Mechanics Organization Audience Content Purpose Grading Grid The following grid was designed by Dr. Joanna Migrock for assessing all assignments in a first-year composition class. Five performance areas are delineated: Purpose, Content, Audience, Organization, and Mechanics. Four performance levels are then described for each area. This grid could be used as is to give revision-oriented feedback on drafts; with the addition of grade weightings, it could also be used to grade final drafts. The paper has a wellThe paper has a workable (though The paper has some components The paper lacks an developed thesis with an perhaps formulaic) thesis that of a thesis (subject, position, hint at argumentative thesis or the insightful set of criteria. The leads the reader into the paper and organization) but may be thesis does not accurately introduction establishes the serves as a guide to its contents, underdeveloped or missing a convey what the paper issues at stake and the but the introduction or conclusion clearly articulated motive for writing. develops. conclusion indicates what will fails to adequately communicate change as a result of this the consequences of this argument. argument. The paper demonstrates The paper contains adequate The paper has some development The paper needs more details excellent development of each evidence to support its claims, but but lacks sufficient evidence or on every level (main ideas, idea and focuses on relevant will benefit from more research, contains irrelevant details that do related ideas, specific ideas). details. Clearly explained more thorough interpretation of not yet develop a clear sense of examples support the claims quotations, or from more specific purpose. and the topic is thoroughly development of relevant points. researched. The author is clearly attentive The paper contains words and The paper shows some awareness The paper does not appear to to the values of the intended examples that are likely to appeal of an audience, but relies on beliefs have a specific audience in audience. The author defends to a specific audience, but could that the audience may not share or mind or is disrespectful to its beliefs not shared by the benefit from acknowledging fails to convincingly address intended audience either by audience and handles counter- underlying assumptions or more counter-arguments the audience failing to seriously address arguments with respect. effective handling of countermight propose. counter-arguments or by arguments. engaging in an offensive tone. The paper contains strong The overall structure of the paper is The paper has one main idea per Paragraphs are not organized topic sentences and builds clear, but some topic sentences paragraph, but some topic around a central idea and the upon the argument suggested are weak. Transitions that would sentences fail to adequately overall structure of the paper is in the thesis. Clear transitions clarify the relationships amongst present the paragraph's argument difficult to follow. connect ideas both on the main ideas are occasionally either or the paper fails to follow the order paragraph level and the missing or misleading. suggested in the thesis. Transitions sentence level. are either missing or misleading. The paper demonstrates The paper displays good control The paper shows that mechanics The paper lacks basic control mastery over the basics in over mechanics, although some are an area of concern. There may over mechanics and contains sentence completeness, areas may still need sentence level be recurring sentence fragments, excessive proof-reading errors structure, variety, word choice, revision. Occasional wordiness, comma splices, word usage errors, or has habitual problems with and punctuation. It maintains a passive voice, punctuation errors, or redundant clauses. Excessive subject-verb errors, sentence clear and efficient style. pronoun references or unclear wordiness or punctuation errors fragments or punctuation modifiers may be problems. may also be a concern. errors. Writing Office — School of Undergraduate Studies FAC 411/232-1421 — University of Texas at Austin Writing Office — School of Undergraduate Studies FAC 411/232-1421 — University of Texas at Austin