Sentence Unit SPI 0601.1.5 Identify the correct use of conjunctions (i.e., coordinating and subordinating) and interjections within context. SPI 0601.1.7 Identify within context a variety of appropriate sentence-combining techniques (i.e., comma used with coordinating conjunctions, introductory words, appositives, interrupters). SPI 0601.1.8 Select the most appropriate method to correct a run-on sentence (i.e., conjunctions, semicolons, and periods to join or separate elements). SPI 0601.1.12 Identify the correct use of commas (i.e., compound sentences, coordinating conjunctions, introductory words, appositives, interrupters) within context. Day 1 Easy Grammar page 425 - Recognizing Sentences, Fragments, and Run-ons page 427 - Recognizing Sentences, Fragments, and Run-ons Day 2 PowerPoint – Lesson 1 (Understanding Sentence Problems - choppy sentences, runon sentences, and stringy sentences) PowerPoint includes: definition and examples of choppy sentences, run-on sentences, and stringy sentences Brain Pop - Movie on run-on sentences http://www.brainpop.com/english/grammar/runonsentences/ Practice with Dry Erase Boards (9 examples to identify problems) 1. You can find 20 miles of the famous Appalachian Trail in Johnson County, and it comes into the county at Watauga Lake and runs along the top of the Holston Mountain Range which is beautiful for hiking. (stringy) 2. Johnson County is in the Appalachian Mountain chain. The elevations in the county range from 1800 to 5000 feet above sea level. The elevation of Mountain City is 2350 feet above sea level. Mountain City has a high elevation. It has the highest elevation of any city in Tennessee. (choppy) 3. The highest point in Johnson County is Snake Mountain at an elevation of 5574 feet above sea level Snake Mountain is located in the Stone Mountain Range which parallels the eastern border of the county. (run-on) 4. Two other prominent ranges run in a northeast to southwest direction through the county one is the Iron Mountain Range Holston Mountain Range is the other large range in the county. (run-on) 5. The Iron Mountain Range enters the county at the northern boundary line. It is next to Virginia. It continues through Johnson County to Watauga Lake. It divides Carter and Johnson Counties. They are divided in the southwestern part of the county. (choppy) 6. Three smaller ranges in our county are Dry Run, Doe, and Forge, and these are all between the Stone and Iron Mountain Ranges, and the Doe Mountain Range runs completely in Johnson County and is approximately 12 miles long. (stringy) 7. Johnson County has 167 frost free days, and the hottest month of the year is July which has an average temperature of 70.2 degrees Fahrenheit, and December is the coldest month, and the average temperature in December is 35.2 degrees Fahrenheit. (stringy) 1 8. Johnson County receives 55 inches of precipitation annually seventeen inches of this is in the form of snow. The coldest recorded temperature in Tennessee was on December 30, 1917 in Mountain City the temperature was minus 32 degrees Fahrenheit. (run-on) 9. Johnson County receives a lot of precipitation. It receives 55 inches of precipitation annually. Seventeen inches of this is in the form of snow. The coldest recorded temperature in Tennessee was in Mountain City. It was on December 30, 1917. The temperature was very cold. It minus 32 degrees Fahrenheit. (choppy) Written Practice (11 sentences to identify as choppy, run-on, or stringy) 1. One of the earliest mined natural resources in this area was iron ore the early settlers used the iron to make weapons, tools, and utensils. (run-on) 2. The first iron works was built in 1793 by Hezekiah Boon, John McEylea, and Joseph Sands, and the business was not successful and was sold to Godfrey Carriger, Jr. for the taxes that were owed on it. (stringy) 3. Joseph Gentry established an iron works. It was in 1797. He had a partner. His name was Lewis Wills. The iron works was on the Laurel. (choppy) 4. John Dugger had a brother named William, and William settled in the Dry Run community, and he founded a forge there, and his son had two sons, and they were William and Abel, and they operated the Cranberry Iron Works for many years. (stringy) 5. By 1820 eight iron works existed in what is now Johnson County with 106 men employed the profits were $20,700 with $44,750 worth of iron being produced. (run-on) 6. By 1836 there were two iron works on Roan Creek. By 1836 there were two iron works on the Little Doe Creek. By 1836 there were two iron works on Laurel Fork. By 1836 there was one iron works on Beaverdam Creek. By 1836 there was one iron works on Dry Run Creek. (choppy) 7. Mining brought railroads to the county in the late 1800’s, and