Main Idea and Supporting Details Judy Anderson – St. Louis Park Adapted for Middle School and High School TOPIC Premise: Subtopic/Details Subtopic/Details Subtopic/Details Subtopic/Details Main Idea and Supporting Details © mabarrett@rochester.k12.mn.us 1 TOPIC Pet Bird Care Premise: Pet birds die prematurely because owners are ignorant about how to care for birds. Diet = die of malnutrition Variety 50% Starches 25% Fruits & Vegies 25% protein IF a hookbill Cautions: o salt poisoning o too many sweets/fats o grit o feeding from mouth Social Life = need mental stim liveliest room several birds if small one bird if large o make part of family handle your bird Habitat = need friendly home cage long for flying perches of different sizes o no sandpaper o both vertical/horizontal wooden ladders chew toys clean water for bathing Health Care = hide illness take to vet immediately preventive care yearly checkups vet is member of AAV Main Idea & Supporting Details mabarrett@rochester.k12.mn.us 2 What your pet bird wishes you knew Julie Glass Good Housekeeping Americans own 31 million pet birds, and the number is on the rise. Yet veterinarians report that many would live longer, healthier lives if owners knew more. Unfortunately, pet stores do a poor job of educating people, says Irwin Ruderman, D.V.M., director of New York City’s Animal Clinic of Staten Island and an active member of the Association of Avian Veterinarians (AAV). Despite recent veterinary advances, too many birds die prematurely because owners Unlike dogs and cats, birds of exercise can put on should have table food. unhealthy excess weight. “Only half the diet should be starches,” Dr. grit you see sold in pet shops. Ruderman says, “and that In the wild, small stones includes seed, but you can ingested with food act like give birds pasta, potatoes, teeth in a bird’s digestive beans, peas, and corn. tract; this is important since Twenty-five percent or more they must gather food, should be fruits – raisins, swallow it quickly, and fly apples, pears, melon, you off to avoid predators. But name it – and vegetables, pet birds have the leisure to cooked or raw. Go for the munch, and studies show that darkest and brightest: kale, grit offers no benefits. beets, red peppers, squash.” What’s worse, some birds For hookbill birds – gorge on it and go on to parakeets, cockatiels, parrots, develop blockages that can be and lovebirds – the rest fatal. should be protein” meat, poultry, fish, eggs (all cooked), cheese, and yogurt. A few cautions Birds are susceptible to salt of complications resulting from malnutrition, says Dr. Ruderman. A diet of seed and water – what most caged birds get – is like bread and water to a person. Wild birds thrive on an enormous variety of foods – seeds, blossoms, fruits, insects – and your bird needs the same variety. Main Idea and Supporting Details © mabarrett@rochester.k12.mn.us SOCIAL LIFE Mental stimulation is crucial to a bird’s psychological don’t know the basics of care. DIET Many pet birds actually die And don’t buy the boxes of health. Birds do best when kept in the liveliest room of poisoning, so be sure all the house, close to the action. people snacks (pretzels, “In the wild, they do chips, peanuts) are unsalted everything together and or low-sodium. Never feed a they’re always busy – bird from your mouth, since foraging for food, building some of the benign germs we nests, raising their young, carry can wreak havoc on a grooming each other, bird’s system. Resist the showing off for the opposite temptation to overdo junk sex,” says Dr. Ruderman. food or sweets – especially since birds that don’t get a lot Consider buying several birds so they have one 3 another for company. But if sandpaper perch covers that drive a sick member away,” you buy a single bird, plan to stores sell. “A monstrosity,” Dr. Ruderman says. “So make it a member of the says Dr. Ruderman. “How schedule yearly checkups, to family. Parakeets, canaries, would you like to walk test for problems while and finches do particularly barefoot on gravel your they’re still treatable.” well in groups; large birds, whole life? And the covers which may become very loud rarely do what they claim – to member of the AAV – the with other birds around, do keep a bird’s toenails filed.” main source of continuing best as one-on-one Your vet can show you how education in the field. You companions to people. And to clip and file your bird’s might even ask if he or she do learn to handle your birds; nails and beak (which may keeps birds at home; should they require medical become overgrown) or, for a firsthand experience is a treatment, they’ll suffer less small fee, can do it for you. definite plus. trauma if they’re comfortable Be sure also to provide being held. wooden ladders and chew are finicky, high-maintenance toys; birds need and love to creatures, but in fact most are gnaw. hardy and adaptable, once HABITAT “No matter how small the bird, choose the largest cage you can, the most important dimension of which should be length,” says Dr. Ruderman. “People are charmed by tall pagoda Birds like an occasional Choose a vet who’s a It may sound as if birds you understand their needs. bath too. Offer a bowl of And the rewards of their clean water, or take your bird intelligent, affectionate, and into the shower with you. entertaining companionship Most birds love water – many are well worth the attention will sing and whistle as they to detail. bathe. cages, but birds need space to fly across.” While cages with vertical bars are fine for HEALTH CARE When you get a new bird, canaries and finches, take it to a vet within a few hookbills – who enjoy days. “Preventive care is climbing – should live in very important because birds cages with horizontal bars. are defensive animals. A sick Provide perches of 848 Words; 7.9 G.E. FleschKincaid bird hides symptoms for as varying thicknesses since long as possible; in the wild, birds need to exercise their any sign of illness attracts flexible feet – but forget the predators, so the flock will This article appeared in the June 1995 issue of Good Housekeeping on page 161 . Main Idea & Supporting Details mabarrett@rochester.k12.mn.us 4 Identifying Main Idea To identify the main idea in any reading assignment, you must learn to dissect each paragraph, identifying the main parts of each paragraph and the function of each part: 1. Topic sentence summarizes what the whole paragraph is about. 