Reflection, Critical Thinking, and the Liberal Arts Reflection is critical thinking. An unreflective thinker is the opposite of a critical thinker. When students engage in reflective writing, they are developing and practicing their critical thinking abilities at a level beyond the basic conventional critical thinking skills of logic, premises and conclusions, etc. and from an orientation more clearly in line with the goals of a liberal arts education. The goals of critical reflection are openness and insight, as well as realization that one's own perspective can and should be questioned, altered, and interpreted. Reflection is a deliberate and rigorous process of deep and, ideally, transformative learning. Through critical reflection, the writer examines how he constructs meaning and connects experiences with concepts. According to The Miniature Guide to Critical Thinking, a critical thinker * raises vital questions and problems, formulating them clearly and precisely; * gathers and assesses relevant information, using abstractions to interpret it effectively; * comes to well-reasoned conclusions and solutions, testing them against relevant criteria and standards; * thinks open-mindedly within alternative systems of thought, recognizing and assessing, as need be, their assumptions, implications, and practical consequences; and * communicates effectively with others in figuring out solutions to complex problems. 1 ('Solution' is not necessarily a final answer or recommendation; it may be a new perspective or even a new uncertainty). Reflective writing includes each of these elements of rigorous critical thinking, with an added emphasis on reconsidering preconceptions, exploring conflicts between competing values and concepts, and carefully considering the implications of various views for the writer’s actions. The set of critical thinking skills that students can learn by studying Browne and Keely can certainly be of use in the exploration of ideas, concepts and actions, but it is important to remember that 'argumentation' and 'critical thinking' are not synonymous. The set of skills covered in Asking the Right Questions can help students learn to read more effectively and to recognize and to analyze both the quality and the nature of their own and others' conclusions, assumptions, evidence, and reasonableness, but 'critical thinking' encompasses more than recognizing and using issues, conclusions, assumptions, premises, and so on. In Higher Education: A Critical Business, R. Barnett asserts that a focus on the 'logical' skills of conventionally defined critical thinking is not sufficient; education requires critical reflection, particularly in the liberal arts, where learning includes concepts and experiences that require more than simple 1 Paul, Richard, and Linda Elder. The Miniature Guide to Critical Thinking: Concepts and Tools. 2000 ver. Dilton Beach, CA: The Foundation for Critical Thinking. 1999. p. 1. 1 examination of 'lines of reasoning,' fallacies, and assumptions. 2 Hence the emphasis in reflective writing is on carefully exploring concepts and preconceptions in the light of experience (especially course texts) such that students are encouraged to work honestly and creatively through the implications of what they are learning rather than to argue positions reflexively. Some Ideas About How to Teach Reflective Writing Reflection is a process perhaps best described as analogous to the scientific method. In brief, reflection is approximated in the following model: / exploration to conjecture to analysis to re-examination/synthesis. In a reflective essay, a student explains his understanding of the subject of his reflection – based on his reading -- and explores his assumptions and preconceptions about the subject. This exploration (and the dissonances, questions, and so on that it uncovers) leads the writer to formulate a conjecture (a question, an inference, etc. about the subject of reflection) that lends itself to analysis, a close and thoughtful examination of the relationships among the ideas and the experiences under consideration. This analysis may also give rise to new questions and perceptions. Finally, in the synthesis/re-examination, the student discusses the broader insights, implications, and conclusions to which his reflection has led him. Explanation/ Exploration First, providing a clear explanation of the texts encountered is crucial to the process of critical reflection because students cannot reflect on what they have not understood. So the most basic consideration in teaching reflective writing is ensuring that students read critically – that they grasp the ideas and the relationships among the ideas in a text. Reflection also requires that the student engage in a careful exploration of her own preconceptions and assumptions. At this stage the student clarifies her own preconceptions about the topic and compares them with the ideas gleaned from the texts. This comparison ultimately leads to the conjectures that facilitate further reflection about the topic in the next stage. Scoggins, Jane and Richard Winter. “The Patchwork Text: A Coursework Format for Education as Critical Understanding.” Teaching in Higher Education 4 (1999): 485-500. 