the first railroad tracks were built in 1899 by the Virginia and Southwestern Railroad, and they would go from Elizabethton to Mountain City, so by 1910 the track was completed not only to Mountain City but on to Shouns. (stringy) 8. Tracks were later built into Shady Valley another track was laid along Laurel Creek to Goose Creek into Mountain City all the trains carried timber, iron ore, and manganese as well as passengers. When the mining industry slowed the railroads were used by the lumber industry which began to grow in the early 1900’s. (run-on) 9. Today the two major natural resources are sold in Johnson County they are the mining of limestone and the milling of lumber. (run-on) 10. Oak is a major tree that is sawed for lumber. Pine is a major tree that is sawed for lumber. Poplar is a major tree that is sawed for lumber. Hickory is a major tree that is sawed for lumber. Maple is a major tree that is sawed for lumber. (choppy) 11. The Maymead Company, a limestone mine operation, began in 1930, and it mines 6,000 tons of limestone each year, and it also mines 500,000 tons of granite annually. (stringy) 2 Graphic Organizer Flap Book with Three Types of Sentence Problems Front Choppy Sentences – Choppy sentences are sentences that are too short. When several short sentences come together, they force the reader to go slowly. This makes the writing seem more "elementary" than it truly is. Run-On Sentences - A run-on is when two or more sentences are combined without connecting words or punctuation. Stringy Sentences - A stringy sentence is when too many clauses usually connected with and, but, so, and because, connect sentences forming one very long sentence. Stringy sentences are so long the reader forgets the beginning of the sentence before reaching the end. Inside Examples Choppy Sentences The sun beat down. It was on Phillip's back. He began to get terribly hot. He was uncomfortable. Corrected The sun beat down on Phillip's back, and he began to get terribly hot and uncomfortable. Choppy Sentences It was dark. We couldn’t see the sea. The air became cold. The night was damp. Timothy took the shelter down. We pulled our shirts on. We put our pants on. They were stiff from salt. They felt clammy. Corrected Total darkness blotted out the sea, and it became cold and damp. Timothy took the shelter down, and we both pulled our shirts and pants back on. They were stiff from slat and felt clammy. Examples Run-On I’d heard my father talk that way a few times. Once when he didn’t want to tell me by grandfather was about to die another time was when a car ran over my dog in Virginia. Corrected I’d heard my father talk that way a few times. Once when he didn’t want to tell me by grandfather was about to die; another time was when a car ran over my dog in Virginia. Run-on He could tell I was discouraged we had come to the island and there were no people on it. Corrected He could tell I was discouraged, because we had come to the island and there were no people on it. Example Stringy I wondered if Timothy had checked for snakes, and there were also scorpions on most Caribbean islands, and they were deadly, so I wondered if there were any on our cay. Corrected I wondered if Timothy had checked for snakes. There were also scorpions on most Caribbean islands, and they were deadly. I wondered if there were any on our cay. 3 Day 3 Easy Grammar • Pages 615, 617, 619, 621, 623, 625- Add Appositive to Combine Sentences Day 4 Graphic Organizers Flip Book with Nine Rules for Combining Sentences Combining Sentences Rules Rule 1: Different Subjects Same Predicate Rule 2: Different Predicates - Same Subject When two people or things do the same thing, try to tell about it in one sentence. If you have one person doing more than one thing, then place the verbs in a string. If you use I as part of a combined subject, put I last. Example: Timothy ate fish. Phillip ate fish. Timothy and Phillip ate fish. Example: Timothy cheered. Timothy told me to fell along the line to the wriggling fish. Timothy cheered and told me to fell along the line to the wriggling fish. Rule 3: Repeated Words Examples: I touched driftwood. I touched coral. I touched driftwood and coral. I walked slowly. I walked carefully. I walked slowly and carefully Rule 4: Sometimes one sentence will do in place of two. Examples: Timothy cooked fish. It was delicious. Timothy cooked delicious fish. The rain was icy. I was wet. I was wet from the icy rain. . Rule 5: Using phrases in sentences lets you say more - with less. Example: I sat beside Timothy. I sat beside him for an hour. I sat in the hot sun while he rested quietly. I sat beside Timothy for almost an hour in the hot sun while he rested quietly.. Rule 6: