Weekly Plan. National Literacy Strategy Teaching Objectives Name of Text: Robin Hood text types Prior Learning Identify features of different genres of fiction texts. Comment on performances, discussing effects and how they are achieved. Plan, tell and write complete stories with a clear sequence of events and showing how one event leads to another. Organise texts into paragraphs. Unit: Narrative Unit 2 Myths and Legends. Year Group: 5 Term: 1 part 1 Learning outcomes For Phase 1: Children demonstrate that they can classify features of different fiction genres. Children can describe similarities and differences between different versions of the same story and support their opinions by referring to evidence in the text. Children can compose and manipulate sentences for different audiences and purposes. Learning outcomes For Phase 2: Children can identify different features of legends. Children demonstrate that they can identify and comment on narrative viewpoints. Children can compose and manipulate more complex sentences within a given context. Learning outcomes For Phase 3: Children can make simple notes. Children can retell a legend orally, using their own notes to support them. Children demonstrate use of techniques to engage and interest their audience when retelling a legend orally. Week Beg: 3/09/07 1998 Framework Objectives: Year 5, Term 2: T1 features of myths, legends, fables; T2 different versions of stories; T3 oral and written storytelling; T8 author and narrator; T9 fiction genres; T11 own versions of myths, etc.; T13 review and edit writing; T14 notes for storytelling. Learning outcomes For Phase 4: Children can reflect on their own performances. Children can write a new version of a legend, identifying their audience and adapting their writing to suit this audience. Children can reflect critically on their own writing and edit and improve it. Overall Unit Target: T 11: To write own version of legend using structures and themes identified in reading leading towards storytelling their version. (Using PowerPoint or tape or video to record) Success Criteria: Knows features of legends Can identify different narrative viewpoints and use in their writing. Can identify different character perspectives and use in their writing. Can identify differences between oral & written language Can be consistent in use of verb tense and subject Can construct sentences in a variety of ways. Understands and uses figurative and literal language Layered Writing Target (differentiation) Must: be consistent with tense and subject Should: write about action from differing character perspectives Could: Use notes of story outline to orally retell their story. [T22: To write a non-linear explanation text of castle attack/defence (using PowerPoint where possible) focusing on clarity, conciseness and impersonal style] T = Teacher. D:\116103232.doc Speaking, Listening, Group work, Drama Focus 29. Speaking To choose and prepare stories for performance, identifying appropriate expression, tone, volume and use of voices and other sounds. Tell a story using notes designed to cue techniques, such as repetition, recap and humour. Listening and responding Identify different question types and evaluate their impact on the audience Drama Reflect on how working in role helps to explore complex issues Perform a scripted scene making use of dramatic conventions OA = Other adult. I = Independent. Weekly Plan. National Literacy Strategy Teaching Objectives Name of Text: Robin Hood text types Phase 1 Phase 2 Phase 3 Unit: Narrative Unit 2 Myths and Legends. Year Group: 5 Term: 1 part 1 Week Beg: Read and analyse features of the text-type. Make comparisons between different versions of the same legend. GFW: Year 5 units 28 and 35 Children continue familiarisation with the text-type. Discuss and investigate the effect of different techniques used by the author. Work in a group to explore and empathise with characters through drama activities. Children use a reading journal to record inferences and demonstrate understanding of characters by writing in the first person. GFW: Year 5 unit 34 Make comparisons between oral and written narratives. The teacher demonstrates effective note-taking techniques. Children make notes on visual and oral performances before working in small groups to prepare and present an oral retelling of the legend of Robin Hood for an audio or digital video file. Phase 4 Children evaluate their oral performances against agreed success criteria. The teacher demonstrates how to write a legend, transferring oral storytelling skills into writing. Children work collaboratively to write the legend, exploring how to transfer the visual and oral text to a written narrative. Spelling Objectives and Sentence Level Objectives Spelling Bank Week 1:- Spell words containing unstressed vowels Familiarisation with the text-type; reading comprehension (3 days) Phase 2: Reading analysis of the legend of Robin Hood; capturing ideas and writing in role (6-7 days) Phase 3: Comparison of oral and written narratives and analysis of their key features; retelling known legend orally using appropriate techniques to engage the audience (5 days) Phase 4: Evaluation of oral performances; transfer of skills learned during oral performance to support writing with clear authorial voice; collaborative writing of the legend for a tourist leaflet (5 days) Week 3:- Adapt sentence construction to different texttypes, purposes and readers Week 4:- Punctuate sentences accurately, including using speech marks and apostrophes Week 2:- Know and use less common prefixes and suffixes such as im-, ir-, -cian Week 3:- Group and classify words according to their spelling patterns and their meanings Week 4:- Revision of all Spellings. T = Teacher. D:\116103232.doc OA = Other adult. I = Independent. 