Informational Writing Stage Domain 1 Domain 2 Domain 3 Domain 4 Ideas Organization Style Conventions (counts double) 1 Does not engage reader Does not establish a context & develop reader interest No controlling idea Appropriate facts & details lacking Includes extraneous details and inappropriate information No evidence of organizing strategy Unclear sequence of ideas Lacks introduction or conclusion Lack of or incorrect transitions Insufficient writing to determine competence in organization No attention to audience Lack of sentence variety Writer’s voice is not apparent Word choice is inaccurate, imprecise or confusing Language/tone are flat Insufficient length to determine style 2 Minimal engagement of reader Some establishment of context & development of reader interest Minimal development of a controlling idea Minimal facts & details Has some extraneous details & inappropriate information Simple or repetitive word choice Limited awareness of audience Little variation in sentence length & structure Minimal or inconsistent voice Language & tone are uneven Insufficient length to determine competence in style 3 Sufficient engagement of reader Establishes a context & develops reader interest Sufficient development of controlling idea that conveys perspective on a subject Appropriate facts & details included Extraneous details & inappropriate information is minimal Consistent engagement of reader Well-established context & development of reader interest Controlling idea that consistently conveys a perspective on a subject Excludes extraneous details & inappropriate information Organizing strategy is not complete or inappropriate Minimal evidence of sequencing May lack effective introduction or conclusion Unrelated ideas are grouped together Limited or repetitive transitions Insufficient length to determine organizational competence Overall strategy is generally appropriate to the genre Clear sequence of ideas Appropriate introduction and clear conclusion Related ideas are generally grouped together Transitions link parts of the writing Language & tone are generally appropriate & consistent Awareness of audience is demonstrated in some parts Writer’s voice is clear & discernable Some variety in sentence length & structure Some engaging word choices Correct simple sentences Other sentences have occasional errors Generally correct usage & mechanics with some errors Few errors interfere with meaning Overall strategy is appropriate to the genre Logical sequencing of ideas across parts of the writing Introduction sets the stage & conclusion ends the writing without repetition Varied transitions Overall strategy is appropriate to the genre Logical & appropriate sequencing of ideas throughout the writing Logical grouping of ideas Varied & effective transitional elements Introduction engages & sets the stage; conclusion provides a sense of closure Language & tone are appropriate & consistent Word choice is precise/engaging Attention to audience throughout the writing Consistent voice Variety in sentence length & structure Varied, precise, & engaging word choice Sustained attention to audience Consistent & appropriate voice Variety of sentence lengths, structures & beginnings Carefully crafted phrases or sentences that engage the reader Figurative or technical language may be used for effect Correct simple, complex, and/or compound sentences with correct end punctuation Mostly correct mechanics & usage, but not in ALL elements Errors do not interfere with meaning 4 5 Full engagement of reader Fully established context & development of reader interest Fully developed controlling idea that conveys a perspective on a subject Fully appropriate facts & details Excludes extraneous details & inappropriate information End punctuation incorrect/missing Frequent fragments, run-ons, & incorrect sentences Frequent & severe errors in usage & mechanics Errors interfere with meaning Insufficient length to determine competence Sentence structure is awkward End punctuation missing or incorrect Frequent errors in usage and/or mechanics Minimal control of conventions Errors may interfere with meaning Clear & correct simple, complex, & compound sentences with correct end punctuation Correct usage & mechanics in a variety of contexts Errors do not inteerfre with meaning