When sentences are related they may be turned into a compound sentence by adding a comma and a coordinating conjunction. If you wanted to combine two sentences and show a cause and effect relationship, one way you could do it would be to use a coordinating conjunction. These are the connecting words for, and, nor, but, or, yet, and so. One way to remember all of them is to call them "FANBOYS." In most cases, they will be preceded by a comma. Example: I felt around. The rope was no longer tied to the raft. I felt around, but the rope was no longer tied to the raft. Rule 7: Short choppy sentences may be turned into complex sentences by turning one sentence into a phrase and adding a subordinating conjunction. Try using some of these words when building complex sentences: after if before since though unless until when although while because whenever Example: I had fever in Virginia. My mother had given me aspirin. She put cold cloths on my head. When I had fever in Virginia, my mother had given me aspirin and then she put cold cloths on my head. Rule 8: You may join two complete sentences with a semicolon when you want to keep two closely related ideas in one sentence. Rule 9: You may join two sentences by using a semicolon with a transitional word and a comma. By using a semicolon instead of a period between two sentences, you show that those two sentences have a closer relationship to each other than they do to the sentences around them. Some common transitional words are: however has the same meaning as but Note: Think of a comma as a brief pause, a semicolon as a more moderate pause, and a period as a stop. Example: I screamed his name again and again. There was no answer. I screamed his name again and again; there was no answer. furthermore has the same meaning as in addition instead has the same meaning as rather consequentl y has the same meaning as a result nevertheles s has the same meaning as however Example: I heard him making small noises. It was painful to move. I heard him making small noises as if it were painful to move. 4 Day 5 PowerPoint – Lesson 2 (Combining Choppy Sentences) PowerPoint includes: Examples for 1st five rules: Rule 1: Different Subjects - Same Predicate When two people or things do the same thing, try to tell about it in one sentence. Rule 2: Different Predicates - Same Subject If you have one person doing more than one thing, then place the verbs in a string. Rule 3: Avoid writing sentences that repeat the same words again and again. Rule 4: Sometimes one sentence will do in place of two. Rule 5: Using phrases in sentences lets you say more - with less. 10 examples for Oral Practice 1. During the French and Indian War, Boone joined General Edward Braddock's expedition. Boone tried to drive out the French from Fort Duquesne. Fort Duquesne is now Pittsburgh. Boone tried to drive out the French from Fort Duquesne which is now Pittsburgh. 2. Braddock was ambushed. Boone was able to escape. When Braddock was ambushed, Boone was able to escape. 3. At age 21 Boone married Rebecca. Rebecca was just 17 years old. At age 21 Boone married Rebecca who was just 17 years old. 4. Rebecca moved because Boone felt there were too many people in the area. Boone moved because Boone felt there were too many people in the area. Rebecca and Boone moved because Boone felt there were too many people in the area. 5. In 1769 Boone and Rebecca lived in the Yadkin Valley in North Carolina. Boone learned about the Watauga Country also in North Carolina from John Finley. In 1769 while living in the Yadkin Valley of North Carolina, Boone and Rebecca learned about the neighboring Watauga Country from John Finley. 5 6. Boone crossed the mountains. Boone followed the Watauga River. Boone followed an Indian trail called the Warriors' Path to a place now named Butler, Tennessee. Boone crossed the mountains and followed the Watauga River on an Indian trail called the Warriors' Path to a place now named Butler, Tennessee. 7. During his journey Boone came across three trappers. He met Julius Dugger. He met Andrew Greer. He met John Honeycutt. During his journey he came across three trappers: Julius Dugger, Andrew Greer and John Honeycutt. 8. In the spring of 1771 Boone followed the same trail through a valley in East Tennessee. In the spring of 1771 Boone was stopped by the Cherokee who took all his furs and skins. In the spring of 1771 Boone followed the same trail through a valley in East Tennessee where he was stopped by the Cherokee who took all his furs and skins. 