2. Supporting sentences include the specific details (FIRES) that provide elaboration on and support for the main idea. 3. Transitional statements move the author from one point to another. 4. Summary sentences restate or recap a general idea or concept. Identifying and understanding each part of a paragraph will help you to understand the main idea and remember the main idea longer. Main Idea and Supporting Details © mabarrett@rochester.k12.mn.us 5 Using 5 W's + H Identify the Topic Sentence 1. WHO? The paragraph focuses on a particular person or group of people. The topic sentence tells you who this is. 2. WHEN? The paragraph is primarily concerned with time. The topic sentence may even begin with the word “when.” 3. WHERE? The paragraph is oriented around a particular place or location. The topic sentence states where you are reading about. 4. WHY? A paragraph that states reasons for some belief or happening usually addresses this question. The topic sentence answers why something is true or why an event happened. 5. HOW? A paragraph that identifies the way something works or the means by which something is done. The topic sentence explains the how of what is described. Main Idea & Supporting Details mabarrett@rochester.k12.mn.us 6 IDENTIFYING THE TOPIC SENTENCE Page 2 WHAT You will notice that WHAT is NOT on the list. “What” is not included because it addresses such a broad range of possibilities that asking this question will not necessarily lead you to the topic sentence. TOPIC SENTENCE TEST The best test to determine whether you have identified the topic sentence is to rephrase this sentence as a question. If the paragraph answers the question that you’ve framed, you’ve found the topic sentence. Main Idea & Supporting Details mabarrett@rochester.k12.mn.us 7 IMPROVING COMPREHENSION R = Read the selection/ Listen to the lecture. A = Ask questions as you read P= • What's it about? (Topic/Table of Contents) • What is the author/lecturer saying about the topic? (MI/FIRES) Put the answer to the above questions in your own words Main Idea & Supporting Details mabarrett@rochester.k12.mn.us 8 MAIN IDEA + ELABORATION = TEXT F = Facts I = Incidents R = Reasons E – Examples/Evidence S = Statistics When you ask the 5 Ws + H questions, your answers are FIRES. Look for redundancy in the details. All the details should support the main idea. Main Idea & Supporting Details mabarrett@rochester.k12.mn.us 9 Topic Sentence Pyramid Japan: Typhoon Chris hit with full fury today on the central coast of Japan. Heavy rain from the storm flooded the area. High waves carried many homes into the sea. People now fear that the heavy rains will cause mud slides in the central part of the country. The number of people killed by the storm may climb past the 200 mark by Saturday. Dark green, leafy vegetables such as kale and spinach are good sources of vitamin C. Carrots, squash and sweet potatoes are good sources of carotene, which the body changes to vitamin A. Dark green, leafy vegetables also supply us with iron. All vegetables are good for us because they supply us with important vitamins and minerals that build cells and keep us healthy. Vitamin C, for example, helps to build strong teeth and helps us to resist infections. Vitamin A helps to keep skin healthy and protects our eyes. Iron, also an important part of vegetables, build red blood cells. Without enough iron, we would suffer from an illness called anemia. If the wind becomes gusty after a period of calm, you should seek shelter. The sky needs careful watching, too. Gradual darkening and "boiling" clouds should quicken your pace. Lightning and thunder are common enough storm indicators, but few people realize that the brightness of the lightning is not nearly as important as the number of lightning flashes. The signs of an oncoming storm are many, and a person's life may depend on the ability to interpret them. A paragraph will have a topic sentence 86% of the time, according to research published by the International Reading Association. Most often you will find the topic sentence as the first or second sentence of a paragraph, but the topic sentence may also appear in the middle or at the end of a paragraph. Main Idea and Supporting Details © mabarrett@rochester.k12.mn.us 10 Lifesaving tips about feeding your pet bird Dr. Marty Becker Knight Ridder Newspapers The most important thing you can do to keep your companion bird healthy and content is to feed it right. In fact, proper feeding takes priority over all other aspects of avian care. But the vast amount of nutritional information available to the pet bird owner today -- through the Internet, pet shops, commercial advertisements, or other bird owners -- can be conflicting, contradictory or even completely inaccurate. At the very least, it can be confusing, which makes it difficult to make the right decisions when it comes to your bird's health. For centuries, it has been traditional for people to feed seeds to wild birds at backyard feeders. So when birds started to become popular as pets, this seemed to be the logical food, right? Well, no, according to well-known avian veterinarian, Greg Harrison from Green Acres, Florida, who is board-certified in Avian Practice in both the United States and Europe. Harrison says a diet of seeds alone lacks up to 32 essential nutrients, leading to malnutrition in captive birds. And malnutrition is the leading cause of over 90% of health problems and death in pet birds. 