Campus de Botucatu June 23, 2008 To Robin Cassady-Cain Assistant Editor The BioMed Central Editorial Team – BMC Urology Dear Editor, We would like to thank the editors and the reviewers for their constructive criticisms regarding our manuscript, entitled “DNA methylation patterns in bladder cancer and washing cell sediments: a perspective for tumor recurrence detection”, by Priscilla Davidson Negraes et al. According your suggestions, we alter the manuscript and included additional information. We append each point the reviewers made and our responses. We have indicated the page and line number in which changes or additional information has been included in the modified text of the revised manuscript. All authors have read and approved the revised version of this manuscript. We look forward to hearing from you concerning the suitability of the revised manuscript for publication. Sincerely, Cláudia Aparecida Rainho, PhD Department of Genetics, Biosciences Institute Sao Paulo State University – UNESP Botucatu – São Paulo – Brasil rainho@ibb.unesp.br Instituto de Biociências – Departamento de Genética Distrito de Rubião Júnior s/n CEP 18618-000 Botucatu SP Brasil Tel 14 3811 6229/6016 fax 14 3815 3131 genetica@ibb.unesp.br Campus de Botucatu POINT-BY-POINT RESPONSES REVIEWER 1: Jörg Ellinger Major Compulsory Revisions The authors used a conventional MSP (RASSF1A, RAR-beta and SFN) and a nested PCR (CDH1) approach to detected hypermethylation at the sites of interest. The analysis were performed as reported by others before, but I’m missing internal controls for the PCRs. Especially in case of SFN and CDH1, which were methylated in most cancerous samples but also most normal tissue samples, the use of an internal control is obligatory. The authors should perform additional experiments to prove that their assay is specific (i.e. PCR analysis of universal methylated DNA [either commercially available or by treatment of WBC DNA with SssI methylase] and universal unmethylated DNA (either WBC DNA, or much better: unmethylated DNA created by whole genome amplification as previously published by Umetani et al. 2005). In our laboratory, we use Sss-I treated genomic DNA, frozen in aliquots, as a constant reference sample for methylated DNA. Details of our protocol were published previously (Caldeira et al., BMC Cancer, 2006, Mar 2;6:48). This information was included in Methods section, page 9, lines 4-9, in the revised version of our manuscript. We agree that the inclusion of the universal unmethylated DNA control in our MSP assays is very important, specially because CDH1 and SFN genes are already methylated in normal blood cells (Lombaerts et al., Infiltrating leukocytes confound the detection of Ecadherin promoter methylation in tumors. Biochem Biophys Res Commun 2004, 319:697704 and Bhatia et al. The tumor suppressor gene 14-3-3 sigma – SFN - is commonly methylated in normal and malignant lymphoid cells. Cancer Epidemiol Biomarkers Prev. 2003; 12:165-9). As suggested, we have performed preliminary tests with whole amplificated DNA by GenomiPhi DNA Amplification Kit (GE Healthcare) with the same primer set used in CDH1 and SFN MSP analysis. After whole amplification of as little as 100pg of peripheral blood DNA from volunteers, followed by bisulfite treatment of 2µg of amplified DNA, we have detected just the unmethylated amplicon after MSP analysis. However, whole genomic amplification of 10ng of starting peripheral blood DNA was enough to the co-amplification of methylated alleles with specific primers for methylated template. Based on these results, we believe that the MSP protocols used are very specific and sensitive. Instituto de Biociências – Departamento de Genética Distrito de Rubião Júnior s/n CEP 18618-000 Botucatu SP Brasil Tel 14 3811 6229/6016 fax 14 3815 3131 genetica@ibb.unesp.br Campus de Botucatu The Results section is somewhat confusing. A revision is strongly required to make the results become more understandable. I.e.: - Subheadings to emphasize analysis of tissue and exfoliated cells. This suggestion was accepted and included along of results section. - I expect that a figure listing the methylation pattern of the samples in detail would be enormously helpful. This figure could also display the methylation pattern during follow-up visits. And tissue and exfoliated cell analysis could be parallelized. This suggestion was accepted and we included a box in figure 2D showing the MSP analysis of RARB and RASSF1A genes in matched TCC tissue and exfoliated cells as well as the results of cytological evaluation of these exfoliated cells. - Table 3: what about conventional urine cytology findings or lymph node involvement; is there any correlation? Table 3 details the MSP analysis of RASSF1A and RARB genes in a group of 49 fresh bladder tumors. Unfortunately, lymph node involvement was not evaluated at the present study because this information was just available for a small number of cases. This group of samples was collected prospectively and the post-surgical monitoring by cytology analysis was not available. - Table 4: I’m not sure whether the authors compared cancer tissue biopsies with exfoliated cell analysis of healthy controls?! Yes, cancer tissue biopsies were compared with exfoliated cells from the control group (washouts from patients without bladder tumor). We changed the title of Table 4 to make this information more clear. Minor Essential Revisions - Statistics: specify the software packages We included this information on page 10, lanes 6-8. Instituto de Biociências – Departamento de Genética Distrito de Rubião Júnior s/n CEP 18618-000 Botucatu SP Brasil Tel 14 3811 6229/6016 fax 14 3815 3131 genetica@ibb.unesp.br Campus de Botucatu - Recently, a multigene methylation analysis in urine sediments of patients with published (Yu et al. 2007); this study reports specificity of 100% and a sensitivity of 82% (but in a different set of analysed genes), and should be discussed in the context of the present manuscript. The results of Yu et al. (2007) were included in discussion section, page 17, lines 18-20. Interestingly, the cluster of reported methylation markers used in the U.S. bladder cancers is distinctly different from that identified in this study, suggesting a possible epigenetic disparity between the American and Chinese cases. These findings could not be directly compared to our data, at a first moment, just because of the fact that we analyzed a very smaller set of genes (4), restricting our possibilities of analysis. Just RASSF1A gene was in common on both studies, and its hypermethylation was observed either for the control group of Yu et al. evaluation. Instituto de Biociências – Departamento de Genética Distrito de Rubião Júnior s/n CEP 18618-000 Botucatu SP Brasil Tel 14 3811 6229/6016 fax 14 3815 3131 genetica@ibb.unesp.br Campus de Botucatu REVIEWER 2: Carmen Marsit Major Compulsory Revisions The tables are supplied as supplementary materials, but are critical to the paper, and should be part of the main document. Tables are part of the manuscript, they are at the end of the document just because of the structure asked for the magazine submission. Why was a nested approach used for CDH1, but not for the other genes? Might this explain the finding that all non-malignant samples were positive, as the sensitivity of this nested approach may be far too high? To achieve a much more sensitive MSP approach, in this study we used a nested-PCR assay for the detection of CDH1 gene hypermethylation, similar to the conditions proposed by Corn et al. (Clin Cancer Res 2001; 7:2765-9). This approach could explain, at least in part, the higher frequencies of DNA methylation detected in the present samples. However, it can’t be used as a single explanation for the finding that all non-malignant samples were positive because a similar result was observed for SFN gene, where a nested PCR was not used. Our results were based on a qualitative analysis (presence or absence of PCR product) detected after electrophoresis of amplified products on polyacrylamide gels and silver staining. These detection conditions are more sensitive than the process of electrophoresis on agarose gels and ethidium bromide staining commonly used by others authors. Furthermore, differences in the bisulfite modification protocols, especially the use of urea which improves the efficiency of cytosine conversion (Paulin et al., Nucleic Acids Res 1998; 26:5009-10) could contribute to the high frequencies detected. In addition to these experimental considerations, DNA methylation alterations may occur early in tumor formation or in subpopulations of cells (normal or tumoral) in a given sample. Thus, genomic DNA from tumoral tissues usually consists of a pool of molecules that may also display methylation heterogeneity. Instituto de Biociências – Departamento de Genética Distrito de Rubião Júnior s/n CEP 18618-000 Botucatu SP Brasil Tel 14 3811 6229/6016 fax 14 3815 3131 genetica@ibb.unesp.br Campus de Botucatu What is the overall sensitivity of the assays themselves? For example, what percent of methylated substrate in a background of unmethylated substrate is detectable using the primers and conditions described? If the assays are not being performed quantitatively, it is important to in some way justify the assay sensitivity. Some authors have described that conventional MSP analysis has the sensitivity to detect methylated DNA molecules when they comprise as little as 5% of the total complex DNA sample or one methylated allele in the presence of 1000-2000 unmethylated alleles. Figure 1 is really not a very useful figure. First, it does not demonstrate any controls, and in fact, there is no description of the use of positive or negative controls in the methods section. Was a fully methylated control not used as a positive? How about for a negative, beyond a no template control? The lack of these controls can also explain the findings, and must be done. This issue has been discussed above, as questioned by the first reviewer. Table 3 is very difficult to interpret. First, using U and M is confusing, as it can mean either methylation negative vs. positive, respectively, or unmethylated and methylated bands (related to the PCR primers). If it is the latter, some samples, I would bet, had both U and M bands (in fact, probably most, if not all methylated samples showed both bands) so the interpretation is really difficult. We agree that the use of U and M is confusing. Table 3 was completely reviewed and we made some modifications in it. Just to elucidate, U and M were used to show methylation negative vs. methylation positive, respectively. I appreciate the calculation of an OR, but it would be more helpful is this was used as a multivariate analysis (i.e. which of all of the demographics or clinical factors are truly associated with methylation controlled for confounders). Maybe that is what these ORs represent, but that is unclear. In Table 3 we had done a multiple analysis. Considering the parameters evaluated, those that could contribute with a confounder effect (age and sex) did