9. In the beautiful valley where he had left his horse to die two years earlier Boone found his horse. Boone saw that his horse was alive. Boone saw that his horse fat and handsome. Boone saw that his horse had a sleek coat. In the beautiful valley where he had left his horse to die two years earlier, Boone found his horse not only alive but fat and handsome with a sleek coat. 10. When the horse saw Boone he whinnied. When the horse saw Boone he trotted over to meet Boone. When the horse saw Boone he whinnied and trotted over to meet Boone. 11 multiple choice written practice items 1. Ever since then the stream through this valley has been called Roan Creek. It was called Roan Creek after Boone's horse. a. Ever since then the stream through this valley has been called Roan Creek because it was named Roan Creek after Boone's horse. b. Ever since then the stream through this valley has been called Roan Creek after Boone's horse. c. Because ever since then the Roan Creek stream was named Roan Creek because of Boone’s Roan horse. d. Ever since then the stream was named Roan Creek because Boone had a Roan horse that went through this valley and has been called Roan Creek after Boone's horse. 6 2. Boone made several trips back and forth to this area. Boone made several trips before settling there. a. Boone made several trips back and forth to this area, and Boone made several trips before settling there. b. Boone made several trips back and forth to this area, because Boone made several trips before settling there. c. Because Boone made several trips back and forth to this area, Boone made several trips before settling there. d. Boone made several trips back and forth to this area before settling there. 3. Boone was quoted as saying you'll find, “plenty of rich fertile soil.” Boone was quoted as saying you'll find, “an abundance of game.” Boone was quoted as saying you'll find, “timber for log cabins.” a. Boone was quoted as saying you'll find, “plenty of rich fertile soil,” and he said you’ll find, “an abundance of game,” and he said you’ll find, “timber for log cabins.” b. Boone was quoted as saying you'll find, “plenty of rich fertile soil, an abundance of game, and timber for log cabins." c. Boone was quoted as saying you'll find three things, “plenty of rich fertile soil,” and you’ll find, “an abundance of game,” and you’ll find, “timber for log cabins.” d. Boone was quoted as saying you'll find, “plenty of rich fertile soil,” you’ll also see, “an abundance of game, and you’ll see, “timber for log cabins.” 4. Boone chose a site by the Kentucky River for a fort. Boone built the fort in 1775. a. In 1775 Boone chose a site by the Kentucky River to build a fort. b. Boone chose a site by the Kentucky River for a fort, and Boone built the fort in 1775. c. Boone built the fort in 1775, where Boone chose a site by the Kentucky River for a fort. d. Boone chose a site in 1775 by the Kentucky River for a fort, and he built the fort in 1775. 5. In 1778 Boone was captured by Shawnee Indians. In 1778 the Shawnee took Boone to their village north of the Ohio River. a. In 1778 Boone was captured by Shawnee Indians where they took him in 1778 to their Shawnee village north of the Ohio River. b. In 1778 Boone was captured by Shawnee Indians, and in 1778 they took him to their Shawnee village north of the Ohio River. c. In 1778 Boone was captured by Shawnee Indians, and the Shawnee took him in 1778 to their village north of the Ohio River. d. In 1778 Boone was captured by Shawnee Indians, who took him to their village north of the Ohio River. 7 6. Shawnee Chief Blackfish adopted Boone into the tribe. Shawnee Chief Blackfish treated Boone as a son. a. Shawnee Chief Blackfish adopted Boone into the tribe, and Shawnee Chief Blackfish treated Boone as a son. b. When Boone was adopted by Shawnee Chief Blackfish into the tribe, Shawnee Chief Blackfish treated Boone as a son. c. Shawnee Chief Blackfish adopted Boone into the tribe where he treated Boone as a son. d. Shawnee Chief Blackfish treated Boone as a son when Shawnee Chief Blackfish adopted Boone into the tribe. 7. One day Boone heard a war party was going to attack Boonesborough. Boone escaped to Boonesborough to warn his friends. a. When Boone heard a war party was going to attack Boonesborough, he escaped to warn his friends. b. One day when Boone heard a war party was going to attack Boonesborough, Boone escaped to Boonesborough to warn his friends. c. Because Boone heard a war party was going to attack Boonesborough, Boone escaped to warn his friends in Boonesborough. d. Since Boone heard a war party was going to attack Boonesborough, Boone escaped the war party to warn his friends in Boonesborough. 