90%! Malnutrition involves all of the systems of the body and is seen as: abnormalities in body weight and shape; unusual appearances of feathers, nails, beak and skin; undesirable behavior; and disturbances in the all the systems of the body. Nutritional deficiencies appear to accelerate the aging process of birds, primarily through the loss of moisture and tissue elasticity. Often the signs of malnutrition in pet birds go completely overlooked by the owner simply because they are not recognized as such. Healthy, properly fed birds will exhibit certain features. The ideal pet bird is beautiful and brightly colored with sleek-looking feathers. Healthy birds like to sing, play, talk and be active. They are also affectionate with family members. Main Idea and Supporting Details © mabarrett@rochester.k12.mn.us Signs of a Healthy Bird according to Harrison, author of the Avian Veterinary Compendium: The bird has a proper ratio of muscle, bone and fat. The beak is smooth and shiny without signs of peeling. The nares (nostrils) are clean and free of accumulations " The bird stands erect and alert on the perch. " The respiration is smooth and even with no sounds of wheezing. " The droppings are moist, the urine is clear and the urates are white. " The feathers fit together like a garment - there are no bald spots, no picked feathers, and no tattered, broken or abnormally colored feathers. " The feet grip the perch strongly and evenly. The bottoms of the feet show a definite pattern - they are not smooth; nor do they show pressure points. " The nails are the proper length. " The skin on the legs and face is glistening, smooth, and soft with no signs of flaking. " There is no sign of swelling or bleeding on the body. The bird is calm and does not bite, scream, or behave in an aggressive manner. "Avian veterinarians have known for years that a bird's diet cannot be improved by home cooking, offering table foods or adding supplements to a basic seed mixture (even if the seeds are "vitamin-fortified," colored or pressed into cakes). Commonly fed cereal grains like sunflower, millet, oats, safflower, and corn are deficient in the basic requirements necessary to keep pet birds healthy. The only alternative that actually reverses and corrects signs of malnutrition is a high quality extruded bird food that is specifically formulated for a parrot or parakeet. Although it is an effective bonding technique with family members, feeding the bird from the table is not a good idea. Birds should not be fed "people food" like meat, chicken bones, potato chips, pizza, pasta, chocolate or beans. Foods like these often contain excess fats, salt, caffeine, MSG, refined sugar and refined white flours. Behavioral problems may also be associated with the routine offering of these foods. 11 Fun shapes and fancy colored pellets are part an effective selling strategy used by some pet food companies to appeal to the pet owner, but it has been proven that these features don't mean much to the birds themselves. Because birds eat what they are taught to eat early in life, birds trained to eat colored kibbles and flavored pieces are at a disadvantage since most of these diets are made from milled white flours and other cereal by-products that are deficient in nutrients. According to Harrison, choosing a formulated diet made with organic ingredients has the added benefit of eliminating chemical pesticides and other additives that are potentially toxic to birds. But it does take some patience and a few techniques to get your bird to eat a formulated diet if it's accustomed to seeing only seeds in its food bowl. The following are some tips to try: "Schedule an appointment with your avian veterinarian to make sure your bird is healthy enough to undergo a diet change. " Monitor total food consumption carefully so the bird does not starve to death with the new food in the cage. " Weigh the bird periodically on a gram scale. " Start by mixing half familiar seeds and half the new formulated diet in the food bowl. Over time, gradually increase the proportion of the formulated diet. " Place a bowl of the new food near the highest perch. Most birds will eat from the highest bowl first. " Let your bird see another bird eating the nuggets ("birdie see, birdie do"). " Offer the new food at the same time that the bird is placed in a new cage or box Main Idea & Supporting Details mabarrett@rochester.k12.mn.us without toys or perches. " For budgies, try placing a mirror on the bottom of the cage and place the new food on the mirror. The budgie will try to get to the food before this "stranger" in the mirror. Before you know it, the bird is eating the food. " Pour a small amount of fruit juice over the formulated diet. If all else fails, you might want to board your bird at your veterinary clinic for the diet conversion. Most birds switch to a new diet quickly when removed from the "comfort" of home. This also removes stress from owners who are nervous about trying to do it themselves. Feeding a high quality formulated diet and maintaining an ongoing relationship with an avian veterinarian will help ensure a long and healthy life for your bird. An online list of avian veterinarians in your area can be found at www.aav.org or to find out more information about the bird food most vets feed their own birds, contact www.harrisonbirdfoods.com. 1091 Words; 9.0 G.E. Flesch-Kincaid This article appeared in the Rochester Post Bulletin on Friday, September 10, 2004, on page 4D. 12