2 2 It is in explanation/ exploration phase of the reflection process that the student's personal experiences may be relevant, and specificity is appropriate as long as any anecdotes are offered as support. In other words, relating personal experience is not an end in itself but should function to illuminate or explain the student's thinking. What is important in teaching this stage of the process is guiding the student in connecting personal experience to the broader issue. Because students tend to get stuck in their narratives of personal experience, the challenges in this phase of the reflection process are helping students to articulate and focus on a conjecture and guiding students in establishing correct proportion and emphasis (between general and specific, etc.). The most effective and valuable way to teach these concepts is to have students revise drafts on which you have written comments and questions addressing these concerns. (Writing Sample 1) Conjecture Another key issue in teaching students reflective writing is to help them understand what a conjecture is and how it functions as part of the reflection process. When making a conjecture, a student is raising a question, proposing a path for expanded speculation, or laying out a supposition that he wants to explore in an open ended fashion. In other words, a conjecture raises a question or issue for exploration, rather than a position to be defended. Of course this does not prevent a student from forming a solution or argument in her synthesis, but solution and argument are not the primary goals of this endeavor. A strong conjecture is worthy of further analysis. Likewise, a challenging conjecture can help the student achieve greater depth and rigor as he reflects. A question or supposition that is too superficial will make it difficult for a student to do the necessary examination and synthesis that is essential to critical reflection. At the same time, a student’s struggle with focusing her conjecture can give an instructor insight on whether the student has understood the reading, has been seduced by tangential details, or has failed to see the relationship between broader concerns. At the most basic level, making a conjecture is akin to developing a thesis statement. It may be useful to remind students that their conjecture is not necessarily in the “prompt” provided by the PDP 150 instructor. Rather, their conjecture will be an independent idea they develop. In the reflective writing process, the conjecture announces the idea at the heart of the analysis and the synthesis. Analysis Although analysis appears in the model as a distinct phase of the reflection process, it may be interwoven with the preceding phase, just as it may be appropriate to combine the explanation and the exploration. Analysis, of course, involves breaking something down into its parts and examining not only each part but also the relationships among the parts. Thus, we can say that in articulating and illuminating his conjecture, the student is examining the parts, but he must carry the analysis further by exploring relationships. At this stage, then, reflection involves perceiving differences and similarities between one's preconceptions and the ideas encountered in reading as well as the questions, uncertainties, and new ideas which result from this co-mingling and juxtapositioning of thoughts and experiences. As students are learning how to reflect, you may find that you have to help them through this stage of the process by posing questions that suggest relationships and themes that they are not perceiving. 3 Again, students tend to get sidetracked by the specific and need help stepping back to see broader, more general concepts. Revision guided by your questions and comments is the best way to help students master analysis. Synthesis/ Re-examination The final stage in the process of reflection is synthesis/re-examination. Here the student considers the insights, implications, and conclusions arising from the review and analysis of his knowledge and experience. Ideally, this re-examination from a new (informed and analyzed) perspective casts new light on the thinker's former, current, and future knowledge. Students do not necessarily come to this stage intuitively, so the primary task is to work with students on moving beyond the immediate and the concrete. Again, leading questions are a useful device. Encourage students to move beyond simply restating their previous discussion and instead to treat the final stage as an opportunity to explore the implications or consequences of the conclusions they reached through the previous stages. The importance of drafting and revising cannot be emphasized enough. Students learn to write by writing, not by being told how to write. A couple of helpful suggestions to keep you from feeling overwhelmed by drafts are (1) to have students turn in preceding drafts with revisions so that you can quickly zero in on areas that should have been revised and can see immediately whether students have, in fact, made changes; and (2) to avoid trying to mark everything on every single draft. For instance, if an essay's basic ideas are so off-base or so sparsely supported that quite substantial content changes need to be made, it is a waste of your time to mark spelling and punctuation because those issues are not what you want the student to revise for and because the text in which those errors occur may not even appear in the revision. A Reflection on Reflective Writing Dr. J. Josefson When the PDP 150 Summer Committee met to redesign PDP150 around the theme of “reflective writing” we started by trying to figure out just what is reflective writing. To get us going Stacy Pauley gave us a folder of readings she pulled off the Web. It was as if she had Googled “reflective writing” and printed out the first 20 hits. I think Stacy’s idea was for us to read a lot about reflection so we could brainstorm our own definition, rather than just use someone else’s. This seemed like an awfully rigorous and inductive process to be suggested by an English professor, so I was suspicious, but I went along anyway. 3 I was drawn to two distinct ideas among the confusing array of information in the folder. First, I was drawn to the discussion of John Dewey, the famous American philosopher of pragmatism, since I’m a political philosopher myself. Dewey suggested that the process of reflection was analogous to the scientific method, with “the realization of the potential significance of an experience being carried forward from the questions generated 3 This paragraph is strictly introductory and (hopefully) a little humorous at Stacy’s expense. 4 from that experience to hypotheses, and then the testing of these”. 