8. After the warning the men in Boonesborough of the Shawnee war party, the men prepared for the attack by making the fort stronger. After the warning the women in Boonesborough of the Shawnee war party, the women prepared for the attack by storing extra food and water inside the fort. a. After warning the people in Boonesborough of the Shawnee war party the men prepared for the Shawnee attack by making the fort stronger, and the women prepared for the Shawnee attack by storing extra food and water inside the fort. b. After warning the people in Boonesborough of the Shawnee war party the men prepared by making the fort stronger, and the women prepared by storing extra food and water inside the fort. c. After the warning the men in Boonesborough of the Shawnee war party they prepared for the attack by making the fort stronger, and after a warning to the women they prepared for the attack by storing extra food and water inside the fort. 9. The Shawnee began to dig a tunnel under the fort. When the men in the fort saw the Shawnee were digging a tunnel under the fort they built a tunnel too. The men in the fort planned to meet the Indians in the middle through the tunnel. a. The Shawnee began to dig a tunnel under the fort. When the men in the fort saw this they built a tunnel too, so they could meet the Indians in the middle. b. The Shawnee began to dig a tunnel under the fort. When the men in the fort saw the Shawnee were digging a tunnel under the fort they built a tunnel too, because the men in the fort planned to meet the Indians in the middle through the tunnel. c. The Shawnee began to dig a tunnel under the fort. When the men in the fort saw the Shawnee were building a tunnel they built a tunnel too, so they could meet the Indians in the tunnel in the middle. 8 10. Then the Indians started shooting flaming arrows into the fort. Luckily rain came. The rain not only put out the fires but caved in the Indians' tunnel. With this defeat Blackfish left. a. Luckily rain came, and when the rain came not only did the rain put out the fires but the rain caved in the Indians' tunnel. b. Luckily rain came and the rain not only put out the fires but the rain caved in the Indians' tunnel. c. Luckily when the rain came, it not only put out the fires but caved in the Indians' tunnel. d. It was lucky that the rain came. Because when the rain came the rain not only put out the fires but caved in the Indians' tunnel. 11. Daniel Boone was a brave pioneer. He was a folk hero. a. b. c. d. Daniel Boone was a brave pioneer, and he was also a folk hero. Being a folk hero also made Daniel Boone a brave pioneer. Daniel Boone was a brave, and a pioneer, and he was also a folk hero. Folk hero, Daniel Boone, was a brave pioneer. Day 6 Easy Grammar (Compound Sentences) Page 643 & 645 - Sentence/ Not Sentence Page 647 & 649 - Finish Sentence to Form a Compound Sentence Day 7 Easy Grammar (Complex Sentences) Pages 653, 655, 657 & 659 - Recognize Independent Clause/ Dependent Clause Pages 662, 664, 666 – 667 - Finish the Complex Sentence by Adding a Dependent Clause 9 Day 8 Graphic Organizers Flap Book with Four Types of Sentences Simple A simple sentence, also called an independent clause, contains a subject and a verb, and it expresses a complete thought. Compound A compound sentence is made up of two simple sentences called independent clauses joined by a coordinating conjunction (for, and, nor, but, or, yet, or so) and a comma or by a semicolon alone. Examples: Washington County was under North Carolina rule, and it was named in honor of George Washington. In 1784 the settlers declared their freedom from North Carolina, and the counties of Sullivan, Washington, Greene, and Davidson broke away to form a new state. They named this new state Franklin, for they wanted to honor Benjamin Franklin. Complex A complex sentence combines a dependent clause with an independent clause. A complex sentence always has a subordinating conjunction such as because, since, after, although, or when. Examples: Because ex-soldiers were given land grants as a reward for fighting for independence from England, the population of Johnson County grew after the American Revolution. The population of Johnson County grew after the American Revolution because ex-soldiers were given land grants as a reward for fighting for independence from England. Since North Carolina refused to recognize Franklin's independence, the state collapsed in 1788. The state collapsed since North Carolina refused to recognize Franklin's independence. Compound-Complex A compound-complex sentence is comprised of at least two independent clauses and one or more dependent clauses. Flip Book for the Three Types of Conjunctions 10 Underline the conjunctions. Circle the commas. Coordinating words to words Sally likes to eat cake and ice cream. Bill likes to eat pizza, hot dogs, and pie. connects equal parts _______________ + _______________ sentences to sentences I like to