3/09/07 Weekly Plan. National Literacy Strategy Teaching Objectives Name of Text: Robin Hood text types Unit: Narrative Unit 2 Myths and Legends. Year Group: 5 Phase 1 Objectives Whole Class shared reading and writing. Whole Class – phonics, spelling, vocab. and grammar. SEN Mon. INSET INSET INSET INSET INSET SEN (TA Support) Share write questions to ask the curator at Nottingham Castle. AA Tues. T16 to prepare for reading by identifying what they already know and what they need to find out IWB Pg 1 Hide and Reveal Castle Discuss with the children how the castle might have looked in the past. Talk to the children about the castle and link it into their previous knowledge. Have any of the children been to Nottingham castle before? 20 questions game listening for links in meaning between pupils. Use the Robin Hood PowerPoint to support the children. Wed. T 1 Know and classify features of legends T11 Identify themes and structures of legends within reading - legend order and structure Read story of Robin IWB pgs 5-10 Discuss features of legends Begin building class list. Get the children to share write with the teacher everything they can think of to make a really good legend. Get them to think of the different features their story, or the story they are reading, must have in order to make it work. S1- Reordering sentences to make questions. The children are given statements and they are to make the statements into questions. Use the IWB and flipchart to record their responses. Teacher modelling using IWB Pg 3&4. Spell words containing unstressed vowels. Select a group of words that contain unstressed vowels and write them on the board or flip chart. Ask the children to work out what the words have in common and why people might have difficulty in spelling these words. Ask for suggestions as to how the spellings of such words could be memorised, e.g. exaggerated pronunciation where words are broken down into syllables – diff-er-ence; thinking of the root word, e.g. differ + the suffix ence use of mnemonics, e.g. ‘pet on the carpet’, ‘Al is in hospital’. Use spelling poster. S2 – Agreement of tense and subject, nouns and verbs IWB Pg 12-13. Get the children to look at the different tenses and explain the correct and incorrect tense and why. GFW: Year 5 unit 28 Move the words around, first within the noun phrase, and then around the verb. Establish which can be moved whilst retaining the same meaning and which cannot. Repeat with other sentences in order to construct a general hypothesis. T = Teacher. D:\116103232.doc Term: 1 part 1 Week Beg: 3/09/07 Independent Group Tasks. The children to be given pictorial support and they are to read back the question and think of some answers they might get via hot seating. SEN (TA Support) The children order the pictures. They are to share write a sentence to go with each of the pictures. MA (Teacher Support) Children formulate own questions based on KWL chart IWB pg 3 using pictures of castle and nonfiction texts/internet. Children formulate own questions based on KWL chart IWB pg 3 using pictures of castle and nonfiction texts/internet. The children write a letter asking the curator of Nottingham Castle questions that they would like to be answered. These to be sent off. The children write a letter asking the curator of Nottingham Castle questions that they would like to be asked. The children are to be given letter support frame. AA MA (Teacher Support) Reorder story into correct order on own whiteboards. IWB pg11 Babble Gabble* (twice – once for detail then for skeleton outline) Begin to prepare notes for own retelling. Reorder story into correct order on own whiteboards. IWB pg11 Babble Gabble* (twice – once for detail then for skeleton outline) Begin to prepare notes for own retelling. OA = Other adult. I = Independent. Plenary. BA Children to write on the KWL chart. The children to write four sentences about what they do know. They are to write four questions on what they would like to find out. Demonstrat e how the KWL chart will help us develop our thirst for learning and help us ask relevant questions. BA Children are to reorder the story using the pictures. They are to order the text underneath the picture to understand the correct linkages. Have the pictures on the IWB get the children to reorder these and show how this can help our writing. Discuss what we have learned so far. Evaluation Weekly Plan. National Literacy Strategy Teaching Objectives Name of Text: Robin Hood text types Thur T11 Identify