0 (Nothing) ORGANIZATION Only a few words or phrases are written, there is no beginning or end MECHANICS (Spelling, grammar, etc.) Writing is not comprehensible— little or no punctuation is used and nearly all words are misspelled WRITING RUBRIC (©D. Cook-Hirai, 2004) 2 3 (Some Evidence) (Evidence Somewhat Adequate) Student writes Student writes Student writes words/phrases sentences or sentences or which [paragraphs which paragraphs which demonstrate a introduce and introduce and beginning & some summarize the summarize the topic related concepts topic using a few transition words (first, next, then) Writing includes Writing includes Writing still includes some mechanics invented spelling, spelling errors, but (subject/verb but is now now demonstrates agreement), but demonstrates correct use of still demonstrates correct ending adjectives and little punctuation punctuation, capital adverbs descriptive and uses letters, and phrases, with invented spelling subject/verb appropriate middle agreement, etc. (commas, quotation marks) and ending punctuation 1 (Little Evidence) EVIDENCE (Content) Writing does not relate to assigned topic Writing addresses the content of the topic 2-3 times, but the writing mostly relates to something else Writing relates to the topic for at least ½ the composition with some references to details Writing relates to the topic most of the time and demonstrates knowledge of the topic with more detailed references SENTENCE STRUCTURE No complete sentences—only words or phrases Very few complete sentences Most sentences are complete, but very simple Almost all sentences are complete with some complex sentences used Vocabulary is mostly incomprehensible Vocabulary begins to relate to proper syntax and the topic Vocabulary is basic, some descriptive words are used and does relate to the topic and syntax Vocabulary is clear, but still simple, with some use of figurative language VOCABULARY 4 (Evidence Adequate) 5 (Proficient) Student writes sentences or paragraphs which introduce and summarize the topic with appropriate transitions Writing is nearly free of spelling errors, most grammar is correct with some, but few errors still evident—exhibits correct use of most parts of speech (prepositional phrases) and colons and semicolons Writing is coherent and knowledgeable and sticks to the topic, but there is room for more references and details Sentences are complete and vary in length and structure, active-passive voice used in appropriate structure Vocabulary is near grade level, with idioms, similes, metaphors and other figurative language used Student demonstrates clear sequencing and proficiency appropriate for their grade level state standards Writing demonstrates clear and concise knowledge of mechanics and makes few to no errors, according to state standards, including correct use of apostrophes Writing is clear, concise and uses appropriate details and references according to grade level standards Sentence and paragraph structure demonstrate grade level competency Vocabulary always relates to the syntax and is appropriate for grade level