eat cake, but Joe will only eat ice cream. Bill will eat hot dogs all day long, so his mother must lock the refrigerator. Subordinating joins dependent to independent clauses _______________ + _______________ While I was eating cake, Peter was eating ice cream. I was eating cake while Peter was eating ice cream. Because Bill loves to eat, his mom must lock the refrigerator. His mom locked the refrigerator because Bill would eat all day long. Correlative works in pairs Both Jane and John ate cake. Neither Zack nor Sam ate cake. You may eat either vanilla or chocolate cake. Study Flips for Coordinating and Subordinating Conjunctions 11 Flip Book for FANBOYS for shows logical consequence; it has the same meaning as because, the reason why For He has to walk. He doesn’t have a car. He has to walk, for he doesn’t have a car. and shows addition; it has the same meaning as in addition, along with And I ate a sandwich. I drank a glass of milk. I ate a sandwich, and I drank a glass of milk. nor shows addition of a negative point Nor It isn’t in our house. It isn’t in your house. It isn’t in our house, nor is it in your house. but shows contrast; it has the same meaning as however, except, on the other hand But She was She was or shows choice Or We can go to the movie. We can stay home. We can go to the movie, or we can stay home. yet shows contrast Yet I usually don’t like ice cream. I ate every bite of the fudge ripple. I usually don’t like ice cream, yet I ate every bite of the fudge ripple. so shows logical consequence; it has the same meaning as as a result, therefore So They didn’t buy tickets in time. They couldn’t see the play. They didn’t buy tickets in time, so they couldn’t seer the play. wanted to go to the baseball game. It raining. wanted to go to the baseball game, but it raining. 12 Chart of Subordinating Conjunctions after because that where although before thought wherever as even though unless which as if if until while as long as once what who as soon as since whatever however as though so that whenever Day 9 PowerPoint – Lesson 3 (Compound and Complex Sentences) PowerPoint includes: a. 7 examples for Oral Practice 1. Make a compound sentence from the two simple sentences. In 1794 the population of the Tennessee territory had grown to 77,000. At this point it was eligible to apply for statehood. In 1794 the population of the Tennessee territory had grown to 77,000, so at this point it was eligible to apply for statehood. 2. Make a compound sentence from the two simple sentences. On June 1, 1796 Tennessee was admitted to the union. It became the 16th state. On June 1, 1796 Tennessee was admitted to the union, and it became the 16th state. 3. Make a compound sentence from the two simple sentences. John Sevier was the only governor of the State of Franklin. He became the first Governor of the new state of Tennessee. John Sevier was the only governor of the State of Franklin, and he became the first Governor of the new state of Tennessee. 4. Make a compound sentence from the two simple sentences. In 1796 Tennessee became a recognized state. At this time Johnson County was a part of Carter County. In 1796 Tennessee became a recognized state, and at this time Johnson County was a part of Carter County. 13 5. Make a complex sentence from the two simple sentences. In 1835 Joseph Powell introduced the idea of a separate county to the senate. They accepted the suggestion. Note: Use a subordinating conjunction such as when, as soon as, or now that. When in 1835 Joseph Powell introduced the idea of a separate county to the senate, they accepted the suggestion. 6. Make a complex sentence from the two simple sentences. Johnson County was named after Thomas Johnson. He was one of its oldest settlers in the county. Note: Use a subordinating conjunction such as since or because. Johnson County was named after Thomas Johnson because he was one of its oldest settlers in the county. Because he was one of its oldest settlers in the county, Johnson County was named after Thomas Johnson. 7. Make a complex sentence from the two simple sentences. The house of the late Thomas Johnson was used as the courthouse. One could be built. Note: Use a subordinating conjunction such as until, while or as. The house of the late Thomas Johnson was used as the courthouse until one would be built. Until one could be built, the house of the late Thomas Johnson was used as the courthouse 12 written practice items You will be given four sets of simple sentences to combine. You may combine them into compound or complex sentences; however, you must try using both methods. You must have at least one compound and one complex sentence. Turn these two simple sentences into a compound or complex sentence. 