What is Metadiscourse? Telling the Reader about Your Text—and about Your Attitudes English is considered to be a “writer-responsible” language (Hinds, 1986). This means that you are responsible for leading the reader through the text you have written and for telling the reader about your responses to what you are discussing. If you can use appropriate metadiscourse, you will be able to read well and write good expository prose. How do writers employ metadiscourse? There are many ways. Using related vocabulary, paragraphing, and including text headings are a few. Other general examples are listed below: 1. Framing metadiscourse: Language referring to major sections of a paper, including: Phrases or sentences that tell you what is going to happen in the text. They might be something like the following at the beginning of a paper: o This essay is organized in the following way: o The purposes of this research report are to discuss the methodology employed, present the results, and discuss the results in light of current theories. o And, in the middle of a text: Why do we think this? Does this mean that we don’t go into space? (Rhetorical questions answered in the paragraphs that follow.) Phrases or sentences that refer to what has already happened in the text and what will come next. Here are possibilities: o So far, I have discussed Chua’s major claim. Now, I will turn to… o The first part of this paper was devoted to Farmer’s early life. The second part will focus on his accomplishments. o A third argument relates to… o The most obvious objection to this is…. o One result of this is… Words, phrases, or sentences that mark the conclusion of a paper or section: o In conclusion (or in summary), it is important to note that… o To sum up this section, I will…. o Finally, it should be argued that… o Therefore, it can be concluded that… 2. Focusing metadiscourse: Language that shows the writer’s main ideas or principal claim(s): My point here is that… What I am claiming is… So this helps me to conclude that… This is, in fact, my principal argument: The most important idea here is that… 3. Connecting metadiscourse; Words that connect information or arguments that have been presented to what will appear later. Often these occur within sentences, within paragraphs, or as paragraphs begin: Words or phrases that tell the reader that something related will be added to what has been written: in addition, and, also… Words or phrases that tell the reader that there will be a change or contrast presented: but, yet, however, nevertheless, on the other hand, another way of looking at this, instead, alternatively… Words or phrases that show a cause/effect relationship: as a result, so, consequently, thus… Words or phrases that tell the reader that an example of what has been discussed will follow: for example, for instance; to understand this, you need to look at… Words or phrases that indicate time discussed: today, in the past, meanwhile, at the same time, there was a time when… 4. Explaining metadiscourse: Words or phrases that further explain an idea or concept: This means that…, in other words, namely, in fact… 5. Attitudinal metadiscourse: Language that helps the reader to understand how the writer feels about the topic being discussed: Hedges: Words or phrases that show the writer may be uncertain about what is being presented: o Perhaps this means that we should be more careful… o This finding might indicate… o It is possible that this argument is… Emphatics: Words or phrases that show that the writer is certain about something: o It is clear that the experts were wrong. o I am certain that this is not the case. o I agree that this is important. o Of course, we all know that… Directionals: Words or phrases that ask the reader to do something: o Imagine having AIDS in a Third World country. o Consider how much has been spent on foreign assistance. Note: Attitudinal metadiscourse will help you to understand a writer’s ethos. These are a few of the more general ways that writers lead readers through texts and help them to understand the writer’s stance on an issue. However, much metadiscourse is unique to a writer or a specific text. If you look closely, you will see that good writers of expository prose are always leading readers through their texts using their own techniques and language, approaches that help you to chart, summarize, and find the central claims. Can you identify writers’ techniques in your readings? Metadiscourse - Examples Signaling a topic - the metadiscourse, or language about language, that announces what the paper will be about and what it will do. Metadiscourse can be used both to announce the overall project or purpose of the paper and to announce its argument. Metadiscourse also provides signposts along the way, guiding the reader to what will come next and showing how that is connected to what has come before. Examples from professional articles: "In this essay, I examine in some detail what we mean by . . . My primary purpose, however, is to create a new, shared discourse for understanding X." "I want to explore a connection between X & Y . . ., but as I will suggest. . ." "My essay moves from an analysis of this problem to case studies of [people] wrestling with it. My argument is this: . . . . Such inquiry must start, as I will here, by confronting the conflicts within . . ." "In what follows, I hope to complicate X by demonstrating the social potential of both Y and Z. I contend that. . . . I show how these attitudes emerge not only in response to A but to B." "The following discussion sets out an analysis and an illustration. The analysis identifies how several claims cohere. . . . The illustration offers a formulation of what X could be today." Student work on Chua: students can also use metadiscourse to describe their writing projects. For example: This paper further investigates Chua’s argument by using additional sources about globalization in order to clarify both the problem and implications that she describes. I begin with a brief description Amy Chua’s project and what it asks readers to consider. I then move to a discussion of additional resources that make her work more understandable. To bring Chua’s argument about the “explosive collision” of these forces into sharper focus, I explore two additional sources. The first extends Chua’s argument, and the second complicates it by showing another way to look at problems that emerge with globalization. Additional examples of metadiscourse in our course texts: Chua, 113 The argument I am making is frequently misunderstood. I do not propose a universal theory. . . . The point, rather, is this: Kaldor, 270 In this essay, I shall distinguish between the different types of armed forces that are emerging in the post-Col War world. . . Scott, 522 I shall use the term public transcript as a shorthand way of describing the open interaction between subordinates and those who dominate. Scott, 531 Now that the basic idea of public and hidden transcripts has been introduced, I will venture a few observations by way of orienting the subsequent discussion. Ehrenreich, 196 But the real question is not how well I did at work but how well I did at life in general, which includes eating and having a place to stay. The fact that these are two separate questions needs to be underscored right away. Ehrenreich, 204 But the resistance of employers only raises a second and ultimately more intractable question: Why isn’t this resistance met by more effective counterpressure from the workers themselves? Eq/fall 05