Contributor: C. Yarnoff, The Writing Program, csy771@northwestern.edu Posted: 2011 Comments: The freshman assessment group—a WCAS ad hoc committee—is using this rubric to assess how well the freshman seminar program meets its goal of improving student writing. You may also find it a useful example of a method by which to evaluate your students' writing. Freshman Seminar Writing Rubric 2010-2011 Criteria Argument / purpose Strong Proficient Clearly articulates a controlling Clearly articulates a idea that reflects sophisticated controlling idea that reflects critical thinking. Weaves that some critical thinking. idea throughout entire paper with Presents controlling idea a compelling discussion of clearly throughout the paper concepts. with a good discussion of concepts. Strongly supports controlling Uses evidence to support idea with evidence; analyzes and controlling idea; explains Development explains evidence critically and evidence effectively; thoughtfully; clearly anticipates anticipates most questions questions and counter-arguments and counter-arguments Marginal Articulates a controlling idea but one that reflects little critical thinking. Controlling idea is implied throughout the paper but reader may sometimes have to intuit it in the discussion. Provides some evidence to support controlling idea, but may not explain evidence effectively; may do little to address questions and counter arguments Introduction presents the Introduction and conclusion Introduction and conclusion controlling idea in an interesting, clearly state the controlling do not fully explore the idea and make an effort to implications of the Organization compelling way); conclusion provokes readers to continue present it in an interesting controlling idea; ideas may thinking about the controlling way. Ideas proceed seem to jump about or have idea. Ideas proceed logically and logically, and each paragraph weak topic sentences. persuasively, with clearly has a topic sentence. Unacceptable Controlling idea is not present or is incoherent, and it is largely derivative. Explanations may be overly simple or rambling, or may show little grasp of key concepts. Evidence used minimally, or not at all, to support controlling idea; does not anticipate questions and counter-arguments Introduction and conclusion do not clearly state the controlling idea. Topic sentences are nonexistent or do not fit ideas. articulated topic sentences that move readers smoothly from idea to idea. Writing style/ Sentences and paragraphs flow smoothly and are wellmechanics structured. Demonstrates sophisticated understanding of grammar, syntax, and diction. Sentences and paragraphs hang together well. Indicates good grasp of grammar, syntax, and diction. Sentences and paragraphs Sentences and paragraphs lack may seem choppy or rough cohesion and structure. Writing in parts, but some structure is is riddled with problems related apparent. Occasional to grammar, syntax and diction. problems with grammar, syntax, and diction.