Name: ______________________________ MUKWONAGO AREA SCHOOL DISTRICT WRITING ASSESSMENT 6-TRAIT ANALYTIC SCORING GUIDE IDEAS (The Message) ______ Level 4 – purposeful, informative, structured, focused, meaningful, relevant, accurate; may provide insight ______ Level 3 – excellent possibilities; general support of ideas; reasonably clear ______ Level 2 – common support or description; topic too big or narrow; repetition of similar ideas; a list ______ Level 1 – random thoughts; confusing; hard to paraphrase; length not adequate for development; repetitious ORGANIZATION (Structure) ______ Level 4 – holds together; clear transitions; logical; sense of resolution; inviting introduction; satisfying conclusion ______ Level 3 – sequential; usually easy to follow; some transitions apparent; recognizable introduction and conclusion ______ Level 2 – lacks clear sequencing; recognizable beginning or ending; some details may stray from topic ______ Level 1 – confusing or illogical; hard to understand main point; no introduction or real conclusion VOICE (Personality) ______Level 4 – engaging, passionate; individual style shines through; shows commitment to topic ______Level 3 – caring, pleasant, personable; some ideas may surprise or move the reader ______Level 2 – lacks consistent engagement or point of view; some interest in topic and audience; no risk-taking ______Level 1 – indifferent; lacks point of view; bland, lifeless; no sense of audience; humdrum WORD CHOICE (Vocabulary) ______ Level 4 – vivid, precise word choice; powerful verbs; specific nouns and modifiers ______ Level 3 – clear language used correctly; some words may add flavor; words not repetitively used ______ Level 2 – limited vocabulary; overuse of clichés or repetitive words; looks like the first words that popped into mind ______ Level 1 – nonspecific, unimaginative, or distracting words; incorrect usage. SENTENCE FLUENCY (Rhythm and Flow) ______ Level 4 – delightful to read aloud; smooth connections; varied sentence lengths/structures; varied sentence beginnings ______ Level 3 – gets job done with some sentence variety; sentences usually constructed correctly ______ Level 2 – choppy; no sentence variety; repetitive transitions or lack of transitions; endless connectives ______ Level 1 – awkward phrasing; difficult to read aloud; sentences begin with same word(s); reader must track back to get meaning CONVENTIONS (Mechanical Correctness) ______ Level 4 – spelling mostly correct; paragraphing reinforces structure of organization; punctuation and capitalization correct and guide reader through text ______ Level 3 – some editing would be required for publication; spelling usually correct/reasonably phonetic on common words; paragraphing attempted; grammar and usage do not distract from or distort the meaning ______ Level 2 – frequent spelling errors; some paragraphing attempted; capitalization and punctuation sometimes missing or incorrect; noticeable errors in grammar and usage ______ Level 1 – numerous and distracting errors that affect meaning; spelling errors even on high frequency/common words; paragraphing is illogical or missing; punctuation often missing or incorrect; line-by-line editing needed OVERALL HOLISTIC SCORE: ______________________ June 11, 2007