themes and structures of legends within reading To be able to plan own legend from reading completed during the week. Fri. T11 Identify themes and structures of legends within reading. Unit: Narrative Unit 2 Myths and Legends. With the children go through the story of Robin Hood so far. Look in detail at the different suspense ideas used and how this has influenced the reader. On the flip chart make a list of different suspense elements that make the story really exciting. Make sure the children pick up the different descriptive elements. Use the skeleton framework for planning a short sequence. The children are going to re-plan the story that they have been reading this week. Remind the children that they are to use the features of good text type in their legends from the ones studied. Share write on the board sentences for the children to improve, and state how we could use this in our planning. Go through the planning grid and explain each planning stage. Re read story IWB pg5-10 Model highlighting sentence construction. S8 – construct sentences in different ways. Discuss with the children the different sentence types and how they go together to produce a quality piece of work. Explain to the children how they can improve sentence structure. IWB pg 14,15 & 16 Look at the response sandwich display and get the children to think about how they could comment on others work. Extended Writing Objectives To write own versions of legends, myths and fables, using structures and themes identified in reading (T2 T11) To make notes of a story as preparation for oral storytelling (T2 T 14) GFW: Year 5 unit 35 Collect and classify (page 156). Use the GFW unit. Year Group: 5 Less able to share write using a story board and pictures. They are to write what could happen under each picture. Term: 1 part 1 Week Beg: Demonstrate good planning by a child and show hoe we can all emulate this. The children to use the planning grid and the pictures to support them with the plan of the story that they will write. Remind them that it is a Legend. SEN (TA Support) The children to discuss key sentences and why they think that sentence is good/bad for suspense. Verbal feedback and shared writing responses. The children to use the planning grid and the pictures to support them with the plan of the story that they will write. Children given picture to support with their writing. AA MA (Teacher Support) Model highlighting suspense and good story features. Use pg 5-10 Response partners find examples from the text of other features. Create class list. (This will be used later as success criteria) Text mark the reading texts we have looked at so far. Use the PowerPoint from the Disk. Share plan with adult support and picture clues. BA Highlight the key phrases in the text given. Get the children to say why they think that particular text is a good piece of suspense writing. Activity Group 1 Group 2 Group 3 The children are to re-write the story they have been shared reading in the class from their planning. We are to focus on the sentence structure in order to develop sentence writing abilities ready for the final phase. Children use their planning to write a story based on the work we have been reading in class. Children use their planning to write a story based on the work we have been reading in class. Children use their planning to write a story based on the work we have been reading in class. T = Teacher. Evaluation They use the picture sequences to assist with their writing. SEN: Share write. D:\116103232.doc 3/09/07 OA = Other adult. I = Independent. Discuss how we can improve our own understanding of the work so far. Explain this to the children. Weekly Plan. National Literacy Strategy Teaching Objectives Name of Text: Robin Hood text types Unit: Narrative Unit 2 Myths and Legends. Year Group: 5 Term: 1 part 1 Week Beg: 3/09/07 Phase 2 Objectives Whole Class shared reading and writing. Whole Class – phonics, spelling, vocab. and grammar. SEN (TA Support) AA MA (Teacher Support) BA Mon. Day 1 7. Explore how writers use language for comic and dramatic effects Make class collections of ‘shun’ words. Categorise them according to word ending (see lists below). Develop and draw out patterns leading to general rules determining spelling pattern (see Notes below). The children watch the Jousting video. In response partners get the children to discuss what action words help describe the scene. In groups of 4 the children write some action sentences in order to describe what they have seen and heard. The children share plan and continue independently. The children map out a graph using the tension framework. At each point the children state what the knight is doing and why they are feeling this way. The children map out a graph using the tension framework. At each point the children state what the knight is doing and why they are feeling this way. The children share plan and continue independently. AA The children write a description of the Knights coming together in an awesome battle of jousting. MA (Teacher Support) The children write a description of the Knights coming together in an awesome battle of jousting. They are