Gillian or Mary Belenky and her associates have so quickly and thoroughly become part of our social consciousness that now we tend to observe the behavior of males and females through the lens of those theories” ([4] p. 293). Most recent research assumes gender differences and compares them to study the inferiority of one set versus the other [5]. The authors in this collection subvert the trend and question the validity of this theory. The findings of these studies help explain why the theory persists and what can be done to change perceptions. All of the authors agree on the most commonly referenced gender differences, and Bosley summarizes them succinctly in her 1992 article: Research on psychological development… suggests that women are more likely than men to have what can be called a ‘connected,’ ‘collectivist,’ or ‘sociocentric’ schema of the self in relationship to others… Males, on the other hand, are often characterized as being ‘egocentric,’ ‘individuated,’ or ‘autonomous,’ implying sense of self as separate, individuated, and autonomous ([4] p. 297). These characteristics are borne of the objectivist masculinist bias in science and technology. The traits that are valued, like objectivity and rationality, come from a separation of the self from nature (the natural world, human emotion, etc.). Along the same lines, traits that are devalued, like subjectivity and emotion, come from closeness with nature. Bosley tests the implications of the theory of different abilities between the genders using two separate studies. Her theory in her 1992 article is that “if women create meaning through connectedness, and men through individuation and distance, then they may perceive and visually represent the world in like manner” ([3] p. 224). Therefore, differences between the genders in an assignment to visually depict a series of steps would be expected. Likewise, Bosley analyzes men’s and women’s attention to audience in a writing task in her 1994 article to test if women, who tend toward affinity and collaboration, are more adept at connecting with the audience. Both studies yield almost no discernable differences in ability between the genders. Allen also challenges the existing assumption of gender differences in her article about authority in women’s scholarly writing. She restates the description of recent research: “In communications, gender research has often been conducted in an effort to test popular perceptions about the existence and, in many cases, the inferiority of “women’s language’” ([5] p. 271). In her sample of 24 articles written by women, almost all used traits of women’s language. Those traits include self-references, hedging, the use of parenthetical information, and inclusion of women’s issues, all of which offer a distinct voice—a taboo in objective writing. Allen effectively argues that the female authors not only establish authority using these devices but also connect in a unique way with their audiences, which makes their combination of traditional writing guidelines and marginalized feminine language incredibly effective [5]. Social Construction of Knowledge The authors of this collection of essays build from the definition of masculine bias, to the exploration of dominance and subjugation, and to the exposure of gender “differences” to reach a common conclusion. They come at that stance from many angles. Amelia Tong and Ela Klecun, who advocate for accommodating gender differences in multimedia communication in their 2004 article, assume the existence of gender inequalities and cite some of the articles that Bosley and Allen fault for overstating cognitive differences between the genders. However, the authors concede that “gender differences are not only inherent (physiological) but are also socially constructed and thus need to be considered in their social context” ([7] p. 123). They also suggest that those differences are changing, and may mirror changing technologies ([7] p. 123). They speculate that “effective communication can be a thoughtful and articulate process and no longer gender specific” ([7] p. 120), which echoes Allen’s findings on women’s scholarly writing. Bosley, who studied a visual design assignment among school-aged teens, did find a few differences between the genders, namely the choice of shapes used. In those cases, she suggests that “such differences may be the result of the female respondents’ own expectations of their abilities…women may be sabotaging their own abilities by conceding to the expectations of our culture in such studies” ([4] p. 303). Likewise, to explain the longstanding assumption of differences, she states that “these differences may be a result of education and socialization which encourage boy in areas which foster spatial abilities and encourage girls in areas of verbal ability; however, despite (or because of) such external influences, differences continue to be noted” ([3] p. 225). Sauer contends that “we must acknowledge that all reality is a matter of social interpretation and make clear the biases and perspectives which influence what we see and what we create” ([2] p. 228). She also points out that even science “is a reflection of context and of the knower” ([2] p. 223). She argues in her 1994 article that good technical writing must recognize the audience and that current models of writing, which reflect masculinist bias and suppress women’s knowledge, can not effectively do that. She posits that “creating a balance between the verbal and the visual components of representation may well represent a movement toward integrating a more ‘female’ way of seeing” ([2] p. 224). Brasseur critiques the masculinist bias in this way: “the current understanding of what constitutes rational behavior or objective judgment reflects only [the dominant] group’s ideas about the nature of human activity” ([1] p. 477). Therefore, the curriculum for her course “places an emphasis on how individual perceptions of reality inform the ways in which we and others act” ([1] p. 482). This collective focus on social knowledge reflects the three concepts of ethos, reputation, and authority in rhetorical theory. A female technical writer’s ability to convey expertise and leadership and earn respect from her audience and peers hinges on the dominant perception of women in the fields of science and technology. Women must start from within their fields to replace that perception and negative stereotypes with the alternative presented here, and we as female technical communicators are the best agents for that change. First, because we are women, whose views have been subjugated for centuries, we have a different and fresh perspective on science, rationality, and communication. Second, because we are technical communicators, we occupy positions as mediators and trusted confidants and have a breadth of knowledge of all facets of our organizations. It is the task of every female technical communicator, both in academia and industry, to collaborate to project a new image of the field. Indeed, this collection provides an excellent example of women on both sides sharing ideas and discussing the field’s most urgent issues. With this collection of articles, women have a tool to subvert the objectivist paradigm, project authority and competence, and critique misconceptions about gender differences. Armed with this collection, women can be the advocates for social change that technical communicators are uniquely positioned to be. Works Cited [1] L.E. Brasseur, “Contesting the objectivist paradigm: gender issues in the technical professional communication curriculum,” IEEE Transactions on Professional Communication, vol. 36, no. 3, pp. 114–123, Sep. 1993. [2] B. 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