Writing Achievement Standards – Grade Two Park Street School November Appropriate Development Students Content choose a general topic and support or extend written ideas with drawings include one or more ideas/events (may not be explicitly stated or explained), usually based on personal experiences, or basic information, may express opinion include limited or general details to expand upon the ideas/events; may include some irrelevant information, beginning to use details to support topic Organization decide upon a general purpose; show an emerging understanding of simple text forms include a simple beginning that may identify the topic present ideas/events in a basic sequence; may have a few missteps link ideas with simple connecting words (e.g., and, then); some repetition may attempt an ending A piece of narrative writing -has a clear beginning -tends to focus on actions and may introduce characters or events for unspecified reasons; problem may not be apparent -may include an ending and, if present, may be abrupt -tends to be modeled on stories read, heard or viewed, or based on personal experiences A piece of informational writing -shows some awareness of form (e.g., recount, basic instructions, report) -may include some simple text features (e.g., titles, labels) -identifies the topic -includes a few details related to obvious aspects of the topic (e.g., physical characteristics, basic procedures, simple chronology, quantities) -may be missing a closing statement, or when included, may be abrupt Word Choice use basic vocabulary with some repetition may attempt to use some descriptive language Voice begin to show some awareness of audience according to purpose (e.g., write a personal note “to” someone) demonstrate some basic knowledge of and /or interest in subject show a glimpse of personal feeling or style (e.g., bold punctuation or letters, speech bubbles) Sentence Structure use mostly simple sentences, many of which are complete; may rely on repetitive patterns may include a few longer sentences and/or sentences that begin in different ways; longer sentences may be run-on or incomplete Conventions use periods to end most simple sentences; may use exclamation and question marks correctly use capital letters for people’s names, first word in sentences, and the pronoun “I”, in some cases; may capitalize some words unnecessarily spell many high frequency words correctly, attempt to spell unknown words using phonetic approximations use conventional spacing between words Writing Achievement Standards – Grade Two Park Street School March Appropriate Development Students Content choose a general topic; communicate message predominantly through written words include ideas/events (may not be explicitly stated), usually based on personal experiences, simple opinions or basic information include some supporting details; may have some “gaps” or irrelevant information Organization decide upon a general purpose include a simple beginning that usually identifies the topic usually presents ideas/events in a basic sequence; may have occasional missteps link ideas with simple connecting words (e.g., and, then, so) attempt a conclusion but may be abrupt A piece of narrative writing -usually identifies the characters and may include a problem at the beginning of the story -has characters and actions loosely related to story -may include an ending that is abrupt or incomplete -may be modeled on stories read, heard or viewed, or based on personal experiences A piece of informational writing -shows some awareness of form (e.g., recount, basic instructions, report, explanation) -may include some simple text features (e.g., titles, labels) -identifies the topic -includes some details, usually related to obvious aspects of the topic (e.g., physical characteristics, basic procedures, simple chronology, quantities) -may be missing a closing statement or, when included, be abrupt Word Choice make many ordinary word choices, some repetition may include a few descriptive words or phrases Voice begin to show some awareness of audience according to purpose (e.g., write a letter “to” someone) demonstrate some basic knowledge of and /or interest in subject show a glimpse of personal feeling or style (e.g., bold punctuation, stylized letters, speech bubbles) Sentence Structure use mostly simple and some compound sentence structures; many are complete include a few longer sentences and /or sentences which begin in different ways (e.g., nouns, pronouns, phrases) Conventions use correct end punctuation (e.g., periods, question marks, exclamation marks) in many sentences use capital letters for most proper nouns (e.g., people, days of the week, months, familiar place names), first word in sentences, and pronoun “I” in many cases; may capitalize some words unnecessarily spell many high frequency words correctly; attempt to spell longer, more complex words using phonetic approximations use many basic pronouns and verbs correctly; may make some errors (e.g., She maked a cake.) Writing Achievement Standards – End of Grade Two Appropriate Achievement Students Content choose a general topic; communicate message predominantly through written words include ideas/events (may not be explicitly stated), usually based on personal experiences, simple opinions or basic information include some supporting details; may have some “gaps” or irrelevant information Organization decide upon a general purpose include a simple beginning that identifies the topic present ideas/events in a basic sequence; may have occasional missteps link ideas with simple connecting words (e.g., and, then, so) attempt a conclusion but may be abrupt A piece of narrative writing -usually identifies the characters and problem at the beginning of the story -has characters and actions loosely related to problem -may include dialogue -may include an ending that is abrupt or incomplete -may be modeled on stories read, heard or viewed, or based on personal experiences A piece of informational writing -shows some awareness of form (e.g., recount, basic instructions, report, explanation) -may include some simple text features (e.g., titles, labels) -identifies the topic -includes some details, usually related to obvious aspects of the topic (e.g., physical characteristics, basic procedures, simple chronology, quantities) -may be missing a closing statement or, when included, be abrupt Word Choice make many ordinary word choices, possibly some repetition may include a few descriptive words or phrases Voice begin to show some awareness of audience according to purpose (e.g., write a letter “to” someone) demonstrate some basic knowledge of and /or interest in subject show a glimpse of personal feeling or style (e.g., bold punctuation, stylized letters, speech bubbles) Sentence Structure use mostly simple and compound sentence structures; many are complete include a few longer sentences and /or sentences which begin in different ways (e.g., nouns, pronouns, phrases) Conventions use correct end punctuation (e.g., periods, question marks, exclamation marks) in many sentences use capital letters for proper nouns (e.g., people, days of the week, months, familiar place names), first word in sentences, and pronoun “I” in many cases; may capitalize some words unnecessarily spell many high frequency words correctly; attempt to spell longer, more complex words using phonetic approximations use many basic pronouns and verbs correctly; may make some errors (e.g., She maked a cake.)