to describe the feelings, sights and sounds. AA They are to describe the feelings, sights and sounds. MA The children are to use the Laptops to research about castles and how they were designed and built. They are to write a paragraph in their Literacy books about what they have found. Short notes and sentences. The children are to use the Laptops to research about castles and how they were designed and built. They are to write a paragraph in their Literacy books about what they have found. Short notes and sentences. T13 review and edit writing; Give a base word and ask children to write the correct ‘shun’ suffix, e.g. educate, magic. Alternatively, use a ‘shun’ fan for children to flash in response. Tues. Day 2 Wed. Day 3 T16 to prepare for reading by identifying what they already know and what they need to find out. Make notes on and use evidence from across a text to explain events or ideas. Children complete their own KWL grid (what I know, what I want to find out, what I have learned). Children create a vocabulary bank for the text-type. Use the IWB file to collect ideas and notes and to act as a working wall for reference and support as the sequence progresses. Explain that weaker writers tend to write in simple and some compound sentences with a limited range of conjunctions within, and connectives between, sentences. Remind the children that varied sentences occur when a conjunction is introduced, so it is helpful to draw the children’s attention to the range of conjunctions available, e.g. after, although, as, as if, as long as, as though, because, before, if, in case, once, since, than, that, though, till, until, unless, when(ever), where(ever), whereas, while, and pronouns, e.g. who, which, what, whose, where, when, why, how. Show the children the picture from the PP on Robin Hood. Explain to the children that they will be writing a descriptive paragraph about the clashing of the two knights from the start. E.g. He sat upon his horse, his breath echoing from inside the tin hat for a face plate that he was wearing. The horse between his legs shuddered with anticipation… Help the children plan the writing that they will be doing using a feeling graph. Remind the children of the understanding gained of the text-type by exploration of the writer's techniques to develop suspense. Working in pairs, children investigate the features of the text-type, referring to the written text for evidence. Use the IWB file ('Year 5 F legend RH') to collect, annotate and discuss findings. Use picture segments to help with the feelings graph. The children put the pictures at different points on the graph. SEN (TA Support) The children share write and continue independently. With the children use a feelings graph to write their description of the jousting battle. Use this to link into the children’s ideas of the Robin Hood story. Show the children how we note take. Highlight key elements from different websites on the Internet. Show the children how to search and how we can make notes on what we have researched. Look at the importance of brief notes and diagrams. Explain that this will help us write out own legend later. T = Teacher. D:\116103232.doc SEN (TA Support) With the children research on the Internet and look at key features of castles. Show how we note take. OA = Other adult. Picture time line. I = Independent. Use picture segments to help with the feelings graph. The children put the pictures at different points on the graph. BA The children write a description of the Knights coming together in an awesome battle of jousting. They are to describe the feelings, sights and sounds. Give the children picture support. BA (Teacher Support) With the children research on the Internet and look at key features of castles. Show how we note take. Plenary. Look at different examples of the graph. What makes a really useful one for our writing? Read a good example out to the children. Explain to the children how this can be read use two different voices. Look at the sentences and structure used. Show the class a completed compiled set of notes for them to use. Explain to the children why these notes are good. Show some poor notes explain why these are not so good. Both sets to have been created by the teacher. Evaluation Weekly Plan. National Literacy Strategy Teaching Objectives Name of Text: Robin Hood text types Thur Day 4 Fri. Day 5 Unit: Narrative Unit 2 Myths and Legends. T11 Identify themes and structures of legends within reading With the children show them the PP of the different characters. Share write the feelings for Maid Marion. Show the children how we can use this to plan a characterisation. To be able to plan own legend from reading completed during the week. With the children look at Robin Hood. Hot seat the children and interview them as to how they think Robin was like. T11 Identify themes and structures of legends within reading. Re-Read the Robin Hood legend and text mark the complex sentences and how they are used to make the text even more exciting. Explain to the children how this works to improve the overall text types. Hot seat the children to see how the characters are feeling at