TEA Practice – Page 1: Topic + Evidence Directions: Read and copy these notes. T.E.A. is a type of paragraph for which T = Topic E = Evidence A = Analysis A topic sentence begins a paragraph, and introduces the topic of that paragraph. The topic sentence introduces a larger, general idea that the paragraph goes on to prove. The topic is proved or justified by evidence. A TEA paragraph needs at least 3 pieces of evidence.Evidence can be in the form of quotations, argument, or explanation. Analysis is the final sentence(s) of TEA. It is where you analyze and connect the information you provided them in the topic and evidence sentences. Analysis is not the WHAT, but rather the WHY, the deep thought about what something means. TEA Practice – Page 2: Topic + Evidence Directions: Read the examples below and decide if you think the examples below are good or bad topic sentences? Example 1: For example, David beat Goliath. (Answer – Not a topic sentence because it is an example/evidence for some larger topic.) (Better – There are many mythic stories of young heroes beating monsters.) Example 2: “I will strike down the giant,” David said. (Answer – Not a topic sentence because a quote is an example for a larger topic.) (Better – Though David knows he probably wont win he shows much bravery.) Example 3: Odysseus sailed on a boat all over the place. (Answer – Not a topic sentence because it is too specific and too simple. It doesn’t need to be proven.) (Better – The voyage of Odysseus over the ocean works as a metaphor for his rambling personality.) TEA Practice: Topic and Evidence – Page 3 Directions: Write topic sentences for the paragraphs below. Helpful Hints: The topic sentence must relate in some way to each piece of evidence. Example 1: Topic______________________________________ __________________________________________. Evidence: A) Theseus was led into the dark frightening tunnel, B) He knew the Minotaur monster could be waiting for him. C) But he continued on, determined to protect his bride. Example 2: Topic______________________________________ __________________________________________. Evidence: A) Mr. Caputo’s book was a best seller. B) It changed the way people thought about war. C) American people hadn’t known of its emotional costs. Example 3: Topic______________________________________ __________________________________________. Evidence: A) The poem “Howl” was published in every major American Poetry collection. B) It became standard reading in university poetry classes. C) It has inspired a generation of younger poets. TEA Practice – Page 4: Evidence/Quotes Often a quote can provide excellent evidence. But this does not mean you can just randomly put a quote in a paragraph and expect everyone to know how it relates to your topic. It must also be explained. Helpful hints: 1) Name the speaker and cite your source. Example1 : “To be, or not to be. That is the Question,” says Hamlet (Hamlet, Act I.iv) 2) Follow up your quote with an explanatory sentence. Example2 : “To be or not to be. That is the question,” says Hamlet (Hamlet, Act I.iv). This quote demonstrates Hamlet’s inner struggles and confusion. 3) On your own, write an explanation for the quote below to help make it work better as evidence. King Lear is a tortured soul. He has no more power as a King. His daughters all seem to be angry at him. He runs out into a storm and yells, “Blow, blow, blow” at the wind. It is very sad. Possible Quotation Explanation: This scene shows Lear struggling hopelessly with the world. OR This quote demonstrates Lear’s belief that the world has grown hostile toward him. TEA Practice – Page 5: Evidence Directions: This is another page to help students practice creating accurate evidence. Look at the topic sentence, try to write good evidence, then compare student evidence to the evidence below. Example 1: Topic: Education is a wonderful tool for helping you succeed in life. Evidence: A) Individuals with educational degrees make much more money over their lifetimes. B) The experience of college can make you a more rounded person. C) Colleges often provide professional opportunities to help prepare you for a career. Example 2: Topic: Hamlet is a tortured soul. Evidence: A) For example, he seems terribly saddened by the death of his father. B) Also, he is incredibly angry that his mother has taken a new husband. C) He says many things that indicate inner struggle. D) For example, he says, “To be or not to be. That is the question.” TEA Practice – Page 6: Evidence Directions: Read the following topic sentences and try to come up with three pieces of evidence that supports each. Topic Sentence 1: I have to decide what I want to do this Summer. Topic Sentence 2: On one hand school is a lot of fun, but on the other, it is very difficult. Topic Sentence 3: Love is the most difficult things to find in this world. Topic Sentence 4: Whether or not a society can be considered civilized, and still go to war, is a major question for modern social philosophers. Topic Sentence 5: The story of David and Goliath is an extended metaphor for how every person can become a hero. Topic Sentence 6: On one hand, you could argue that the sun is our most precious heavenly body, but on the other, you could argue for the moon. TEA Practice – Page 7: Analysis Directions: Copy down the following notes on Analysis. 1. Analysis is your final single sentence in a TEA paragraph. 2. It is where you tell the reader what to think about the evidence. 3. It synthesizes (brings together) different ideas from the paragraph. 4. One way to do this is Word Substitution. 