4 From this I took that a reflective essay should develop something like a scientific hypothesis that is then sort of tested through reflection on “evidence” such as texts encountered in a course and preconceived values and beliefs. The second idea that seemed important was that reflection was different from critical thinking and formulating arguments. As R. Barnett argued, ‘a focus on the logical skills of conventionally defined critical thinking is not sufficient; education requires critical reflection, particularly in the liberal arts, where learning includes concepts and experiences that require more than simple explanation of ‘lines of reasoning’, fallacies and assumptions”. 5 This seemed like an especially important insight since I had taught PDP150 with an emphasis on teaching students critical thinking and writing arguments for the past two years. Perhaps we’ve been doing it all wrong! 6 The possibility that we had been approaching things wrong had already occurred to me as I read PDP portfolios. PDP 150 was supposed to train students to write great portfolios, but the reflective essays that students wrote were usually pretty bad. Generally they only described in very general and vague terms the things students had done and then concluded with silly platitudes about how the students sure had grown a lot during their time at Bridgewater College. Two years ago when I first became involved in PDP, I joined others in trying to address this problem of banal description by encouraging students to “integrate” the four dimensions of PDP. The idea here was that if they were trying to create a seamless narrative about their development they would go beyond just reciting a laundry list of stuff they had done in each dimension. But that didn’t seem to help. Students who “integrated” the dimensions only muddied or ignored them, with the result that the essays were even more vague, embarrassingly personal, and anecdotal.7 So how was emphasizing reflection going to help? This seemed especially problematic to me because Dewey’s description of reflection as a something like hypothesis testing seemed like an effort to introduce an inappropriate level of pseudo scientific rigor to a process (personal development) that couldn’t be scientific. At the same time, Barnett’s idea seemed to suggest that reflection was incompatible with critical thinking. How could we introduce reflection into PDP 150, which had been organized around critical thinking and making arguments, without completely redesigning the whole course? 8 As I thought about it, however, I came to think that an emphasis on reflective writing could both improve PDP150 and PDP portfolios. Dewey didn’t mean for reflection to be synonymous with chemistry. Rather, I think he meant to mimic something of the systematic nature of scientific thinking, especially the simple process of developing questions, coming up with possible answers, and then seeing if any of the answers fit with the available evidence. Certainly this is what I want students to do in PDP 150. My biggest frustration has been to get students to understand texts and then relate them to their own values and situations. The “reflective method” gives students a framework to do just that. If students are led to develop hypotheses (or better, conjectures because conjectures Terry King, “Development of Student Skills in Reflective Writing”, p. 4. Scoggins and Winter, p. 2. See also, 6 This paragraph involves the Explanation stage of reflective writing. I spend most of the time explaining the texts I encountered. I also do some Exploration. 7 This paragraph is mostly Exploration, especially about my perceptions concerning the topic. 8 This paragraph sets out my Conjecture. My conjecture questions how reflective writing can work in PDP150 and train students to write better PDP reflective essays. 4 5 5 suggest a more reflective process) that they in turn evaluate by assessing the adequacy of texts and their own preconceived values and beliefs, then they will be doing exactly the kind of thinking that constitutes personal development.9 This kind of thinking also achieves Barnett’s goal of moving beyond critical thinking while at the same time preserving an important place for critical thinking. Certainly critical thinking skills are involved when students explain texts and evaluate the adequacy of the texts and their preconceptions in the light of each other. But reflection involves the added step of coming up with some sort of synthesis of texts and preconceptions such that students are led to consider the implications and applications of what they have learned. Rather than making an argument or supporting an opinion, this process demands that students work honestly, openly and creatively through what they have learned such that the process is an occasion for learning itself and not just a reflexive recitation of prejudices and platitudes. If we can teach students this process of reflection and reflective writing I think that the PDP program will be greatly improved. Before I thought we could get students to write better PDP essays by having them synthesize the four dimensions into one coherent story of personal development. Now I realize that that was the wrong kind of synthesis. We need to preserve the distinctiveness of the four dimensions because they encourage students to appreciate that being fully human requires involvement in an array of distinct endeavors. 10 The kind of synthesis we want students to develop is the kind of synthesis taught in reflective writing: a comparison of what the student has learned with what they thought before and an exploration of the implications for what they have learned for their future. If we can start getting students to develop this kind of synthesis in PDP150, we will truly have accomplished something.11 9 This paragraph and the following one are Analysis. Note how I reexamine the texts and my preconceptions in the light of one another. 10 In my article “Learning is Not Fun: Reflection on the Liberal Arts and Living Your Best Life” (www.bridgewater.edu/~jjosefso/josefson’slearningisnotfun.htm), I argue for this idea that human freedom has distinct dimensions and trace it to ancient Greek philosophy. 11 The previous two paragraphs include some syntheses, but this one is mainly synthesis. I draw the implication that reflective writing has changed my whole conception of what a PDP reflective essay should be and, therefore, how I’ll teach and grade them. 6