different points of the story. Look at the different perspectives of each of the characters and note mark this on the shared work PP. Extended Writing Objectives To write own versions of legends, myths and fables, using structures and themes identified in reading (T2 T11)) Use the character framework to plan the Character of Robin Hood. Remind the children how to plan a character correctly, looking at personality, appearance, movements. Year Group: 5 Share plan a description of the sheriff using a story board plan. Explain to the children that they will be writing a characterization on the Sheriff. Look at the children responses from the work covered so far. Get the children to discuss what they have learned so far. KWL grid to be filled in. Show the children the feedback sheet and get them to look at each others extended writing. SEN (Teacher Support) Teacher Assisted. Term: Week Beg: The children use the character sheet to plan the character of the Sheriff. The children use the character sheet to plan the character of the Sheriff. They are to use their response partners to discuss this in their book. They are to use their response partners to discuss this in their book. Children are to be given pictures of the Sheriff for support. MA (Teacher Support) AA Develop the ability to write clear individual sentences from work completed. 1 part 1 The children swap their books with their response partners and edit, comment and review work completed so far. The children swap their books with their response partners and edit, comment and review work completed so far. The children are to write descriptive phrases with support linked to the Sheriff. They are to use different picture to help support their writing. TA Supported The children edit and discuss work looking at how they could improve their character descriptions. Group 1 Group 2 Group 3 With the children share write a character description of Robin Hood and use the planning from the Literacy hour. Remind the children how to write complex and simple sentences and how these go together to make a detailed description. The children write a detailed description of the Sheriff from their planning. The children write a detailed description of the Sheriff from their planning. TA Supported: The children write a detailed description of the Sheriff from their planning. Evaluation SEN: Using picture clues and role play. D:\116103232.doc OA = Other adult. I = Independent. Read out some good examples of the characterisation s the children have written. Explain why this is a good piece of work. BA Activity T = Teacher. 3/09/07 Discuss why this process is useful. Get the children to reflect what they have learned so far. Weekly Plan. National Literacy Strategy Teaching Objectives Name of Text: Robin Hood text types Unit: Narrative Unit 2 Myths and Legends. Year Group: 5 Term: 1 part 1 Week Beg: 3/09/07 Phase 3 Objectives Whole Class shared reading and writing. Whole Class – phonics, spelling, vocab. and grammar. SEN (TA Support) AA (Groups of 4) MA (Teacher Support) BA (Groups of 4) Mon. Day 1 7. Explore how writers use language for comic and dramatic effects Listen to the audio of the storyteller. Do not show the visual text at this point. With the children collect the different responses and decide what and how the story teller was able to convey the story to us. To investigate, collect and classify spelling patterns in pluralisation, construct rules for regular spellings, e.g. add s to most words; add es to most words ending in s, sh, ch; when y is preceded by a consonant, change to ies; when y is preceded by a vowel, add s. T13 review and edit writing; With the children look at how we can adapt sentence construction to different text-types, purposes and readers. How did the story teller manage this? The children need to make sure they are able to follow the correct spelling conventions linked to the New Framework. The children look at retelling the various elements of the story to the teacher. Get the children to make sure they sequence the story correctly. They are to use picture sequence cards. The children are to work in their response partners and retell the story verbally. They are then to change and their partner takes over from where they left off. Get the children to focus on intonation and speech clarity. The children are to work in their response partners and retell the story verbally. They are then to change and their partner takes over from where they left off. Get the children to focus on intonation and speech clarity. The children are to work in their response partners and retell the story verbally. They are then to change and their partner takes over from where they left off. Get the children to focus on intonation and speech clarity. SEN (TA Support) The children use the Identikit to link in with other areas of the story and how different characters are feeling that way at different times. AA MA (Teacher Support) BA While re-watching the video, children make notes on the storyteller's craft and use of visual techniques: facial expression, tone, intonation, body language, camera angle, visual effects. While re-watching the video, children