1. East Tennessee was historically a Republican area. Most men here sided with the Union. 2. Johnson County sent a company to unite with the 13th Tennessee Volunteer Cavalry. They fought for the Union. 3. There were no major battles fought in Johnson County. There were conflicts which resulted in some fighting. 4. The war was over. Many men were able to return home and settle their differences with their neighbors. 14 Multiple Choice 5. What is the best way to revise the following sentence? Taylorsville was renamed Mountain City; because it was in one of the highest valleys in Tennessee. a. Taylorsville was renamed Mountain City, because it was in one of the highest valleys in Tennessee. b. Because it was in one of the highest valleys in Tennessee Taylorsville was renamed Mountain City. c. Taylorsville was renamed Mountain City, so it was in one of the highest valleys in Tennessee. d. Taylorsville was renamed Mountain City because it was in one of the highest valleys in Tennessee. 6. What is the best way to combine the following sentence? Smith's Mill was renamed Butler. This was in honor of Roderick Random Butler. a. Smith's Mill was renamed Butler in honor of Roderick Random Butler. b. Smith's Mill was renamed Butler this was in honor of Roderick Random Butler. c. Smith's Mill was renamed Butler, and this was in honor of Roderick Random Butler. d. Because Smith's Mill was renamed Butler, it was to honor of Roderick Random Butler. 7. What is the best way to combine the following sentence? Flooding destroyed large portions of the railroad track in 1940. The track was not replaced and the railroad no longer traveled through the county. 1. Flooding destroyed large portions of the railroad track in 1940, so the track was not replaced and the railroad no longer traveled through the county. 2. Flooding destroyed large portions of the railroad track in 1940, but the track was not replaced and the railroad no longer traveled through the county. 3. After flooding destroyed large portions of the railroad track in 1940, the track was not replaced and the railroad no longer traveled through the county. 4. Because flooding destroyed large portions of the railroad track in 1940 the track was not replaced and the railroad no longer traveled through the county. 15 8. 9. 10. 16 11. 12. Day 10 - Methods to Correct a Run-on Sentence Graphic Organizers OR Review Rules from Flip Book Flap Book with Four Methods of Correcting Run-Ons Rule 6: When sentences are related they may be turned into a compound sentence by adding a comma and a coordinating conjunction. Rule 7: Short choppy sentences may be turned into complex sentences by turning one sentence into a phrase and adding a subordinating conjunction. Rule 8: You may join two complete sentences with a semicolon when you want to keep two closely related ideas in one sentence. Rule 9: You may join two sentences by using a semicolon with a transitional word and a comma. Easy Grammar page 629 - Sentence or Not a Sentence page 631, 633, & 635 Using Semicolons to Correct Run-ons page 637 & 639 - Using Semicolons and a word such as however, therefore, fortunately, unfortunately, or in fact 17 Day 11 PowerPoint – Lesson 4 - Methods to Correct a Run-on Sentence PowerPoint includes: Oral Practice Correct the run-on sentence using all four methods The Tennessee Valley Authority built Watauga Dam in the 1940’s the reason it was built was to control flooding. Two Sentences - The Tennessee Valley Authority built Watauga Dam in the 1940’s. The reason it was built was to control flooding. Compound Sentence - The Tennessee Valley Authority built Watauga Dam in the 1940’s, so they could control flooding. Semi-Colon - The Tennessee Valley Authority built Watauga Dam in the 1940’s; the reason it was built was to control flooding. Complex Sentence - Because they needed to control flooding, the Tennessee Valley Authority built Watauga Dam in the 1940’s. 7 written practice items 1. Correct using a semi-colon. The Butler Bridge was built in 1948 it won awards for its beauty. 2. Correct this run-on sentence by making a compound sentence. Five streams in Johnson County are stocked by the Tennessee Wildlife Resources Agency between March and June fishermen have about 230 stream miles to try their luck. 3. Correct this run-on sentence by making two sentences. Approximately twenty-six percent of the county lays in national forests the Cherokee National Forest provides 715 miles of hiking, horse, bicycle, motorcycle, and off-road vehicle trails. 4. Correct this run-on sentence by making a complex sentence. Mining took most of the trees in Johnson County people began turning to agriculture to earn a living. 18 5. 6. 7. TCAP Coach Lesson 11 (Sentences) 19