5. Word Substitution means you change two or three key words from the Topic and Evidence sentences into new words, and use those new words to make another, final sentence. (Hint: a dictionary or thesaurus can help you come up with word substitutions). TEA Practice – Page 8: Analysis Directions: Below is a TEA paragraph. Several key words (the most important words in the paragraph) are boxed in the Topic sentence and the Evidence sentences. Then, below, those words are substituted for other words. Then, below that, a new Analysis sentence has been written using those new words. Example: Topic: Education is a wonderful tool for helping you succeed in life. Evidence: A) Individuals with educational degrees make much more money over their lifetimes. B) The experience of college can make you a more rounded person. C) Colleges often provide professional opportunities to help prepare you for a career. Word Substitution: Money = Finances; Education = Learning; Succeed = Satisfaction; Opportunities = Possibilities. Analysis: The possibilities for financial betterment and ultimate satisfaction in life are thus greatly increased by learning. TEA Practice – Page 9: Analysis Directions: 1) Copy the paragraph below. 2) Circle four of the most important words in the passage. 3) In the Word Substitution section, write those words and come up with an alternate word for each. You may use a dictionary, 4) Then, try to write an Analysis sentence using some of those words. Topic: Hamlet is a tortured soul. Evidence: A) For example, he seems terribly saddened by the death of his father. B) Also, he is incredibly angry that his mother has taken a new husband. C) He says many things that indicate inner struggle. D) For example, he says, “To be or not to be. That is the question.” E) This demonstrates Hamlet’s inner struggles. Word Substitution: __________________ = ___________________; __________________ = ___________________; __________________ = ___________________; __________________ = ___________________. Analysis: TEA Practice – Page 10: Analysis Example 2: Theseus struggled mightily against the terrible monster. Theseus was led into the dark tunnel. The tunnel looked dark and frightening. He knew the dangerous Minotaur monster could be waiting for him. But he continued on, determined to protect his bride. Word Substitution: __________________ = ___________________; __________________ = ___________________; __________________ = ___________________; __________________ = ___________________. Analysis: Example 3: Hamlet is a tortured soul. For example, he seems terribly saddened by the death of his father. Also, he is incredibly angry that his mother has taken a new husband. He says many things that indicate inner struggle. For example, he says, “To be or not to be. That is the question.” This demonstrates Hamlet’s inner struggles. Word Substitution: __________________ = ___________________; __________________ = ___________________; __________________ = ___________________; __________________ = ___________________. Analysis: TEA Practice – Page 11: Adding Commentary Adding Commentary to TEA paragraphs is a way to make your paragraphs richer, more complex, and more interesting. Often we need to explain, or comment on our Evidence, rather than just sticking it in a paragraph and expect readers to understand it. If Evidence is the ‘WHAT’ commentary is the ‘SO WHAT.’ Here is an example: Topic: Hamlet is a tortured soul. Evidence: A) For example, he seems terribly saddened by the death of his father. Commentary: His sadness in fact points to how much he must have loved his father. B) Also, he is incredibly angry that his mother has taken a new husband. Commentary: He is angry in part because he feels she married a new husband too soon after the death of the King. Question: What does the Commentary do here? TEA Practice – Page 12: Adding Commentary The following are questions you can ask yourself in order to produce commentary: Why? What does this mean? What is a character feeling when he/she says this? What is the significance of this detail? Why is this evidence important? What can I/we infer from this? We can interpret this to mean… TEA Practice – Page 13: Adding Commentary On your own: Using the questions listed above, try to add two lines of commentary to the following piece of evidence. Topic1 : We can find many examples of young heroes overcoming obstacles Evidence1 : For example David beat Goliath. Commentary 1: Topic 2: The voyage of Odysseus over the ocean works as a metaphor for his rambling personality. Evidence 2: An example of this is that on this journey home, he stops often to enjoy himself, rather than returning home quickly. Commentary: TEA Practice – Page 14: Commentary for Quotes Often a quote can provide excellent evidence. But this does not mean you can just randomly put a quote in a paragraph and expect everyone to know how it relates to your topic. It must also be explained. Look at the examples below 1)Evidence “To be or not to be. That is the question,” says Hamlet (Hamlet, Act I.iv). Commentary: This quote demonstrates Hamlet’s inner struggles and confusion. On your own: Write an explanation for the quote below to help make it work better as evidence. Topic: King Lear is a tortured soul. Evidence: A) He has no more power as a King. His daughters all seem to be angry at him. He runs out into a storm and yells, “Blow, blow, blow” at the wind. Commentary: Possible Commentary: This scene shows Lear struggling hopelessly with the world. OR This quote demonstrates Lear’s belief that the world has grown hostile toward him.