make notes on the storyteller's craft and use of visual techniques: facial expression, tone, intonation, body language, camera angle, visual effects The children are given picture clues and are to write one thing the story teller has done to make that image come across through words. SEN (TA Support) The children to share write notes about the story to make sure it is sequenced correctly. AA MA The children write notes and plan how they are going to retell the story verbally using PowerPoint to assist them in the retelling. The children write notes and plan how they are going to retell the story verbally using PowerPoint to assist them in the retelling. BA (Teacher Support) The children use picture clues to help them retell the story using verbal links found from knowledge. The children to write notes on their work. Tues. Day 2 T16 to prepare for reading by identifying what they already know and what they need to find out. Listen again to the audio of the storyteller and, while listening, demonstrate how to make notes on the IWB. Focus on the oral techniques employed by the storyteller to engage the listener rather than the content. Explore with children the effectiveness of the notes. How can we use these to help improve our writing? Wed. Day 3 Make notes on and use evidence from across a text to explain events or ideas. In small groups, children return to their old notes and highlight techniques they wish to use as storytellers during their oral performance. Collect and share techniques needed to retell the story effectively and together agree success criteria for the task. Read the written transcript of the narrative to children with limited intonation and expression. In pairs, ask children to consider the effectiveness of teacher's performance and suggest improvements based on the techniques noted in the previous session. Watch the video clip, allowing children to both see the storyteller and hear the story. Ask: What does seeing the storyteller (visual text) add to your understanding of the narrative? Discuss preferences and differences between storytelling and reading a story. Use the IWB to record children's responses. Explain that children are going to write notes to support their oral retelling of the legend of Robin Hood. Explain to the children how they are going to do this. T = Teacher. D:\116103232.doc OA = Other adult. I = Independent. Plenary. Each group presents their story to the rest of the class and are graded on the way they tell the story. Discuss and note these by annotating a screen capture of the storyteller using IWB software. Reflect on what makes good noted from work already completed in the weeks so far. How can we use these? Evaluation Weekly Plan. National Literacy Strategy Teaching Objectives Name of Text: Robin Hood text types Thur Day 4 29. Speaking To choose and prepare stories for performance, identifying appropriate expression, tone, volume and use of voices and other sounds. Tell a story using notes designed to cue techniques, such as repetition, recap and humour. Fri. Day 5 Evaluate our own performances. Unit: Narrative Unit 2 Myths and Legends. Guided and independent writing: children write notes to support their oral performance of the legend of Robin Hood. Explain to the children that they will record the different groups' retelling of the legend using microphones, digital sound recorders or video cameras so that they can be reviewed and evaluated. The children listen to a variety of recordings and evaluate the recordings. Ask the children to state how they could improve their recordings. Explain to the children it is important to make sure the readings are exciting and good for the children to listen to. Use an IWB to project examples of children's oral retellings and use tools (pause, annotation and screen capture) to involve children in discussion and evaluation of the effectiveness of their storytelling against the success criteria. Extended Writing Explain to the children the importance of notes and how they can be used to help use tell a story. Show the children how to record their stories using Pod Casting techniques and get them to record their stories. With the children make a list of criteria that makes a good storytelling. Explain to the children that they need to think carefully about the checklist as this also helps to make their writing more exciting. Year Group: 5 Term: 1 part 1 Week Beg: SEN: The children are to record themselves using a video camera. AA: The children are to record their stories using the Laptops and or the computers in the ICT suite. The children to record the whole story. MA: The children are to record their stories using the Laptops and or the computers in the ICT suite. The children to record the whole story. BA: Teacher help the children record their stories using the computers. SEN (TA Support) SEN: The children fill in the KWL grid shared writing. AA MA (Teacher Support) Write a paragraph in their Literacy Books to explain how they could improve on their verbal stories. BA Write a paragraph in their Literacy Books to explain how they could improve on their verbal stories. Write sentence linked with improving their work. Ask the children to look at how this will improve their writing skills. Objectives Activity Group 1 Group 2 Group 3 To be able to create a PowerPoint linked to the verbal retelling of the story. The children use the PowerPoint software to create a set of slides that help to retell the story we have been focussing on. The children use the laptops to produce a PowerPoint of the story looked at. The children use the laptops to produce a PowerPoint of the story looked at. The children use the prepared slide to help them put together a story using the PowerPoint software. Evaluation Prepare the slides for the children to put sentences in and make sure each slide has a picture to help the BA and SEN. T = Teacher. 