not exhibited it, since its OR value were not significant. Hence, the factors investigated were truly associated with methylation as presented bellow: Instituto de Biociências – Departamento de Genética Distrito de Rubião Júnior s/n CEP 18618-000 Botucatu SP Brasil Tel 14 3811 6229/6016 fax 14 3815 3131 genetica@ibb.unesp.br Campus de Botucatu Analysis of confounders’ effect (age and sex) on parameters that truly are associated with methylation. Age Variable < 60 years 60 years Non-papillary 4 11 Papillary 5 28 Low 3 18 High 6 21 Noninvasive 5 25 Invasive 14 4 Absence 6 19 Presence 3 20 Sex p value(1) F M 3 13 6 27 3 18 6 22 5 25 4 15 5 21 4 19 p value(1) Growth pattern 0.432 1.000 Differentiation grade 0.712 0.714 Muscle invasion 0.711 0.720 Recorrência 0.466 1.000 (1) Fisher Exact test (α = 0.05). Their presentation in the table is also unclear: what is the referent group? The referent group was given in accordance with each parameter as follow: - age: < 60 years - sex: female - growth pattern: non-papillary - differentiation grade: low - muscle invasion: noninvasive - recurrence after the surgery: presence Instituto de Biociências – Departamento de Genética Distrito de Rubião Júnior s/n CEP 18618-000 Botucatu SP Brasil Tel 14 3811 6229/6016 fax 14 3815 3131 genetica@ibb.unesp.br Campus de Botucatu Also, how was grade and stage dichotomized, as these are not clinically dichotomous measures? Grade and stage were dichotomized in low and high, noninvasive and invasive, respectively, because it is according to what was proposed by Epstein et al. (1998), who dichotomized these measures in an effort to develop a universally acceptable classification system for bladder neoplasia that could be used effectively by pathologists, urologists, and oncologists. This classification is resulted of a consensus statement (Epstein JI, Amin MB, Reuter VR, Mostofi FK: The World Health Organization/International Society of Urological Pathology Consensus Classification of Urothelial (Transitional Cell) Neoplasms of the Urinary Bladder. Bladder Consensus Conference Committee. Am J Surg Path 1998, 22:1435-1448.), as described on page 7, line 19. In table 4, what do the ORs represent? It is unclear how those are calculated. Does the OR of 0.29 for RASSF1A mean that having RASSF1A methylation is protective for bladder cancer? The odds ratio (OR) is a way of comparing whether the odds of a certain event is the same for two groups. An odds ratio of 1 implies that the event is equally likely in both groups. An odds ratio greater than one implies that the event is more likely in the first (referent) group. An odds ratio less than one implies that the event is less likely in the first (referent) group. Answering the question: an OR of 0.29 for RASSF1A implies that hypermethylation of RASSF1A is less likely to occur in bladder cancer. However, it’s important to say that hypermethylation of RARB is much more related to the development of tumor rather than it’s presence for RASSF1A. Table 5 is also problematic. In looking at the tumors, are the authors trying to say that methylation of RASSF1A in a tumor will only predict a tumor with 83% sensitivity and 50% specificity? That is not an appropriate comparison, as it is known that not all tumors will be methylated for each of these genes. Maybe if a panel was used, that would be more appropriate. According to Table 5, in our study, methylation of RARB in a tumor sample is able to detect (not predict) the tumor presence with 83% sensitivity and 50% specificity. We agree that the use of a panel of genes is more appropriate and we will abide this suggestion in next studies. Instituto de Biociências – Departamento de Genética Distrito de Rubião Júnior s/n CEP 18618-000 Botucatu SP Brasil Tel 14 3811 6229/6016 fax 14 3815 3131 genetica@ibb.unesp.br Campus de Botucatu In the discussion, this data does not prove anything towards the “seeds of methylation” hypothesis, as the authors in no way have examined the density of methylation in the normal tissue compared to the tumor counterpart. If anything, they have demonstrated that there is a field of epigenetic alteration in histologically normal bladder. We agree with this suggestion and we changed the manuscript (Discussion section, page 14, lines 23-25. Also, the discussion on aging is inappropriate, as they have in no way examined this issue in their study. We mentioned about aging because the mean age of the patients in our study was 67.85 years, which could be corroborative with what was proposed by Bornman et al. (2001) for the hypermethylation observed in normal tissues of elderly man (CDH1 gene). Instituto de Biociências – Departamento de Genética Distrito de Rubião Júnior s/n CEP 18618-000 Botucatu SP Brasil Tel 14 3811 6229/6016 fax 14 3815 3131 genetica@ibb.unesp.br Campus de Botucatu REVIEWER 3: Sandra Mazzoli Reviewer's report: The Authors discuss widely and in complete way the DNA methilation patterns in bladder cancer and washing cell sediments, with the aim to find possible new recurrence markers. Molecular biology techniques applied to detection of DNA of differentially methylated genes should be included in follow up of bladder cancer; this paper stress the importance to include new recurrence markers in patients management. The discussion can be shortened, but substantially the paper is complete and innovative. Discretionary revision. Instituto de Biociências – Departamento de Genética Distrito de Rubião Júnior s/n CEP 18618-000 Botucatu SP Brasil Tel 14 3811 6229/6016 fax 14 3815 3131 genetica@ibb.unesp.br