Author Biography Rubric Organization Sentence Fluency Word Choice 4 •each paragraph has a topic sentence •each paragraph has at least five sentences •each detail sentence supports the topic sentence •no run-on sentences or fragments •words and phrases flow through the piece •variety of sentence length •variety of sentence structure 3 •most paragraphs have topic sentences •most paragraphs contain at least five sentences •most detail sentences support the topic sentence •the piece is mostly free of run-on sentences and fragments •Although the sentences lack variety or creativity, most of them are grammatically correct. Some of them are smooth, while others are choppy and awkward. •some variation of sentence length •some variation of sentence structure • The piece contains strong • Many ordinary verbs are verbs that bring it alive. used, and more “action • The writer stretched by words” are needed. using the perfect words • The writer hasn’t come up and phrases to convey with extraordinary ways to ideas. say ordinary things. • The best words and • This piece should be phrases are used, not just revised by replacing its 2 • some paragraphs have topic sentences •some paragraphs contain at least five sentences •some detail sentences support the topic sentence •the piece is mostly free of run-on sentences and fragments • Although the sentences lack variety or creativity, most of them are grammatically correct. Some sentences are smooth, but most are choppy and awkward •some variation of sentence length •some variation of sentence structure • Very few strong verbs are used. • The writer hasn’t come up with extraordinary ways to say ordinary things. • Extensive revision is needed to replace weak words and phrases with 1 •few or no paragraphs have topic sentences •few or no paragraphs contain at least five sentences •few or no detail sentences support the topic sentence •the piece is full of run-on sentences and fragments •words and phrases are awkward, choppy, and begin similarly •sentences are all around the same length •only simple sentences are used • The verbs used are not strong. • Bland words and phrases are used throughout—or the same words and phrases over and over. • The words and phrases used are not working; they Conventions Ideas the first ones that came to mind. •Spelling is strong. All or nearly all the words are spelled accurately. • Punctuation is used creatively and correctly and new paragraphs are begun in the right places. • Capital letters are used correctly throughout the piece, even in tricky places. •Standard English grammar and usage has been applied •The beginning of the piece really catches the audience’s attention with an engaging lead •The conclusion is strong and leaves the reader with something to think about by stating how the author affected them •Each body paragraph contains all the information needed as stated on the instructions weak words and phrases with strong ones. • Complex words are misspelled. • Punctuation is basically strong. Paragraphs are indented. • Capital letters are used in obvious places (such as the word I), but not in others. • Even though the grammar and usage are not 100 percent correct, the audience should be able to read my piece. strong ones. distract the reader rather than guide him or her. • I’ve misspelled words • Extensive spelling errors that I use all the time, as make the piece difficult to well as complex words that read and understand. I don’t use as often. • The piece is not • Punctuation is basically punctuated or paragraphed strong. Some paragraphs well, which is necessary are indented but not all of to guide the reader. them. • The use of capital letters • Capital letters are used in is so inconsistent it’s obvious places (such as the distracting. word I), but not in others. • The piece needs to be • Even though the grammar cleaned up considerably in and usage are not 100 terms of grammar and percent correct, the usage. audience should be able to read my piece. •The beginning of the piece •A lead is attempted but it •There is no lead is somewhat engaging is not engaging •The conclusion is either •The conclusion restates the •The conclusion simply missing or unrelated thesis and provides a restates the main points of •The body paragraphs are concluding statement but the essay missing most of the does not state how the •Each body paragraph required information author affected them contains some of the •Each body paragraph required information or contains most of the some paragraphs contain information needed as stated all the information while on the instructions others do not