3/09/07 D:\116103232.doc OA = Other adult. I = Independent. Extra time for the children to compete the research. Get the children to read what they have found out. Selected children play their story and discuss how they could improve it. Weekly Plan. National Literacy Strategy Teaching Objectives Name of Text: Robin Hood text types Unit: Narrative Unit 2 Myths and Legends. Year Group: 5 Term: 1 part 1 Week Beg: 3/09/07 Phase 4 Objectives Whole Class shared reading and writing. Whole Class – phonics, spelling, vocab. and grammar. SEN (TA Support) AA MA (Teacher Support) BA Mon. Day 1 7. Explore how writers use language for comic and dramatic effects Punctuate sentences accurately, including using speech marks and apostrophes. With the children revise the different spelling patterns looked at throughout the week. Ask the children ways we can spell words we are unsure of. Get the children to understand how we could use this knowledge to improve our spelling throughout the whole of this weeks writing and evaluating work. Look at the three spelling bank units and assess the children’s knowledge. The children use the legend pictures to plan the story on a graph so they put all the evidence on the grids. Plot the structure of their own legend in a planning format familiar to children, use the ICT program to support this, for example flow charts, concept maps, storyboard templates. Plot the structure of their own legend in a planning format familiar to children, use the ICT program to support this, for example flow charts, concept maps, storyboard templates. The children use the legend pictures to plan the story on a graph so they put all the evidence on the grids. SEN (TA Support) The children plan the whole story of Robin Hood. AA MA (Teacher Support) The children plan the whole story of Robin Hood. BA Give the children planning grid. Give the children planning grid with picture clues. AA MA The children write the setting and introduction of the story using their planning framework. The children write the setting and introduction of the story using their planning framework. BA (Teacher Support) With support of pictures and teacher the children write their settings and introduction. T13 review and edit writing; With the children show them how to punctuate the sentences correctly. Look at all the work we have carried out over the last four weeks. Explain to the children that they need to be careful with their punctuation. Make sure the children put some examples on the flipchart. Set up the writing task by explaining the audience and purpose. Children will develop a written version of the legend, using the techniques developed through oral storytelling for the castle's tourist leaflet. Tues. Day 2 T2 different versions of stories; T3 oral and written storytelling; T8 author and narrator Demonstration writing and teacher scribing: play back one of children's recorded legends and demonstrate how children's notes and performance can be used to support the writing of a narrative version of the legend by writing the opening to the legend. Exemplify the differences between oral and written language, for example replacing the oral techniques with written techniques. Wed. Day 3 T2 different versions of stories; T3 oral and written storytelling; T8 author and narrator Use opportunities during the writing process to demonstrate and to guide children with their writing, meeting the needs of children in the class. Emphasise appropriate sentence structure and punctuation, and reinforce use of language for effect. At appropriate times use response partners to support re-drafting and editing of writing. Use an IWB to project examples of children's writing for discussion and modelling of editing and improving writing linked to the agreed success criteria and children's needs. With the children, identify the success criteria for the writing task. Link to children's writing targets and sentence and word objectives. Shared and collaborative writing: children write their own legends based on another group's oral version of the legend, transferring oral storytelling techniques to writing. Use the saved IWB files, working walls and storytelling notes to support the writing process. Show the children how to plan using the grid from the setting, introduction, build-up, conflict, main-event and resolution. Demonstrate the correct use of punctuation. Show the children how to use speech marks correctly. Remind them that speech is an aid to move the story forward and not to spoil the story. Give examples of both good speech mark use and poor speech mark use. The children plan the whole story of Robin Hood. Give the children planning grid with picture clues. Share plan. SEN (TA Support) With support of pictures and teacher the children write their settings and introduction. Explain the differences illicit children’s ideas due to this. T = Teacher. D:\116103232.doc The children plan the whole story of Robin Hood. OA = Other adult. I = Independent. Plenary. Show a good quality graph completed by the teacher and explain why this is a good graph. Response partners evaluate each others work to make improvement s in mixed ability groups. Response partners evaluate each others work to make improvement s in mixed ability groups. Evaluation Weekly Plan. National Literacy Strategy Teaching Objectives Name of Text: Robin Hood text types Thur Day 4 T2 different versions of stories; T3 oral and written storytelling; T8 author and narrator Unit: Narrative Unit 2 Myths and Legends. Explain to the children how to use different strategies in order to help them edit their work as they are writing. Look at ways to build up spellings in syllabic parts. Sound out with children (A). Use IWB to demonstrate (V). Remind the children of the checklist and ask them of the best way to use this to analyse our own work and others. Show the children how to write complex sentences and include them in their work. Fri. Day 5 W2 – I can identify misspelt words in my own writing; and to keep individual lists in spelling logs. Discuss with the children the completed draft of the teacher’s story. This needs to be created and written before the final day. Explain to the children how this can be improved and go through noting the adverbs and changing according to work covered. I can discuss how to improve my work using my reading as evidence. Extended Writing Scan a piece of work into the computer. Allow the children to read through the piece of work and suggest ways to improve it. Use the checklist to mark the work. Say to the children that this is how all pieces of work are assessed and it is important to make sure their purpose and organisation is accurate, Explain to the children how to use the checklist and tell them that they will be using the same one to help their partners to improve their work. Year Group: 5 The children use their planning to share write the next stage of the story. The children write the Buildup. SEN (Teacher Support) The children look at completed sentences and how they could improve their work. To write own versions of legends, myths and fables, using structures and themes identified in reading (T2 T11)) 1 part 1 Week Beg: 3/09/07 The children write the Buildup. The children write the Buildup. They use their planning grids and notes collected. The children use picture clues to assist with their work. AA MA (Teacher Support) BA The children use the feedback sheet and work with their response partner to improve and critically develop their writing. They are to improve their work accordingly. The children use the feedback sheet and work with their response partner to improve and critically develop their writing. They are to improve their work accordingly. The children use the feedback sheet and work with their response partner to improve and critically develop their writing. They are to improve their work accordingly. In response partners the children help each other in supporting their work. Focus on punctuation and sentence structure. With the children re-write the piece of work onto a flip chart using the checklist to assist. Explain they need to check for punctuation as they write. Using an enlarged copy of one child’s writing from yesterday, together as a class highlight the strengths of this piece of writing and areas for the child to work on in relation to the objectives set. Involve the child concerned and the class’s views. Model how it could be improved. Use the tick list idea and the feedback sheet in their extended writing books. Demonstrate the spelling log and how we could use this to write down words which we spelt wrongly and then work out how we could remember how to spell them correctly next time. Objectives Term: Differentiated feedback sheet. Activity Group 1 Group 2 Group 3 The children write the conflict and resolution. They are to read through their work and add together the improvements that they could make. The children write the conflict and resolution to the story and work on evaluating each others work. Focus on writing paragraphs and link it in to the work completed on verbal stories. The children write the conflict and resolution to the story and work on evaluating each others work. Focus on writing paragraphs and link it in to the work completed on verbal stories. BA: The children write the conflict and resolution to their story. T = Teacher. D:\116103232.doc OA = Other adult. Evaluation SEN: The children write the conflict and resolution to their stories and share write. I = Independent. The teacher is to read examples of completed storied to the class to show final versions of the story.